Chapter Six

Confronting the Faceless 💀 Complete
Early October, 1997
"I'll be [...] making no noise and pretending I don't exist"
 
Odette Grimond has always liked order. She likes lists and deadlines and properly filled out forms - she'd made a life out of it at the Ministry. And then that Ministry turned around and used her forms and deadlines against her.
 
She'd been reluctant when her best friend had told her to run back in August. The Muggleborn Registration Commission hadn't been announced publicly at that point, but as a member of the Daily Prophet Zoe Wentworth has always been privy to information ahead of time.
 
It had taken all night, but finally Zoe had convinced her to pack a small bag and vanish into the night. Odette had stayed close to civilization the first two weeks, using the money she had packed to pay for meals and shelter, quietly convinced she was going to have to show back up to work in September and explain her abrupt, unannounced vacation.
 
Then she gets hold of a Daily Prophet out of a bin and she's finally forced to realize that Zoe hadn't been wrong at all.
 
There's a list of Undesireables on the third page, and her name is there with the accusation of stealing magic and important Ministry memos and running off. It's then, staring at her own face on a wanted poster, that Odette finally has to accept that her Ministry isn't hers anymore.
 
She became more cautious after that, wishing she hadn't been quite so lax with her spending habits as she now has to stretch the little budget she has left for an indefinite amount of time.
 
By the time September has passed, she's out of money and has taken to begging in small Muggle towns to avoid recognition. She's also stopped counting the days - it's both exhausting and disheartening at this point.
 
So she doesn't know exactly what day of October it is when the sky opens up and drenches her begging corner, soaking her in the process. She just knows she's cold, wet, and hungry, though at least the rain might have washed away a bit of the smell that's started lingering around her recently.
 
She's huddled there when a woman stops in front of her and Odette looks up warily. No one has found her yet, but she closer to wizarding territory than she normally would be and it would be just her luck that the first time it's rained on her would also be the day she's caught.
 
"I don't have any cash on me at the moment, but I could buy you some food if you like." The woman offers, a brusque London accent giving away that she's not from the area.
 
Odette relaxes slightly - just a well-meaning Muggle then. "I... if it wouldn't be imposing." She says uncertainly.
 
The woman laughs. "I wouldn't have offered otherwise. Come along then." She offers Odette a hand up and after a short hesitation the assistance is accepted.
 
They go into a Muggle coffee shop - "can't afford anything fancier, sorry." - and Odette is floored by the stranger's kindness. Why the Dark Lord and his followers hate Muggles so much she'll never understand - she's met far kinder Muggles than wizards in her time.
 
"I'm Odette." She offers quietly once they've settled into one of the booths.
 
The woman smiles. "Artemis Cadwallader. I haven't seen you around town before."
 
"I move around a lot." Odette says nervously. "Um, Cadwallader is a Welsh name isn't it? You don't-"
 
"Sound Welsh, I know." Artemis laughs. "Married a Welshman though, we live up in London. I'm just down visiting my sister for the weekend, but there's a lot more foot traffic around than usual." She eyes Odette curiously, and then clears . "I have to be honest, my offer to help wasn't entirely above board. I saw a few shifty-looking characters snooping around nearby and one of them said something about looking for people. Human trafficking is a thing so I figured getting you inside might be a good idea."
 
Odette stares at her for a long moment, honestly stunned. "I'd say that's more above board than most people would be." She says after a moment. "Thank you. I'll be leaving town soon but I'll be careful."
 
The woman smiles, somewhat sadly. "Be sure you do. I need to get back to my sister - you take care of yourself Odette."
 
Odette is left in the booth feeling like she might have missed something, but she pushes down the thought for the moment and enjoys her hot chocolate.
 
She heads back out of town once she's finished, keeping her eyes peeled for the shady characters Artemis had mentioned. She doesn't see any, but she still decides her luck has been pushed far enough in this town and resolves to pack up and move out the next morning.
 
The rain at least has let up by sunrise so Odette risks a quick drying spell (she's trying to avoid too much magic use - you never know if people are watching) and then packs up her makeshift home and heads out, moving through the forest rather than risking the road, especially after Artemis's warning.
 
She's been on the move for quite a few hours - the sun is nearing it's peak point in the sky - when she catches a whiff of something cooking.
 
Her stomach whines hopefully but she pushes it down - she's still hungry but she's not going to steal from some innocent Muggle campers. She's better than that.
 
Still, she finds herself inching towards the smell, keeping herself small and her steps light to prevent detection. As she approaches a clearing in the woods she's startled to find that she actually recognizes the man sitting next to the fire.
 
He's broadly built but lean, dirty blond hair a tousled mess that's grown just a bit too long to keep organized.
 
Odette very nearly smiles as she stands up and walks over to the fire. "Good morning Mr. Cresswell, I don't suppose those reports from Ragguff are in yet? We really do need his statement for the Wilby trial."
 
Dirk Cresswell startles, pulling his wand on Odette before he recognizes her and relaxes. "Merlin's balls Grimond, you never stop thinking about work, do you?"
 
Odette had first met Dirk nearly a year earlier, when a goblin had been a key witness in an Improper Use case that had gotten all the way to Wizengamot. Dirk, only recently promoted to Head of the Goblin Liaison Offices at the time, had a lot to prove and was thus pressured quite a bit by Odette's department Head to get the testimony in time for it to be admitted as evidence for the trial. Odette had ended up being the secretary in charge of getting that testimony, so she'd spent quite a few weeks down in the Liaison offices every single day for hours at a time.
 
And despite the fact that Cresswell being here means that he's in trouble too, she's beyond relieved to see a familiar face.
 
"What brings you to the Forest of Dean?" She asks instead of responding to his tease, sitting next to his fire and stretching out a bit.
 
"Same as you I imagine." His grin drops slightly. "You were smart to run when you did. I barely avoided Azkaban myself."
 
Odette stares into the fire as she processes that. Cresswell is known for being kind, hardworking, and genuine - he's from Hufflepuff same as Odette after all, the House that wears it's "fewest Dark Wizards produced" badge with enough pride that even a Gryffindor would probably tell them to tone it down. Picturing him in Azkaban just brings home exactly how far gone her beloved Ministry really is.
 
"I had help." She says after a moment. "Maybe other people will get help too? People... people are good, for the most part. I've always thought so anyway."
 
Cresswell hums. "There are good people for sure, but I'm not sure there are as many as you'd like to think Grimond. You're a rare case of human goodness."
 
Odette rolls her eyes. "I do what anyone would. Though I suppose I'm not helping so I get your point."
 
"That isn't-" Cresswell cuts himself off with a sigh. "Nevermind. Here, want some fish? You look like you've lost ten pounds since I last saw you."
 
They eat in silence, Odette fighting to not scarf down the entire meal and leave Cresswell with none of his likely hard-earned catch.
 
Once the food is gone and Cresswell's makeshift camp is packed up he turns to face Odette. "So did you want to travel together? Would be a lot less tiring with two people I'd think."
 
She blinks, and then nods. "That sounds like a plan to me. Fair warning though, I'm not much of a camper."
 
He laughs. "Tell you what Grimond, I'll teach you. It'll be like a family camping trip."
 
This time Odette does smile.
 
They spend most of the rest of the day hiking, but Cresswell - "You can call me Dirk. This isn't work anymore." - fills the time with various chatter, from updates from the Ministry (or at least, updates from September when he still worked there) to survival tricks he'd learned as a kid as part of the Boy Scouts.
 
"I honestly didn't know there was a boy branch of that. I just remember the Girl Scout cookies, my Mum always got more than we could eat." Odette laughs. "So you guys what, lived in the forest and skinned bears?"
 
"Something like that." Dirk agrees cheerfully. "Though bears are thought to be extinct on the island - it's wolves to look out for around these parts."
 
"Oh, much better then." Odette replies glibly and Dirk laughs.
 
They walk until they come across a small stream, and Dirk decides they should set up camp for the night.
 
"Always stay close by running water." He explains. "The human body can survive days without food, but not nearly as long without water. And running water is usually cleaner than still water."
 
"Good to know. I'm glad I ran into you, I probably would have drunk out of a lake at some point and given myself algae poisoning." Odette jokes lightly and Dirk grins over at her.
 
One day becomes several and Odette continues to learn from Dirk as they live together beside the little brook. He explains to her how to pitch a tent properly, though she fails to actually help with putting it up, and tells her about his wife and kids back home. In turn she talks about her childhood dream of iceskating and her tuxedo cat Mortimer who Zoe had promised to take care of.
 
"He's quite picky, I'm sure he's miserable with Zoe. She's never had a pet and always said I spoiled him too much." She grins while Dirk sets about making a fire to cook the day's catch over. Odette hasn't quite gotten the hang of fishing yet, and she's not sure she wants to as the whole affair makes her a bit squeamish. She's almost able to cleanly debone the skinned fish though, which she's quite proud of.
 
"My boys have been begging for a pet for years now but I keep telling them they'll get owls when they graduate from Hogwarts, and the family owl is more then enough for now." Dirk responds with a grin. "You want kids someday Odette? If you don't mind my asking."
 
Odette shrugs. She of course has thought about it before but work has always come first and she says as much to Dirk. "I mean, if I find the right person I wouldn't be against it of course." She adds. "Your boys do sound darling."
 
"Only because I miss them. In reality they're utter nightmares." Dirk laughs and Odette grins as well.
 
They eat their fish mostly in silence and then settle into the tent as they have so many other nights, and Odette is again thankful she'd run into a familiar face. Being a fugitive isn't quite as scary with someone else around.
 
"We should probably pack up and relocate." Dirk suggests after they wake up the next morning and have the scraps from their nighttime meal for breakfast (Odette is admittedly getting a little tired of fish).
 
"Sounds good to me. Further into the forest or stick closer to the edge? I do decently begging in smaller towns but it's not much fun." Odette states as she begins pacing around their tent in hopes it will become obvious how to take it down.
 
Dirk raises an eyebrow in amusement and simply flicks his wand, letting the tent fold itself up. "I think we should stick close to the stream here - no need to run away from a perfectly good water source I always say."
 
"Do you now?" Odette laughs. "Well it's a good thing you do or we might be rather lost out here. Stream it is then!"
 
Talking is easy for them now, and Odette hopes that when everything goes back to normal she and Dirk can maintain this friendship they've built - though she always gets along with her coworkers she doesn't really have any close friends outside of Zoe who isn't technically part of the Ministry at all. She does still talk to her other school friend Adeline but they've drifted since graduation so she isn't quite sure if that even counts as a full friendship anymore.
 
"You got quiet all of a sudden." Dirk notes as he packs up the rest of the camp. "Everything alright?"
 
Odette blinks. She hadn't realized she'd zoned out for long enough that it was noticed. "Oh, yes, apologies. Is there anything left that I can help with?"
 
Dirk eyes her but lets it slide. "Nah, we're just about packed up. I'm thinking we head upstream, see if we can find the source. If it's a lake or pond it may have other streams going off it we can follow later."
 
"It's a better plan than begging." Odette agrees. "Though don't you think you use your magic a bit too liberally? We may be over the age of the Trace but I'm pretty sure that can still be tracked with effort." She adds with a slight frown as Dirk shrinks the entire camping setup so he can fit it into his jacket pocket.
 
He shrugs. "They'd have to be both smart and organized for that, and you probably don't remember the first war but the Deatheaters aren't exactly known for being much good at either of those things." He grins and Odette offers an unsure smile in return.
 
They infiltrated the Ministry this time though. They didn't manage that in the last war. She thinks nervously to herself. But on the other hand Dirk has obviously been doing this from the start and he's still around, so perhaps Odette is being overly cautious.
 
She still lets him do all the wand work though, her own wand left unused in her robe's pocket.
 
It's sunny today at least, so the walk is for the most part pleasant, if a bit difficult thanks to the total lack of a path to follow. Odette is frankly surprised she hasn't tripped on any of the loose stones along the bank yet.
 
Odette is mostly focused on her footing so she's letting Dirk control most of the conversation, which naturally leads to him bragging about his boys. Then the conversation turns, so suddenly Odette thinks she must have missed something.
 
"I'm worried about them. Their mum is a half-blood, long line of magical folk in her family, but I might be counted against them by those awful new teachers." His usual easy-going smile has faltered and he's frowning at the river.
 
"At least they're safely at Hogwarts. How much bad can really happen there?" Odette offers quietly. "It was the safest place during the first war, I know that much."
 
Dirk gives her a smile, but it's strained and looks wrong on his soft features. "Because Dumbledore was there. I know I'm probably worried for nothing but I think all this would be a lot easier if I knew they were okay."
 
Odette thinks about Zoe snooping around the Prophet publishing house to get the information needed to warn her friend about the impending Registration Commission and thinks she can sort of understand - though Zoe is a grown woman and an excellent dueler compared to Dirk's sons who are only twelve, thirteen, and fifteen and can't use magic outside of school.
 
"All the more reason we need to stick together and fight to the end, right?" Odette offers, and this time the return smile feels a bit more real.
 
"Yeah, you're right. Sorry for getting serious there, things are bleak enough without talking about it." He says, and Odette hums.
 
"You're a good father, I'd be more surprised if you hadn't ever mentioned being worried." She says with a gentle smile. "So which OWLs is Trevor going for? You mentioned Charms and Defense but you said he doesn't want to be an Auror?"
 
That eases the conversation again, and they keep trekking until the sun is dipping dangerously close to the horizon again.
 
Dirk waves for them to stop and pulls out the camping equipment. "Well, no source but there's a clearing just ahead that should be good to use for a few days?" He suggests.
 
Odette again tries and fails to help with camp setup - she does watch Dirk very closely though and is determined to figure it out the next time they make camp. She does successfully get a fire going without her wand though, which she's very proud of.
 
"You can just use magic for that." Dirk points out in amusement. "I'll go see about getting dinner, shall I?"
 
"You know how I feel about excessive use of magic." Odette calls after him with a grin before settling down to watch the fire and keep it from spreading past the stone perimeter she'd set up. This at least is one bit of camping she's figured out. As she settles in and watches the sun dip below the tree line she decides that in the winter she'll teach Dirk about ice skating and see who looks silly then.
 
The night is cooling quickly now that the sun is gone, and the crackling of the fire is joined by insect noises and the shuffling of nocturnal animals just waking up and starting to nose around for their own meal.
 
Odette relaxes and keeps one ear trained on the fire and another on the surrounding woods. Dirk shouldn't be away for too much longer, he's impressively quick about fishing.
 
Sure enough it's only a few minutes later that her companion trundles out of the wood and tosses her a small fish.
 
"They aren't as large tonight, we must have passed the migration." He sighs. "We can probaly scour the area tomorrow for berries or other things to supplement these."
 
Odette shrugs. "It's better than nothing at least." She points out. "But I like the scavenging idea - we can collect extra rations if we find them."
 
They prepare and eat their fish quietly (it's a bit weird to Odette how quickly she got used to skinning her own food, but she thinks after having to eat out of trashcans a few times before running into Dirk her squeamishness has dropped significantly), just enjoying the stars overhead.
 
"Alright, I'm turning in." She declares. "You coming?"
 
"I'll kill the fire first, be there in a moment." Dirk agrees, and Odette crawls into the tent and curls up on her side of it. She's asleep before Dirk even joins her.
 
She feels like she's barely slept at all when she's yanked out of her slumber by a deep sense of foreboding. She sits up slowly, eyeing around the tent. There's a trace of light coming in through the front flap that's too pale to be anything other than dawn light, and Dirk is still out cold on his side of the tent.
 
Odette is about ready to rejoin him in sleep when she senses something shift outside the tent and her unease ratchets up. She remembers Artemis's warning all those days ago about people eyeing her, and she decides she ought to check things out, just to be safe.
 
She grabs her wand and kicks Dirk lightly, just to get him stirring in his sleeping bag so if things do go badly he'll be half awake already and hopefully be able to quickly get to helping.
 
She pulls open the flap and finds the campsite undisturbed. She steps out, her wand held tightly in her fist, and slowly scans the surrounding area for anything out of the ordinary.
 
Nothing is moving, and for a moment Odette thinks she might have had a nightmare that transferred to her waking consciousness.
 
Then she realizes that there's no noise.
 
"Protego Maximus!" She shouts, jumping back and lighting up a shield charm that surrounds her and the tent. She hears Dirk stirring but keeps her focus fully outward, almost certain that someone is lurking just beyond the tree line. Over a month in the woods has taught her that it's never completely quiet - only a silencing charm would so completely mute their surroundings. And a silencing charm needs a caster.
 
"Odette? Everything alright?" Dirk still sounds a bit drowsy as he climbs out of the tent, but he's awake and has his wand out which Odette is glad for.
 
"Whole area is dead silent." She reports. "There's someone out there, and they don't want us to hear them coming."
 
Dirk frowns, his eyes sharpening as he processes her words and his alertness level rises. "I'll go around the other side of the tent then, see if I can spot anything from that direction."
 
Odette nods tensely and watches her friend circle the tent out of the corner of her eye, most of her attention still focused on the surrounding forest.
 
This is definitely worse than begging on street corners. At least there you might get some money - this is just hollow tension that very well might be nothing. Odette doubts that it's nothing, but her brain still helpfully reminds her that she could be entirely wrong and wasting both their time.
 
Then Dirk shouts and Odette's shield drops as her focus immediately spins to her travel companion. She races around the tent and finds him firing spells towards one of the trees.
 
"Three of them from what I saw, we're only barely outmatched and we took away the element of surprise." He reports breathlessly when Odette gets the shield back up. "We should be able to drive them off and get away before they can track us."
 
Odette nods sharply, her stomach turning. Where had these people come from? Are the really trying to hurt them? She again remembers Artemis's warning and wonders what might have been different if that random stranger hadn't decided to help her. Would she be in Azkaban right now?
 
Her panicked thoughts are interrupted by a projected voice from the trees. "Surrender and you shall be spared. We don't want to kill you if we don't have to, but we will if you make us." It's a female voice, sharp and cruel, and Odette doesn't think for a second that the owner would be all that upset about killing.
 
"Yeah! Surrender!" A male voice shouts, and Odette spins sharply.
 
"They're surrounding us." She mutters to Dirk, who nods.
 
"We'll need to cover both sides when the shield drops." He breathes, barely loud enough for Odette to hear him. "I'll get the girl on this side, she seems to be the leader. You got the other end?"
 
Odette presses her lips together and jerks her head in vague agreement. She isn't that confident, but they don't have any other choice.
 
"On three then."
 
They go on two and things get hectic fast. Odette is out of practice with her wand and she spends as much time diving out of the way of spells as she does remembering to deflect them. It doesn't help that the last time she did anything even remotely resembling dueling was a magical snowball fight her fourth year.
 
Luckily her opponent doesn't seem like the most competent duelist either so they end up mostly evenly matched.
 
She's so focused on her own fight that she misses if Dirk yells a warning before the tent goes up in flames. Distracted by the sudden inferno at her back, Odette fails to deflect a blasting curse and swears as the top of her arm gashes open. She throws up a shield and scans desperately for Dirk but all she can make out are the flames of their former shelter.
 
She makes a split-second decision and takes off away from the burning tent, dropping the shield charm and firing off several spells at random that make a lot of noise but would do minimal damage if they actually hit anything. It seems to work as there's no return fire - Odette assumes her attacker dove for cover as she'd hoped.
 
She makes it into the trees safely and then lowers her wand completely to focus on running. She knows she's making noise on the dead leaves starting to blanket the forest floor but she doesn't care - if she's fast enough she'll be able to move far enough before the sound gives away her location.
 
And the leaves' crackling do have the advantage of giving away her opponents' position as well. Or positions - she can definitely hear two pairs of feet.
 
A burst of adrenaline pushes her faster, and she gets far enough ahead that she feels comfortable pausing, casting a silencing charm, and Apparating herself to the top of a tree that still has a decent amount of leaves left to hide among. Then she drops the charm and focuses completely on slowing her breath down so it doesn't draw attention.
 
It feels like both an eternity and no time at all before her pursuers burst into the clearing below her tree.
 
"Bullocks, I think she's gone. Zara's gonna be pissed." One of the two men grumbles.
 
"Well whose fault is that?" The other one snaps.
 
Odette bites her lip and focuses entirely on making her breathing silent and locking her muscles so she doens't shift and give herself away.
 
The larger of the two men, a hulking blond who looks almost cowed by his smaller companion's anger, is standing directly under Odette's tree and Odette prays he'll keep his eyes on his feet. "Sorry Antonin." He mumbles. "I thought I had her."
 
The older dark-haired man, Antonin apparently, sighs and run a hand through his hair. "Well obviously you didn't. We'll just hope Zara duffed it up as well - she already set the damn tent on fire which wasn't part of the plan at all."
 
"The plan was toast the moment the girl figured it out. I got identification on mine - Dirk Cresswell." An almost comically tiny woman with distinct curves wearing a crop top that shows off defined abs (and how isn't she freezing in that?) storms into the clearing and jabs a finger at the blond who shrinks back further.
 
"Um..." He looks hopefully over at Antonin, who rolls his eyes.
 
"Calm down Zara, it's our first failure and it's just two low-level Undesireables. We tell Yurina and she'll laugh at us and that will be that." He grimaces as he mentions the name - whoever 'Yurina' is he obviously doesn't like her or the fact she'll be laughing at them.
 
Zara obviously doesn't like it either. "No, we tell Yurina she needs to fix her damn playbook or let us build our own. It's not like the little is out here herself - she has no idea what we're facing, she's too busy messing around in the Ministry."
 
"You know I agree with you - frankly I have better things to be doing than hunting down Muggleborns." Antonin scoffs loftily. "But the Dark Lord favors her."
 
Zara's eyes narrow. "For now he does." She grumbles. "Oh quit moping Rowle, you look idiotic." She snaps at the blond, who jumps and proceeds to look even more upset.
 
"We need to get back to the transport, these two were just a lucky find. Let's go." She storms off, but the two men take a moment longer.
 
"Relax Thorfinn, mistakes happen and Zara didn't succeed either. No one's going to be angry at you over this. And I bet that we'll be off this child's duty soon enough and helping with more important things." Antonin says softly to his companion, who looks up a bit hopefully.
 
The two men leave shortly after that, and Odette can't help feeling a little bit bad for the blond - he's obviously terrified of someone or something and whatever it is is on his side, not hers.
 
Finally letting herself breath, she climbs down the tree manually and begins walking back to where she thinks their former campsite is, treading carefully around the dead leaves as she goes and keeping her wand up, just in case.
 
She makes it back to the clearing with no incident, but other than a fresh pile of ash and smoke there's nothing there. Dirk has left.
 
Odette grits her teeth and sits down next to the stream. Back to being on her own then, at least for now. She uses the water to wash out the cut on her arm before grabbing a bit of tent that hadn't completely burned up and using it to bind the area. No healing it magically until she's certain she's put space between herself and the group of Muggleborn hunters - she still doesn't trust they can't track it somehow.
 
She stands up, a bit waterlogged, and begins walking upstream again. Her bag and remaining rations had burned up in the fire, but she doens't let herself linger on that thought for too long.
 
She'll find Dirk upstream and he'll know what to do. She has to believe that.
 
She doesn't want to be alone again.
 
Author's Note: I made it! And I even edited it (and thank goodness for that, I'd flip flopped on Dirk's life story a couple of times so that should all be coherent now >~>) Anywho we've just about met every POV character (both as POVs and as side characters who shall return) except the one who's intentionally being left out until later :P If I'm not being brain-dead and misremembering we'll have met everyone by the end of October~
 
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Chapter 57: Hi!
I'm so sorry for taking so long to comment, but shall we begin!

I swear I should have made a bet omg. The moment I first heard of Python I was like "hmm.. what if she was Percy's Audrey?" And even though I knew that our Audrey would be Percy's girlfriend, I always thought how it would be nice if Python and him were endgame, but honestly... they wouldn't last long haha

I want to thank you for being so passionate about the story and truly understanding the characters and doing your best to give them justice. I loved how you put so much effort on everything!

When I first saw this story I first imagined a muggleborn with a fiery personality so after seeing that Tangi was created you have no idea how happy I was.
Claire was my first character for the story. When I thought about her I wanted a strong woman who was conflicted between her believes and her family, but who definitely couldn't turn a blind eye to people in need. Then I thought if she was an insider probably no one would suspect her because of her family, so she would have some advantage!
I'm truly proud of how she grew up. She was such a lonely girl who had only Bill and her cousin Petra as her friends. Then she loved her brother and her parents but she always thought that he didn't care about her. She didn't agree with her families believes and she truly had to do something to free herself from her fears and allow herself to be who she was. And being one of the leaders of the underground made me very proud of her! Especially after Max was able to change as well and they now became stronger together as a family. Honestly I wonder how Claire decided to do in the future, if she stayed in the ministry, if she dedicated herself to her family and if she made friends (because I'm so happy that she at least became friends with Python, she truly deserves friends), whether she ended up married or not, well I'm curious but I think if she ever got married she would choose someone she truly trusted and who she could be herself and for God sake, someone who could make that poor girl smile, because come on she looks so gloomy xD But I'm happy that she made at least one friend and that she got closure with her brother, so I'm blessed :) Ps: I always thought that Claire wouldn't make it until the end xD I always thought she would be killed or that she would sacrifice herself to protect someone.

Theo... Oh my little boy. When I visualised Theo I thought about a broken boy who always wanted his parents approval. Theo was meant to be an adult version of Draco Malfoy. When Kent appeared in the picture I imagined the rivalry such like Draco and Harry and that only made the adult version I imagined more lively. Theo was lucky to have a friend like Kent, even if he didn't understand what a friend truly meant. Theo lost his mother, his uncle hated him, his father well... they didn't have the best relationship, he didn't manage to be captain, he didn't manage to be a prefect, he had to give up on his dream, he couldn't trust anyone. Well everything about Theo was supposed to be tragic. His partnership with Zara was just amazing, I believe he saw himself on her (even though she was pure evil), and he believed that maybe people could change if someone believed in him. He betrayed his family, he betrayed his colleagues for something he believed to be the right thing, Kent could have abandoned him and Kingsley could have hit believed in him and hand him over. But people believed in him, he was the same person his mother believed he was. Seeing him trying to get thought his trauma was sad, but it fit him. I'm so so happy that he found happiness somehow. Val loved him by who he was, she didn't see him because of his family, blood heritage or even his mistakes, but she saw his pure heart and that is just beautiful. And of course Theo and Kent's bromance are still one of my favourite parts of the whole story! Thinking about the future, I wonder if he managed to keep working or his stability is not well yet, but he has Val, Kingsley, Kent, all of his friends, so he will he fine :)

I will miss these kids, but I'm making room for the new kids so hopefully we will have a more funny time on UFF rather than a more serious and gloomy one :) I hope everyone who made it to the end are now happy and even if they don't make a cameo on UFF, that they have success and find their happy endings :)
Once again, thank you so much for this ride. I just can't believed it already ended, it seemed like it was yesterday that Aiden made his first pov ;-;
This won't be a serious goodbye because we will still talk and of course I will still be hyped with UFF and I'll be commenting every single chapter :p
Oh and I'm curious, as you know I'm like a huge fan of Oliver :p did you imagine him getting married? I can totally imagine him marrying someone from his work honestly.
Ok now for real, thank you so so so much. You are an amazing writer and I want you to know that I anticipated every single chapter every week and reading it made my day, seriously, even if it took me a while to comment in the chapter.
I wish you the best and I hope you have a lot of fun writing UFF and finish this trilogy which I believe will bring tears of joy and will bring you the best feeling of accomplishement. You deserve it Dani! Thank you so much *takes off my hat* farewell Ctf, thank you for the ride, you will be always remembered!
From the bottom if my heart, thank you Dani, thank you very much! <3
I won't say goodbye so have a nice week and see you around ;) take care of yourself.
luv_kero
2444 streak #2
Chapter 57: I've been anticipating the Afterword chapter so much ever since you mentioned it, and I absolutely loved reading all of your thoughts on the cast and how you went about developing their arcs!! <3 Some of the things I knew (thanks to me loving spoilers and our insanely long back-and-forth responses via comments and PM, HAHA) and some of the things were a complete surprise, so it was so cool getting to learn and relearn these behind-the-scenes tidbits!! ^^

One thing I had no idea about (but probably should've figured out, LOOOOL) was Python's intended role as canon!Audrey Weasley!! Looking back now, it totally makes and I should've known you'd make sure every aspect of Percy's story was covered, even if they weren't intended to truly be endgame with the planned divorce. :P Does that mean Python would've been leading the MII with Cadi instead of Audrey Blishwick if the latter hadn't been submitted??

Ahhhh, not a day goes by where I wish Evera were still here with us, even though I know that her death was necessary. :') I take a lot of comfort in knowing that her death served so much purpose in the story and that it wasn't meaningless (not that anyone's death was ^^;) in the grand scheme of things. :) I do wonder how the story would've changed if she had stayed alive, since I imagine Kent would've been a much less broken man. But then his motivation to really get plans in motion within the Order of Phoenix wouldn't have been as strong as it was after suffering such a devastating loss. OTL All in all, Kent and Evera will always be the best dynamic duo, and I will never stop thanking you for bringing them to life in such a beautiful way!! <3 And I guess I don't know if they'll make cameos in UFF, but I'd love to know what happened to Drake and Jemma (and even little Roderick from H:aH, LOOOL, if you ever got to planning his future XD) after the events of CtF if you have that information readily available. ^^; If not, no worries!! I'm just very attached to my original trio, HAHA. :')

I'll be reiterating a lot of stuff I've said in previous comments and/or messages, but Channer was the first character I fully conceptualized when you announced CtF and its plot. I'm honestly drawn to charismatic, outgoing male characters (Kent, Drake, Landon), so writing a coward like Channer was such a fun challenge for me since I got to really step out of my comfort zone. I think part of me subconsciously wanted him to eventually join Adeline in the Underground, since I'm a er for the good side, but I loved that he stayed neutral throughout since I think that's the path truest to his character. It wouldn't have made sense if he had joined up and although it was painful to see him get bested by Yurina, I'm really happy that he's learned to hold his family a little closer now. <3

And now, MY FOX QUEEN, MISS YURINA NAKAYASHI!! I honestly don't enjoy writing Slytherin-like characters, but she was such a fun character to create and I became so attached to her in such a short amount of time. I really think it was her background that cinched it for me. The tiger parent mentality is often lauded by Asian parents as the "right" way to raise your child and while I do think there are some great parts about it, I also think it can be incredibly toxic with the wrong parents and the wrong children. So giving Yurina such a lonely childhood made me sympathize with her so much, even though I knew I was creating an evil character who really shouldn't be redeemed. ^^; I think I would've been really sad to see her caught by Abeni, so I'm stoked that UFF saved her in a way and I can't wait to see what mischief she's planning now!! :D Even though she's probably going to be defeated in UFF, at least she got a happy ending in CtF, HAHA. XD No matter what happens, she'll forever be my queen of darkness. <3

And then we have Odette, the strongest Fugitive out there who's absolutely killing it in life now, which she completely deserves after everything she went through during the war. :') Even though I made her to get tortured, I don't think I envisioned just how much she'd have to go through and my heart broke every time her situation got bleaker. OTL I honestly feared for her life the most out of my main four, especially after Evera died, since I knew that a Fugitive death would be incredibly possible. My other Fugitive characters, Xander and Cassie, were much more capable and resourceful than Odette was, so I figured that if a Fugitive had to die, she'd be the one. OTL So knowing that she ultimately made it out alive, even with immense trauma, made me so happy because I would've been crushed to bits by her death. ^^; Odette's a strong girl who shows that persistence and sheer will are key, and I'm so glad that sunnier skies graced her future. <3

I know I didn't write about everyone, basically focusing on my own characters, but I absolutely loved reading about every single member of the cast and seeing their stories get woven together in this amazing tale. Just as it was for H:aH, it was truly the greatest honor to be part of this story in some way and I'm eternally grateful that I was given the opportunity to help shape the HoM trilogy with my imperfect characters. :') They've all grown immensely over the course of CtF and I'm beyond ecstatic to see what kind of magic you'll weave next with UFF!! x] You know I'll be there writing essays after every chapter, because I can't stop myself from spazzing over even the tiniest details and I'm actually going to cry when it's all over. I would've cried when CtF ended, but knowing that there's still one installment left kept the tears at bay, HAHA. :') But we'll worry about UFF ending when the time comes, since it's just barely begun at this point and it's time to ENJOY what's about to come!! :D

Again, from the bottom of my heart, THANK YOU for writing Confronting the Faceless!! <3 You're forever one of my writing inspirations and a friend I've grown to cherish so much after getting to know you these past few years, and I will never stop saying how grateful and lucky I am to have stumbled across Hogwarts: a History back then. x] You're the absolute best, Dani!! <3
Susan15
#3
Chapter 56: Hi!! Ok I believe I am ready for this overwhelming final chapter ;-;

Honestly, I always thought about what would happen to Ava. A part of me continuously compared her to Claire, but I think Ava is a coward. While Claire didn't agree with the values that most of Slytherins believed, she actually tried to do something about it, and a good part was that she met Bill and had her cousin. Ava had Astoria and her friend wasn't what Ava thought about the others. I think she was obsessed with "I'm better than them" to the point that she disliked Clary who was different from what she hated and also she was shocked about Kingsley, someone she saw as an example, only to find that he was a Slytherin. She put all her hatress into the house instead of growing up and understanding that not everyone is the same.
I liked how everything wrapped for her, it was the best outcome became she herself did not grow up much within all those years. And I'm really happy that she and Anwen got to become friends :)

Theo... I'm so... shocked! And happy? I'm truly glad he managed to find peace with himself (or something similar to that) and that he found someone who went through something "similar" and somehow could understand him and love him by who he is. I actually wonder if he managed to face his father since he always wanted to make him proud on top of everything and honestly I wonder if he got to see his uncle getting arrested, because well he deserved that! And I'm so happy that Kent was the best man! Ok I'm happy by how everything just went, Kingsley too. And I'm so so proud of Max and it was great to see him and Claire at Theo's wedding. I hope Theo and Val can make things work and finally forgive themselves.

Aiden as a grandpa is the strawberry on top of the ice cream xD Mia is so cute and YES ONE OF MY SHIPS SAILED!! I'm so happy Logan and Susan got together! And am I sensing a rivalry between Albus and Mia? xD Or maybe something more? :p I'm so happy and proud that Aiden was able to retire and be happy, he deserves and honestly he is one of my favourite characters. It was not easy to be a adoptive father and now he became a proud grandfather, I'm so happy for him.

Minki and Padma got together <3 and they had twins omg poor Minki! But I'm so happy and proud that he was able to follow his dream even if it was smaller than his bigger one. Oh my and Terry and Parvati wow I wasn't expecting that! Friends becoming lovers is something I live for haha. I'm so happy that everything worked out. I know that he is probably the most neutral character in the story, I don't remember, was he in the battle?

Odette! And she is the final pov ;-; Omg Dean got married and they became friends, that's so great. I wouldn't have guessed that Dean would marry a muggle! Dirk would be proud of how both of them grown up so much after everything that happened. I'm so proud of Odette and happy too, she deserves all the happiness in this world!

I can't believe this story just ended. I believe I can speak by everyone that we became attached to these characters and I'm not ready to say goodbye. I love every single character and I believe you made such an incredible story that I don't have enough words to express what I feel. Thank you so much for your time, passion and for making this amazing story and capturing our hearts. You are a great writer and I hope you feel proud of yourself just like I'm proud of you :)

I hope you have a great weekend and honestly I'm making fingers crossed to see them somehow again in UFF because I think I'll miss some of them too much xD
Thank you so much and see you Sunday to see your amazing thoughts and feelings through this story <3. Take care of yourself and have an awesome time :)
Susan15
#4
I'll give you a proper comment about the final chapter but yes please, I'd live to read your thoughts and feelings!
I'm so happy and shocked at the same time with the final chapter, but I will leave it to another time!! I just wanted to let you know how much I loved it and that I really do want to hear what your opinions :)
Have a nice week and I hope to read your feelings and thoughts next sunday :')
luv_kero
2444 streak #5
Chapter 56: Oh my gosh, it's the final epilogue. I'm not ready. OTL

Dang, I legit wasn't expecting Ava to be an ice cream shop owner after twenty years, LOOOL. :P But yikes, I can imagine that leaving Hogwarts definitely turned the "Slytherin=bad" sentiment on its head. I don't blame Ava for thinking that way during her school years, since she was a teenager and she hated not fitting in with her house. But at least she's become more open-minded and chill now, and it does show a lot of her character growth. :) It's also really sweet that she revived Fortescue's ice cream shop, since it's such a cornerstone of Diagon Alley and it broke my heart when Florean disappeared. :'( But omg, I also didn't expect Anwen to have had a whirlwind romance with a Muggle, so I'm glad that she also seems to be a lot more open-minded now as an adult. ^^ Although it that it didn't work out and I hope Anwen is doing okay as a single mother, since I know that can be difficult. >___< The cameos of Albus, Rose, and Scorpius were also super cute and I love that they're this generation's trio, hehe. x]

Oh gosh, Theo looking at little Evan and thinking of his guilt towards Evera's death had me gutted too. Q___Q But also, I'M SCREAMING AT KENT BEING HIS BEST MAN!! AND I'M ALSO SCREAMING AT THEO MARRYING VALERIE???????? FORGET WHAT I SAID ABOUT AVA. THIS IS THE BIGGEST SURPRISE OUT OF ALL OF THE EPILOGUES. I'M SO SHOOK. THIS MIGHT BE THE MOST SHOOK I'VE EVER BEEN. NEVER IN A MILLION YEARS DID I EVER EXPECT VALERIE AND THEO TO END UP TOGETHER. Like it totally makes sense with them bonding over their trauma in this support group and I bet Valerie felt AWFUL for getting caught in Branwen's web after she found out Branwen was a Death Eater. T^T It's so so so cute that Theo and Valerie eventually fell for each other, and I'm so happy that Theo gets to experience this beautiful moment because he deserves it!! And ahhhhh, I love that Kent is Best Man (best boi forever!!) and Evan is the ring bearer (/cries i love this kid so much already help) and Zac also got happily married and Valerie's family is there, and Theo has so many friends and people who care about him. :') AND JUST THAT ENDING, OMG. SHOT ME IN THE HEART. *o* I'M DED FROM HOW CUTE THEY ARE. PROCLAIMING MYSELF AS CAPTAIN OF THIS NEW SHIP NOW, HAHAHA.

Ahhhh, Logan and Susan got together!! x] And Mia, like all the kids, sounds so adorable and Aiden is definitely best grandpa!! ^^ And ooh, looks like Oliver is teaching at Hogwarts now after retiring from the professional circuit?? :D Gah, that reminds me that he's also old now too. OTL And omg, I'm ded at Mia and Albus having a Quidditch rivalry. XD Try-outs will be a battlefield this year with those two gunning for positions, HAHA. And LOOOOOL, I also wasn't expecting that kiss comment from Mia. :P I imagine Albus will definitely be a heartthrob, especially when he gets older, and Mia will be one of many who have a crush on young Potter, LOLOLOL. But ahhhh, so happy that Aiden has such a beautiful family and that he's enjoying life so much now!! He completely deserves it after everything he went through!! And I also love that Ava made an appearance at the end, even though they never actually met in the main story, since everyone's stories are ultimately tied together in this epic. :)

Haha, definitely not surprised that Minki opened up a dance studio. XD He really suffered the least overall out of everyone in CtF, I think. Him and Venus. And awww, so cute that he and Padma ended up having twins!! x] And ooh, Padma is also a teacher now?? :D What kind?? (also there's a tiny typo where you wrote parvati instead of padma and i was like, wait which twin is which?? is padma the gryff and parvati the ravenclaw?? XD) And awwww, I wasn't expecting Terry and Parvati to get married, but I can totally see them together and it's so cute that the two best friends each got married to one of the twins, HAHA. :P They're all one big happy family now!! ^^ Minki and Padma's banter is also so cute, and I love how chill Minki is now in comparison to how he was in seventh year. :') And ooh, what does Terry do in the Department of Transportation?? Guess he followed the more traditional path of working for the Ministry while Jerome went traveling, LOOOOL. XD

And now, we're here at last at the final epilogue. T^T Odette was the last of my main characters submitted to CtF, she was the last POV chapter of the story (and the last Fugitive to be rescued), and now she's the last of the epilogues. But that doesn't mean she's last in my heart, because she's far from it!! <3 I figured she would eventually strike up a friendship with Dean, since they both had the connection of being on the run with Dirk at some point, and I bet they've shared a lot of stories about Dirk with each other over the years. :) My heart hurts knowing that Odette still suffered so much for so long, even though it's completely understandable that she wouldn't have mentally healed in an instant. That's just not possible when you've gone through what she did. And ahhhhh, HARRY COMING THROUGH TO GIVE HER A CHANCE MAKES ME SO HAPPY!! TRULY AN ICON. AND AHHHH, SO SO SO PROUD OF ODETTE FOR BECOMING HEAD OF THE IMPROPER USE OF MAGIC OFFICE!! *o* SHE OVERCAME ALL OF THE OBSTACLES LIFE THREW HER WAY AND WE LOVE SEEING FEMALE MUGGLEBORNS GETTING RIGHTFULLY RECOGNIZED FOR THEIR WORK IN THE MINISTRY!! x] Again, restating what I said in Kent's epilogue, I completely relate to Odette and Dean talking to Dirk's gravestone so this definitely hit home for me. It's a way to stay connected with them, even though they've passed, and I think it's very powerful that Dirk was able to create a very unique bond between Odette and Dean, even though he had long since passed. :) And I love that the ice skating figurine managed to survive the war!! It's definitely a beautiful, subtle reminder of the past before the war. ^^ And ahhhhh, that final sentence really pulled at my heartstrings. :') Everything is going to be just fine, Odette!! You've made it this far and you're only going to continue climbing to the top!! <3

Also, a big resounding YES to your A/N!! I'd love an Afterwords chapter!! :D I'll save my final CtF comment for then, hehe. ^^
Susan15
#6
Chapter 55: Hi!!

Omg yes! Venus had her dream come true, I'm so proud of her!
Oh and is she getting interested in that man?? :p
I kind of imagined her with someone from work since she would probably be a professional most of the time and she wouldn't go out on dates with just anyone, especially because she would care a lot about her job and would dedicate 100% of her time to that, so I truly see things work out between them :)

Tangi!! Our precious child who is not a child anymore :') I'm so glad she and Xander kept their friendship and managed to still be a part of each other's life!
Aw and Hazel made it out alive! And I can definitely imagine their marriage :) I'm also so happy that Clary and Kingsley got married too, like omg yes!

Gabe!! I truly thought that he was the groom!! I was shipping him with Romilda ;-; but it's still good that they kept being friends all this time. Same goes for Nathan, I'm truly happy that the two of them kept their friendship after all this time! Gabe also speaking in french with Fleur was just perfect haha.

Kent!! Aww I love the name Evan as I bet Evera would love it! He truly acts like a proud dad! And Tori already grown up omg ;-;. Why am I imagining those two in Hogwarts having the time of their lives? Haha. Kent is now a married man with two beautiful kids and I bet he feels the happiest man on Earth. Evera would be really proud of him. The final scene is just heartbreaking :') farewell Evera.

And finally but not last, Audrey!! I'm so glad that she and Percy got serious and started having a life together and forming a family. Their daughter Mai is really energetic haha. And I'm so glad to see that Audrey and Python still remained friends! Omg Lucy... that hit my poor heart ;-; I bet Lucas would feel proud and happy for her. I can imagine little Lucy in Hogwarts as a happy kid and perhaps who knows, maybe she would also become a healer! And Python becoming her godmother is just amazing!

I can't believe that next chapter is the last ;-; it's been a long journey and to see that everyone have grown up and becoming happier (even Yurina haha) is so heartwarming and we became attached to all of them so it will be hard to say goodbye. I hope that maybe some of them may make a cameo in UFF :')
I'm preparing tissues for the last chapter which will take another 10 years after this one and since it's set prior to the UFF events, I'm quite curious!

Thank you for this chapter, for the "romantic and couples" chapter haha. It's good to see everyone getting their dreams came true and them having their own families.
I hope you have an incredible week, great classes and I wish you everything the best :) Rest well and take good care of yourself.
I will see you later for the story's finale ;-; see ya~ :)
luv_kero
2444 streak #7
Chapter 55: Good on Venus for becoming the youngest ever Unspeakable!! Just like Rajani, we love seeing female Slytherins achieving their goals!! ^^ At the beginning of the story, I would've never expected Venus to be working in the Love Chamber. But after her work with identifying the loss of hope during the war, it does make sense that she'd end up in the chamber that's all about unraveling the mystery behind emotion. And omg, I wasn't expecting Cadfael to be an Unspeakable as well!! :D He's so much more chill now after his angsty Hogwarts days. XD Hopefully life has been much kinder to him since then. :') And ooooh, do I spy some sparks flying between him and Venus?? :P I can definitely see them together, bonding over their Slytherin days at Hogwarts, both of them with their air of mystery and very small social circles, haha. And since Unspeakables can't really share what goes on with their work, I imagine it'd be nice to be with someone who'll understand any workplace frustrations and such. ^^

Awwwww, love that Xander and Matangi are still so close after the war!! x] And yaaaay, so glad that Hazel survived and is thriving now!! :D It's so awesome to see that she's become an activist and hopefully things change for the better for the LGBTQ+ community with her leading the charge. :) And omg, Kingsley and Clary made up and married each other!! Ahhhhh, that's so sweet!! ^^ Wow, look at Clary, going from worrying about her grades in Hogwarts, to a bittersweet relationship with Lenox, to being one of the best Auror trainers in the Ministry, to being a member of the Underground, to becoming the Minister of Magic's wife while also being the Head of Magical Law Enforcement!! Again, we love seeing successful female Slytherins killing it in life!! :D And yesss, Xander is gonna be amazing in his new job and I'm so happy he's ending his dueling career on such a high note!! :D And ahhhh, Matangi and Hazel's wedding will be absolutely beautiful, and I really hope they'll be able to wed soon!! x]

Haha, you really threw me for a loop there in thinking that Gabe was the groom. XD I wonder who David is and how Romilda met him. :P But it's awesome to see that Gabe, Nathan, and Romilda are still best friends and as close as ever after all these years. ^^ And ooh, love the little bonding moment between Gabe and Fleur!! :D And also, dang, it's very cool that Gave is working as an investigative reporter. I definitely wasn't expecting that to be his career, since I thought he might go the Auror route or something similar. He was such an explosive kid, always gunning for justice. :P But I can see why he'd choose investigative reporting instead, especially since it does have a lot of freedom and traveling is so much fun. ^^ And he still gets to pursue justice, albeit in a more roundabout manner, LOOOL. And I guess he's going the Charlie route and staying a happy bachelor for the rest of his life, which is awesome and I'm glad he's happy without needing a partner to fulfill him. :)

Oh wow, another Weasley kid to add to the clan. XD They just don't stop coming. :') And it's funny that Mai is so different in temperament from her parents and Percy must have his hands full trying to make sure she doesn't upend everything in their lives. :P And it's so cute that Audrey Caldwell is still known as Python, even after all these years, HAHA. It's definitely a very cool nickname, even without the Underground attachment, so I can see why she'd keep it, LOOOOL. And omg, ahhhh, it's so sweet that Audrey decided to name Lucy after Lucas. T^T He really meant a lot to both her and Percy, so it's very beautiful that they're choosing to honor him through the newest addition to their family. :) He still lives in everyone's hearts, even though he's long gone now, and I'm sure he would've loved doting on Mai and Lucy if he had survived. >___< And I just realized that this means Audrey will have a pre-teen at home and a teenager at Hogwarts while she's dealing with stuff in UFF, LOL. What a busy woman. :')

And oh my gosh, Kent, my lovely boy, I don't think I'm ready to let go of him yet. Q___Q He's one of my absolute favorite OCs and I'm so happy I got a opportunity to expand on him for this story. <3 Like he was already an amazing side character that I loved to bits, but getting the chance to see him under the spotlight made me so incredibly happy, despite everything that happened to him during the war. :') And awww, Tori's a teenager now and I love how sassy she's become. XD Reminds me a lot of Holly in H:aH, LOLOLOL. :P And omg, so cute that she considers Jemma an aunt too, and I'm so so curious to know how Jemma and Drake are doing nowadays!! ^^ And omg, Ebony is such a beautiful name for Holly's daughter, hehe. x] It's awesome that Kent and Willow were able to find their way back to each other, even though it was so rough. Totally understandable that they broke up after the war. Kent was still grieving the loss of Evera and Willow then had to go through the exact same thing with Laurel. They definitely needed to grow separately as they processed their grief. You don't want to be at 50% when you're dating someone, using them to fill that other 50%. You want to be at 100% and dating another person who's at 100% for it to be a healthy, long-lasting relationship. At least that's my belief, LOL, although I don't have any personal experience to go off of (so who knows if I'm spouting nonsense). ^^; But Evan is such a great name, and Evera would've loved him and Sammy to pieces. x] And oh my gosh, my heart is dying because the end of Kent's epilogue is at Evera's grave. T^T I'll be very honest here, I talk a lot to the gravestone of one of my loved ones (and I use it as proxy for the other gravestones that I can't physically visit), so Kent talking to Evera this way was something I wholly related to. And my heart is breaking all over again, because I miss Evera so much and I don't think I'll ever get over her death. But I will stay strong, because she was a strong girl and Kent is staying strong too. I hope there're only clear skies for him for the rest of his life, even though I know things will get crazy with raising two boys in the house and there's still UFF's events to come ten years later. ^^; And omg, I just realized that Evan (and maybe Sammy) will be at Hogwarts when UFF starts!! XD Not that it's super relevant in the grand scheme of things, LOL, but I will have fun imagining the newest crop of Sylvesters at the best school in the world, having shenanigans of their own. :') And I'm just really really really happy that Kent got a happy ending, because he deserves it and I love him so much. He and Evera will always be my favorite pair of siblings, forever and ever, and I'm so happy that their bond will never be broken, even by death. <3

OMG, the final epilogue is coming soon and it's set right before UFF!! :D I'm not ready at all for CtF to end though. OTL But I'm also super excited to see the five remaining POVs and catch up with them twenty years later. ^^
Susan15
#8
Chapter 54: Hi!! Sorry for taking so long to comment!

First of all, my heart is hurting for Lucas. He was one of my favourite characters and honestly I feel like since half of the story he was making a rough path and the signals to his tragedy were there ;-; His last pov and Odette's pov showed how he was overworking and not taking care of himself. I liked him a lot, but somehow I feel like I knew that he would have a bad ending. I'm glad he had a painless passing and I'm sad that he didn't do a check up with Python because maybe he could have survived, but that's so Lucas.. And I'm really sad for his mother, she suffered so much and losing a son is like losing a part of her, especially since it's not natural. Oh my ;-; rest in peace Lucas.

Oh Channer ;-; poor boy, he must feel so guilty. But we all never know what is going to happen tomorrow so it's normal that we don't say "I love you" everyday. But of course it's truly painful and the last interaction is always what is pressed in our minds ;-; I know you will be able to process your grief and you will be better with time. You have your mother and sister, you will be fine!

I'm so glad that Max made it out alive. Now Claire and Max can really talk and pour their hearts to one another. They just "lost" their father who will be imprisoned after waking up (if he eventually wakes up), so they just have one another and their mother. And I truly understand what she means that everyone is biased and already settled their minds that everyone in the losing side is guilty. Fitz!! I'm so glad to see him!!! And I'm super glad that he is fine!!! Willow and Theo omg guys ;-; I'm so proud of Theo to try helping out and prove that everyone deserves a second chance like he had, because of their family environment and ideals. And I bet Willow feels like she compensated a lot from what she did. Everything is good now, I'm happy for them.

Oh Farrah :( you need time to heal my poor child. I understand that Christian is very important to her but he wouldn't understand what she has been through and she definitely needs to have a support near her who truly understands her and even though I know that Christian was what kept her sanity, she created a version of him in her mind who probably doesn't exist, and she needs time for herself now. You can get well child ;-;.

Yurina queen of the evil! Always causing trouble, really haha. Abeni must have a huge grudge on Yurina, because she is quite a pain in the haha. Let's see how Yurina will cause problems in Uff because I know you're involved young lady!

Wow next epilogue is 10 years from here! We're going to see the Hogwarts kids as grown ups!! I hope Venus and Minki managed to follow their dreams! I'm quite curious how Ava and Gabe became as adults haha. I bet everyone else is doing well now :)
I can't wait for the next epilogue!!
I hope you have a nice week, take care of yourself, rest well and see you later ;)
petitreveur
#9
Chapter 54: I told myself I was going to properly comment at the end of the three-part epilogue but I know I had to drop a comment after I read the first POV. NOOOOO LUCAS NOOOOOOO :"( Why do all my fav characters have to die hurhur /cries/ First Evera, then Laurel and now Lucas. My heart was literally squeezed tight when I read the line "He doesn't wake up" and I'm like NO NO NO, THAT CAN'T BE TRUE :"( I should have realised that foreshadowing when he was feeling way too exhausted than ever, that he w-wouldn't make it pass the night. Idk why but his death hits so much harder than anyone else's?? Lucas was (fk, I have to use the word 'was' now) such a golden boy, he did so much as a Healer and contributes sooo much as part of the Underground!! Although he didn't "fight" in the war, he was a true war hero!! I guess it's...relieving that his death wasn't a painful one and he passed in the comforts of his house....he will definitely be sorely missed :"( I can't imagine how broken his mother would be when she realises that her son is never going to wake up again >.< OH GOSHH, THAT START ALREADY SCREAMS DEPRESSING!! (I literally paused for five whole minutes before going on to the next POV)

Glad to see that Channel survived the war!! That sibling dynamic between Channel and Adeline has drastically changed. Damn, those two siblings must feel rather awkward and apologetic to each other but I feel it's neither their fault that things turned out that way. It's the awful circumstances that caused things to spiral out of control >.< It's so heartwarming to see Adeline and their mother visiting Channel in the hospital. , Channel must be feeling even more horrible and guilty for not actively doing anything during the war after learning that their father had passed away in Azkaban. Despite the awkwardness between the siblings, I'm sure Adeline never actually blamed Channel for ousting her and that's what family is all about. They are there for you no matter how much you might have forsaken them and at the end of the day, they still worry about you and welcome you back with open arms ^^ Things are never the same but Channel still has Adeline and their mother and things will get better with time :-)

Another POV that reflects the phrase "blood is thicker than water". Even though Max was a Death Eater, Claire can't bring herself to hate him or cut off ties with him. Sure, she does not agree with his dealings but after all, he is still her brother, her family. That conflicted feelings within her must be chewing her up for she knows that her brother deserved to be punished for the greater good but at the same time, Max is her brother, they are related by blood, and it must be hard to see him locked up in Azkaban (when their father was already sentenced while in a coma, big oof!) That grey area would always be grey ^^" Oh wow, I would have never thought Willow to be on defence (should I say that Max is very lucky to have Claire as his sister? LOL) and Theo to be the final witness!! Looks like Max doesn't have to live in a crammed cell anymore :')

Poor Farrah :'( She is suffering so much but I'm glad to see the tiniest progress that she is making since the day she was admitted into Mungo's. It that she doesn't really have any close friends around her except for Clara as all of her friends are all Muggles who wouldn't be able to understand what she had gone through because of the Statue. And now Clara is feeling slightly wary around her >.< Well, I don't blame Clara, she must be at a huge loss of what to do with someone so utterly broken, she had never been in her situation before and neither is she a trained medical professional. But it's great that Farrah is seeing a therapist and I can tell that Ellie is a good psychiatrist to her. Oh nooo, it must have been a last straw for Farrah when she heard that she's not allowed to see Christian as it was Christian who kept her fighting on for her life in the cells >.< Yet again, Christian prolly wouldn't be able to understand what happened to Farrah as a Muggle. But maybe, it's just the presence of Christian that she needs? Somehow, I don't think that Clara is a mean friend to Farrah or anything, it's just that Farrah is just so delicate right now and Clara obviously can't be there 24/7 for her >.< It's draining for both girls. Perhaps, a longer hospital stay would do them both good? The impact of war is just so harsh :"(

Da boss lady is in the house!! And she is getting straight to work!! With her schemings!! Poor Amos, he is so naive to think that he can get a taste of her LMAO and Yurina is using that to her strength, obviously. And voila, now she has information about Abeni Akingbade, which leads me wondering what exactly happened over the past twenty years?? The Akingbades must be pretty influential people in Nigeria?? And I'm pretty sure Yurina managed to wreck chaos in Nigeria and overthrew the government in some way or another?? I swear this little Japanese lady just doesn't stop :P Abeni must have gone through much turmoil, seeing the UFF's first teaser. Damn, everything is getting juicier and I can't wait for the tea to be spilled xD
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Chapter 54: Oh man, I should've figured Lucas would end up dying from overwork. :'( The signs were all there, especially during his final main POV. T^T Him overworking himself was a constant theme and it so much that he had to go out this way. It reminds me a lot of karoshi, "overwork death" in Japanese, and I'm just glad that he got one final night with his mother and that he died in the comfort of his home. OTL But oh my god, his mother is going to be absolutely heartbroken when she finds him in the morning and my heart hurts so much for her, because she was probably so thankful that her son wasn't directly on the battlefield, but he ended up being a casualty anyway and she'll still have to bury him with all of the others. T^T In a way, Lucas' death sort of has a numbness to it and both Audreys are probably going to be devastated when they receive the news as well. :'( As well as Percy, Jemma, Jun, and anyone else who knew Lucas. ;~; He was a great guy though and he really did a lot for the war effort. In the end, he definitely died a hero like the others.

Oh my gosh, I've been anticipating the conclusion to Channer's story ever since his final main POV and I'm so glad he's in a much better state than some of the others. <3 Granted, things aren't perfect and they never will be, especially since Timon is dead, but at least he has a chance to make things better and that's what counts the most. Channer is still so young and he has his whole life ahead of him to strengthen the bonds he has with his remaining family members. It's something I'm personally trying to work on as well, although our circumstances are admittedly very different. One thing I definitely fear is leaving things unsaid when it's too late, and my heart hurts so much that Timon and Channer never got to properly bond before Timon died. :'( It's definitely going to weigh on Channer a lot from now on, and I hope that he'll be able to process his grief and regret in a healthy way. On the plus side, I'm so happy that Henry is okay and it's so cool that Adeline stayed with his dad while she was in hiding!! ^^ If anything, maybe Henry and Channer can become eventual friends with Henry easing some of Channer's regrets with stories of Timon in Azkaban and how Timon was always talking about how proud he was of his kids. It won't alleviate all of the pain, but it might help a bit, knowing that even though he never verbally expressed his feelings to his dad, Timon still deeply loved and cared for Channer until the very end. Linette, Adeline, and Channer are definitely going to struggle for years to come, but at least they have each other and that's what matters. <3

Oof, it does that Claire's still stuck between both sides, even after the end of the war. But it's nice to see that short moment between her and Fitzwilliam, and he's grown so much from his school days, ahhhhh :') And oh my, I guess since Claire does technically have a stake in the other side because of her family, what the Order is doing for clean-up probably does feel a lot more harsh to her, even though they probably feel completely justified in doing so. It's a very gray area and at the very least, Willow and Theo came through by helping out, even though they had no obligation to. I do wonder why they did. Maybe it was Holly asking for a favor, since she knew Claire?? Maybe it was just Willow not wanting someone else to lose a sibling after she did?? Maybe it was Theo knowing that Max was like him, brought up with Death Eater ideals but still capable of change?? At the very least, I'm glad that Claire doesn't have to lose a family member who's so precious to her and she's much luckier than most who've been affected by the war.

Oh wow, good to see that Farrah also survived Azkaban!! I'm guessing we'll find out Hazel's fate in Matangi's epilogue. Anyway, it's awesome that Farrah is already seeing a therapist and Ellie sounds wonderful. :) And considering how broken Farrah already was back in February, I'm not surprised she was even worse by the time all of the prisoners were released from Azkaban. Her fantasies were probably the only thing keeping her going while she was at Azkaban. x___x But yikes, I don't know if a happy ending with Christian is in the cards. Considering what she's been through, she'll really need someone by her side who'll understand the extent of this war and since Christian is a Muggle, I don't think he can be that person, realistically. >___< Maybe if this were set during UFF's time with magic finally being revealed, Christian could become her caretaker and they could have their happily ever after. But considering how Clara is Farrah's best friend and Clara's reaction to Farrah's breakdowns, I doubt Christian will be able to last long either. >___>

And finally, my beautiful and strong queen of darkness, Miss Yurina Nakayashi!! <3 Going to America was definitely the right call, HAHA. (Since no pandemic to worry about and the US was in a much better state back then OTL If this were 2020, I'd be like, NOOOOO, GO BACK TO ASIA!! ANYWHERE BUT THE US!!) And yesssss, what a QUEEEEEN, living in the lap of luxury in Vegas!! XD Love love love that she's already scheming and recruiting people to her cause!! She isn't wasting any time in making plans for world domination. XD And ooooooh, I've been so so so curious to find out about the bit with soap operas that you asked me about a while back and it's so cool to finally see it here!! :D And oof, looks like Amos is her newest puppet and I love her puppeteering so much!! XD She'd never give him a second glance if it weren't for the information he's gathering for her. He's too much of a lust-driven doormat and Yurina is WAY above that. x] If she ever does fall in love, it'll be with a man who can provide a challenge and keep up with her intellectually. He'll have to REALLY impress her with his cunning and capabilities, and men like that are few and far in between, especially relative to Yurina. She has no time to deal with small fries like Amos and he's probably only got an Avada Kedavra in his future once she's done with him. :') But ooh, Abeni better watch out since Yurina has her eye on her now!! The fox is on the prowl and no one is safe now, hehe <3

Ooh, super curious to see what life will be like ten years from now!! Definitely a lot happier than this, since most people will have healed considerably by then. :') And wizards probably won't be affected by everything that's happening in the Muggle world, LOL (collapse of the housing bubble, Great Recession, etc.) :P