Chapter Thirty-Six

Confronting the Faceless 💀 Complete
March 27, 1998
"Never tickle a sleeping dragon"
 
The Dark Lord is in a mood.
 
Not that Yurina blames him - she's not thrilled either at the moment, though she thinks her reasons are rather different. Not that she'd ever tell him, but she finds her Lord Voldemort's obsession with a simple child rather overblown. Particularly as it's interfering directly with her own work - the work that he had given her, mind.
 
She huffs out an angry breath as she strides across the Atrium floor, glaring at anyone who dares get in her way and sending the Ministry drones skittering out of her path, but even the show of fear and respect doesn't cheer her up very much.
 
For months Yurina has distracted herself toying with the people around her, collecting information where she can but mostly just enjoying herself. But since sending Channer Lindberg to the cells earlier this week all the joy she used to feel has been somewhat soured. No one squirms quite as nicely as Lindberg had, and the fact the information she'd gotten from him hadn't ultimately panned out is frustrating in its own right. And it's making her feel like she's stagnating.
 
She's supposed to be coordinating their expansion beyond Britain, and she already has multiple contacts and groups ready to go at her signal, but the Dark Lord continues to tell her to wait.
 
She's getting rather sick of waiting.
 
They have a meeting this afternoon at the Malfoy's place - apparently something happened the day before involving the accursed boy that's drastic enough that their Lord needs to consult with all four of his primary lieutenants. They haven't had a meeting like this one since August, when they were finalizing the Ministry takeover, and they weren't supposed to have any others until they were ready to leave the country. Whatever happened was big enough to cause her Lord to change plans this far along and Yurina would by lying if she said she wasn't somewhat excited by the prospect.
 
At the very least, it will be a deviation from her mind-numbing normal.
 
She goes to her office, giving Zara Wong and the Unit one of her signature smiles as she passes them. Just a reminder of who's actually in charge - the situation with Theodore Yaxley the month before had been a bit of a mess, but it had played out pretty much as Yurina had expected, and the results have led to a more effective Unit. She and Yaxley had already suspected there was a mole in the ranks, and she'd opted to let Zara weed it out using her brash methods, knowing that even if Theo wasn't the mole his ousting would spook whoever was and Yurina would be able to take things from there.
 
As it was, the younger Yaxley had turned traitor, and Yurina got to enjoy the look on Corban's face in the aftermath and not reveal her own hand earlier than she'd have liked. A win-win situation certainly.
 
She tosses open her office door, letting it close loudly behind her, and settles at her desk, resigned to being bored until lunchtime. She considers going to find Branwen, but frankly doesn't feel like expending the energy on that.
 
The older woman has recently begun to try and cultivate a friendship with Yurina, which she's allowing to happen as she isn't sure she fully trusts the unmarked Deatheater. She of course understands why Branwen never took a Dark Mark, and at first she hadn't been too concerned about it - until that man had shown up asking after her. Yurina had done a bit of research herself on Aelfwine Fawley and it wasn't hard to discover that he and Branwen had been Hogwarts sweethearts. Branwen of course claims that the man is disposable, a tool that has outlived its usefulness.
 
But Yurina watches Branwen closely whenever the topic comes up, and she know for certain that the other woman could be emotionally compromised by this so-called tool. And so Yurina keeps her close, lets her think she's in control of the relationship when really Yurina is just waiting to see which side of the line Branwen will ultimately fall onto. Is she with them, or will she turn tail and try to claim innocence if things go poorly?
 
Not that it will go well for her if she does try - Yurina knows that Branwen was compromised at some point, though until they know how many people have access to that knowledge she's keeping that tidbit of information wrangled from Channer Lindberg to herself (and besides, it's amusing to see Branwen act so cocky about her own abilities when she's already failed so completely).
 
Yurina sighs and glares up at the ceiling for a while, only looking back down when she hears the door to her office swinging open.
 
She's admittedly surprised to see Branwen Avery standing there, looking nervous though Yurina knows she only does it to maintain her cover. Branwen, stupidly, isn't actually scared of her, but she also never comes to Yurina's office of her own free will, in order to maintain the cover that she is. Yurina frowns and waves her in, and Branwen quickly closes the door, dropping the nerves as she does.
 
"I assume you know something happened at the Malfoy's yesterday?" She says with no preamble. Yurina tilts her head in acknowledgement, opting to let Branwen control the flow of information for now. It'll let the other woman continue to think she's in control of their 'friendship'.
 
"Well," Branwen says, taking a seat and leaning forward, "It must have had something to do with the Weasley boy, the youngest one, because his father is gone."
 
Yurina blinks. She doesn't really know Arthur Weasley, had rarely gone to that part of the Ministry as it had seemed frightfully boring (and there were already plenty of eyes on the obvious future traitor so there was no real need for her to waste her time), but she does know his youngest is best friends with The Boy and had supposedly been sick with Spattergroit.
 
"I assume there was a miraculous recovery." She drawls with a flat grin, and Branwen returns the expression just as wryly.
 
"Not even, they just vanished in the middle of the night. Obviously they were warned about Ronald's whereabouts being compromised which means there's likely a leak somewhere within the ranks."
 
Yurina hums. Branwen is correct on that front, and it explains why the meeting this afternoon will only involve the four people closest to her Dark Lord - they don't want to risk the leak learning anything they decide on. "That's concerning." She observes after it's clear Branwen doesn't intend to continue speaking - perhaps that's all the information she has and is hoping to wring some more out of Yurina.
 
If that's the case, then Branwen's questionable loyalty may be worse than simple self-preservation - she could very well be the mole, and if that is the case all the more reason for Yurina not to let slip that she knows not everyone is buying Branwen's act.
 
Yurina has no proof outside an ex and a gut feeling though, so she decides to play the long game - she has plenty of time, after all - and gives Branwen half-facts to see what she does with them.
 
"That certainly explains the message I received this morning from Bella." She says idly. "I can't say I know much though - it did only happen yesterday. I'm curious how you learned about it?"
 
Branwen scowls. "I had a meeting with Arthur Weasley today. When he blew me off I tried to send him an owl, only for the thing to come back confused and with the letter undelivered." She shakes her head in frustration. "If there's one thing we can get from this though, at least we know Percy really is estranged from his family. He looked just as shocked as I was when the owl failed."
 
Yurina tilts her head. The other Ministry Weasley is still here then? She can't say she's surprised - the young man has a clear desperation to be appreciated by people in positions of authority, though she doesn't know much more about him as he's quite boring overall. "Well considering he's been helping us from day one that isn't so surprising." She eventually says, figuring something neutral will allow them to move on from that topic - she's more interested in whether Branwen has any further information on the incident itself.
 
Branwen hums. "Fair enough. Any idea where we're going from here?"
 
"Why would I? I'm never at Malfoy Manor, the place stinks." Yurina replies, turning her nose up at the thought. The Malfoys think themselves so high and mighty yet they fail her Lord time and time again and complain when there are repercussions for those failures. Utter cowards, the lot of them. They're lucky her Lord graces them with His presence at all. Yurina would kill for such an honor, but she has her role and they have theirs. "If you don't have anything else to say, Wennie," She intentionally uses the nickname, knowing how much Branwen hates it, "I really do have a lot to finish before this afternoon."
 
Branwen huffs. Yurina knows that the other woman is well aware that Yurina has nothing else to do, but she's letting Branwen think that she's in control, and that means letting her think Yurina isn't a particularly good liar. Or at the very least, that Yurina doesn't have a vested interest in lying to her. Neither of which is true.
 
Branwen does leave though, and Yurina is once again bored. She shuffles through a few files, contemplates calling some of her non-British contacts to update them on the situation, but the simple truth is until the meeting she really doesn't have any information to update them with. All she knows for now is that something happened and some part of their plans are going to change because of it, but that's not enough to fill a call with. She does, however, send off a few long-distance owls to set up meetings for the coming days - she'll have enough information after the meeting today after all, and she needs to keep their external allies sweet if she wants to keep their help.
 
She really hopes part of the new plan will involve upping the timing of their expansion - it would make sense, after all, that if something had gone wrong they should speed up their plans to prevent that complication from having time to ruin things.
 
Especially considering the complication in question is a literal child.
 
The afternoon does eventually come, though it takes far too long for Yurina's tastes, and she bids good day to Zara and the Unit members still lingering around the offices before heading to the lower levels to Apparate out to Malfoy Manor.
 
The place is exactly as ugly as she remembers, and she waves her wand lazily in order to step through the front gates, which are, oddly, guard-less today. Perhaps them failing had something to do with the incident yesterday? They're probably dead, anyway. Voldemort doesn't appreciate failure, and it's not unexpected for him to punish those who fail him.
 
Yurina doesn't bother with knocking when she reaches the large front doors, shoving them open magically and letting them fall shut loud and heavy behind her. The foyer is an absolute mess, with droplets of blood spattered about that are clearly old as they've dried into the wooden floor and the carpet. Wrinkling her nose, Yurina picks her way across the floor and over to the main living room.
 
It's even worse in here. There's a chandelier on the ground, shattered into thousands of crystalline pieces, and blood puddles and scorch marks cover the floor and walls. Yurina promptly closes the door, disgusted at the sight. Really, the Malfoys need to get another House Elf, their place is becoming a sty.
 
"Nakayashi, you're early." A voice says behind her, and she turns to look Narcissa Malfoy square in the eye. After a moment, the platinum blonde looks away, diverting her eyes respectfully, and Yurina smirks.
 
"I want to see my dear friend Nagini, is that such a crime? Oh, and you should really clean that room, it's an embarrassment." She adds, gesturing vaguely behind herself. "Now, where is the meeting taking place."
 
Narcissa keeps her eyes focused on the ground as she leads Yurina to a smaller study on the second floor of the mansion. Inside Bellatrix is looking incredibly bored, poking one of the Manor guards with her wand and watching him twitch. She glances up at Yurina's entrance and promptly grins.
 
"Nina darling, it's been ages." She drawls, and Yurina offers her own smile in return as she settles in the seat next to Bellatrix, kicking the whimpering guard out of her way as she does and ignoring Bellatrix's pout at the action.
 
"Far too long Bella." She agrees, even if she isn't quite as keen on Voldemort's mistress as the other woman is on Yurina. "I hear there was an incident here yesterday? You didn't happen to be present?"
 
Bellatrix's expression immediately sours. "It was so fun at first too." She whines pathetically and oh, good, Yurina has set off one of her rants. The Japanese woman settles back into the seat, resigned to having to listen to the older woman complain until another member of their group shows up to interrupt her.
 
"Some of your Unit had actually managed to be useful - the team led by Greyback hunted down Potter and his friends! And I got to torture the Mudblood girl for information about what they were up to, but that stupid House Elf came out of nowhere and ruined my fun."
 
"Well you did get to torture her for a bit at least." Yurina says, the words consoling even if the tone is mostly just bored. "How did the House Elf even get in? I thought this place was well warded."
 
"House Elves have an unfortunately tricky type of magic." A new voice drawls from the doorway. "Thus they can apparate just about anywhere."
 
Severus Snape looks less than impressed as he strides into the room. His eyes have heavy dark rings below them and his hair is looking particularly greasy.
 
Yurina wrinkles her nose. "Severus, when was the last time you showered?"
 
Bellatrix cackles as Snape glares. "The last time you showed any class, I imagine." He says, words dripping like poison from his tongue. "Unlike you ladies, I have an actual job I'm actively engaged with."
 
"Ah yes, fighting children. How difficult for you Severus." Bellatrix mocks, and Yurina cackles at the glare the other woman receives for the comment.
 
"Where is Yaxley? I need to get back soon." Snape grumbles, opting to not respond verbally to Bellatrix's taunt.
 
Yurina shrugs. She knows Yaxley has been extra busy the past few days - even though the 'safehouse' Channer Lindberg had given up had been abandoned, it's caused Yaxley to become paranoid about spies in the Ministry. Yurina honestly is inclined to be on his side, though anyone who is resisting either isn't doing a very good job of it or is being so cautious as to not be making much of an impact, but she does think he could stand to delegate some of the things he's doing, especially as now it's making him late for a meeting with their Lord.
 
Just as she has the thought the man in questions strides through the door with his usual bluster and pomp, and the three of them stare at him pointedly while he pretends he isn't late and takes the seat next to Snape.
 
It's about a minute later that a familiar slithering sound fills the air, and Yurina immediately sits up in her chair in delight.
 
"Nagini!" She coos happily as the giant snake glides into the room and directly to Yurina, winding around the leg of her chair and up her body until Nagini is settled comfortably around her shoulders like a scaly feather boa. Yurina pets her head and hums happily while the two men in the room look distinctly uncomfortable and Bellatrix rolls her eyes.
 
A moment later another figure swoops into the room, flying directly over the table and settling at the head of it, red eyes assessing each of the other four critically.
 
All four of them immediately bow their heads in reverence to their Dark Lord.
 
"My Lord, if I may explain-" Bellatrix starts, but a single raised hand silences her instantly. Yurina along Nagini's length and waits patiently for Voldemort to speak.
 
He lets them sit in silence for several minutes, and Yurina smirks when she sees how uncomfortable Yaxley is getting. Amateur.
 
"I have gathered you here for one reason." Voldemort finally says, his voice calm and cool and powerful. Yurina shudders with it, reveling in the honor of getting to hear that voice once more. It is far too uncommon these days for her to be able to be in the presence of the sheer, impressive power her Lord wields so comfortably. "Harry Potter."
 
Yurina's awe abates somewhat at the utterance of the name. She's heard plenty about the teenager from her Lord and from his other followers, and frankly she doesn't understand all the fuss around a seventeen year old brat. Sure, he somehow survived the Killing Curse, but the chances he manages that again are next to nothing. She doesn't understand why they can't just kill him and move on with their plans.
 
She doesn't voice any of that - yet - and waits to hear what else Voldemort has to say. Maybe he's finally letting go of this obsession and moving things forward?
 
"You had him. Here in this house. And you lost him."
 
"My Lord, Pettigrew-" Bellatrix starts, but again she's cut off.
 
"Is dead. Nagini quite enjoyed the meal. You were here Bellatrix, tell me, how is it that Potter escaped yet again?"
 
This time Bellatrix is smart enough to not try and respond. Nothing she says will help anyhow - and she's one of Voldemort's favorites, so she'll be fine ultimately. Humiliated, but not dead and fed to Nagini the way Peter Pettigrew seems to have been.
 
Too bad, that. Yurina had worked a bit with Pettigrew and he really was the perfect little follower - insecure, cowardly, and broken emotionally in a way that made him wonderfully malleable. She wonders what he'd done so terribly wrong to have been fed to Nagini - that's usually reserved for traitors and Mudbloods, and Yurina can't really see pathetic Peter resisting. Still, people have surprised her before.
 
"We are changing our plans." Voldemort says after another long silence. "We nearly killed Potter and his friends. I want that corrected to succeeded in killing."
 
Ah good. Exactly the opposite of what Yurina wanted. "My Lord, with all due respect," She finally breaks her silence, right hand coming up to cradle Nagini's head in her palm, "Why is it you focus so intently on Potter? He's a child, and insignificant fly. Would our resources not be better used elsewhere, rather than hunting down a little boy?"
 
Voldemort's eyes flash, but Yurina doesn't flinch, though she does feel a thrill at the show of power - oh to be able to make people crumble in fear with only a look! She's learning though, has had plenty of practice in the Ministry while she's been stuck doing absolutely nothing for months.
 
"You dare question your Lord?" Bellatrix hisses, rising from her seat, her wild hair complimenting her wild appearance. It would be intimidating if Bella didn't always look like she was on the edge of a mental breakdown. "If he says that Potter is our number one priority then you obey without question! You bow and you thank him for giving you the honor of having any task at all! I fought the boy and his horrid filthy Mudblood and Blood traitor followers while you have been sitting pretty in an office doing nothing of use. You do not question him!"
 
Yurina just raises an eyebrow as Yaxley attempt to add his own opinion, clearly hoping for some acknowledgement from Voldemort (he's always been a brown-noser, as evidenced by his willingness to let his nephew be declared an Undesirable without so much as a token effort to argue the young man's case. Corban Yaxley always wants to be on the winning side and frankly that makes him rather pathetic).
 
"Now hear this Ms. Nakayashi, just because you don't have the experience to understand such things does not give you any right-"
 
"That's enough Yaxley." The Dark Lord says, voice echoing sharp and commanding, and Yaxley sinks back down into his seat looking cowed and upset all at once. It's a lovely image.
 
Snape tilts his head then, clearly asking permission to speak, and Voldemort wave at him to do so.
 
"Ms. Nakayashi," He starts, slow and precise, each word clearly selected carefully before being released into the world, "I have had the misfortune to teach one Harry Potter for the past six years, and I had the greater misfortune to know his father before that. The Potter men are idiots, yes, and reckless, but they are, unfortunately, very lucky reckless idiots." He pauses here, his eyes locked onto hers, and she tilts her head for him to go on. She's curious to see where exactly this is going.
 
"Potter, like his father before him, always seems to have life simply hand him things. Throughout his school years there were over a dozen instances during which Harry Potter should have died, and were he any other student he would have." His lip curls. "Indeed, sometimes others did die in his stead. And yet Potter continues to walk away without a scratch. Someone like that is important to remove from the playing field - they create far too much uncertainty by their mere presence."
 
Yurina hums, Nagini as she considers the man's words. Snape has had the most exposure to the Potter boy of any of them here, her Lord included, and his arguments do make sense. If she's honest the boy's apparent invulnerability seems rather contrived, but some people really are very lucky. And she supposes if it will get her Lord refocused on what's important then-
 
"I suppose I can understand that." She concedes, smirking at the looks of shock and outrage it draws from Bellatrix and Yaxley respectively. Nagini seems to settle more firmly on her shoulders and her tongue flicks out a few times - Yurina takes that as her friend agreeing with her decision. "But perhaps, my Lord, instead of wasting resources on a manhunt, we simply draw the Potter boy to us? It will save us time and allow us to set up the area of the confrontation, make sure he doesn't pull any of his usual dirty tricks."
 
Yaxley looks upset at the suggestion - obviously he wishes he'd thought of it first - but Bellatrix has quickly switched off her irritation and looks absolutely delighted.
 
"Oh my Lord, do allow me to assist in choosing the location!" She begs, but Voldemort doesn't spare her a glance, his eyes locked on Yurina, who preens slightly at the attention. She knows why her Lord had entrusted her with so much power and resources, but it does feel good to rub it in the other Lieutenant's faces on occasion.
 
"I approve of your proposal Yurina." He says, icy voice once again sliding up her spine. "Have you any suggestions as to where we will set this trap of yours."
 
It isn't a question, which means there's a correct answer. A test then, which is a bit annoying but Yurina knows she'll pass, even if she thinks it rather unnecessary.
 
"Hogwarts, of course." She replies confidently. "As you of course know, My Lord."
 
Snape nods. "I agree. Potter will likely return to the school to defend his friends," He spits the word like it's poison, and Yurina can empathize with the feeling, "At which point he will be vulnerable."
 
"And we can destroy the school while we're there!" Bellatrix adds excitedly, practically vibrating in her seat. "Everyone sees that school as some safe haven, but if it falls no one will dare question you ever again!"
 
Voldemort's expression doesn't change, though he tilts his head towards Bellatrix, who preens at the attention.
 
"My Lord," She continues eagerly, "Allow me the pleasure of organizing the attack on Hogwarts! I will not let you down."
 
"I know you will not." He replies, and it's a threat. "Severus, you will assist Mrs. Lestrange  in the organization of Hogwarts' destruction."
 
"My Lord if I may." Yaxley speaks up again, and Yurina resists rolling her eyes. Yaxley is one of the top Lieutenants in the ranks for a reason, though that doesn't make having to work with him any less bothersome. "The plan, of course, is brilliant and I have no doubt that Severus and Bellatrix will together come up with a fool-proof path to victory. However, I believe Ms. Nakayashi and myself should be focused on the Ministry."
 
Yurina can tell he's trying to sound confident and commanding, the way their Lord always does without trying, but Yaxley comes across as a nervous puppy hoping for praise. He has a point though, loathe as Yurina would be to admit it.
 
Voldemort sees the merit of the comment as well and gestures for Yaxley to continue. The slender man sits up a bit straighter, clearly gaining confidence with the acknowledgement. "Once Hogwarts falls we will want to be fully primed and prepared to begin our expansion into the rest of Europe and beyond. I know Ms. Nakayashi has been doing a wonderful job setting up that front," And there's some very unexpected praise, but Yurina will take it, "But recent events, also uncovered by Ms. Nakayashi, have suggested that the Ministry may be compromised. I believe we should focus on discovering where this problem may stem from to ensure our total control of the government. If I may also make a suggestion on the Fugitive Recovery Unit?"
 
It takes a moment for Yurina to realize he's asking her. Which is the correct person to ask, of course, but she didn't realize Yaxley actually had any sort of respect for her role as the official head of the Unit.
 
She looks over at Voldemort, who's also watching for her answer, and that sight makes her swell with pride. "Of course Yaxley, we're equals here and I'm always happy to hear your thoughts." A lie, but he's being nice so she can be as well.
 
Yaxley nods briskly. "I believe we have successfully killed or imprisoned a majority of the Fugitives at this point, and any left surely will starve themselves soon enough. I propose we refocus the Unit on fighting the Order of the Phoenix. We have their members running scared right now - the vanishing of those Blood Traitors the Weasleys confirms that. Now is the best time to strike - while they're weak."

Yurina hums thoughtfully. "It certainly has merit. I'll rework their schedules and patrols for Monday and inform them of their new duty." Zara will be furious, but Zara is little more than a whiny figurehead for the Unit that Yurina sometimes uses when she needs dirty work done, so Yurina doesn't care what Zara thinks.
 
Voldemort is looking far less furious than when he'd first entered the room, which is a good thing. And Yurina even got out of having to deal with the Potter nonsense, not that she's too pleased about being sidelined from the Hogwarts attack.
 
"Very good. I leave it in your hands then. Come Nagini." The Dark Lord rises from his seat and flies back out of the room. Nagini lazily uncoils herself from around Yurina's shoulders, much to her disappointment. She likes the warm weight of her friend.
 
"I'll see you in a few months I suppose." She jokes, and Nagini hisses before slithering back out of the room.
 
"If that's all, I have a school to run." Snape says tightly, standing with a swirl of his cape. Yurina rolls her eyes at Bellatrix, who snickers as Snape strides out of the room.
 
"Such a dramatic douche." Bella says once he's gone. "Come now Nina, you can stay a little longer? I need girl time."
 
Yurina can't say she relishes the thought of spending time with Bellatrix, but it's certainly preferable to continuing to be bored in her Ministry office.
 
"I could use some as well." She says aloud with a smile. "See you at the office later Yaxley. Or tomorrow. Keep me updated." She adds, waving without looking as she and Bellatrix head out to the foyer of Malfoy Mansion.
 
"Ugh, still such a mess." Yurina complains aloud as the two women regard the room. "Tell me Bella, how much of this did you cause?"
 
"Only the fun parts." Bellatrix says dismissively. "That horrid elf dropped the chandelier, nearly killed Cissie the wretched thing. And after this family gave him a job for so many years, really. The nerve of that creature."
 
Well now, this may be more interesting an afternoon than Yurina had anticipated. "You aren't saying it was the Malfoy's former elf that did all this?"
 
Bellatrix happily gives Yurina all the information she could need about the day before, from the moment the top three Undesireables were dragged through the door to the moment the elf had magiced Potter away. Yurina is surprised when she learns that Pettigrew hadn't been killed in the fight, but was found strangled by his own hand downstairs afterwards, which is a bit confusing but dead is dead and he was little more than a pawn anyhow.
 
"Sounds like you had quite the day." She drawls when the other woman has finished. The two have moved to one of the non-destroyed sitting rooms and Yurina has helped herself to the comfort of the red silk lounge chair while Bellatrix is relaxed on one of the loveseats.
 
Bellatrix growls. "Don't mock me Nina. I was supposed to get that little blood traitor next, and now I can't even get his wretched blood traitor family since the cowards fled."
 
Yurina hums in sympathy. "I'm sure they'll show at Hogwarts - you can enjoy yourself there." She suggests, but is then struck with another thought. She sits up abruptly, grinning. "Say Bella, actually, you may be able to start now."
 
Bellatrix raises an eyebrow, and Yurina stands up.
 
"We do still have one Weasley out in the open you know. They say he's defected from his family, but I do believe he was old enough in the first war to remember where his family would have been hiding."
 
Bellatrix is grinning now as well, and she quickly stands from the loveseat.
 
"Why Nina darling, it's not even my birthday yet you give me such a lovely gift!" She drawls, offering her arm. "Shall we go get ourselves some information then?"
 
Yurina smirks back, accepting the arm elegantly. Even if Percy doesn't know anything, this will certainly be fun.
 
Author's Note: I'm sure it's fine. Also, for anyone who noticed in my A/N way back during Theo's defection that I said I was balancing multiple manipulations well, it wasn't just Theo and Zara ;) Yurina's got her own plans!
 
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So I'm thinking I might do a final 'afterwords' chapter to share my thoughts and feelings on writing this story, if that's something people would be interested in? I'm also open to answering any lingering questions people might have there as well!

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Chapter 57: Hi!
I'm so sorry for taking so long to comment, but shall we begin!

I swear I should have made a bet omg. The moment I first heard of Python I was like "hmm.. what if she was Percy's Audrey?" And even though I knew that our Audrey would be Percy's girlfriend, I always thought how it would be nice if Python and him were endgame, but honestly... they wouldn't last long haha

I want to thank you for being so passionate about the story and truly understanding the characters and doing your best to give them justice. I loved how you put so much effort on everything!

When I first saw this story I first imagined a muggleborn with a fiery personality so after seeing that Tangi was created you have no idea how happy I was.
Claire was my first character for the story. When I thought about her I wanted a strong woman who was conflicted between her believes and her family, but who definitely couldn't turn a blind eye to people in need. Then I thought if she was an insider probably no one would suspect her because of her family, so she would have some advantage!
I'm truly proud of how she grew up. She was such a lonely girl who had only Bill and her cousin Petra as her friends. Then she loved her brother and her parents but she always thought that he didn't care about her. She didn't agree with her families believes and she truly had to do something to free herself from her fears and allow herself to be who she was. And being one of the leaders of the underground made me very proud of her! Especially after Max was able to change as well and they now became stronger together as a family. Honestly I wonder how Claire decided to do in the future, if she stayed in the ministry, if she dedicated herself to her family and if she made friends (because I'm so happy that she at least became friends with Python, she truly deserves friends), whether she ended up married or not, well I'm curious but I think if she ever got married she would choose someone she truly trusted and who she could be herself and for God sake, someone who could make that poor girl smile, because come on she looks so gloomy xD But I'm happy that she made at least one friend and that she got closure with her brother, so I'm blessed :) Ps: I always thought that Claire wouldn't make it until the end xD I always thought she would be killed or that she would sacrifice herself to protect someone.

Theo... Oh my little boy. When I visualised Theo I thought about a broken boy who always wanted his parents approval. Theo was meant to be an adult version of Draco Malfoy. When Kent appeared in the picture I imagined the rivalry such like Draco and Harry and that only made the adult version I imagined more lively. Theo was lucky to have a friend like Kent, even if he didn't understand what a friend truly meant. Theo lost his mother, his uncle hated him, his father well... they didn't have the best relationship, he didn't manage to be captain, he didn't manage to be a prefect, he had to give up on his dream, he couldn't trust anyone. Well everything about Theo was supposed to be tragic. His partnership with Zara was just amazing, I believe he saw himself on her (even though she was pure evil), and he believed that maybe people could change if someone believed in him. He betrayed his family, he betrayed his colleagues for something he believed to be the right thing, Kent could have abandoned him and Kingsley could have hit believed in him and hand him over. But people believed in him, he was the same person his mother believed he was. Seeing him trying to get thought his trauma was sad, but it fit him. I'm so so happy that he found happiness somehow. Val loved him by who he was, she didn't see him because of his family, blood heritage or even his mistakes, but she saw his pure heart and that is just beautiful. And of course Theo and Kent's bromance are still one of my favourite parts of the whole story! Thinking about the future, I wonder if he managed to keep working or his stability is not well yet, but he has Val, Kingsley, Kent, all of his friends, so he will he fine :)

I will miss these kids, but I'm making room for the new kids so hopefully we will have a more funny time on UFF rather than a more serious and gloomy one :) I hope everyone who made it to the end are now happy and even if they don't make a cameo on UFF, that they have success and find their happy endings :)
Once again, thank you so much for this ride. I just can't believed it already ended, it seemed like it was yesterday that Aiden made his first pov ;-;
This won't be a serious goodbye because we will still talk and of course I will still be hyped with UFF and I'll be commenting every single chapter :p
Oh and I'm curious, as you know I'm like a huge fan of Oliver :p did you imagine him getting married? I can totally imagine him marrying someone from his work honestly.
Ok now for real, thank you so so so much. You are an amazing writer and I want you to know that I anticipated every single chapter every week and reading it made my day, seriously, even if it took me a while to comment in the chapter.
I wish you the best and I hope you have a lot of fun writing UFF and finish this trilogy which I believe will bring tears of joy and will bring you the best feeling of accomplishement. You deserve it Dani! Thank you so much *takes off my hat* farewell Ctf, thank you for the ride, you will be always remembered!
From the bottom if my heart, thank you Dani, thank you very much! <3
I won't say goodbye so have a nice week and see you around ;) take care of yourself.
luv_kero
2440 streak #2
Chapter 57: I've been anticipating the Afterword chapter so much ever since you mentioned it, and I absolutely loved reading all of your thoughts on the cast and how you went about developing their arcs!! <3 Some of the things I knew (thanks to me loving spoilers and our insanely long back-and-forth responses via comments and PM, HAHA) and some of the things were a complete surprise, so it was so cool getting to learn and relearn these behind-the-scenes tidbits!! ^^

One thing I had no idea about (but probably should've figured out, LOOOOL) was Python's intended role as canon!Audrey Weasley!! Looking back now, it totally makes and I should've known you'd make sure every aspect of Percy's story was covered, even if they weren't intended to truly be endgame with the planned divorce. :P Does that mean Python would've been leading the MII with Cadi instead of Audrey Blishwick if the latter hadn't been submitted??

Ahhhh, not a day goes by where I wish Evera were still here with us, even though I know that her death was necessary. :') I take a lot of comfort in knowing that her death served so much purpose in the story and that it wasn't meaningless (not that anyone's death was ^^;) in the grand scheme of things. :) I do wonder how the story would've changed if she had stayed alive, since I imagine Kent would've been a much less broken man. But then his motivation to really get plans in motion within the Order of Phoenix wouldn't have been as strong as it was after suffering such a devastating loss. OTL All in all, Kent and Evera will always be the best dynamic duo, and I will never stop thanking you for bringing them to life in such a beautiful way!! <3 And I guess I don't know if they'll make cameos in UFF, but I'd love to know what happened to Drake and Jemma (and even little Roderick from H:aH, LOOOL, if you ever got to planning his future XD) after the events of CtF if you have that information readily available. ^^; If not, no worries!! I'm just very attached to my original trio, HAHA. :')

I'll be reiterating a lot of stuff I've said in previous comments and/or messages, but Channer was the first character I fully conceptualized when you announced CtF and its plot. I'm honestly drawn to charismatic, outgoing male characters (Kent, Drake, Landon), so writing a coward like Channer was such a fun challenge for me since I got to really step out of my comfort zone. I think part of me subconsciously wanted him to eventually join Adeline in the Underground, since I'm a er for the good side, but I loved that he stayed neutral throughout since I think that's the path truest to his character. It wouldn't have made sense if he had joined up and although it was painful to see him get bested by Yurina, I'm really happy that he's learned to hold his family a little closer now. <3

And now, MY FOX QUEEN, MISS YURINA NAKAYASHI!! I honestly don't enjoy writing Slytherin-like characters, but she was such a fun character to create and I became so attached to her in such a short amount of time. I really think it was her background that cinched it for me. The tiger parent mentality is often lauded by Asian parents as the "right" way to raise your child and while I do think there are some great parts about it, I also think it can be incredibly toxic with the wrong parents and the wrong children. So giving Yurina such a lonely childhood made me sympathize with her so much, even though I knew I was creating an evil character who really shouldn't be redeemed. ^^; I think I would've been really sad to see her caught by Abeni, so I'm stoked that UFF saved her in a way and I can't wait to see what mischief she's planning now!! :D Even though she's probably going to be defeated in UFF, at least she got a happy ending in CtF, HAHA. XD No matter what happens, she'll forever be my queen of darkness. <3

And then we have Odette, the strongest Fugitive out there who's absolutely killing it in life now, which she completely deserves after everything she went through during the war. :') Even though I made her to get tortured, I don't think I envisioned just how much she'd have to go through and my heart broke every time her situation got bleaker. OTL I honestly feared for her life the most out of my main four, especially after Evera died, since I knew that a Fugitive death would be incredibly possible. My other Fugitive characters, Xander and Cassie, were much more capable and resourceful than Odette was, so I figured that if a Fugitive had to die, she'd be the one. OTL So knowing that she ultimately made it out alive, even with immense trauma, made me so happy because I would've been crushed to bits by her death. ^^; Odette's a strong girl who shows that persistence and sheer will are key, and I'm so glad that sunnier skies graced her future. <3

I know I didn't write about everyone, basically focusing on my own characters, but I absolutely loved reading about every single member of the cast and seeing their stories get woven together in this amazing tale. Just as it was for H:aH, it was truly the greatest honor to be part of this story in some way and I'm eternally grateful that I was given the opportunity to help shape the HoM trilogy with my imperfect characters. :') They've all grown immensely over the course of CtF and I'm beyond ecstatic to see what kind of magic you'll weave next with UFF!! x] You know I'll be there writing essays after every chapter, because I can't stop myself from spazzing over even the tiniest details and I'm actually going to cry when it's all over. I would've cried when CtF ended, but knowing that there's still one installment left kept the tears at bay, HAHA. :') But we'll worry about UFF ending when the time comes, since it's just barely begun at this point and it's time to ENJOY what's about to come!! :D

Again, from the bottom of my heart, THANK YOU for writing Confronting the Faceless!! <3 You're forever one of my writing inspirations and a friend I've grown to cherish so much after getting to know you these past few years, and I will never stop saying how grateful and lucky I am to have stumbled across Hogwarts: a History back then. x] You're the absolute best, Dani!! <3
Susan15
#3
Chapter 56: Hi!! Ok I believe I am ready for this overwhelming final chapter ;-;

Honestly, I always thought about what would happen to Ava. A part of me continuously compared her to Claire, but I think Ava is a coward. While Claire didn't agree with the values that most of Slytherins believed, she actually tried to do something about it, and a good part was that she met Bill and had her cousin. Ava had Astoria and her friend wasn't what Ava thought about the others. I think she was obsessed with "I'm better than them" to the point that she disliked Clary who was different from what she hated and also she was shocked about Kingsley, someone she saw as an example, only to find that he was a Slytherin. She put all her hatress into the house instead of growing up and understanding that not everyone is the same.
I liked how everything wrapped for her, it was the best outcome became she herself did not grow up much within all those years. And I'm really happy that she and Anwen got to become friends :)

Theo... I'm so... shocked! And happy? I'm truly glad he managed to find peace with himself (or something similar to that) and that he found someone who went through something "similar" and somehow could understand him and love him by who he is. I actually wonder if he managed to face his father since he always wanted to make him proud on top of everything and honestly I wonder if he got to see his uncle getting arrested, because well he deserved that! And I'm so happy that Kent was the best man! Ok I'm happy by how everything just went, Kingsley too. And I'm so so proud of Max and it was great to see him and Claire at Theo's wedding. I hope Theo and Val can make things work and finally forgive themselves.

Aiden as a grandpa is the strawberry on top of the ice cream xD Mia is so cute and YES ONE OF MY SHIPS SAILED!! I'm so happy Logan and Susan got together! And am I sensing a rivalry between Albus and Mia? xD Or maybe something more? :p I'm so happy and proud that Aiden was able to retire and be happy, he deserves and honestly he is one of my favourite characters. It was not easy to be a adoptive father and now he became a proud grandfather, I'm so happy for him.

Minki and Padma got together <3 and they had twins omg poor Minki! But I'm so happy and proud that he was able to follow his dream even if it was smaller than his bigger one. Oh my and Terry and Parvati wow I wasn't expecting that! Friends becoming lovers is something I live for haha. I'm so happy that everything worked out. I know that he is probably the most neutral character in the story, I don't remember, was he in the battle?

Odette! And she is the final pov ;-; Omg Dean got married and they became friends, that's so great. I wouldn't have guessed that Dean would marry a muggle! Dirk would be proud of how both of them grown up so much after everything that happened. I'm so proud of Odette and happy too, she deserves all the happiness in this world!

I can't believe this story just ended. I believe I can speak by everyone that we became attached to these characters and I'm not ready to say goodbye. I love every single character and I believe you made such an incredible story that I don't have enough words to express what I feel. Thank you so much for your time, passion and for making this amazing story and capturing our hearts. You are a great writer and I hope you feel proud of yourself just like I'm proud of you :)

I hope you have a great weekend and honestly I'm making fingers crossed to see them somehow again in UFF because I think I'll miss some of them too much xD
Thank you so much and see you Sunday to see your amazing thoughts and feelings through this story <3. Take care of yourself and have an awesome time :)
Susan15
#4
I'll give you a proper comment about the final chapter but yes please, I'd live to read your thoughts and feelings!
I'm so happy and shocked at the same time with the final chapter, but I will leave it to another time!! I just wanted to let you know how much I loved it and that I really do want to hear what your opinions :)
Have a nice week and I hope to read your feelings and thoughts next sunday :')
luv_kero
2440 streak #5
Chapter 56: Oh my gosh, it's the final epilogue. I'm not ready. OTL

Dang, I legit wasn't expecting Ava to be an ice cream shop owner after twenty years, LOOOL. :P But yikes, I can imagine that leaving Hogwarts definitely turned the "Slytherin=bad" sentiment on its head. I don't blame Ava for thinking that way during her school years, since she was a teenager and she hated not fitting in with her house. But at least she's become more open-minded and chill now, and it does show a lot of her character growth. :) It's also really sweet that she revived Fortescue's ice cream shop, since it's such a cornerstone of Diagon Alley and it broke my heart when Florean disappeared. :'( But omg, I also didn't expect Anwen to have had a whirlwind romance with a Muggle, so I'm glad that she also seems to be a lot more open-minded now as an adult. ^^ Although it that it didn't work out and I hope Anwen is doing okay as a single mother, since I know that can be difficult. >___< The cameos of Albus, Rose, and Scorpius were also super cute and I love that they're this generation's trio, hehe. x]

Oh gosh, Theo looking at little Evan and thinking of his guilt towards Evera's death had me gutted too. Q___Q But also, I'M SCREAMING AT KENT BEING HIS BEST MAN!! AND I'M ALSO SCREAMING AT THEO MARRYING VALERIE???????? FORGET WHAT I SAID ABOUT AVA. THIS IS THE BIGGEST SURPRISE OUT OF ALL OF THE EPILOGUES. I'M SO SHOOK. THIS MIGHT BE THE MOST SHOOK I'VE EVER BEEN. NEVER IN A MILLION YEARS DID I EVER EXPECT VALERIE AND THEO TO END UP TOGETHER. Like it totally makes sense with them bonding over their trauma in this support group and I bet Valerie felt AWFUL for getting caught in Branwen's web after she found out Branwen was a Death Eater. T^T It's so so so cute that Theo and Valerie eventually fell for each other, and I'm so happy that Theo gets to experience this beautiful moment because he deserves it!! And ahhhhh, I love that Kent is Best Man (best boi forever!!) and Evan is the ring bearer (/cries i love this kid so much already help) and Zac also got happily married and Valerie's family is there, and Theo has so many friends and people who care about him. :') AND JUST THAT ENDING, OMG. SHOT ME IN THE HEART. *o* I'M DED FROM HOW CUTE THEY ARE. PROCLAIMING MYSELF AS CAPTAIN OF THIS NEW SHIP NOW, HAHAHA.

Ahhhh, Logan and Susan got together!! x] And Mia, like all the kids, sounds so adorable and Aiden is definitely best grandpa!! ^^ And ooh, looks like Oliver is teaching at Hogwarts now after retiring from the professional circuit?? :D Gah, that reminds me that he's also old now too. OTL And omg, I'm ded at Mia and Albus having a Quidditch rivalry. XD Try-outs will be a battlefield this year with those two gunning for positions, HAHA. And LOOOOOL, I also wasn't expecting that kiss comment from Mia. :P I imagine Albus will definitely be a heartthrob, especially when he gets older, and Mia will be one of many who have a crush on young Potter, LOLOLOL. But ahhhh, so happy that Aiden has such a beautiful family and that he's enjoying life so much now!! He completely deserves it after everything he went through!! And I also love that Ava made an appearance at the end, even though they never actually met in the main story, since everyone's stories are ultimately tied together in this epic. :)

Haha, definitely not surprised that Minki opened up a dance studio. XD He really suffered the least overall out of everyone in CtF, I think. Him and Venus. And awww, so cute that he and Padma ended up having twins!! x] And ooh, Padma is also a teacher now?? :D What kind?? (also there's a tiny typo where you wrote parvati instead of padma and i was like, wait which twin is which?? is padma the gryff and parvati the ravenclaw?? XD) And awwww, I wasn't expecting Terry and Parvati to get married, but I can totally see them together and it's so cute that the two best friends each got married to one of the twins, HAHA. :P They're all one big happy family now!! ^^ Minki and Padma's banter is also so cute, and I love how chill Minki is now in comparison to how he was in seventh year. :') And ooh, what does Terry do in the Department of Transportation?? Guess he followed the more traditional path of working for the Ministry while Jerome went traveling, LOOOOL. XD

And now, we're here at last at the final epilogue. T^T Odette was the last of my main characters submitted to CtF, she was the last POV chapter of the story (and the last Fugitive to be rescued), and now she's the last of the epilogues. But that doesn't mean she's last in my heart, because she's far from it!! <3 I figured she would eventually strike up a friendship with Dean, since they both had the connection of being on the run with Dirk at some point, and I bet they've shared a lot of stories about Dirk with each other over the years. :) My heart hurts knowing that Odette still suffered so much for so long, even though it's completely understandable that she wouldn't have mentally healed in an instant. That's just not possible when you've gone through what she did. And ahhhhh, HARRY COMING THROUGH TO GIVE HER A CHANCE MAKES ME SO HAPPY!! TRULY AN ICON. AND AHHHH, SO SO SO PROUD OF ODETTE FOR BECOMING HEAD OF THE IMPROPER USE OF MAGIC OFFICE!! *o* SHE OVERCAME ALL OF THE OBSTACLES LIFE THREW HER WAY AND WE LOVE SEEING FEMALE MUGGLEBORNS GETTING RIGHTFULLY RECOGNIZED FOR THEIR WORK IN THE MINISTRY!! x] Again, restating what I said in Kent's epilogue, I completely relate to Odette and Dean talking to Dirk's gravestone so this definitely hit home for me. It's a way to stay connected with them, even though they've passed, and I think it's very powerful that Dirk was able to create a very unique bond between Odette and Dean, even though he had long since passed. :) And I love that the ice skating figurine managed to survive the war!! It's definitely a beautiful, subtle reminder of the past before the war. ^^ And ahhhhh, that final sentence really pulled at my heartstrings. :') Everything is going to be just fine, Odette!! You've made it this far and you're only going to continue climbing to the top!! <3

Also, a big resounding YES to your A/N!! I'd love an Afterwords chapter!! :D I'll save my final CtF comment for then, hehe. ^^
Susan15
#6
Chapter 55: Hi!!

Omg yes! Venus had her dream come true, I'm so proud of her!
Oh and is she getting interested in that man?? :p
I kind of imagined her with someone from work since she would probably be a professional most of the time and she wouldn't go out on dates with just anyone, especially because she would care a lot about her job and would dedicate 100% of her time to that, so I truly see things work out between them :)

Tangi!! Our precious child who is not a child anymore :') I'm so glad she and Xander kept their friendship and managed to still be a part of each other's life!
Aw and Hazel made it out alive! And I can definitely imagine their marriage :) I'm also so happy that Clary and Kingsley got married too, like omg yes!

Gabe!! I truly thought that he was the groom!! I was shipping him with Romilda ;-; but it's still good that they kept being friends all this time. Same goes for Nathan, I'm truly happy that the two of them kept their friendship after all this time! Gabe also speaking in french with Fleur was just perfect haha.

Kent!! Aww I love the name Evan as I bet Evera would love it! He truly acts like a proud dad! And Tori already grown up omg ;-;. Why am I imagining those two in Hogwarts having the time of their lives? Haha. Kent is now a married man with two beautiful kids and I bet he feels the happiest man on Earth. Evera would be really proud of him. The final scene is just heartbreaking :') farewell Evera.

And finally but not last, Audrey!! I'm so glad that she and Percy got serious and started having a life together and forming a family. Their daughter Mai is really energetic haha. And I'm so glad to see that Audrey and Python still remained friends! Omg Lucy... that hit my poor heart ;-; I bet Lucas would feel proud and happy for her. I can imagine little Lucy in Hogwarts as a happy kid and perhaps who knows, maybe she would also become a healer! And Python becoming her godmother is just amazing!

I can't believe that next chapter is the last ;-; it's been a long journey and to see that everyone have grown up and becoming happier (even Yurina haha) is so heartwarming and we became attached to all of them so it will be hard to say goodbye. I hope that maybe some of them may make a cameo in UFF :')
I'm preparing tissues for the last chapter which will take another 10 years after this one and since it's set prior to the UFF events, I'm quite curious!

Thank you for this chapter, for the "romantic and couples" chapter haha. It's good to see everyone getting their dreams came true and them having their own families.
I hope you have an incredible week, great classes and I wish you everything the best :) Rest well and take good care of yourself.
I will see you later for the story's finale ;-; see ya~ :)
luv_kero
2440 streak #7
Chapter 55: Good on Venus for becoming the youngest ever Unspeakable!! Just like Rajani, we love seeing female Slytherins achieving their goals!! ^^ At the beginning of the story, I would've never expected Venus to be working in the Love Chamber. But after her work with identifying the loss of hope during the war, it does make sense that she'd end up in the chamber that's all about unraveling the mystery behind emotion. And omg, I wasn't expecting Cadfael to be an Unspeakable as well!! :D He's so much more chill now after his angsty Hogwarts days. XD Hopefully life has been much kinder to him since then. :') And ooooh, do I spy some sparks flying between him and Venus?? :P I can definitely see them together, bonding over their Slytherin days at Hogwarts, both of them with their air of mystery and very small social circles, haha. And since Unspeakables can't really share what goes on with their work, I imagine it'd be nice to be with someone who'll understand any workplace frustrations and such. ^^

Awwwww, love that Xander and Matangi are still so close after the war!! x] And yaaaay, so glad that Hazel survived and is thriving now!! :D It's so awesome to see that she's become an activist and hopefully things change for the better for the LGBTQ+ community with her leading the charge. :) And omg, Kingsley and Clary made up and married each other!! Ahhhhh, that's so sweet!! ^^ Wow, look at Clary, going from worrying about her grades in Hogwarts, to a bittersweet relationship with Lenox, to being one of the best Auror trainers in the Ministry, to being a member of the Underground, to becoming the Minister of Magic's wife while also being the Head of Magical Law Enforcement!! Again, we love seeing successful female Slytherins killing it in life!! :D And yesss, Xander is gonna be amazing in his new job and I'm so happy he's ending his dueling career on such a high note!! :D And ahhhh, Matangi and Hazel's wedding will be absolutely beautiful, and I really hope they'll be able to wed soon!! x]

Haha, you really threw me for a loop there in thinking that Gabe was the groom. XD I wonder who David is and how Romilda met him. :P But it's awesome to see that Gabe, Nathan, and Romilda are still best friends and as close as ever after all these years. ^^ And ooh, love the little bonding moment between Gabe and Fleur!! :D And also, dang, it's very cool that Gave is working as an investigative reporter. I definitely wasn't expecting that to be his career, since I thought he might go the Auror route or something similar. He was such an explosive kid, always gunning for justice. :P But I can see why he'd choose investigative reporting instead, especially since it does have a lot of freedom and traveling is so much fun. ^^ And he still gets to pursue justice, albeit in a more roundabout manner, LOOOL. And I guess he's going the Charlie route and staying a happy bachelor for the rest of his life, which is awesome and I'm glad he's happy without needing a partner to fulfill him. :)

Oh wow, another Weasley kid to add to the clan. XD They just don't stop coming. :') And it's funny that Mai is so different in temperament from her parents and Percy must have his hands full trying to make sure she doesn't upend everything in their lives. :P And it's so cute that Audrey Caldwell is still known as Python, even after all these years, HAHA. It's definitely a very cool nickname, even without the Underground attachment, so I can see why she'd keep it, LOOOOL. And omg, ahhhh, it's so sweet that Audrey decided to name Lucy after Lucas. T^T He really meant a lot to both her and Percy, so it's very beautiful that they're choosing to honor him through the newest addition to their family. :) He still lives in everyone's hearts, even though he's long gone now, and I'm sure he would've loved doting on Mai and Lucy if he had survived. >___< And I just realized that this means Audrey will have a pre-teen at home and a teenager at Hogwarts while she's dealing with stuff in UFF, LOL. What a busy woman. :')

And oh my gosh, Kent, my lovely boy, I don't think I'm ready to let go of him yet. Q___Q He's one of my absolute favorite OCs and I'm so happy I got a opportunity to expand on him for this story. <3 Like he was already an amazing side character that I loved to bits, but getting the chance to see him under the spotlight made me so incredibly happy, despite everything that happened to him during the war. :') And awww, Tori's a teenager now and I love how sassy she's become. XD Reminds me a lot of Holly in H:aH, LOLOLOL. :P And omg, so cute that she considers Jemma an aunt too, and I'm so so curious to know how Jemma and Drake are doing nowadays!! ^^ And omg, Ebony is such a beautiful name for Holly's daughter, hehe. x] It's awesome that Kent and Willow were able to find their way back to each other, even though it was so rough. Totally understandable that they broke up after the war. Kent was still grieving the loss of Evera and Willow then had to go through the exact same thing with Laurel. They definitely needed to grow separately as they processed their grief. You don't want to be at 50% when you're dating someone, using them to fill that other 50%. You want to be at 100% and dating another person who's at 100% for it to be a healthy, long-lasting relationship. At least that's my belief, LOL, although I don't have any personal experience to go off of (so who knows if I'm spouting nonsense). ^^; But Evan is such a great name, and Evera would've loved him and Sammy to pieces. x] And oh my gosh, my heart is dying because the end of Kent's epilogue is at Evera's grave. T^T I'll be very honest here, I talk a lot to the gravestone of one of my loved ones (and I use it as proxy for the other gravestones that I can't physically visit), so Kent talking to Evera this way was something I wholly related to. And my heart is breaking all over again, because I miss Evera so much and I don't think I'll ever get over her death. But I will stay strong, because she was a strong girl and Kent is staying strong too. I hope there're only clear skies for him for the rest of his life, even though I know things will get crazy with raising two boys in the house and there's still UFF's events to come ten years later. ^^; And omg, I just realized that Evan (and maybe Sammy) will be at Hogwarts when UFF starts!! XD Not that it's super relevant in the grand scheme of things, LOL, but I will have fun imagining the newest crop of Sylvesters at the best school in the world, having shenanigans of their own. :') And I'm just really really really happy that Kent got a happy ending, because he deserves it and I love him so much. He and Evera will always be my favorite pair of siblings, forever and ever, and I'm so happy that their bond will never be broken, even by death. <3

OMG, the final epilogue is coming soon and it's set right before UFF!! :D I'm not ready at all for CtF to end though. OTL But I'm also super excited to see the five remaining POVs and catch up with them twenty years later. ^^
Susan15
#8
Chapter 54: Hi!! Sorry for taking so long to comment!

First of all, my heart is hurting for Lucas. He was one of my favourite characters and honestly I feel like since half of the story he was making a rough path and the signals to his tragedy were there ;-; His last pov and Odette's pov showed how he was overworking and not taking care of himself. I liked him a lot, but somehow I feel like I knew that he would have a bad ending. I'm glad he had a painless passing and I'm sad that he didn't do a check up with Python because maybe he could have survived, but that's so Lucas.. And I'm really sad for his mother, she suffered so much and losing a son is like losing a part of her, especially since it's not natural. Oh my ;-; rest in peace Lucas.

Oh Channer ;-; poor boy, he must feel so guilty. But we all never know what is going to happen tomorrow so it's normal that we don't say "I love you" everyday. But of course it's truly painful and the last interaction is always what is pressed in our minds ;-; I know you will be able to process your grief and you will be better with time. You have your mother and sister, you will be fine!

I'm so glad that Max made it out alive. Now Claire and Max can really talk and pour their hearts to one another. They just "lost" their father who will be imprisoned after waking up (if he eventually wakes up), so they just have one another and their mother. And I truly understand what she means that everyone is biased and already settled their minds that everyone in the losing side is guilty. Fitz!! I'm so glad to see him!!! And I'm super glad that he is fine!!! Willow and Theo omg guys ;-; I'm so proud of Theo to try helping out and prove that everyone deserves a second chance like he had, because of their family environment and ideals. And I bet Willow feels like she compensated a lot from what she did. Everything is good now, I'm happy for them.

Oh Farrah :( you need time to heal my poor child. I understand that Christian is very important to her but he wouldn't understand what she has been through and she definitely needs to have a support near her who truly understands her and even though I know that Christian was what kept her sanity, she created a version of him in her mind who probably doesn't exist, and she needs time for herself now. You can get well child ;-;.

Yurina queen of the evil! Always causing trouble, really haha. Abeni must have a huge grudge on Yurina, because she is quite a pain in the haha. Let's see how Yurina will cause problems in Uff because I know you're involved young lady!

Wow next epilogue is 10 years from here! We're going to see the Hogwarts kids as grown ups!! I hope Venus and Minki managed to follow their dreams! I'm quite curious how Ava and Gabe became as adults haha. I bet everyone else is doing well now :)
I can't wait for the next epilogue!!
I hope you have a nice week, take care of yourself, rest well and see you later ;)
petitreveur
#9
Chapter 54: I told myself I was going to properly comment at the end of the three-part epilogue but I know I had to drop a comment after I read the first POV. NOOOOO LUCAS NOOOOOOO :"( Why do all my fav characters have to die hurhur /cries/ First Evera, then Laurel and now Lucas. My heart was literally squeezed tight when I read the line "He doesn't wake up" and I'm like NO NO NO, THAT CAN'T BE TRUE :"( I should have realised that foreshadowing when he was feeling way too exhausted than ever, that he w-wouldn't make it pass the night. Idk why but his death hits so much harder than anyone else's?? Lucas was (fk, I have to use the word 'was' now) such a golden boy, he did so much as a Healer and contributes sooo much as part of the Underground!! Although he didn't "fight" in the war, he was a true war hero!! I guess it's...relieving that his death wasn't a painful one and he passed in the comforts of his house....he will definitely be sorely missed :"( I can't imagine how broken his mother would be when she realises that her son is never going to wake up again >.< OH GOSHH, THAT START ALREADY SCREAMS DEPRESSING!! (I literally paused for five whole minutes before going on to the next POV)

Glad to see that Channel survived the war!! That sibling dynamic between Channel and Adeline has drastically changed. Damn, those two siblings must feel rather awkward and apologetic to each other but I feel it's neither their fault that things turned out that way. It's the awful circumstances that caused things to spiral out of control >.< It's so heartwarming to see Adeline and their mother visiting Channel in the hospital. , Channel must be feeling even more horrible and guilty for not actively doing anything during the war after learning that their father had passed away in Azkaban. Despite the awkwardness between the siblings, I'm sure Adeline never actually blamed Channel for ousting her and that's what family is all about. They are there for you no matter how much you might have forsaken them and at the end of the day, they still worry about you and welcome you back with open arms ^^ Things are never the same but Channel still has Adeline and their mother and things will get better with time :-)

Another POV that reflects the phrase "blood is thicker than water". Even though Max was a Death Eater, Claire can't bring herself to hate him or cut off ties with him. Sure, she does not agree with his dealings but after all, he is still her brother, her family. That conflicted feelings within her must be chewing her up for she knows that her brother deserved to be punished for the greater good but at the same time, Max is her brother, they are related by blood, and it must be hard to see him locked up in Azkaban (when their father was already sentenced while in a coma, big oof!) That grey area would always be grey ^^" Oh wow, I would have never thought Willow to be on defence (should I say that Max is very lucky to have Claire as his sister? LOL) and Theo to be the final witness!! Looks like Max doesn't have to live in a crammed cell anymore :')

Poor Farrah :'( She is suffering so much but I'm glad to see the tiniest progress that she is making since the day she was admitted into Mungo's. It that she doesn't really have any close friends around her except for Clara as all of her friends are all Muggles who wouldn't be able to understand what she had gone through because of the Statue. And now Clara is feeling slightly wary around her >.< Well, I don't blame Clara, she must be at a huge loss of what to do with someone so utterly broken, she had never been in her situation before and neither is she a trained medical professional. But it's great that Farrah is seeing a therapist and I can tell that Ellie is a good psychiatrist to her. Oh nooo, it must have been a last straw for Farrah when she heard that she's not allowed to see Christian as it was Christian who kept her fighting on for her life in the cells >.< Yet again, Christian prolly wouldn't be able to understand what happened to Farrah as a Muggle. But maybe, it's just the presence of Christian that she needs? Somehow, I don't think that Clara is a mean friend to Farrah or anything, it's just that Farrah is just so delicate right now and Clara obviously can't be there 24/7 for her >.< It's draining for both girls. Perhaps, a longer hospital stay would do them both good? The impact of war is just so harsh :"(

Da boss lady is in the house!! And she is getting straight to work!! With her schemings!! Poor Amos, he is so naive to think that he can get a taste of her LMAO and Yurina is using that to her strength, obviously. And voila, now she has information about Abeni Akingbade, which leads me wondering what exactly happened over the past twenty years?? The Akingbades must be pretty influential people in Nigeria?? And I'm pretty sure Yurina managed to wreck chaos in Nigeria and overthrew the government in some way or another?? I swear this little Japanese lady just doesn't stop :P Abeni must have gone through much turmoil, seeing the UFF's first teaser. Damn, everything is getting juicier and I can't wait for the tea to be spilled xD
luv_kero
2440 streak #10
Chapter 54: Oh man, I should've figured Lucas would end up dying from overwork. :'( The signs were all there, especially during his final main POV. T^T Him overworking himself was a constant theme and it so much that he had to go out this way. It reminds me a lot of karoshi, "overwork death" in Japanese, and I'm just glad that he got one final night with his mother and that he died in the comfort of his home. OTL But oh my god, his mother is going to be absolutely heartbroken when she finds him in the morning and my heart hurts so much for her, because she was probably so thankful that her son wasn't directly on the battlefield, but he ended up being a casualty anyway and she'll still have to bury him with all of the others. T^T In a way, Lucas' death sort of has a numbness to it and both Audreys are probably going to be devastated when they receive the news as well. :'( As well as Percy, Jemma, Jun, and anyone else who knew Lucas. ;~; He was a great guy though and he really did a lot for the war effort. In the end, he definitely died a hero like the others.

Oh my gosh, I've been anticipating the conclusion to Channer's story ever since his final main POV and I'm so glad he's in a much better state than some of the others. <3 Granted, things aren't perfect and they never will be, especially since Timon is dead, but at least he has a chance to make things better and that's what counts the most. Channer is still so young and he has his whole life ahead of him to strengthen the bonds he has with his remaining family members. It's something I'm personally trying to work on as well, although our circumstances are admittedly very different. One thing I definitely fear is leaving things unsaid when it's too late, and my heart hurts so much that Timon and Channer never got to properly bond before Timon died. :'( It's definitely going to weigh on Channer a lot from now on, and I hope that he'll be able to process his grief and regret in a healthy way. On the plus side, I'm so happy that Henry is okay and it's so cool that Adeline stayed with his dad while she was in hiding!! ^^ If anything, maybe Henry and Channer can become eventual friends with Henry easing some of Channer's regrets with stories of Timon in Azkaban and how Timon was always talking about how proud he was of his kids. It won't alleviate all of the pain, but it might help a bit, knowing that even though he never verbally expressed his feelings to his dad, Timon still deeply loved and cared for Channer until the very end. Linette, Adeline, and Channer are definitely going to struggle for years to come, but at least they have each other and that's what matters. <3

Oof, it does that Claire's still stuck between both sides, even after the end of the war. But it's nice to see that short moment between her and Fitzwilliam, and he's grown so much from his school days, ahhhhh :') And oh my, I guess since Claire does technically have a stake in the other side because of her family, what the Order is doing for clean-up probably does feel a lot more harsh to her, even though they probably feel completely justified in doing so. It's a very gray area and at the very least, Willow and Theo came through by helping out, even though they had no obligation to. I do wonder why they did. Maybe it was Holly asking for a favor, since she knew Claire?? Maybe it was just Willow not wanting someone else to lose a sibling after she did?? Maybe it was Theo knowing that Max was like him, brought up with Death Eater ideals but still capable of change?? At the very least, I'm glad that Claire doesn't have to lose a family member who's so precious to her and she's much luckier than most who've been affected by the war.

Oh wow, good to see that Farrah also survived Azkaban!! I'm guessing we'll find out Hazel's fate in Matangi's epilogue. Anyway, it's awesome that Farrah is already seeing a therapist and Ellie sounds wonderful. :) And considering how broken Farrah already was back in February, I'm not surprised she was even worse by the time all of the prisoners were released from Azkaban. Her fantasies were probably the only thing keeping her going while she was at Azkaban. x___x But yikes, I don't know if a happy ending with Christian is in the cards. Considering what she's been through, she'll really need someone by her side who'll understand the extent of this war and since Christian is a Muggle, I don't think he can be that person, realistically. >___< Maybe if this were set during UFF's time with magic finally being revealed, Christian could become her caretaker and they could have their happily ever after. But considering how Clara is Farrah's best friend and Clara's reaction to Farrah's breakdowns, I doubt Christian will be able to last long either. >___>

And finally, my beautiful and strong queen of darkness, Miss Yurina Nakayashi!! <3 Going to America was definitely the right call, HAHA. (Since no pandemic to worry about and the US was in a much better state back then OTL If this were 2020, I'd be like, NOOOOO, GO BACK TO ASIA!! ANYWHERE BUT THE US!!) And yesssss, what a QUEEEEEN, living in the lap of luxury in Vegas!! XD Love love love that she's already scheming and recruiting people to her cause!! She isn't wasting any time in making plans for world domination. XD And ooooooh, I've been so so so curious to find out about the bit with soap operas that you asked me about a while back and it's so cool to finally see it here!! :D And oof, looks like Amos is her newest puppet and I love her puppeteering so much!! XD She'd never give him a second glance if it weren't for the information he's gathering for her. He's too much of a lust-driven doormat and Yurina is WAY above that. x] If she ever does fall in love, it'll be with a man who can provide a challenge and keep up with her intellectually. He'll have to REALLY impress her with his cunning and capabilities, and men like that are few and far in between, especially relative to Yurina. She has no time to deal with small fries like Amos and he's probably only got an Avada Kedavra in his future once she's done with him. :') But ooh, Abeni better watch out since Yurina has her eye on her now!! The fox is on the prowl and no one is safe now, hehe <3

Ooh, super curious to see what life will be like ten years from now!! Definitely a lot happier than this, since most people will have healed considerably by then. :') And wizards probably won't be affected by everything that's happening in the Muggle world, LOL (collapse of the housing bubble, Great Recession, etc.) :P