Epilogue Two

Confronting the Faceless 💀 Complete
Summer, 2008
"It does not do to dwell on dreams and forget to live"
 
Venus Burke
 
Nearly ten years suffering through the general monotony of working for the Ministry of Magic Research Committee has finally paid off, and Venus takes a deep, fortifying breath as she steps onto the Ministry lift and for the first time presses the button for Level Nine.
 
Her bag is looped over her shoulder, dozens of notebooks and loose pages dating back to her school days stuffed into it in an organized chaos, ready to be presented to her new coworkers.
 
It's a bit insulting, honestly, how long it took the Department to accept her proposal considering how little it has changed since she initially sent it in just after graduating Hogwarts, but Venus isn't stupid - she knows that as a former Slytherin the path of upward mobility was always going to be harder for her than anyone from the other Houses, particularly after the war. But despite that she's managed to do something her parents always warned her might be a tad too ambitious.
 
Starting today, Venus Burke is the youngest ever Unspeakable working for the Department of Mysteries, specifically in the Love Chamber where she will be pursuing her thesis on the impact of emotion on spell casting.
 
She doesn't think she's ever been in a better mood in her life, not that that's a particularly difficult competition to win.
 
She steps out of the lift five minutes later (the ride up was slower than she would have liked due to other employees needing to get off on lower levels), but finally the door slides open and she takes her first steps into the long, obsidian hallway that leads to her new workplace.
 
There are two men standing in the hallway, one older and one younger, who are talking casually. Venus recognizes the older one and immediately walks over to him.
 
"Good morning Unspeakable Greengrass." She greets her uncle politely. In her everyday life, Astoria's father is usually "Uncle Gareth," but she's determined to make a good showing on her first day, and that means full professionalism.
 
Her Uncle nods at her. "Unspeakable Burke." He returns the greeting flatly. "Congratulations." He adds, and she tilts her head in acknowledgement, knowing it's all she'll get from her strict, no-nonsense uncle. "Welcome to the Department of Mysteries. Unspeakable Ashburner will show you around and provide you with your tag."
 
Venus doesn't ask for any clarifications and instead just nods again and turns to the younger man, who she assumes must be Ashburner. He isn't looking at her though, keeping his focus on Gareth Greengrass instead, obviously waiting for the other man to leave.
 
"Well then, you can have the morning for the tour but both of you must get to work after lunch." Her uncle decides, and they both nod as he strides away to do... whatever it is he does, it's not like Venus actually knows the details.
 
Unspeakables aren't allowed to share details of their work outside of work itself, after all.
 
"So, you're the new girl." Her guide finally speaks, and Venus turns to face him again, studying the man carefully. He's attractive enough, blonde hair and blue eyes - a very typical look among purebloods (though his last name marks him as a half-blood).
 
"Venus Burke." She introduces herself. "I was admitted to work in the Love Chamber."
 
Ashburner nods. "I know, I was part of the group that read and approved your application. It was surprisingly in-depth work considering your limited resources."
 
Venus preens just a bit internally, though she keeps her external demeanor calm. "Well I'm glad to hear it. I started at school so I did have some access to the Restricted Section, which provided quite a bit of my basis." She admits, allowing a small grin when she catches Ashburner giving her a look of veiled surprise.
 
"Well, we should get started on the tour." He says after a moment. "Here." He offers her a simple card that has her name, picture, and primary Chamber on it. "That's your tag - it will help you navigate the Department safely. It's really easy to get lost in here."
 
"I'd imagine." Venus replies politely. So far Ashburner seems nice enough, but she's hoping that the tour is quick so she can get started on her work. "So where's the Love Chamber?"
 
Ashburner (she eventually learns his full name is Cadfael and isn't that an unfortunate first name?) is actually quite thorough in his tour, showing her each Chamber and giving warnings and advice about the dangers within each.
 
"Generally you won't need to go outside your primary Chamber, but it does happen on occasion." He says. "I'm mostly in the Death Chamber, but my work has required me to do some things in the Time and Love Chambers as well."
 
The tour ends up running right up to the lunch break, which is frustrating but understandable - there are a lot of different chambers, each with their own unique nightmare fuel to keep track of, and Venus, despite her want to get started, can appreciate the importance of being thorough in this situation.
 
Ashburner invites her to have lunch with him so she can ask any other questions she has, and she ends up taking him up on the offer. It's... enjoyable, in a way she can't really say she's ever experienced. Too often talking with other people is exhausting, or feels like a one-sided conversation either because they can't keep up with Venus's thought process or don't want to. But Cad (as he insists she call him) has not only read and understood her work, but he finds it fascinating, and they find themselves nearly going longer than their allowed lunch break, getting caught up swapping theories and debating the meaning of certain findings.
 
"I'll see you around then?" Venus asks as they take the lift back up to the Department, and Cad offers her a small smile.
 
"You will." He promises, and Venus thinks that this job is already better than she could have ever hoped for.
 
 
Matangi Mahtan
 
"Did you guys hear my interview? Wasn't I awesome?"
 
Xander Orton enters the room like a storm, impossible not to notice and likely leaving destruction in his wake.
 
Matangi looks up from where she's eating lunch with Hazel, who's been spending their lunch break pouring over documents more than actually eating.
 
"It wasn't live Z, we're going to listen tonight, remember?" Hazel replies distractedly, waving a quill at him in a shooing motion.
 
Xander pouts and sits down instead of leaving. "Fine, fine, but I was awesome! You'll see, with the support of the number one professional dueler in the world you'll get your bill passed in no time at all!"
 
Matangi scoffs. "Top Twenty in Europe." She corrects. "And while I agree you'll help with the public vote, it will more likely be Mrs. Shacklebolt's testimony to the Wizengamot tomorrow that will really determine if this goes through or not. They can decide to ignore what the public wants, after all."
 
"Have twice already." Hazel sighs. "So tomorrow's hearing needs to be perfect. There are some new faces in the group - Willow Kiddell, Sarah Poole, younger folk who are more likely to lean our way, but a lot of the old arseholes are still around as well."
 
Matangi smiles a bit at the cursing. Very little can make her girlfriend agitated enough to forego polite language but the Wizengamot's most conservative members manage it quite consistently.
 
Mind, Hazel has been working for nearly five years to get gay marriage legalized in the wizarding world with no luck, so her frustration is well warranted. Matangi helps out where she can, but her job as a trainee Investigator for the Auror Department keeps her busy more days than not.
 
The upcoming appeal to the Wizengamot is their third push to get a motion passed in favor of marriage equality, and honestly Matangi has a hard time seeing how Hazel could lose this time. She's really pulled out all the stops - endorsements from several public figures, Xander as well as some Quidditch stars and even a comment from the Deputy Head of the Department of Magical Law Enforcement and popular War Hero Hermione Granger. Add that to getting the Minster's wife (and current Head of the Department of Magical Law Enforcement) Clary Shacklebolt to testify and the case seems impossibly solid.
 
Hazel is still worried though, hence Matangi regularly taking her lunch hour to go over to the Law offices so she can spend time with her girlfriend and try to calm her nerves, or at least serve as a sounding board for Hazel's presentations.
 
"See, this is why I don't do politics." Xander declares, then perks up in a way that tells Matangi he's about to go on a massive unrelated tangent. "Oh hey, did I tell you guys yet? I have news! Other than the interview going awesome, I mean."
 
Hazel grimaces, but Matangi knows she could use a distraction, and Xander's nonsense is usually quite good at doing exactly that.
 
"No Xander, I actually don't think you have." She replies, and Hazel gives her a look - she knows exactly what Matangi is doing and Matangi isn't sorry about it.
 
Xander, with all his usual social awareness, misses the exchange entirely. Or ignores it, it's always hard to tell with him. "Well! Much as I hate to admit it, I'm pushing fourty, which is a bit old to still be in this business."
 
Matangi raises an eyebrow and shares a look with Hazel - they've both been telling Xander as much for the past five years (Hazel much more gentley than Matangi) but it's still a surprise to hear him admit it himself.
 
Matangi says as much, and Xander pretends to swoon in his seat.
 
"Why are you so cruel to me T?" He whines. "This is good news! Don't spoil it with your Negative Nancy routine!"
 
Matangi grumbles, but Hazel is snickering slightly behind her hand and that makes it well worth it.
 
"Anyway." Xander declares dramatically. "Rhys Morgan reached out to me this weekend. You know, the new Head of Magical Sports and Games?"
 
"Games and Sports." Hazel corrects, then blushes a bit. "Not that it really matters, sorry, continue." She adds quickly at the hurt puppy eyes Xander gives her.
 
He clears his throat. "So. Rhys calls me up and says he's got an opening in the Department and he can't think of anyone else capable of doing it well. And so once this season ends I'll be formally retiring and..." He drums his hands on the table and Matangi rolls her eyes while Hazel laughs. "You are looking at the new Organizer for the British Professional Dueling League!"
 
Hazel hops a bit in her chair in excitement, and Matangi gives her friend a grin in congratulations.
 
"That's awesome Z!" Hazel says. "It really is perfect for you, congratulations."
 
Lunch wraps up soon after that, and Hazel shoos both Xander and Matangi out of the office ("You both have your own jobs!").
 
"Thanks for cheering her up." Matangi says as they walk down the hall towards the lift.
 
Xander grins over at her. "Hey, she's going to win, we both know it. Also, I didn't tell her because it's a surprise from the interview, but I got the entire British Quidditch Team to endorse the proposal as well."
 
Matangi can feel her smile straining her cheeks but she doesn't care. "Oliver came through? That's awesome!"
 
Xander gives a bow as the lift arrives and they step in. "Anything for my queens, but I expect to be best man at the wedding." He winks, and Matangi flushes. She hadn't told him she's planning to propose to Hazel the moment the bill is passed, but she's not surprised that he knows. Even after ten years, they can still read each other well.
 
And really, there are worse people to be stuck with.
 
 
Gabriel Beaux
 
Gabe is pretty sure Romilda is out to humiliate him. He feels ridiculous.
 
"Don't be so dramatic, you look great." Nate assures him, a far too happy bounce in his step as they make their way to the front of the chapel. Nate's one to talk - he gets to wear jeans. Gabe is made up in a full suit complete with a ridiculously gaudy red tie. "You match the rest of the wedding party." He adds with a laugh, poking at Gabe's tie before his hand is swatted away.
 
"You're pretty dang cheerful considering this isn't even your wedding." Gabe points out as they round the corner and run into the rest of the wedding party - including Romilda.
 
She looks amazing, Gabe has to admit, and when she beams brightly on seeing them her beauty only increases.
 
"Oh good you're here! You took you time." She fusses at them, and just like that she's just Romilda again, the shock of seeing her dolled up in flowing white instantly dulled.
 
"Do you know how hard it is to take a leak with fifty layers on?" Gabe shoots back, and she rolls her eyes.
 
"I'm a girl Gabe. Yes."
 
"She's got you there." Nate sing-songs, and if his boyfriend wasn't two feet away Gabe probably would have smacked him. As is, he's got a healthy respect for Seamus Finnigan and his ability to (probably) kill him in ten different ways using nothing but a toothpick (he's heard stories about Hit Wizards from people during his work with the Prophet).
 
"You shut up, you'd be miserable if you had to be the 'Man of Honor' too." Gabe grumbles, and Romilda punches him lightly.
 
"You shut up, don't ruin my day." She scolds as the music starts up.
 
Gabe shuffles to stand just in front of her, before turning around and grabbing one gloved hand, bowing to give it a kiss.
 
"French good luck." He winks, and she snorts. "David is a lucky man."
 
"Damn right he is. Now don't miss your cue." She nudges him, and the bright smile is back and Gabe can't really be annoyed when his humiliation makes his best friend this happy.
 
The ceremony is excruciatingly long, and Gabe knows that if she could have gotten away with it Romilda would have happily just eloped and called it a day. She keeps shooting him and Nate looks of exaggerated misery throughout the ceremony, and all three have to muffle their laughing. Across from her, her now-husband David just looks on adoringly.
 
Finally, the ceremony concludes and Romilda and David kiss, and the whole room cheers before being swept off to the reception.
 
Gabe loses Nathan pretty quickly when Seamus swoops out of nowhere to drag him onto the dance floor, but he's honestly content to stand by the drinks table and chat with people he recognizes (which is quite a few - Romilda has apparently invited the entire DA, which means the whole Weasley clan is in attendance).
 
He prevents disaster when a tiny red head races past him and nearly upends the entire drinks table when she steps on the too-long table cloth and does some impromptu skating on it. A quick levitation spell saves anything from being spilled, and David's mother nearly smothers Gabe with her thanks.
 
He does manage to escape Romilda's new in-laws (and thank goodness - David's mother keeps trying to set him up with people and it's weird) and wanders towards the dance floor scanning for his friends.
 
"You are lost?" A voice asks, and he spins to find a young woman with platinum blonde hair and a far too charming smile looking at him curiously. She's watching a group of children - among them the girl from earlier - who have obviously been herded away from the main body of the party to avoid any more situations like the one before.
 
None of that is what startles Gabe though. Rather, he recognizes her accent.
 
"Parlez-vous Francais?" He asks curiously, and she looks absolutely delighted.
 
"I do! It's my first language." She exclaims happily. "I so rarely get to speak it here though. My husband tries, but he is better at dead languages than living ones." She laughs. "What brings you to England?"
 
They chat (in French) for a good hour, trading stories of their British experiences and their jobs. Fleur Weasley, as she introduces herself, had married her husband and moved to England just before the start of the last war, three of the kids in the Weasley child pile are hers, and she works at Gringotts helping Muggles open accounts and convert their money. Gabe tells her about his work as an investigative reporter, which often has him traveling around England and even Europe on a few cases.
 
"I'm working for Alma Blishwick right now on the ongoing corruption allegations against the Magical Law Enforcement Patrol. It's pretty interesting, and makes me very glad that they don't actually have that much power at the end of the day - that goes to the Aurors and other, more highly trained witches and wizards." He's saying when a man who must be Fleur's husband walks over to them.
 
"They're playing a bunch of slow songs and I'm feeling very lonely." He announces, swooping down to kiss his wife, who laughs when he pulls away.
 
"I am watching the children chérie, I cannot dance with you." She scolds. "Bill, this is Gabriel, he was just telling me he works with Audrey's aunt!"
 
"That so? Good work you all are doing at the Prophet these days, it's great to see some real, objective news from that paper now." Bill says, offering a hand that Gabe shakes firmly. "You with the bride or the groom?"
 
"The bride is my best friend from school. I'm pretty sure the groom's family is trying to hook me up though, so I guess both?" He jokes, and Bill laughs.
 
"From your tone I'm guessing you're happily a bachelor?"
 
Gabe grins. He thinks that's a perfect way to put it - after all, he still has his best friends, and he's always getting to meet new and interesting people. How could he not be happy?
 
 
Kent Sylvester
 
"Just remember to warm up Sammy's milk before you give it to him." Kent hears his wife's voice before he sees her, and he smiles faintly at her fussing. She's normally quite composed, but when it comes to the kids she's turning into something of a helicopter parent.
 
He hears the babysitter groan. "I know, you've told me, like, twenty times. Check the temperature with the inside of a my wrist, bedtime for Evan is seven o'clock, I'm good."
 
Kent turns the corner, securing the final button on his cuff. "I hope you don't talk that way to the other families you babysit for Tori." He teases, and the brunette teenager turns to face him.
 
Victoria "Tori" Hobbes gives him an unimpressed look. "Obviously Uncle Kent." She whines, and Kent has a moment to feel bad for Eric. Dealing with a teenage girl alone can't be easy, and this one has all the pushy self-confidence her mother did at her age.
 
But still, Tori is the only babysitter that his two year old Evan doesn't hate, so it's not like they have much choice when it comes to who will watch the kids when they want to go out. So he decides to sooth ruffled feathers and get the night started.
 
"Come on Willow, you know Tori's the best, the boys will still be here when we get back." He smiles at his wife, who huffs but nods as well.
 
"And absolute worst case I'll just send Apple to my dad or Aunt Jemma." Tori adds, suddenly much more chipper than she'd been two seconds before, gesturing to her owl who she'd brought with. "So chill and go have your date or whatever."
 
"Or whatever." Willow grimaces as Kent gently leads her out of the house. "I'd think even a fifteen year old would know that an anniversary is important."
 
Kent laughs. "Well one year for us isn't really a huge milestone, all things considered." He points out, and Willow gives a half smile.
 
"Fair enough." She admits, relaxing a bit now that they're out of the house and she breaths in some of the night air. "On the other hand, considering the fact we managed a full year of marriage after struggling through almost a decade of dating, this might be an even bigger milestone than it would be for most couples."
 
Kent grins at that, offering an arm that she gladly takes, and they walk down the street quietly together, not needing to talk to enjoy the company.
 
Kent takes the time to reflect on the past ten years. They've been... messy, he thinks is a good word. Not a bad messy, really, but not always a good one. After the Battle ended and he'd found Willow and Theo (together, which had surprised and pleased him) he'd had to tell her about Laurel. Willow hadn't taken it very well.
 
They had technically broken up then, Willow saying that they both weren't in a good place to be starting a relationship, and looking back now Kent can admit that she's right. But at the time it just felt like another horrible thing on top of everything else the war had taken.
 
She'd come to Evera's official funeral, though, stood in the back and nodded to him when he'd made eye contact. He'd gone to Laurel's - gone to so many that he actually hit a point of being sick of funerals instead of sad - and had talked to Eric but chickened out when he saw Willow standing next to their youngest sister Holly and her newborn daughter Ebony.
 
It had been a terrible year, but with his parents home, Drake spending more time in their apartment, and Theo back to being his partner, things got better. Not to where they were before, but to a place where he was at peace with his life and with the war.
 
And that was when Willow had walked back into his life.
 
She'd been the prosecutor on a case that he and Theo had closed and she needed them to testify. They kept things professional right up until they won, at which point they'd both gotten drunk and made the same choice they'd made years before in the living room of Kent's apartment.
 
It had been a slow rebuilding of the relationship. They had both grown in their years apart, and it felt like dating someone entirely new and yet intimately familiar at the same time. In the end, they hadn't really made the choice to get married - their son Evan made it for them when he was accidentally conceived and Willow decided to keep him.
 
Most people think Kent had named Evan after Evera, but most people are wrong. Willow had named him after Evera, and told Kent she hoped he was as "strong-willed and confident as I've always heard she was."
 
That was when Kent finally proposed.
 
It was a great decision in the end, even if it had been stupidly impulsive (and Willow had told him as much after she accepted), and a year of marriage (and another kid) later Kent doesn't think he's ever been happier.
 
They reach their first destination about ten minutes into their walk, and Willow lets him take the lead as they move through the rows of stone.
 
Finally Kent stops, and kneels down.
 
"Hey sis." He addresses the gravestone in front of him, Willow standing just behind him and keeping a hand on his shoulder supportively. "So guess what? Not only did I get a wife and two awesome sons, she's actually kept me for a whole entire year. How about that?"
 
"And I'm keeping him in line, don't worry." Willow adds with a smile, squeezing his shoulder.
 
"Anyway, I totally win that bet when you said I couldn't get a girl to ever like me, so there." He finishes with a small smile, placing a poppy across the grave before standing, his usual routine.

He turns back to Willow and offers his arm again, and she smiles at him softly as she takes it.
 
It isn't perfect, but it's his, and he wouldn't trade it for the world.
 
 
Audrey Weasley (neé Blishwick)
 
She's exhausted and in pain, and she's one hundred percent blaming her husband for this one (never mind his constantly reminding her he supported whatever decision she wanted to make with this).
 
He isn't actually here right now - he's sitting in the hallway with their six year old daughter Molly Alma "Mai" Weasley, trying to make sure their destructive child doesn't touch anything. Again.
 
Thankfully no one was killed, but the Healers hadn't been happy about the tiny toddler poking everything in sight. Honestly Audrey would have been amused by her daughter's inquisitiveness if she wasn't in so much pain at the time.
 
She's feeling better now, but she'll be sore for a while yet. Not that she didn't know that going into this. After all, this is her second time giving birth.
 
The Matron returns then holding a wailing, squirming blanket, and Audrey smiles and reaches out tiredly for her daughter.
 
"Would you like me to send in your family?" The woman asks kindly as Audrey cradles the tiny human against her chest. "Your other daughter is still a bit wild so I'm not sure-"
 
"Send them in. Mai will be good, don't worry." She says quickly, not wanting to hear the woman insult her daughter, no matter how unintentional or subtle it is.
 
The Matron nods and exits the room again. A few minutes later, Percy walks in, holding Mai's hand firmly.
 
"A girl." Audrey greets, not moving her eyes from the bundle in her arms. "You have a baby sister Mai."
 
She wasn't planned, but when Audrey learned she was pregnant again she didn't hesitate to keep the baby (though she's getting sterilized after this - two is plenty).
 
"She's beautiful." Percy breaths.

"She looks like a bean." Mai declares loudly and begins yanking at Percy's hand, trying to explore the room.
 
"Mai." Percy says sharply, and their daughter (oldest daughter, they have two now, and the thought is a wonderful one) starts whining miserably. Her parents tune her out for the moment using skills developed through many tantrums and long nights.
 
"So names?" Percy asks after a moment. They'd talked about it a little, but nothing they'd tossed around felt right. Now they don't have the luxury of deciding to sleep on it and try again in the morning.
 
"I'd like to name her after someone, like we did with Mai." Audrey admits. Her family has always had a tradition of perpetuating family names through each generation, and even though it resulted in her genuinely awful middle name of Wilhelmina, she obviously internalized it at some point.
 
A knock at the door interrupts any further discussion, and after glancing at Audrey to make sure it was alright, Percy calls for the person to come in.
 
"Hope I'm not interrupting, but I heard Mai was causing some aggravation for the staff up here." Python says wryly as she steps through the door. "I'm on lunch and thought I could give you some time with the new one."
 
"Auntie Python!" Mai shrieks happily, and Percy releases her so she can fling herself at her favorite aunt.
 
"If you want to be the absolute best you could drop her off with Dorian." Audrey adds. "He's watching her tonight since this little one came a bit earlier than expected, and the Healers want us to stay overnight, just to be safe."
 
Python hums as she picks Mai up. "Sure, I haven't seen him in a while anyway. You excited to stay with Uncle Dorian tonight?" She asks Mai, walking them out of the room and letting the new parents relax a bit more.
 
"We should ask her to be godmother." Audrey says after a moment. "I know my brother will be the main godparent for both our girls, but Mai has George so I don't see why... she can't have two as well."
 
Percy smiles faintly. "I think she needs a name first." He points out wryly, and Audrey chuckles as well.
 
"I know, I know." She pauses. "I kind of hoped I would see her and just know her name, like your mom did with you."
 
"You know that isn't the whole story, right?" Percy laughs a bit. "Mum didn't just look at me - she saw a Patronus come in to tell dad he was needed and it made her think about King Arthur's knights of the round table. That's when she came up with Percy."
 
"Always thought the knight was called Percival." Audrey says with a small tired smile, finally looking up from her new daughter as the girl settles and starts nursing, hoping for some sort of inspiration like what Molly got all those years ago.
 
All she sees are the bland, sanitized walls and a cabinet of potions pushed against the far wall. The whole place is oddly clean considering how messy she vaguely remembers the birth being.
 
As she gazes at the walls she finds herself thinking about the war. It's not uncommon, but she does it a lot less these days than she used to.
 
It's then that it hits her.
 
"Lucy." She breathes, looking back at her little girl. "Lucy Elizabeth. For Lucas."
 
She hears Percy's breath catch.
 
"Lucy Elizabeth Weasley." He tests the name, and she can hear his smile growing in his tone. "It's perfect."
 
His voices catches a bit on the last word, but Audrey doesn't comment. A lot had been left unsaid between Percy and Lucas when the latter had unexpectedly passed from stress and exhaustion (heart failure, technically, but they all know the culprits that led to it) and Audrey knows it's one of her husband's many hidden injuries that's never fully scarred over.
 
This feels like a beginning though. A way to start remembering him in a positive way.
 
"Python is definitely going to be her godmother."
 
Author's Note: And this is what I like to call the romance-epilogue because LOOKIT ALL THE COUPLES JEEZ. For someone who claims to not care about romance arcs I sure do like tossing in endgame couples on the final lap xD
 
Next Time: Summer, 2018
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So I'm thinking I might do a final 'afterwords' chapter to share my thoughts and feelings on writing this story, if that's something people would be interested in? I'm also open to answering any lingering questions people might have there as well!

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Chapter 57: Hi!
I'm so sorry for taking so long to comment, but shall we begin!

I swear I should have made a bet omg. The moment I first heard of Python I was like "hmm.. what if she was Percy's Audrey?" And even though I knew that our Audrey would be Percy's girlfriend, I always thought how it would be nice if Python and him were endgame, but honestly... they wouldn't last long haha

I want to thank you for being so passionate about the story and truly understanding the characters and doing your best to give them justice. I loved how you put so much effort on everything!

When I first saw this story I first imagined a muggleborn with a fiery personality so after seeing that Tangi was created you have no idea how happy I was.
Claire was my first character for the story. When I thought about her I wanted a strong woman who was conflicted between her believes and her family, but who definitely couldn't turn a blind eye to people in need. Then I thought if she was an insider probably no one would suspect her because of her family, so she would have some advantage!
I'm truly proud of how she grew up. She was such a lonely girl who had only Bill and her cousin Petra as her friends. Then she loved her brother and her parents but she always thought that he didn't care about her. She didn't agree with her families believes and she truly had to do something to free herself from her fears and allow herself to be who she was. And being one of the leaders of the underground made me very proud of her! Especially after Max was able to change as well and they now became stronger together as a family. Honestly I wonder how Claire decided to do in the future, if she stayed in the ministry, if she dedicated herself to her family and if she made friends (because I'm so happy that she at least became friends with Python, she truly deserves friends), whether she ended up married or not, well I'm curious but I think if she ever got married she would choose someone she truly trusted and who she could be herself and for God sake, someone who could make that poor girl smile, because come on she looks so gloomy xD But I'm happy that she made at least one friend and that she got closure with her brother, so I'm blessed :) Ps: I always thought that Claire wouldn't make it until the end xD I always thought she would be killed or that she would sacrifice herself to protect someone.

Theo... Oh my little boy. When I visualised Theo I thought about a broken boy who always wanted his parents approval. Theo was meant to be an adult version of Draco Malfoy. When Kent appeared in the picture I imagined the rivalry such like Draco and Harry and that only made the adult version I imagined more lively. Theo was lucky to have a friend like Kent, even if he didn't understand what a friend truly meant. Theo lost his mother, his uncle hated him, his father well... they didn't have the best relationship, he didn't manage to be captain, he didn't manage to be a prefect, he had to give up on his dream, he couldn't trust anyone. Well everything about Theo was supposed to be tragic. His partnership with Zara was just amazing, I believe he saw himself on her (even though she was pure evil), and he believed that maybe people could change if someone believed in him. He betrayed his family, he betrayed his colleagues for something he believed to be the right thing, Kent could have abandoned him and Kingsley could have hit believed in him and hand him over. But people believed in him, he was the same person his mother believed he was. Seeing him trying to get thought his trauma was sad, but it fit him. I'm so so happy that he found happiness somehow. Val loved him by who he was, she didn't see him because of his family, blood heritage or even his mistakes, but she saw his pure heart and that is just beautiful. And of course Theo and Kent's bromance are still one of my favourite parts of the whole story! Thinking about the future, I wonder if he managed to keep working or his stability is not well yet, but he has Val, Kingsley, Kent, all of his friends, so he will he fine :)

I will miss these kids, but I'm making room for the new kids so hopefully we will have a more funny time on UFF rather than a more serious and gloomy one :) I hope everyone who made it to the end are now happy and even if they don't make a cameo on UFF, that they have success and find their happy endings :)
Once again, thank you so much for this ride. I just can't believed it already ended, it seemed like it was yesterday that Aiden made his first pov ;-;
This won't be a serious goodbye because we will still talk and of course I will still be hyped with UFF and I'll be commenting every single chapter :p
Oh and I'm curious, as you know I'm like a huge fan of Oliver :p did you imagine him getting married? I can totally imagine him marrying someone from his work honestly.
Ok now for real, thank you so so so much. You are an amazing writer and I want you to know that I anticipated every single chapter every week and reading it made my day, seriously, even if it took me a while to comment in the chapter.
I wish you the best and I hope you have a lot of fun writing UFF and finish this trilogy which I believe will bring tears of joy and will bring you the best feeling of accomplishement. You deserve it Dani! Thank you so much *takes off my hat* farewell Ctf, thank you for the ride, you will be always remembered!
From the bottom if my heart, thank you Dani, thank you very much! <3
I won't say goodbye so have a nice week and see you around ;) take care of yourself.
luv_kero
2444 streak #2
Chapter 57: I've been anticipating the Afterword chapter so much ever since you mentioned it, and I absolutely loved reading all of your thoughts on the cast and how you went about developing their arcs!! <3 Some of the things I knew (thanks to me loving spoilers and our insanely long back-and-forth responses via comments and PM, HAHA) and some of the things were a complete surprise, so it was so cool getting to learn and relearn these behind-the-scenes tidbits!! ^^

One thing I had no idea about (but probably should've figured out, LOOOOL) was Python's intended role as canon!Audrey Weasley!! Looking back now, it totally makes and I should've known you'd make sure every aspect of Percy's story was covered, even if they weren't intended to truly be endgame with the planned divorce. :P Does that mean Python would've been leading the MII with Cadi instead of Audrey Blishwick if the latter hadn't been submitted??

Ahhhh, not a day goes by where I wish Evera were still here with us, even though I know that her death was necessary. :') I take a lot of comfort in knowing that her death served so much purpose in the story and that it wasn't meaningless (not that anyone's death was ^^;) in the grand scheme of things. :) I do wonder how the story would've changed if she had stayed alive, since I imagine Kent would've been a much less broken man. But then his motivation to really get plans in motion within the Order of Phoenix wouldn't have been as strong as it was after suffering such a devastating loss. OTL All in all, Kent and Evera will always be the best dynamic duo, and I will never stop thanking you for bringing them to life in such a beautiful way!! <3 And I guess I don't know if they'll make cameos in UFF, but I'd love to know what happened to Drake and Jemma (and even little Roderick from H:aH, LOOOL, if you ever got to planning his future XD) after the events of CtF if you have that information readily available. ^^; If not, no worries!! I'm just very attached to my original trio, HAHA. :')

I'll be reiterating a lot of stuff I've said in previous comments and/or messages, but Channer was the first character I fully conceptualized when you announced CtF and its plot. I'm honestly drawn to charismatic, outgoing male characters (Kent, Drake, Landon), so writing a coward like Channer was such a fun challenge for me since I got to really step out of my comfort zone. I think part of me subconsciously wanted him to eventually join Adeline in the Underground, since I'm a er for the good side, but I loved that he stayed neutral throughout since I think that's the path truest to his character. It wouldn't have made sense if he had joined up and although it was painful to see him get bested by Yurina, I'm really happy that he's learned to hold his family a little closer now. <3

And now, MY FOX QUEEN, MISS YURINA NAKAYASHI!! I honestly don't enjoy writing Slytherin-like characters, but she was such a fun character to create and I became so attached to her in such a short amount of time. I really think it was her background that cinched it for me. The tiger parent mentality is often lauded by Asian parents as the "right" way to raise your child and while I do think there are some great parts about it, I also think it can be incredibly toxic with the wrong parents and the wrong children. So giving Yurina such a lonely childhood made me sympathize with her so much, even though I knew I was creating an evil character who really shouldn't be redeemed. ^^; I think I would've been really sad to see her caught by Abeni, so I'm stoked that UFF saved her in a way and I can't wait to see what mischief she's planning now!! :D Even though she's probably going to be defeated in UFF, at least she got a happy ending in CtF, HAHA. XD No matter what happens, she'll forever be my queen of darkness. <3

And then we have Odette, the strongest Fugitive out there who's absolutely killing it in life now, which she completely deserves after everything she went through during the war. :') Even though I made her to get tortured, I don't think I envisioned just how much she'd have to go through and my heart broke every time her situation got bleaker. OTL I honestly feared for her life the most out of my main four, especially after Evera died, since I knew that a Fugitive death would be incredibly possible. My other Fugitive characters, Xander and Cassie, were much more capable and resourceful than Odette was, so I figured that if a Fugitive had to die, she'd be the one. OTL So knowing that she ultimately made it out alive, even with immense trauma, made me so happy because I would've been crushed to bits by her death. ^^; Odette's a strong girl who shows that persistence and sheer will are key, and I'm so glad that sunnier skies graced her future. <3

I know I didn't write about everyone, basically focusing on my own characters, but I absolutely loved reading about every single member of the cast and seeing their stories get woven together in this amazing tale. Just as it was for H:aH, it was truly the greatest honor to be part of this story in some way and I'm eternally grateful that I was given the opportunity to help shape the HoM trilogy with my imperfect characters. :') They've all grown immensely over the course of CtF and I'm beyond ecstatic to see what kind of magic you'll weave next with UFF!! x] You know I'll be there writing essays after every chapter, because I can't stop myself from spazzing over even the tiniest details and I'm actually going to cry when it's all over. I would've cried when CtF ended, but knowing that there's still one installment left kept the tears at bay, HAHA. :') But we'll worry about UFF ending when the time comes, since it's just barely begun at this point and it's time to ENJOY what's about to come!! :D

Again, from the bottom of my heart, THANK YOU for writing Confronting the Faceless!! <3 You're forever one of my writing inspirations and a friend I've grown to cherish so much after getting to know you these past few years, and I will never stop saying how grateful and lucky I am to have stumbled across Hogwarts: a History back then. x] You're the absolute best, Dani!! <3
Susan15
#3
Chapter 56: Hi!! Ok I believe I am ready for this overwhelming final chapter ;-;

Honestly, I always thought about what would happen to Ava. A part of me continuously compared her to Claire, but I think Ava is a coward. While Claire didn't agree with the values that most of Slytherins believed, she actually tried to do something about it, and a good part was that she met Bill and had her cousin. Ava had Astoria and her friend wasn't what Ava thought about the others. I think she was obsessed with "I'm better than them" to the point that she disliked Clary who was different from what she hated and also she was shocked about Kingsley, someone she saw as an example, only to find that he was a Slytherin. She put all her hatress into the house instead of growing up and understanding that not everyone is the same.
I liked how everything wrapped for her, it was the best outcome became she herself did not grow up much within all those years. And I'm really happy that she and Anwen got to become friends :)

Theo... I'm so... shocked! And happy? I'm truly glad he managed to find peace with himself (or something similar to that) and that he found someone who went through something "similar" and somehow could understand him and love him by who he is. I actually wonder if he managed to face his father since he always wanted to make him proud on top of everything and honestly I wonder if he got to see his uncle getting arrested, because well he deserved that! And I'm so happy that Kent was the best man! Ok I'm happy by how everything just went, Kingsley too. And I'm so so proud of Max and it was great to see him and Claire at Theo's wedding. I hope Theo and Val can make things work and finally forgive themselves.

Aiden as a grandpa is the strawberry on top of the ice cream xD Mia is so cute and YES ONE OF MY SHIPS SAILED!! I'm so happy Logan and Susan got together! And am I sensing a rivalry between Albus and Mia? xD Or maybe something more? :p I'm so happy and proud that Aiden was able to retire and be happy, he deserves and honestly he is one of my favourite characters. It was not easy to be a adoptive father and now he became a proud grandfather, I'm so happy for him.

Minki and Padma got together <3 and they had twins omg poor Minki! But I'm so happy and proud that he was able to follow his dream even if it was smaller than his bigger one. Oh my and Terry and Parvati wow I wasn't expecting that! Friends becoming lovers is something I live for haha. I'm so happy that everything worked out. I know that he is probably the most neutral character in the story, I don't remember, was he in the battle?

Odette! And she is the final pov ;-; Omg Dean got married and they became friends, that's so great. I wouldn't have guessed that Dean would marry a muggle! Dirk would be proud of how both of them grown up so much after everything that happened. I'm so proud of Odette and happy too, she deserves all the happiness in this world!

I can't believe this story just ended. I believe I can speak by everyone that we became attached to these characters and I'm not ready to say goodbye. I love every single character and I believe you made such an incredible story that I don't have enough words to express what I feel. Thank you so much for your time, passion and for making this amazing story and capturing our hearts. You are a great writer and I hope you feel proud of yourself just like I'm proud of you :)

I hope you have a great weekend and honestly I'm making fingers crossed to see them somehow again in UFF because I think I'll miss some of them too much xD
Thank you so much and see you Sunday to see your amazing thoughts and feelings through this story <3. Take care of yourself and have an awesome time :)
Susan15
#4
I'll give you a proper comment about the final chapter but yes please, I'd live to read your thoughts and feelings!
I'm so happy and shocked at the same time with the final chapter, but I will leave it to another time!! I just wanted to let you know how much I loved it and that I really do want to hear what your opinions :)
Have a nice week and I hope to read your feelings and thoughts next sunday :')
luv_kero
2444 streak #5
Chapter 56: Oh my gosh, it's the final epilogue. I'm not ready. OTL

Dang, I legit wasn't expecting Ava to be an ice cream shop owner after twenty years, LOOOL. :P But yikes, I can imagine that leaving Hogwarts definitely turned the "Slytherin=bad" sentiment on its head. I don't blame Ava for thinking that way during her school years, since she was a teenager and she hated not fitting in with her house. But at least she's become more open-minded and chill now, and it does show a lot of her character growth. :) It's also really sweet that she revived Fortescue's ice cream shop, since it's such a cornerstone of Diagon Alley and it broke my heart when Florean disappeared. :'( But omg, I also didn't expect Anwen to have had a whirlwind romance with a Muggle, so I'm glad that she also seems to be a lot more open-minded now as an adult. ^^ Although it that it didn't work out and I hope Anwen is doing okay as a single mother, since I know that can be difficult. >___< The cameos of Albus, Rose, and Scorpius were also super cute and I love that they're this generation's trio, hehe. x]

Oh gosh, Theo looking at little Evan and thinking of his guilt towards Evera's death had me gutted too. Q___Q But also, I'M SCREAMING AT KENT BEING HIS BEST MAN!! AND I'M ALSO SCREAMING AT THEO MARRYING VALERIE???????? FORGET WHAT I SAID ABOUT AVA. THIS IS THE BIGGEST SURPRISE OUT OF ALL OF THE EPILOGUES. I'M SO SHOOK. THIS MIGHT BE THE MOST SHOOK I'VE EVER BEEN. NEVER IN A MILLION YEARS DID I EVER EXPECT VALERIE AND THEO TO END UP TOGETHER. Like it totally makes sense with them bonding over their trauma in this support group and I bet Valerie felt AWFUL for getting caught in Branwen's web after she found out Branwen was a Death Eater. T^T It's so so so cute that Theo and Valerie eventually fell for each other, and I'm so happy that Theo gets to experience this beautiful moment because he deserves it!! And ahhhhh, I love that Kent is Best Man (best boi forever!!) and Evan is the ring bearer (/cries i love this kid so much already help) and Zac also got happily married and Valerie's family is there, and Theo has so many friends and people who care about him. :') AND JUST THAT ENDING, OMG. SHOT ME IN THE HEART. *o* I'M DED FROM HOW CUTE THEY ARE. PROCLAIMING MYSELF AS CAPTAIN OF THIS NEW SHIP NOW, HAHAHA.

Ahhhh, Logan and Susan got together!! x] And Mia, like all the kids, sounds so adorable and Aiden is definitely best grandpa!! ^^ And ooh, looks like Oliver is teaching at Hogwarts now after retiring from the professional circuit?? :D Gah, that reminds me that he's also old now too. OTL And omg, I'm ded at Mia and Albus having a Quidditch rivalry. XD Try-outs will be a battlefield this year with those two gunning for positions, HAHA. And LOOOOOL, I also wasn't expecting that kiss comment from Mia. :P I imagine Albus will definitely be a heartthrob, especially when he gets older, and Mia will be one of many who have a crush on young Potter, LOLOLOL. But ahhhh, so happy that Aiden has such a beautiful family and that he's enjoying life so much now!! He completely deserves it after everything he went through!! And I also love that Ava made an appearance at the end, even though they never actually met in the main story, since everyone's stories are ultimately tied together in this epic. :)

Haha, definitely not surprised that Minki opened up a dance studio. XD He really suffered the least overall out of everyone in CtF, I think. Him and Venus. And awww, so cute that he and Padma ended up having twins!! x] And ooh, Padma is also a teacher now?? :D What kind?? (also there's a tiny typo where you wrote parvati instead of padma and i was like, wait which twin is which?? is padma the gryff and parvati the ravenclaw?? XD) And awwww, I wasn't expecting Terry and Parvati to get married, but I can totally see them together and it's so cute that the two best friends each got married to one of the twins, HAHA. :P They're all one big happy family now!! ^^ Minki and Padma's banter is also so cute, and I love how chill Minki is now in comparison to how he was in seventh year. :') And ooh, what does Terry do in the Department of Transportation?? Guess he followed the more traditional path of working for the Ministry while Jerome went traveling, LOOOOL. XD

And now, we're here at last at the final epilogue. T^T Odette was the last of my main characters submitted to CtF, she was the last POV chapter of the story (and the last Fugitive to be rescued), and now she's the last of the epilogues. But that doesn't mean she's last in my heart, because she's far from it!! <3 I figured she would eventually strike up a friendship with Dean, since they both had the connection of being on the run with Dirk at some point, and I bet they've shared a lot of stories about Dirk with each other over the years. :) My heart hurts knowing that Odette still suffered so much for so long, even though it's completely understandable that she wouldn't have mentally healed in an instant. That's just not possible when you've gone through what she did. And ahhhhh, HARRY COMING THROUGH TO GIVE HER A CHANCE MAKES ME SO HAPPY!! TRULY AN ICON. AND AHHHH, SO SO SO PROUD OF ODETTE FOR BECOMING HEAD OF THE IMPROPER USE OF MAGIC OFFICE!! *o* SHE OVERCAME ALL OF THE OBSTACLES LIFE THREW HER WAY AND WE LOVE SEEING FEMALE MUGGLEBORNS GETTING RIGHTFULLY RECOGNIZED FOR THEIR WORK IN THE MINISTRY!! x] Again, restating what I said in Kent's epilogue, I completely relate to Odette and Dean talking to Dirk's gravestone so this definitely hit home for me. It's a way to stay connected with them, even though they've passed, and I think it's very powerful that Dirk was able to create a very unique bond between Odette and Dean, even though he had long since passed. :) And I love that the ice skating figurine managed to survive the war!! It's definitely a beautiful, subtle reminder of the past before the war. ^^ And ahhhhh, that final sentence really pulled at my heartstrings. :') Everything is going to be just fine, Odette!! You've made it this far and you're only going to continue climbing to the top!! <3

Also, a big resounding YES to your A/N!! I'd love an Afterwords chapter!! :D I'll save my final CtF comment for then, hehe. ^^
Susan15
#6
Chapter 55: Hi!!

Omg yes! Venus had her dream come true, I'm so proud of her!
Oh and is she getting interested in that man?? :p
I kind of imagined her with someone from work since she would probably be a professional most of the time and she wouldn't go out on dates with just anyone, especially because she would care a lot about her job and would dedicate 100% of her time to that, so I truly see things work out between them :)

Tangi!! Our precious child who is not a child anymore :') I'm so glad she and Xander kept their friendship and managed to still be a part of each other's life!
Aw and Hazel made it out alive! And I can definitely imagine their marriage :) I'm also so happy that Clary and Kingsley got married too, like omg yes!

Gabe!! I truly thought that he was the groom!! I was shipping him with Romilda ;-; but it's still good that they kept being friends all this time. Same goes for Nathan, I'm truly happy that the two of them kept their friendship after all this time! Gabe also speaking in french with Fleur was just perfect haha.

Kent!! Aww I love the name Evan as I bet Evera would love it! He truly acts like a proud dad! And Tori already grown up omg ;-;. Why am I imagining those two in Hogwarts having the time of their lives? Haha. Kent is now a married man with two beautiful kids and I bet he feels the happiest man on Earth. Evera would be really proud of him. The final scene is just heartbreaking :') farewell Evera.

And finally but not last, Audrey!! I'm so glad that she and Percy got serious and started having a life together and forming a family. Their daughter Mai is really energetic haha. And I'm so glad to see that Audrey and Python still remained friends! Omg Lucy... that hit my poor heart ;-; I bet Lucas would feel proud and happy for her. I can imagine little Lucy in Hogwarts as a happy kid and perhaps who knows, maybe she would also become a healer! And Python becoming her godmother is just amazing!

I can't believe that next chapter is the last ;-; it's been a long journey and to see that everyone have grown up and becoming happier (even Yurina haha) is so heartwarming and we became attached to all of them so it will be hard to say goodbye. I hope that maybe some of them may make a cameo in UFF :')
I'm preparing tissues for the last chapter which will take another 10 years after this one and since it's set prior to the UFF events, I'm quite curious!

Thank you for this chapter, for the "romantic and couples" chapter haha. It's good to see everyone getting their dreams came true and them having their own families.
I hope you have an incredible week, great classes and I wish you everything the best :) Rest well and take good care of yourself.
I will see you later for the story's finale ;-; see ya~ :)
luv_kero
2444 streak #7
Chapter 55: Good on Venus for becoming the youngest ever Unspeakable!! Just like Rajani, we love seeing female Slytherins achieving their goals!! ^^ At the beginning of the story, I would've never expected Venus to be working in the Love Chamber. But after her work with identifying the loss of hope during the war, it does make sense that she'd end up in the chamber that's all about unraveling the mystery behind emotion. And omg, I wasn't expecting Cadfael to be an Unspeakable as well!! :D He's so much more chill now after his angsty Hogwarts days. XD Hopefully life has been much kinder to him since then. :') And ooooh, do I spy some sparks flying between him and Venus?? :P I can definitely see them together, bonding over their Slytherin days at Hogwarts, both of them with their air of mystery and very small social circles, haha. And since Unspeakables can't really share what goes on with their work, I imagine it'd be nice to be with someone who'll understand any workplace frustrations and such. ^^

Awwwww, love that Xander and Matangi are still so close after the war!! x] And yaaaay, so glad that Hazel survived and is thriving now!! :D It's so awesome to see that she's become an activist and hopefully things change for the better for the LGBTQ+ community with her leading the charge. :) And omg, Kingsley and Clary made up and married each other!! Ahhhhh, that's so sweet!! ^^ Wow, look at Clary, going from worrying about her grades in Hogwarts, to a bittersweet relationship with Lenox, to being one of the best Auror trainers in the Ministry, to being a member of the Underground, to becoming the Minister of Magic's wife while also being the Head of Magical Law Enforcement!! Again, we love seeing successful female Slytherins killing it in life!! :D And yesss, Xander is gonna be amazing in his new job and I'm so happy he's ending his dueling career on such a high note!! :D And ahhhh, Matangi and Hazel's wedding will be absolutely beautiful, and I really hope they'll be able to wed soon!! x]

Haha, you really threw me for a loop there in thinking that Gabe was the groom. XD I wonder who David is and how Romilda met him. :P But it's awesome to see that Gabe, Nathan, and Romilda are still best friends and as close as ever after all these years. ^^ And ooh, love the little bonding moment between Gabe and Fleur!! :D And also, dang, it's very cool that Gave is working as an investigative reporter. I definitely wasn't expecting that to be his career, since I thought he might go the Auror route or something similar. He was such an explosive kid, always gunning for justice. :P But I can see why he'd choose investigative reporting instead, especially since it does have a lot of freedom and traveling is so much fun. ^^ And he still gets to pursue justice, albeit in a more roundabout manner, LOOOL. And I guess he's going the Charlie route and staying a happy bachelor for the rest of his life, which is awesome and I'm glad he's happy without needing a partner to fulfill him. :)

Oh wow, another Weasley kid to add to the clan. XD They just don't stop coming. :') And it's funny that Mai is so different in temperament from her parents and Percy must have his hands full trying to make sure she doesn't upend everything in their lives. :P And it's so cute that Audrey Caldwell is still known as Python, even after all these years, HAHA. It's definitely a very cool nickname, even without the Underground attachment, so I can see why she'd keep it, LOOOOL. And omg, ahhhh, it's so sweet that Audrey decided to name Lucy after Lucas. T^T He really meant a lot to both her and Percy, so it's very beautiful that they're choosing to honor him through the newest addition to their family. :) He still lives in everyone's hearts, even though he's long gone now, and I'm sure he would've loved doting on Mai and Lucy if he had survived. >___< And I just realized that this means Audrey will have a pre-teen at home and a teenager at Hogwarts while she's dealing with stuff in UFF, LOL. What a busy woman. :')

And oh my gosh, Kent, my lovely boy, I don't think I'm ready to let go of him yet. Q___Q He's one of my absolute favorite OCs and I'm so happy I got a opportunity to expand on him for this story. <3 Like he was already an amazing side character that I loved to bits, but getting the chance to see him under the spotlight made me so incredibly happy, despite everything that happened to him during the war. :') And awww, Tori's a teenager now and I love how sassy she's become. XD Reminds me a lot of Holly in H:aH, LOLOLOL. :P And omg, so cute that she considers Jemma an aunt too, and I'm so so curious to know how Jemma and Drake are doing nowadays!! ^^ And omg, Ebony is such a beautiful name for Holly's daughter, hehe. x] It's awesome that Kent and Willow were able to find their way back to each other, even though it was so rough. Totally understandable that they broke up after the war. Kent was still grieving the loss of Evera and Willow then had to go through the exact same thing with Laurel. They definitely needed to grow separately as they processed their grief. You don't want to be at 50% when you're dating someone, using them to fill that other 50%. You want to be at 100% and dating another person who's at 100% for it to be a healthy, long-lasting relationship. At least that's my belief, LOL, although I don't have any personal experience to go off of (so who knows if I'm spouting nonsense). ^^; But Evan is such a great name, and Evera would've loved him and Sammy to pieces. x] And oh my gosh, my heart is dying because the end of Kent's epilogue is at Evera's grave. T^T I'll be very honest here, I talk a lot to the gravestone of one of my loved ones (and I use it as proxy for the other gravestones that I can't physically visit), so Kent talking to Evera this way was something I wholly related to. And my heart is breaking all over again, because I miss Evera so much and I don't think I'll ever get over her death. But I will stay strong, because she was a strong girl and Kent is staying strong too. I hope there're only clear skies for him for the rest of his life, even though I know things will get crazy with raising two boys in the house and there's still UFF's events to come ten years later. ^^; And omg, I just realized that Evan (and maybe Sammy) will be at Hogwarts when UFF starts!! XD Not that it's super relevant in the grand scheme of things, LOL, but I will have fun imagining the newest crop of Sylvesters at the best school in the world, having shenanigans of their own. :') And I'm just really really really happy that Kent got a happy ending, because he deserves it and I love him so much. He and Evera will always be my favorite pair of siblings, forever and ever, and I'm so happy that their bond will never be broken, even by death. <3

OMG, the final epilogue is coming soon and it's set right before UFF!! :D I'm not ready at all for CtF to end though. OTL But I'm also super excited to see the five remaining POVs and catch up with them twenty years later. ^^
Susan15
#8
Chapter 54: Hi!! Sorry for taking so long to comment!

First of all, my heart is hurting for Lucas. He was one of my favourite characters and honestly I feel like since half of the story he was making a rough path and the signals to his tragedy were there ;-; His last pov and Odette's pov showed how he was overworking and not taking care of himself. I liked him a lot, but somehow I feel like I knew that he would have a bad ending. I'm glad he had a painless passing and I'm sad that he didn't do a check up with Python because maybe he could have survived, but that's so Lucas.. And I'm really sad for his mother, she suffered so much and losing a son is like losing a part of her, especially since it's not natural. Oh my ;-; rest in peace Lucas.

Oh Channer ;-; poor boy, he must feel so guilty. But we all never know what is going to happen tomorrow so it's normal that we don't say "I love you" everyday. But of course it's truly painful and the last interaction is always what is pressed in our minds ;-; I know you will be able to process your grief and you will be better with time. You have your mother and sister, you will be fine!

I'm so glad that Max made it out alive. Now Claire and Max can really talk and pour their hearts to one another. They just "lost" their father who will be imprisoned after waking up (if he eventually wakes up), so they just have one another and their mother. And I truly understand what she means that everyone is biased and already settled their minds that everyone in the losing side is guilty. Fitz!! I'm so glad to see him!!! And I'm super glad that he is fine!!! Willow and Theo omg guys ;-; I'm so proud of Theo to try helping out and prove that everyone deserves a second chance like he had, because of their family environment and ideals. And I bet Willow feels like she compensated a lot from what she did. Everything is good now, I'm happy for them.

Oh Farrah :( you need time to heal my poor child. I understand that Christian is very important to her but he wouldn't understand what she has been through and she definitely needs to have a support near her who truly understands her and even though I know that Christian was what kept her sanity, she created a version of him in her mind who probably doesn't exist, and she needs time for herself now. You can get well child ;-;.

Yurina queen of the evil! Always causing trouble, really haha. Abeni must have a huge grudge on Yurina, because she is quite a pain in the haha. Let's see how Yurina will cause problems in Uff because I know you're involved young lady!

Wow next epilogue is 10 years from here! We're going to see the Hogwarts kids as grown ups!! I hope Venus and Minki managed to follow their dreams! I'm quite curious how Ava and Gabe became as adults haha. I bet everyone else is doing well now :)
I can't wait for the next epilogue!!
I hope you have a nice week, take care of yourself, rest well and see you later ;)
petitreveur
#9
Chapter 54: I told myself I was going to properly comment at the end of the three-part epilogue but I know I had to drop a comment after I read the first POV. NOOOOO LUCAS NOOOOOOO :"( Why do all my fav characters have to die hurhur /cries/ First Evera, then Laurel and now Lucas. My heart was literally squeezed tight when I read the line "He doesn't wake up" and I'm like NO NO NO, THAT CAN'T BE TRUE :"( I should have realised that foreshadowing when he was feeling way too exhausted than ever, that he w-wouldn't make it pass the night. Idk why but his death hits so much harder than anyone else's?? Lucas was (fk, I have to use the word 'was' now) such a golden boy, he did so much as a Healer and contributes sooo much as part of the Underground!! Although he didn't "fight" in the war, he was a true war hero!! I guess it's...relieving that his death wasn't a painful one and he passed in the comforts of his house....he will definitely be sorely missed :"( I can't imagine how broken his mother would be when she realises that her son is never going to wake up again >.< OH GOSHH, THAT START ALREADY SCREAMS DEPRESSING!! (I literally paused for five whole minutes before going on to the next POV)

Glad to see that Channel survived the war!! That sibling dynamic between Channel and Adeline has drastically changed. Damn, those two siblings must feel rather awkward and apologetic to each other but I feel it's neither their fault that things turned out that way. It's the awful circumstances that caused things to spiral out of control >.< It's so heartwarming to see Adeline and their mother visiting Channel in the hospital. , Channel must be feeling even more horrible and guilty for not actively doing anything during the war after learning that their father had passed away in Azkaban. Despite the awkwardness between the siblings, I'm sure Adeline never actually blamed Channel for ousting her and that's what family is all about. They are there for you no matter how much you might have forsaken them and at the end of the day, they still worry about you and welcome you back with open arms ^^ Things are never the same but Channel still has Adeline and their mother and things will get better with time :-)

Another POV that reflects the phrase "blood is thicker than water". Even though Max was a Death Eater, Claire can't bring herself to hate him or cut off ties with him. Sure, she does not agree with his dealings but after all, he is still her brother, her family. That conflicted feelings within her must be chewing her up for she knows that her brother deserved to be punished for the greater good but at the same time, Max is her brother, they are related by blood, and it must be hard to see him locked up in Azkaban (when their father was already sentenced while in a coma, big oof!) That grey area would always be grey ^^" Oh wow, I would have never thought Willow to be on defence (should I say that Max is very lucky to have Claire as his sister? LOL) and Theo to be the final witness!! Looks like Max doesn't have to live in a crammed cell anymore :')

Poor Farrah :'( She is suffering so much but I'm glad to see the tiniest progress that she is making since the day she was admitted into Mungo's. It that she doesn't really have any close friends around her except for Clara as all of her friends are all Muggles who wouldn't be able to understand what she had gone through because of the Statue. And now Clara is feeling slightly wary around her >.< Well, I don't blame Clara, she must be at a huge loss of what to do with someone so utterly broken, she had never been in her situation before and neither is she a trained medical professional. But it's great that Farrah is seeing a therapist and I can tell that Ellie is a good psychiatrist to her. Oh nooo, it must have been a last straw for Farrah when she heard that she's not allowed to see Christian as it was Christian who kept her fighting on for her life in the cells >.< Yet again, Christian prolly wouldn't be able to understand what happened to Farrah as a Muggle. But maybe, it's just the presence of Christian that she needs? Somehow, I don't think that Clara is a mean friend to Farrah or anything, it's just that Farrah is just so delicate right now and Clara obviously can't be there 24/7 for her >.< It's draining for both girls. Perhaps, a longer hospital stay would do them both good? The impact of war is just so harsh :"(

Da boss lady is in the house!! And she is getting straight to work!! With her schemings!! Poor Amos, he is so naive to think that he can get a taste of her LMAO and Yurina is using that to her strength, obviously. And voila, now she has information about Abeni Akingbade, which leads me wondering what exactly happened over the past twenty years?? The Akingbades must be pretty influential people in Nigeria?? And I'm pretty sure Yurina managed to wreck chaos in Nigeria and overthrew the government in some way or another?? I swear this little Japanese lady just doesn't stop :P Abeni must have gone through much turmoil, seeing the UFF's first teaser. Damn, everything is getting juicier and I can't wait for the tea to be spilled xD
luv_kero
2444 streak #10
Chapter 54: Oh man, I should've figured Lucas would end up dying from overwork. :'( The signs were all there, especially during his final main POV. T^T Him overworking himself was a constant theme and it so much that he had to go out this way. It reminds me a lot of karoshi, "overwork death" in Japanese, and I'm just glad that he got one final night with his mother and that he died in the comfort of his home. OTL But oh my god, his mother is going to be absolutely heartbroken when she finds him in the morning and my heart hurts so much for her, because she was probably so thankful that her son wasn't directly on the battlefield, but he ended up being a casualty anyway and she'll still have to bury him with all of the others. T^T In a way, Lucas' death sort of has a numbness to it and both Audreys are probably going to be devastated when they receive the news as well. :'( As well as Percy, Jemma, Jun, and anyone else who knew Lucas. ;~; He was a great guy though and he really did a lot for the war effort. In the end, he definitely died a hero like the others.

Oh my gosh, I've been anticipating the conclusion to Channer's story ever since his final main POV and I'm so glad he's in a much better state than some of the others. <3 Granted, things aren't perfect and they never will be, especially since Timon is dead, but at least he has a chance to make things better and that's what counts the most. Channer is still so young and he has his whole life ahead of him to strengthen the bonds he has with his remaining family members. It's something I'm personally trying to work on as well, although our circumstances are admittedly very different. One thing I definitely fear is leaving things unsaid when it's too late, and my heart hurts so much that Timon and Channer never got to properly bond before Timon died. :'( It's definitely going to weigh on Channer a lot from now on, and I hope that he'll be able to process his grief and regret in a healthy way. On the plus side, I'm so happy that Henry is okay and it's so cool that Adeline stayed with his dad while she was in hiding!! ^^ If anything, maybe Henry and Channer can become eventual friends with Henry easing some of Channer's regrets with stories of Timon in Azkaban and how Timon was always talking about how proud he was of his kids. It won't alleviate all of the pain, but it might help a bit, knowing that even though he never verbally expressed his feelings to his dad, Timon still deeply loved and cared for Channer until the very end. Linette, Adeline, and Channer are definitely going to struggle for years to come, but at least they have each other and that's what matters. <3

Oof, it does that Claire's still stuck between both sides, even after the end of the war. But it's nice to see that short moment between her and Fitzwilliam, and he's grown so much from his school days, ahhhhh :') And oh my, I guess since Claire does technically have a stake in the other side because of her family, what the Order is doing for clean-up probably does feel a lot more harsh to her, even though they probably feel completely justified in doing so. It's a very gray area and at the very least, Willow and Theo came through by helping out, even though they had no obligation to. I do wonder why they did. Maybe it was Holly asking for a favor, since she knew Claire?? Maybe it was just Willow not wanting someone else to lose a sibling after she did?? Maybe it was Theo knowing that Max was like him, brought up with Death Eater ideals but still capable of change?? At the very least, I'm glad that Claire doesn't have to lose a family member who's so precious to her and she's much luckier than most who've been affected by the war.

Oh wow, good to see that Farrah also survived Azkaban!! I'm guessing we'll find out Hazel's fate in Matangi's epilogue. Anyway, it's awesome that Farrah is already seeing a therapist and Ellie sounds wonderful. :) And considering how broken Farrah already was back in February, I'm not surprised she was even worse by the time all of the prisoners were released from Azkaban. Her fantasies were probably the only thing keeping her going while she was at Azkaban. x___x But yikes, I don't know if a happy ending with Christian is in the cards. Considering what she's been through, she'll really need someone by her side who'll understand the extent of this war and since Christian is a Muggle, I don't think he can be that person, realistically. >___< Maybe if this were set during UFF's time with magic finally being revealed, Christian could become her caretaker and they could have their happily ever after. But considering how Clara is Farrah's best friend and Clara's reaction to Farrah's breakdowns, I doubt Christian will be able to last long either. >___>

And finally, my beautiful and strong queen of darkness, Miss Yurina Nakayashi!! <3 Going to America was definitely the right call, HAHA. (Since no pandemic to worry about and the US was in a much better state back then OTL If this were 2020, I'd be like, NOOOOO, GO BACK TO ASIA!! ANYWHERE BUT THE US!!) And yesssss, what a QUEEEEEN, living in the lap of luxury in Vegas!! XD Love love love that she's already scheming and recruiting people to her cause!! She isn't wasting any time in making plans for world domination. XD And ooooooh, I've been so so so curious to find out about the bit with soap operas that you asked me about a while back and it's so cool to finally see it here!! :D And oof, looks like Amos is her newest puppet and I love her puppeteering so much!! XD She'd never give him a second glance if it weren't for the information he's gathering for her. He's too much of a lust-driven doormat and Yurina is WAY above that. x] If she ever does fall in love, it'll be with a man who can provide a challenge and keep up with her intellectually. He'll have to REALLY impress her with his cunning and capabilities, and men like that are few and far in between, especially relative to Yurina. She has no time to deal with small fries like Amos and he's probably only got an Avada Kedavra in his future once she's done with him. :') But ooh, Abeni better watch out since Yurina has her eye on her now!! The fox is on the prowl and no one is safe now, hehe <3

Ooh, super curious to see what life will be like ten years from now!! Definitely a lot happier than this, since most people will have healed considerably by then. :') And wizards probably won't be affected by everything that's happening in the Muggle world, LOL (collapse of the housing bubble, Great Recession, etc.) :P