Chapter Thirty-One

Confronting the Faceless 💀 Complete
March 2-8, 1998
"What matters is the part we choose to act on"
 
Two months after he'd sent Logan back to Hogwarts Aiden is still worrying. He exchanges regular correspondance with his ward so he knows Logan is alive, but they both have to dance around topics of resistance and punishment in their letters so Aiden doesn't know if Logan is safe or unharmed in addition to still being breathing. He can only hope.
 
For his part, he doesn't have much to share. Although he's been keeping his eyes and ears open for any possible opportunities none have arisen, at least not that he's caught wind of.
 
Which, logically, is clearly a good thing. If something is going on and he can't figure it out then it's likely no one else could either. However, it's frustrating after two months. He'd said he would try and do something, and while he knows Logan likely won't hold it against him if nothing comes up, Aiden will be disappointed in himself if his trying doesn't amount to anything.
 
So he starts working late, taking on extra projects, trying to be a little more social with the other people in the Authority. He's always liked them well enough, so it's not too jarring of a shift for him or anyone else. Which is, of course, the plan. If he altered his habits too much people would get suspicious.
 
It does help that the Floo Authority mostly runs on its own, separate from the crux of the takeover. Heck, Aiden had been working the day they'd killed the Minister and he hadn't heard about it until the paper announced his abrupt retirement the next day.
 
("Retirement" hah. Anyone who'd had any contact with Rufus Scrimgeour knew that was a lie - the man was the sort to die before he relinquished control of anything. So.)
 
There is one semi-regular face in the offices that doesn't belong to an official Authority employee, so Aiden had been a bit more cautious about her, but Branwen Avery has proven herself a lovely young woman with an excellent work ethic so Aiden has taken to greeting her comfortably whenever he sees her. She's always happy to stop and chat with him as well, discussing the latest Floo techniques and Branwen occasionally complaining about her creepy ex who apparently has reappeared recently.
 
Aiden had impulsively offered to help with that on a morning when Branwen had shown up with a boquet of flowers and an extremely flustered expression, and Branwen had smiled and promised to tell him if it got any worse. That conversation had left Aiden feeling quite good about himself - clearly he's seen as trustworthy and skilled if a woman he's only known a few months is willing to ask him for help with what is clearly a personal matter.
 
But still, it's a very small victory in the face of what feels like quite a large defeat. Especially when considering how much danger Logan must be in on the day-to-day, Aiden's own struggles feel miniscule.
 
He's at least getting quite a bit of work done - Channer Lindberg has commented on it a few times, and they're even doing some work together on potentially doing another major overhaul of the Network, this time to the North. It's this precise job he's working on late Monday night when the opportunity he'd been looking for finally comes knocking.
 
It must be nearly eleven at night, and the offices are entirely abandoned save for himself and his boss, who's holed up in his personal office running the numbers for their potential Network reset. The first round had been a massive hassle, but it has also been massively successful - there haven't been any issues with that sector since.
 
Mind, Lindberg had also set some people to watch over Yaxley's monitor group, which may have also contributed to the success of the endeavour.
 
Still, it's late and Aiden is getting tired, and he's just about ready to call it a night. He packs up his things and gathers his work bag, double checking that nothing has been left behind or out of place before heading for Lindberg's office to tell the younger man that he's heading home.
 
Lindberg's office is one of the nicer ones in the Department - soundproofed and walled in with opaque glass, it's the spitting image of privacy. But this late, when most lights are off, it's possible to see sillouhettes through the thick windows.
 
And tonight there are two figures inside the room.
 
Aiden freezes, his hand still poised in the air to knock, and stares at the figures. One is obviously Lindberg - the man is tall and lanky in a way that's rare enough to be easily distinguishable - but he doesn't know the other. It's female he thinks, based on the long hair, though the body shape isn't quite defined enough for him to say with confidence that it isn't a man with long hair. The two are obviously arguing, the long-haired one waving her - Aiden's going with her - hands in the air and Lindberg's long fingers rapidly tapping against his desk in a way that's very familiar to Aiden from long, exhausting department meetings.
 
It isn't until the unknown person turns to the door that Aiden realizes he ought to move away. He quickly retreats to his desk, which is out of eyeline of the office door. It is not, however, out of earshot.
 
"I can't believe you're still refusing." Yep, definitely a woman, and young if her voice is anything to go by.
 
"I don't know what you're speaking of Adeline, I've said this already." His boss says in clear frustration. "Now if you could manage to stop interrupting my work hours with frivolous-"
 
"Frivolous? Channer, I'm asking you to save lives, that is not frivolous!" The girl's - Adeline, Aiden supposes - voice drops to a scant whisper, but it carries easily in the empty offices. "All we need-"
 
"All I need is to finish these files Ads. Please." Lindberg sounds incredibly worn, and Aiden winces in sympathy. They've all been there before.
 
Adeline seems to get the memo, as she huffs and turns around, storming away.
 
"So what is it you need?" He asks, and ten seconds later he's frozen in place and staring down the wand of a very pretty young brunette.
 
"Who are you?" She hisses. "What did you hear?"
 
"Just the last bit." He says, and thenk blinks in surprise at his ability to speak. "Is this a partial freezing spell? And you cast it nonverbally?" He grins, impressed despite his situation. "That is very cool."
 
Her frown wavers from furious to something more wary. "Who are you?" She repeats.
 
"I want to help. My name is Aiden Case and I work here in the Authority as one of the top Floo Network Engineers."
 
Adeline eyes him cautiously, a frown still tugging at her features. "Case... I think Channer has mentioned you." She says cautiously. "So you say you want to help. What exactly are you offering and what makes you think I'm the person to offer it to?"
 
Aiden tries to shift to a more comfortable position before remembering he's frozen in place. "I heard the last bit of your conversation with Mr. Lindberg." He replies honestly, figuring that's going to be his best bet here. "I very much would like to help save lives, as you stated, and as you're asking my boss for assitance I assume it has something to do with the Floo Network. Which, again, I'm an engineer for, have been since graduating."
 
Adeline regards him for a moment longer, then bites her lip and flicks the wand that's still pointed at him. Instantly Aiden feels his limbs unlock and he nearly stumbles with the sudden weight of them.
 
"Much oblidged." He says, rubbing at his arms to get the blood flowing again. "So what do you need me to do?"
 
She shakes her head, glancing back at her brother's office. "Not here. I put up a sound dampening spell in the area but that won't be enough." She holds out a hand, expression almost daring, and Aiden thinks of another young woman with dark hair and sharp eyes that crinkled when she laughed and sparkled when she loved.
 
He takes Adeline's hand, and the room vanishes around them.
 
He needs a moment to reorient himself when they land, but once he does he immediately turns to Adeline. "How did you Apparate within the Ministry walls?"
 
She grins. "Trade secret, need-to-know basis." She says cheerfully, and it's amazing how being in this room completely strips off her earlier stress and hesitance. Clearly wherever this is, it's home base for her group. "Anyway, you said you wanted to help, so take a seat and listen up. I'll tell you what we need, and you tell me if you think you can do it."
 
Aiden finally looks around the room properly, and notices a worn out bed pushed to the side of the room, which he sits down on as instructed.
 
Adeline hums. "Okay, full honesty you're the first person I've recruited myself." She says. "So bear with me on this, I'm not as practiced at giving the introduction speech."
 
Aiden nods, trying to go for comforting or supportive, though Adeline isn't really looking at him. She paces the room a few times before nodding and starting to speak, her movements never ceasing as she explains.
 
"Basically I work for this group called the Underground, and we help smuggle Muggleborns out of the country." She says, hands flapping through the air as she speaks, feet still working a line into the already worn carpet. "We have safehouses where we keep the Muggleborns until they can be moved out of the country. What I've been trying to get my brother to do is set up a private Floo connection between the safehouses so we can move between them and communicate with each other without the Ministry listening in."

Aiden nods. It's smart - the Floo Network Monitors had been one of the first things set up by the Deatheaters so using it has been out of the question from day one. He assumes Adeline had known that due to her relationship with Channer. Speaking of.
 
"If you don't mind my asking, what is your relationship with Mr. Lindberg?" He prompts, and her pacing stutters a moment before pausing entirely so she can look over at him.
 
"That's a bit of a non-sequitr." She points out, her words taking on a suspcious undertone. "Why do you ask?"
 
He holds up his hands. "Just curious, you don't have to answer. I'm an engineer, I like seeing how things fit together is all. You say you need a Floo system unconnected from the main Network, correct?"
 
Adeline relaxes slightly, and the pacing resumes. "Yeah, can you do that?"
 
"I'll need a base to work from - one main fireplace to serve as the central port. For the Network that's obviously the Ministry."
 
Adeline nods. "You can use my place." She says, but Aiden frowns. 
 
"I don't know if that would work." He admits. It's a gut feeling, but he quickly figures out why the idea doesn't sit well with him. "We didn't know each other before tonight, and I'll need to be at the central point quite a bit during set up. From there each individual can connect on their own easily enough - I just need to give them access, again from the central point. Unless you can come up with a reason I'd be at your home so often we'll need a different location."
 
Adeline chews on her lip as she walks, clearly trying to think of something. After a long few minutes she sighs and stops moving again, turning to face Aiden. "Okay yeah, I can't think of anything either. For now I guess I can teach you the basics and we'll think on it? Maybe you could meet witih Lion, she's in charge of safehouse communication right now so maybe she'll have some ideas."
 
'The basics' includes introducing him to the Underground's Messenger system and having him select a code name so he can create a messenger of his own. He of course first considers using 'Bloodhound', as that's his actual patronus and one he'll easily remember. But it doesn't feel quite right, especially as he hasn't successfully cast it since Tanner's death. Seeing the silvery dog would probably trigger some less than positive feelings.
 
So he thinks on it while Adeline fills him in on the rest of the team - or at least the people he might need to know.
 
"Obviously, unless we've met and used the code phrases with each other, we don't know actual identities, but I can tell you the codenames and roles of the other people working inside the Ministry so you can reach out to them if you need them for whatever." Adeline says briskly. She's pacing again, hands trying to illustrate her points in the air. "So obviously there's Lion, she's in charge of the Ministry stuff for the most part. There's Chickadee who does most of the file scrambling and then Dolphin is somehow involved with the Wizengamot though I'm not sure on details. Again, you should talk to Lion since she's in charge."
 
Aiden nods uncertainly, the code names mostly buzzing in one ear and out the other. He's sure he'll learn them as they interact so he's not too concerned about memorizing everything now.
 
"As for the safehouse coordinators, I'm Bat, and since I live right in the city my house isn't really a long-term stop for Muggleborns, just somewhere to stay temporarily while waiting for it to be safe to go into the country. Tarantula and Boar live out there, and their neighbor Rabbit also helps us out. He's Muggle but his kid's magic and he knew about Tarantula and Boar so he was pretty excited to help however he could. Owl and Fox live just outside the suburbs, and they're a smaller house for now. That definitely could change since they aren't as poorly located as I am, but we need that Floo System."
 
Aiden nods. "I'll see about arranging a meeting with this Lion then, so we can work out how I can proceed without drawing unwanted attention."
 
Adeline hums. "Right, good. I suppose that's it then? Have you picked your code name yet?"
 
Aiden huffs. He has not, but he'll need to give one before they leave so he can contact Lion and set up a meeting. He nearly goes with Bloodhound despite his reservations, when it hits him.
 
Just use mine Moonsong, honestly. You're so dumb sometimes.
 
"Gryphon." He says. "I'd like to use Gryphon."
 
That had been his secret nickname for Tanner, what he'd call him in notes written during classtime so they wouldn't get in trouble should the communication be intercepted. In turn Tanner had called him Moonsong. Considering this entire endeavour is happening in honor of his friend, and his friend's son, Aiden thinks it's appropriate.
 
Adeline is laughing. "Oh man that's way cooler than Bat! What can you do though." She nods. "Alright then, let's get you set up."
 
Aiden gets home (from the Hog's Head, as he learned) around three in the morning. He has work in six hours and a meeting to set up as well, but he's actually feeling good. He's finally going to be able to keep his promise to Logan - he's going to help.
 
He messages Lion first thing in the morning, and he can't help smiling as his silver Gryphon soars into the post-dawn sky towards London. He imagines it's Tanner's spirit, bounding off to help people as Aiden knows he'd want to.
 
Lion gets back to him just before he leaves for work.
 
"Usual spot, just after work hours. Welcome to the team." is all her Messenger says before vanishing, and Aiden hums an unheard acknowledgement. He's honestly bolstered by the quick response - the faster they move on this the better, and it's clear Lion agrees on that front.
 
Work that day is hectic as ever, and he continues working with Channer on plans for the Northern reset. There is a moment of note, when he goes down to the Records room to collect the full list of names of people connected to the Northern Floo system.
 
As usual it's Eloise Taylor behind the desk, looking tired but as irritated as ever.
 
"You're the only one who ever comes down from that department in person. Those arseholes from the Monitor just send memos demanding certain files." Eloise grumbles. "Entitled cads, don't realize I have better things to do then run up and down the lifts for them."
 
What happens next is impulse, stemming from memories of Adeline saying the Underground had someone working files on their roster. And Eloise did set him up quite well to try out one of the code phrases.
 
"They want to be natural, the anti-social little beasts." He's regretting the words as soon as they leave his mouth - they may be a decent enough reply to Eloise's complaints, but it's entire out of character for him to-
 
"They just don't realize everyone's good depends on everyone's cooperation." Eloise says, and it's airy and dismissive but it's the response phrase.
 
Eloise is Chickadee then, and the two share a brief, knowing smile before Aiden leaves with his files. He's feeling better now as well, having a concrete face within the Ministry walls who he knows is on his side.
 
The rest of the day is uneventful, and he packs up his desk alongside everyone else when the clock strikes five.
 
"Leaving on time for once Case?" One of his coworkers, Malcom Waters, jokes, and Aiden gives him a grin that feels rather awkward on his face. He may have somehow developed a repore with most of the department in the past few months but it's well beyond him how he'd managed it.
 
"I was here nearly to midnight last night, I think I've earned it." He replies, and the other man laughs.
 
"Was that doing your work or was it catching up with things you left to the last minute?" He asks knowingly, and Aiden's grin becomes rueful. It's a fair question - he always gets things done on time but quite often they get left to the last minute.
 
"Bit of both?" He replies, honestly, and Malcom laughs again.
 
They head to the lift together, and the Chief Network Regulator catches up to them just as the lift arrives.
 
Aiden politely gestures for her to enter first, and Madame Edgecomb gives him a tense, tired smile in response. She's an older woman, just past her fifties, and with the new Monitor group essentially taking over her previous job she's been regulated to a figurehead position. Aiden doesn't envy her at all - at least he still gets to actually do his job, she doesn't even have that to distract her.
 
"Good day gentlemen?" She asks, voice as tense as her posture but still attempting politeness.
 
Malcom smiles and shares a grand story about chasing down a lost file that's funny in all the right places, and again Aiden wonders how he managed to secure such a friendly relationship with the younger man despite his own... him-ness.
 
He separates from Malcom and Madame Edgecomb when they reach the ground floor and heads for the apparation points. He won't go straight to the Hog's Head, of course - he isn't really in contact with the Apparition Offices but he doesn't doubt that they're being monitored as carefully as possible, and he doesn't want to take any risks.
 
So he Apparates home first, and even takes some time to change out of his work clothes before grabbing up his wand again and focusing on the dingy room from last night - this morning? - as he spins on his heel.
 
There's already a young woman standing in the room, leaning against the door and looking bored.
 
"Lion, I presume?" Aiden asks, offering a handshake.
 
She hums, standing up and accepting the gesture. "That would be correct. Gryphon? Bat filled me in a little, you're going to help us with the Floo setup?" She sounds cautiously hopeful, and Aiden doesn't blame her. This is probably something they've been trying to accomplish for a while now, so they'd want to make sure he's the real deal.
 
"That's the plan." He agrees giving what he hopes is a confidence-inspiring smile. It feels strained though, so he drops it quickly. "I did mention to Bat that I would need a different central location to use. She said you'd be the person to talk to about that."
 
Lion huffs out a breath, nodding. "I would be, but I've been spinning it in my mind all day and I can't say I've come up with much. At best we may have to bring in a friend of yours, someone you could visit without suspicion. Is there anyone you know who would want to help?"
 
Aiden blinks. I do, but he's dead I'm afraid. It's why I'm here and not him. He doesn't say that, but his silence seems to speak for itself as Lion sighs.
 
"Okay, okay, that's okay. We'll work on it and keep you aprised then? In the meantime I can tell you a little about how else you can help, if you want?" She almost looks hopeful that he'll accept. He wonders what exactly she's trying to avoid, being here. It's obviously something, considering her veiled desperation to extend the meeting time.
 
"Yeah, that would be good." He says, and she smiles, relaxing slightly against the wall.
 
They chat for nearly an hour - she tells him a bit more about the structure of the organization and teaches him a few additional spells that Adeline hadn't covered that morning, including the silent partial freeze.
 
"These are absolutely brilliant." He tells Lion as she demonstrating the wand movement. "Did you create them? They really are ingenious."
 
Something hurt flashes in Lion's expression, and she doesn't try to hide it. "No, our founder created all the spells we use. None of them were patented, so no one else knows about them. And probably no one else ever will, since she's dead."
 
Something in Aiden stutters at the harshness of the word, said with far less gravity than he would have given it. But the anguish in her expression is real, and he needs to remember that everyone processes grief differently.
 
"I'm sorry for your loss." He says quietly. Lion shrugs.
 
"I didn't really know her. Not well. But you know." She gestures vaguely. "She was the first person I knew who the war took away. Plus she was brilliant, like you said. Just wanted to help. It... it wasn't fair." Her voice is catching now, and she turns away.
 
For his part Aiden doens't know what to do other than stand there awkward and useless, pretending he doesn't know that she's fighting back tears. He's the adult here, and he's lost someone too, so why is it he can't think of a single thing to say?
 
They wrap up shortly after that and Aiden returns to his empty house feeling a bit hollowed out. The meeting had gone well though, objectively speaking. Though there is still the problem of a central location to work from, but he thinks that he'll sleep on that. Right now he just wants a hot shower, a hearty meal, and a good book.
 
The next few days are back to the usual routine, though he does ease up on chatting with his coworkers, worried now that he'll reveal something without meaning to and end up hurting things when he's trying to help. Because wouldn't that be just like him?
 
Waters seems to notice this and pushes a little, even asking if everything is alright at home, and Aiden thinks he does alright redirecting the guy but only time will tell on that front.
 
His main concern isn't really Waters though. He's more preoccupied trying to work out where he could create a central Floo port.
 
He could, of course, just use his own home, and that is certainly a backup plan in case they can't think of anything better. The main issue lies in the fact he's far from centrally located, and despite what people generally think distance does actually play a factor in Floo setup. The more geographically central the main port is to its connecting Network the easier and quicker everything can be set up. And time is very much of the essence.
 
He isn't doing nothing, at least, which helps make him feel less like a failure as he continues to be stumped on the Floo side of things. He sends daily reports to Lion about the Floo Montiors and which sections they're focusing in on. He isn't sure what the information is being used for, but he knows quite well the power of knowledge and so does his best to be as detailed as possible with his messages.
 
It's about a week later that he finally comes up with a possible soultion to their problem, and he asks Lion for another meeting.
 
She looks frazzled when he arrives, but her smile is a bit brighter. "So you have a location you can use?" She starts with no preamble.
 
"Maybe." He says quickly - no need to get her hopes up too high just yet. "I knew someone in school who had ties with the Order back during the first war - there's a good chance he'll be willing to help out. Plus, as we're old schoolmates it won't be odd for me to pay him a visit."
 
Lion nods, sagging slightly but still mostly pleased. "Sounds good, just keep me up to date on your progress. If you manage to get him onboard I'll arrange a meeting with Python so we can figure out how long this will take and how it will affect our current systems."
 
Aiden nods and she huffs out a slight breath before nodding back. Aiden doesn't ask who Python is, figuring he'll learn when he needs to.
 
They say their farewells and Aiden goes home. He needs to plan his approach carefully - Gareth Dearborn is a nice bloke, but not the sort who's going to appreciate Aiden showing up out of the blue. He'll need to plan his opening statement very carefully in order to even get inside the Dearborn mansion.
 
The next day is Saturday, and he's got the weekend off from work which for once he's thankful for. He spends the day putting together the spells he'll need and rehearsing what he wants to say once he arrives at Gareth's house. It's particularly difficult as, despite getting along decently enough during their school days, the two of them hadn't been friends even then, nonetheless twenty years and no contact later.
 
Still, he remembers where the Dearborn mansion is, and it's not difficult to Apparate just off the property the next morning with his briefcase in hand and speech on repeat in his mind.
 
He strides up to the front door, intentionally staying in plain view. He's giving Gareth a chance to tell him to leave before their conversation begins - the other man has plenty of time to see him. But Aiden makes it to the front door with no difficulty, though it does take a few minutes for the door to open after he's knocked.
 
Gareth looks different than Aiden remembers, but he hasn't seen the other man since they were both eighteen so some extra wrinkles and facial hair isn't exactly surprising.
 
"No solicitors." Gareth grunts, and Aiden raises an eyebrow.
 
"You don't recognize me then?" He guesses. Gareth scowls.
 
"'Course I do Case. You work for the Ministry, and I'm not interested in what they're selling."
 
"Well I'm not here on behalf of the Ministry." Aiden says, transitioning into his pre-planned speech and hoping it's a smooth shift. "I represent a group that's trying to make things better. We don't need you to be involved yourself, but we'd appreciate if we could use your home as an access point. I can't say more than that in the open." Heck, he probably has already said too much out here, but he's rather confident no one is keeping tabs on the hermit in front of him.
 
Gareth eyes him suspiciously. "If you're lying I'm hexing you." He warns, stepping back to allow Aiden entrance.
 
Aiden breaths out a sigh of relief as he enters and follows Gareth to what must be the sitting room. There's a massive fireplace standing at the center, and Aiden immediately focuses on it. That will be perfect, if Gareth agrees to help.
 
"You've got five minutes. Talk." The man says gruffly, and Aiden quickly explains the Underground and their need for a central Floo.
 
"You won't even need to have any Muggleborns here if you'd prefer it." He finishes. "There's very little risk to you and you'd be helping a lot of people."
 
"Helping 'em die." Gareth says, which is not the response Aiden was hoping for or expecting. "Your little group is probably putting a bunch of people in danger who don't need to be."
 
Aiden blinks, unsure of what to say to that for a moment, before he thinks back to Christmas and Logan's conviction as he explained why he fought with the DA.
 
"We choose to help people because it's better than standing aside and letting innocents die needlessly. We're in a position to help those who can't help themselves. We're not helping people die, we're helping them live."
 
"He's right Gareth." A woman's voice sounds from the door, and both men jump. Aiden notes how nervous Gareth suddenly looks.
 
"Scorcha I told you to stay upstairs." He says tightly, and then winces when a blonde head pops out from behind the woman in the doorway.
 
The girl is young, definitely not past her teens, and she looks almost hurt. "Why would you protect me and mom but not help anyone else?" She asks, eyes wide and just a touch wet. Aiden doesn't envy Gareth being on the other end of that look. "You wouldn't be risking anything more than you already are."
 
"Honestly I'm dissapointed you'd even think to say no." The woman - Scorcha - says firmly before turning to Aiden with a smile. "Sorry about that dear, I'm Scorcha Roy and this is my daughter Philomena."
 
"I prefer Menna." The girl says with a smile. "And we'd love to help Mr. Case. I don't sleep well knowing that there are other Muggleborns out there and in so much danger."
 
Aiden looks over at Gareth, who's slumped into his seat in defeat. The other man catches his gaze and sighs.
 
"Well Case, looks like you've got your Floo whatever. Just don't blow up my house."
 
Aiden grins. Attempt successful.
 
He messages Lion that her Floo Network will be up within the month and then gets to work.
 
Author's Note: How's that for some good news? :D And here marks the start of double update weeks~ See you all on Sunday!
 
Next Time: No matter how you try, some people just won't be controlled
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So I'm thinking I might do a final 'afterwords' chapter to share my thoughts and feelings on writing this story, if that's something people would be interested in? I'm also open to answering any lingering questions people might have there as well!

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Chapter 57: Hi!
I'm so sorry for taking so long to comment, but shall we begin!

I swear I should have made a bet omg. The moment I first heard of Python I was like "hmm.. what if she was Percy's Audrey?" And even though I knew that our Audrey would be Percy's girlfriend, I always thought how it would be nice if Python and him were endgame, but honestly... they wouldn't last long haha

I want to thank you for being so passionate about the story and truly understanding the characters and doing your best to give them justice. I loved how you put so much effort on everything!

When I first saw this story I first imagined a muggleborn with a fiery personality so after seeing that Tangi was created you have no idea how happy I was.
Claire was my first character for the story. When I thought about her I wanted a strong woman who was conflicted between her believes and her family, but who definitely couldn't turn a blind eye to people in need. Then I thought if she was an insider probably no one would suspect her because of her family, so she would have some advantage!
I'm truly proud of how she grew up. She was such a lonely girl who had only Bill and her cousin Petra as her friends. Then she loved her brother and her parents but she always thought that he didn't care about her. She didn't agree with her families believes and she truly had to do something to free herself from her fears and allow herself to be who she was. And being one of the leaders of the underground made me very proud of her! Especially after Max was able to change as well and they now became stronger together as a family. Honestly I wonder how Claire decided to do in the future, if she stayed in the ministry, if she dedicated herself to her family and if she made friends (because I'm so happy that she at least became friends with Python, she truly deserves friends), whether she ended up married or not, well I'm curious but I think if she ever got married she would choose someone she truly trusted and who she could be herself and for God sake, someone who could make that poor girl smile, because come on she looks so gloomy xD But I'm happy that she made at least one friend and that she got closure with her brother, so I'm blessed :) Ps: I always thought that Claire wouldn't make it until the end xD I always thought she would be killed or that she would sacrifice herself to protect someone.

Theo... Oh my little boy. When I visualised Theo I thought about a broken boy who always wanted his parents approval. Theo was meant to be an adult version of Draco Malfoy. When Kent appeared in the picture I imagined the rivalry such like Draco and Harry and that only made the adult version I imagined more lively. Theo was lucky to have a friend like Kent, even if he didn't understand what a friend truly meant. Theo lost his mother, his uncle hated him, his father well... they didn't have the best relationship, he didn't manage to be captain, he didn't manage to be a prefect, he had to give up on his dream, he couldn't trust anyone. Well everything about Theo was supposed to be tragic. His partnership with Zara was just amazing, I believe he saw himself on her (even though she was pure evil), and he believed that maybe people could change if someone believed in him. He betrayed his family, he betrayed his colleagues for something he believed to be the right thing, Kent could have abandoned him and Kingsley could have hit believed in him and hand him over. But people believed in him, he was the same person his mother believed he was. Seeing him trying to get thought his trauma was sad, but it fit him. I'm so so happy that he found happiness somehow. Val loved him by who he was, she didn't see him because of his family, blood heritage or even his mistakes, but she saw his pure heart and that is just beautiful. And of course Theo and Kent's bromance are still one of my favourite parts of the whole story! Thinking about the future, I wonder if he managed to keep working or his stability is not well yet, but he has Val, Kingsley, Kent, all of his friends, so he will he fine :)

I will miss these kids, but I'm making room for the new kids so hopefully we will have a more funny time on UFF rather than a more serious and gloomy one :) I hope everyone who made it to the end are now happy and even if they don't make a cameo on UFF, that they have success and find their happy endings :)
Once again, thank you so much for this ride. I just can't believed it already ended, it seemed like it was yesterday that Aiden made his first pov ;-;
This won't be a serious goodbye because we will still talk and of course I will still be hyped with UFF and I'll be commenting every single chapter :p
Oh and I'm curious, as you know I'm like a huge fan of Oliver :p did you imagine him getting married? I can totally imagine him marrying someone from his work honestly.
Ok now for real, thank you so so so much. You are an amazing writer and I want you to know that I anticipated every single chapter every week and reading it made my day, seriously, even if it took me a while to comment in the chapter.
I wish you the best and I hope you have a lot of fun writing UFF and finish this trilogy which I believe will bring tears of joy and will bring you the best feeling of accomplishement. You deserve it Dani! Thank you so much *takes off my hat* farewell Ctf, thank you for the ride, you will be always remembered!
From the bottom if my heart, thank you Dani, thank you very much! <3
I won't say goodbye so have a nice week and see you around ;) take care of yourself.
luv_kero
2441 streak #2
Chapter 57: I've been anticipating the Afterword chapter so much ever since you mentioned it, and I absolutely loved reading all of your thoughts on the cast and how you went about developing their arcs!! <3 Some of the things I knew (thanks to me loving spoilers and our insanely long back-and-forth responses via comments and PM, HAHA) and some of the things were a complete surprise, so it was so cool getting to learn and relearn these behind-the-scenes tidbits!! ^^

One thing I had no idea about (but probably should've figured out, LOOOOL) was Python's intended role as canon!Audrey Weasley!! Looking back now, it totally makes and I should've known you'd make sure every aspect of Percy's story was covered, even if they weren't intended to truly be endgame with the planned divorce. :P Does that mean Python would've been leading the MII with Cadi instead of Audrey Blishwick if the latter hadn't been submitted??

Ahhhh, not a day goes by where I wish Evera were still here with us, even though I know that her death was necessary. :') I take a lot of comfort in knowing that her death served so much purpose in the story and that it wasn't meaningless (not that anyone's death was ^^;) in the grand scheme of things. :) I do wonder how the story would've changed if she had stayed alive, since I imagine Kent would've been a much less broken man. But then his motivation to really get plans in motion within the Order of Phoenix wouldn't have been as strong as it was after suffering such a devastating loss. OTL All in all, Kent and Evera will always be the best dynamic duo, and I will never stop thanking you for bringing them to life in such a beautiful way!! <3 And I guess I don't know if they'll make cameos in UFF, but I'd love to know what happened to Drake and Jemma (and even little Roderick from H:aH, LOOOL, if you ever got to planning his future XD) after the events of CtF if you have that information readily available. ^^; If not, no worries!! I'm just very attached to my original trio, HAHA. :')

I'll be reiterating a lot of stuff I've said in previous comments and/or messages, but Channer was the first character I fully conceptualized when you announced CtF and its plot. I'm honestly drawn to charismatic, outgoing male characters (Kent, Drake, Landon), so writing a coward like Channer was such a fun challenge for me since I got to really step out of my comfort zone. I think part of me subconsciously wanted him to eventually join Adeline in the Underground, since I'm a er for the good side, but I loved that he stayed neutral throughout since I think that's the path truest to his character. It wouldn't have made sense if he had joined up and although it was painful to see him get bested by Yurina, I'm really happy that he's learned to hold his family a little closer now. <3

And now, MY FOX QUEEN, MISS YURINA NAKAYASHI!! I honestly don't enjoy writing Slytherin-like characters, but she was such a fun character to create and I became so attached to her in such a short amount of time. I really think it was her background that cinched it for me. The tiger parent mentality is often lauded by Asian parents as the "right" way to raise your child and while I do think there are some great parts about it, I also think it can be incredibly toxic with the wrong parents and the wrong children. So giving Yurina such a lonely childhood made me sympathize with her so much, even though I knew I was creating an evil character who really shouldn't be redeemed. ^^; I think I would've been really sad to see her caught by Abeni, so I'm stoked that UFF saved her in a way and I can't wait to see what mischief she's planning now!! :D Even though she's probably going to be defeated in UFF, at least she got a happy ending in CtF, HAHA. XD No matter what happens, she'll forever be my queen of darkness. <3

And then we have Odette, the strongest Fugitive out there who's absolutely killing it in life now, which she completely deserves after everything she went through during the war. :') Even though I made her to get tortured, I don't think I envisioned just how much she'd have to go through and my heart broke every time her situation got bleaker. OTL I honestly feared for her life the most out of my main four, especially after Evera died, since I knew that a Fugitive death would be incredibly possible. My other Fugitive characters, Xander and Cassie, were much more capable and resourceful than Odette was, so I figured that if a Fugitive had to die, she'd be the one. OTL So knowing that she ultimately made it out alive, even with immense trauma, made me so happy because I would've been crushed to bits by her death. ^^; Odette's a strong girl who shows that persistence and sheer will are key, and I'm so glad that sunnier skies graced her future. <3

I know I didn't write about everyone, basically focusing on my own characters, but I absolutely loved reading about every single member of the cast and seeing their stories get woven together in this amazing tale. Just as it was for H:aH, it was truly the greatest honor to be part of this story in some way and I'm eternally grateful that I was given the opportunity to help shape the HoM trilogy with my imperfect characters. :') They've all grown immensely over the course of CtF and I'm beyond ecstatic to see what kind of magic you'll weave next with UFF!! x] You know I'll be there writing essays after every chapter, because I can't stop myself from spazzing over even the tiniest details and I'm actually going to cry when it's all over. I would've cried when CtF ended, but knowing that there's still one installment left kept the tears at bay, HAHA. :') But we'll worry about UFF ending when the time comes, since it's just barely begun at this point and it's time to ENJOY what's about to come!! :D

Again, from the bottom of my heart, THANK YOU for writing Confronting the Faceless!! <3 You're forever one of my writing inspirations and a friend I've grown to cherish so much after getting to know you these past few years, and I will never stop saying how grateful and lucky I am to have stumbled across Hogwarts: a History back then. x] You're the absolute best, Dani!! <3
Susan15
#3
Chapter 56: Hi!! Ok I believe I am ready for this overwhelming final chapter ;-;

Honestly, I always thought about what would happen to Ava. A part of me continuously compared her to Claire, but I think Ava is a coward. While Claire didn't agree with the values that most of Slytherins believed, she actually tried to do something about it, and a good part was that she met Bill and had her cousin. Ava had Astoria and her friend wasn't what Ava thought about the others. I think she was obsessed with "I'm better than them" to the point that she disliked Clary who was different from what she hated and also she was shocked about Kingsley, someone she saw as an example, only to find that he was a Slytherin. She put all her hatress into the house instead of growing up and understanding that not everyone is the same.
I liked how everything wrapped for her, it was the best outcome became she herself did not grow up much within all those years. And I'm really happy that she and Anwen got to become friends :)

Theo... I'm so... shocked! And happy? I'm truly glad he managed to find peace with himself (or something similar to that) and that he found someone who went through something "similar" and somehow could understand him and love him by who he is. I actually wonder if he managed to face his father since he always wanted to make him proud on top of everything and honestly I wonder if he got to see his uncle getting arrested, because well he deserved that! And I'm so happy that Kent was the best man! Ok I'm happy by how everything just went, Kingsley too. And I'm so so proud of Max and it was great to see him and Claire at Theo's wedding. I hope Theo and Val can make things work and finally forgive themselves.

Aiden as a grandpa is the strawberry on top of the ice cream xD Mia is so cute and YES ONE OF MY SHIPS SAILED!! I'm so happy Logan and Susan got together! And am I sensing a rivalry between Albus and Mia? xD Or maybe something more? :p I'm so happy and proud that Aiden was able to retire and be happy, he deserves and honestly he is one of my favourite characters. It was not easy to be a adoptive father and now he became a proud grandfather, I'm so happy for him.

Minki and Padma got together <3 and they had twins omg poor Minki! But I'm so happy and proud that he was able to follow his dream even if it was smaller than his bigger one. Oh my and Terry and Parvati wow I wasn't expecting that! Friends becoming lovers is something I live for haha. I'm so happy that everything worked out. I know that he is probably the most neutral character in the story, I don't remember, was he in the battle?

Odette! And she is the final pov ;-; Omg Dean got married and they became friends, that's so great. I wouldn't have guessed that Dean would marry a muggle! Dirk would be proud of how both of them grown up so much after everything that happened. I'm so proud of Odette and happy too, she deserves all the happiness in this world!

I can't believe this story just ended. I believe I can speak by everyone that we became attached to these characters and I'm not ready to say goodbye. I love every single character and I believe you made such an incredible story that I don't have enough words to express what I feel. Thank you so much for your time, passion and for making this amazing story and capturing our hearts. You are a great writer and I hope you feel proud of yourself just like I'm proud of you :)

I hope you have a great weekend and honestly I'm making fingers crossed to see them somehow again in UFF because I think I'll miss some of them too much xD
Thank you so much and see you Sunday to see your amazing thoughts and feelings through this story <3. Take care of yourself and have an awesome time :)
Susan15
#4
I'll give you a proper comment about the final chapter but yes please, I'd live to read your thoughts and feelings!
I'm so happy and shocked at the same time with the final chapter, but I will leave it to another time!! I just wanted to let you know how much I loved it and that I really do want to hear what your opinions :)
Have a nice week and I hope to read your feelings and thoughts next sunday :')
luv_kero
2441 streak #5
Chapter 56: Oh my gosh, it's the final epilogue. I'm not ready. OTL

Dang, I legit wasn't expecting Ava to be an ice cream shop owner after twenty years, LOOOL. :P But yikes, I can imagine that leaving Hogwarts definitely turned the "Slytherin=bad" sentiment on its head. I don't blame Ava for thinking that way during her school years, since she was a teenager and she hated not fitting in with her house. But at least she's become more open-minded and chill now, and it does show a lot of her character growth. :) It's also really sweet that she revived Fortescue's ice cream shop, since it's such a cornerstone of Diagon Alley and it broke my heart when Florean disappeared. :'( But omg, I also didn't expect Anwen to have had a whirlwind romance with a Muggle, so I'm glad that she also seems to be a lot more open-minded now as an adult. ^^ Although it that it didn't work out and I hope Anwen is doing okay as a single mother, since I know that can be difficult. >___< The cameos of Albus, Rose, and Scorpius were also super cute and I love that they're this generation's trio, hehe. x]

Oh gosh, Theo looking at little Evan and thinking of his guilt towards Evera's death had me gutted too. Q___Q But also, I'M SCREAMING AT KENT BEING HIS BEST MAN!! AND I'M ALSO SCREAMING AT THEO MARRYING VALERIE???????? FORGET WHAT I SAID ABOUT AVA. THIS IS THE BIGGEST SURPRISE OUT OF ALL OF THE EPILOGUES. I'M SO SHOOK. THIS MIGHT BE THE MOST SHOOK I'VE EVER BEEN. NEVER IN A MILLION YEARS DID I EVER EXPECT VALERIE AND THEO TO END UP TOGETHER. Like it totally makes sense with them bonding over their trauma in this support group and I bet Valerie felt AWFUL for getting caught in Branwen's web after she found out Branwen was a Death Eater. T^T It's so so so cute that Theo and Valerie eventually fell for each other, and I'm so happy that Theo gets to experience this beautiful moment because he deserves it!! And ahhhhh, I love that Kent is Best Man (best boi forever!!) and Evan is the ring bearer (/cries i love this kid so much already help) and Zac also got happily married and Valerie's family is there, and Theo has so many friends and people who care about him. :') AND JUST THAT ENDING, OMG. SHOT ME IN THE HEART. *o* I'M DED FROM HOW CUTE THEY ARE. PROCLAIMING MYSELF AS CAPTAIN OF THIS NEW SHIP NOW, HAHAHA.

Ahhhh, Logan and Susan got together!! x] And Mia, like all the kids, sounds so adorable and Aiden is definitely best grandpa!! ^^ And ooh, looks like Oliver is teaching at Hogwarts now after retiring from the professional circuit?? :D Gah, that reminds me that he's also old now too. OTL And omg, I'm ded at Mia and Albus having a Quidditch rivalry. XD Try-outs will be a battlefield this year with those two gunning for positions, HAHA. And LOOOOOL, I also wasn't expecting that kiss comment from Mia. :P I imagine Albus will definitely be a heartthrob, especially when he gets older, and Mia will be one of many who have a crush on young Potter, LOLOLOL. But ahhhh, so happy that Aiden has such a beautiful family and that he's enjoying life so much now!! He completely deserves it after everything he went through!! And I also love that Ava made an appearance at the end, even though they never actually met in the main story, since everyone's stories are ultimately tied together in this epic. :)

Haha, definitely not surprised that Minki opened up a dance studio. XD He really suffered the least overall out of everyone in CtF, I think. Him and Venus. And awww, so cute that he and Padma ended up having twins!! x] And ooh, Padma is also a teacher now?? :D What kind?? (also there's a tiny typo where you wrote parvati instead of padma and i was like, wait which twin is which?? is padma the gryff and parvati the ravenclaw?? XD) And awwww, I wasn't expecting Terry and Parvati to get married, but I can totally see them together and it's so cute that the two best friends each got married to one of the twins, HAHA. :P They're all one big happy family now!! ^^ Minki and Padma's banter is also so cute, and I love how chill Minki is now in comparison to how he was in seventh year. :') And ooh, what does Terry do in the Department of Transportation?? Guess he followed the more traditional path of working for the Ministry while Jerome went traveling, LOOOOL. XD

And now, we're here at last at the final epilogue. T^T Odette was the last of my main characters submitted to CtF, she was the last POV chapter of the story (and the last Fugitive to be rescued), and now she's the last of the epilogues. But that doesn't mean she's last in my heart, because she's far from it!! <3 I figured she would eventually strike up a friendship with Dean, since they both had the connection of being on the run with Dirk at some point, and I bet they've shared a lot of stories about Dirk with each other over the years. :) My heart hurts knowing that Odette still suffered so much for so long, even though it's completely understandable that she wouldn't have mentally healed in an instant. That's just not possible when you've gone through what she did. And ahhhhh, HARRY COMING THROUGH TO GIVE HER A CHANCE MAKES ME SO HAPPY!! TRULY AN ICON. AND AHHHH, SO SO SO PROUD OF ODETTE FOR BECOMING HEAD OF THE IMPROPER USE OF MAGIC OFFICE!! *o* SHE OVERCAME ALL OF THE OBSTACLES LIFE THREW HER WAY AND WE LOVE SEEING FEMALE MUGGLEBORNS GETTING RIGHTFULLY RECOGNIZED FOR THEIR WORK IN THE MINISTRY!! x] Again, restating what I said in Kent's epilogue, I completely relate to Odette and Dean talking to Dirk's gravestone so this definitely hit home for me. It's a way to stay connected with them, even though they've passed, and I think it's very powerful that Dirk was able to create a very unique bond between Odette and Dean, even though he had long since passed. :) And I love that the ice skating figurine managed to survive the war!! It's definitely a beautiful, subtle reminder of the past before the war. ^^ And ahhhhh, that final sentence really pulled at my heartstrings. :') Everything is going to be just fine, Odette!! You've made it this far and you're only going to continue climbing to the top!! <3

Also, a big resounding YES to your A/N!! I'd love an Afterwords chapter!! :D I'll save my final CtF comment for then, hehe. ^^
Susan15
#6
Chapter 55: Hi!!

Omg yes! Venus had her dream come true, I'm so proud of her!
Oh and is she getting interested in that man?? :p
I kind of imagined her with someone from work since she would probably be a professional most of the time and she wouldn't go out on dates with just anyone, especially because she would care a lot about her job and would dedicate 100% of her time to that, so I truly see things work out between them :)

Tangi!! Our precious child who is not a child anymore :') I'm so glad she and Xander kept their friendship and managed to still be a part of each other's life!
Aw and Hazel made it out alive! And I can definitely imagine their marriage :) I'm also so happy that Clary and Kingsley got married too, like omg yes!

Gabe!! I truly thought that he was the groom!! I was shipping him with Romilda ;-; but it's still good that they kept being friends all this time. Same goes for Nathan, I'm truly happy that the two of them kept their friendship after all this time! Gabe also speaking in french with Fleur was just perfect haha.

Kent!! Aww I love the name Evan as I bet Evera would love it! He truly acts like a proud dad! And Tori already grown up omg ;-;. Why am I imagining those two in Hogwarts having the time of their lives? Haha. Kent is now a married man with two beautiful kids and I bet he feels the happiest man on Earth. Evera would be really proud of him. The final scene is just heartbreaking :') farewell Evera.

And finally but not last, Audrey!! I'm so glad that she and Percy got serious and started having a life together and forming a family. Their daughter Mai is really energetic haha. And I'm so glad to see that Audrey and Python still remained friends! Omg Lucy... that hit my poor heart ;-; I bet Lucas would feel proud and happy for her. I can imagine little Lucy in Hogwarts as a happy kid and perhaps who knows, maybe she would also become a healer! And Python becoming her godmother is just amazing!

I can't believe that next chapter is the last ;-; it's been a long journey and to see that everyone have grown up and becoming happier (even Yurina haha) is so heartwarming and we became attached to all of them so it will be hard to say goodbye. I hope that maybe some of them may make a cameo in UFF :')
I'm preparing tissues for the last chapter which will take another 10 years after this one and since it's set prior to the UFF events, I'm quite curious!

Thank you for this chapter, for the "romantic and couples" chapter haha. It's good to see everyone getting their dreams came true and them having their own families.
I hope you have an incredible week, great classes and I wish you everything the best :) Rest well and take good care of yourself.
I will see you later for the story's finale ;-; see ya~ :)
luv_kero
2441 streak #7
Chapter 55: Good on Venus for becoming the youngest ever Unspeakable!! Just like Rajani, we love seeing female Slytherins achieving their goals!! ^^ At the beginning of the story, I would've never expected Venus to be working in the Love Chamber. But after her work with identifying the loss of hope during the war, it does make sense that she'd end up in the chamber that's all about unraveling the mystery behind emotion. And omg, I wasn't expecting Cadfael to be an Unspeakable as well!! :D He's so much more chill now after his angsty Hogwarts days. XD Hopefully life has been much kinder to him since then. :') And ooooh, do I spy some sparks flying between him and Venus?? :P I can definitely see them together, bonding over their Slytherin days at Hogwarts, both of them with their air of mystery and very small social circles, haha. And since Unspeakables can't really share what goes on with their work, I imagine it'd be nice to be with someone who'll understand any workplace frustrations and such. ^^

Awwwww, love that Xander and Matangi are still so close after the war!! x] And yaaaay, so glad that Hazel survived and is thriving now!! :D It's so awesome to see that she's become an activist and hopefully things change for the better for the LGBTQ+ community with her leading the charge. :) And omg, Kingsley and Clary made up and married each other!! Ahhhhh, that's so sweet!! ^^ Wow, look at Clary, going from worrying about her grades in Hogwarts, to a bittersweet relationship with Lenox, to being one of the best Auror trainers in the Ministry, to being a member of the Underground, to becoming the Minister of Magic's wife while also being the Head of Magical Law Enforcement!! Again, we love seeing successful female Slytherins killing it in life!! :D And yesss, Xander is gonna be amazing in his new job and I'm so happy he's ending his dueling career on such a high note!! :D And ahhhh, Matangi and Hazel's wedding will be absolutely beautiful, and I really hope they'll be able to wed soon!! x]

Haha, you really threw me for a loop there in thinking that Gabe was the groom. XD I wonder who David is and how Romilda met him. :P But it's awesome to see that Gabe, Nathan, and Romilda are still best friends and as close as ever after all these years. ^^ And ooh, love the little bonding moment between Gabe and Fleur!! :D And also, dang, it's very cool that Gave is working as an investigative reporter. I definitely wasn't expecting that to be his career, since I thought he might go the Auror route or something similar. He was such an explosive kid, always gunning for justice. :P But I can see why he'd choose investigative reporting instead, especially since it does have a lot of freedom and traveling is so much fun. ^^ And he still gets to pursue justice, albeit in a more roundabout manner, LOOOL. And I guess he's going the Charlie route and staying a happy bachelor for the rest of his life, which is awesome and I'm glad he's happy without needing a partner to fulfill him. :)

Oh wow, another Weasley kid to add to the clan. XD They just don't stop coming. :') And it's funny that Mai is so different in temperament from her parents and Percy must have his hands full trying to make sure she doesn't upend everything in their lives. :P And it's so cute that Audrey Caldwell is still known as Python, even after all these years, HAHA. It's definitely a very cool nickname, even without the Underground attachment, so I can see why she'd keep it, LOOOOL. And omg, ahhhh, it's so sweet that Audrey decided to name Lucy after Lucas. T^T He really meant a lot to both her and Percy, so it's very beautiful that they're choosing to honor him through the newest addition to their family. :) He still lives in everyone's hearts, even though he's long gone now, and I'm sure he would've loved doting on Mai and Lucy if he had survived. >___< And I just realized that this means Audrey will have a pre-teen at home and a teenager at Hogwarts while she's dealing with stuff in UFF, LOL. What a busy woman. :')

And oh my gosh, Kent, my lovely boy, I don't think I'm ready to let go of him yet. Q___Q He's one of my absolute favorite OCs and I'm so happy I got a opportunity to expand on him for this story. <3 Like he was already an amazing side character that I loved to bits, but getting the chance to see him under the spotlight made me so incredibly happy, despite everything that happened to him during the war. :') And awww, Tori's a teenager now and I love how sassy she's become. XD Reminds me a lot of Holly in H:aH, LOLOLOL. :P And omg, so cute that she considers Jemma an aunt too, and I'm so so curious to know how Jemma and Drake are doing nowadays!! ^^ And omg, Ebony is such a beautiful name for Holly's daughter, hehe. x] It's awesome that Kent and Willow were able to find their way back to each other, even though it was so rough. Totally understandable that they broke up after the war. Kent was still grieving the loss of Evera and Willow then had to go through the exact same thing with Laurel. They definitely needed to grow separately as they processed their grief. You don't want to be at 50% when you're dating someone, using them to fill that other 50%. You want to be at 100% and dating another person who's at 100% for it to be a healthy, long-lasting relationship. At least that's my belief, LOL, although I don't have any personal experience to go off of (so who knows if I'm spouting nonsense). ^^; But Evan is such a great name, and Evera would've loved him and Sammy to pieces. x] And oh my gosh, my heart is dying because the end of Kent's epilogue is at Evera's grave. T^T I'll be very honest here, I talk a lot to the gravestone of one of my loved ones (and I use it as proxy for the other gravestones that I can't physically visit), so Kent talking to Evera this way was something I wholly related to. And my heart is breaking all over again, because I miss Evera so much and I don't think I'll ever get over her death. But I will stay strong, because she was a strong girl and Kent is staying strong too. I hope there're only clear skies for him for the rest of his life, even though I know things will get crazy with raising two boys in the house and there's still UFF's events to come ten years later. ^^; And omg, I just realized that Evan (and maybe Sammy) will be at Hogwarts when UFF starts!! XD Not that it's super relevant in the grand scheme of things, LOL, but I will have fun imagining the newest crop of Sylvesters at the best school in the world, having shenanigans of their own. :') And I'm just really really really happy that Kent got a happy ending, because he deserves it and I love him so much. He and Evera will always be my favorite pair of siblings, forever and ever, and I'm so happy that their bond will never be broken, even by death. <3

OMG, the final epilogue is coming soon and it's set right before UFF!! :D I'm not ready at all for CtF to end though. OTL But I'm also super excited to see the five remaining POVs and catch up with them twenty years later. ^^
Susan15
#8
Chapter 54: Hi!! Sorry for taking so long to comment!

First of all, my heart is hurting for Lucas. He was one of my favourite characters and honestly I feel like since half of the story he was making a rough path and the signals to his tragedy were there ;-; His last pov and Odette's pov showed how he was overworking and not taking care of himself. I liked him a lot, but somehow I feel like I knew that he would have a bad ending. I'm glad he had a painless passing and I'm sad that he didn't do a check up with Python because maybe he could have survived, but that's so Lucas.. And I'm really sad for his mother, she suffered so much and losing a son is like losing a part of her, especially since it's not natural. Oh my ;-; rest in peace Lucas.

Oh Channer ;-; poor boy, he must feel so guilty. But we all never know what is going to happen tomorrow so it's normal that we don't say "I love you" everyday. But of course it's truly painful and the last interaction is always what is pressed in our minds ;-; I know you will be able to process your grief and you will be better with time. You have your mother and sister, you will be fine!

I'm so glad that Max made it out alive. Now Claire and Max can really talk and pour their hearts to one another. They just "lost" their father who will be imprisoned after waking up (if he eventually wakes up), so they just have one another and their mother. And I truly understand what she means that everyone is biased and already settled their minds that everyone in the losing side is guilty. Fitz!! I'm so glad to see him!!! And I'm super glad that he is fine!!! Willow and Theo omg guys ;-; I'm so proud of Theo to try helping out and prove that everyone deserves a second chance like he had, because of their family environment and ideals. And I bet Willow feels like she compensated a lot from what she did. Everything is good now, I'm happy for them.

Oh Farrah :( you need time to heal my poor child. I understand that Christian is very important to her but he wouldn't understand what she has been through and she definitely needs to have a support near her who truly understands her and even though I know that Christian was what kept her sanity, she created a version of him in her mind who probably doesn't exist, and she needs time for herself now. You can get well child ;-;.

Yurina queen of the evil! Always causing trouble, really haha. Abeni must have a huge grudge on Yurina, because she is quite a pain in the haha. Let's see how Yurina will cause problems in Uff because I know you're involved young lady!

Wow next epilogue is 10 years from here! We're going to see the Hogwarts kids as grown ups!! I hope Venus and Minki managed to follow their dreams! I'm quite curious how Ava and Gabe became as adults haha. I bet everyone else is doing well now :)
I can't wait for the next epilogue!!
I hope you have a nice week, take care of yourself, rest well and see you later ;)
petitreveur
#9
Chapter 54: I told myself I was going to properly comment at the end of the three-part epilogue but I know I had to drop a comment after I read the first POV. NOOOOO LUCAS NOOOOOOO :"( Why do all my fav characters have to die hurhur /cries/ First Evera, then Laurel and now Lucas. My heart was literally squeezed tight when I read the line "He doesn't wake up" and I'm like NO NO NO, THAT CAN'T BE TRUE :"( I should have realised that foreshadowing when he was feeling way too exhausted than ever, that he w-wouldn't make it pass the night. Idk why but his death hits so much harder than anyone else's?? Lucas was (fk, I have to use the word 'was' now) such a golden boy, he did so much as a Healer and contributes sooo much as part of the Underground!! Although he didn't "fight" in the war, he was a true war hero!! I guess it's...relieving that his death wasn't a painful one and he passed in the comforts of his house....he will definitely be sorely missed :"( I can't imagine how broken his mother would be when she realises that her son is never going to wake up again >.< OH GOSHH, THAT START ALREADY SCREAMS DEPRESSING!! (I literally paused for five whole minutes before going on to the next POV)

Glad to see that Channel survived the war!! That sibling dynamic between Channel and Adeline has drastically changed. Damn, those two siblings must feel rather awkward and apologetic to each other but I feel it's neither their fault that things turned out that way. It's the awful circumstances that caused things to spiral out of control >.< It's so heartwarming to see Adeline and their mother visiting Channel in the hospital. , Channel must be feeling even more horrible and guilty for not actively doing anything during the war after learning that their father had passed away in Azkaban. Despite the awkwardness between the siblings, I'm sure Adeline never actually blamed Channel for ousting her and that's what family is all about. They are there for you no matter how much you might have forsaken them and at the end of the day, they still worry about you and welcome you back with open arms ^^ Things are never the same but Channel still has Adeline and their mother and things will get better with time :-)

Another POV that reflects the phrase "blood is thicker than water". Even though Max was a Death Eater, Claire can't bring herself to hate him or cut off ties with him. Sure, she does not agree with his dealings but after all, he is still her brother, her family. That conflicted feelings within her must be chewing her up for she knows that her brother deserved to be punished for the greater good but at the same time, Max is her brother, they are related by blood, and it must be hard to see him locked up in Azkaban (when their father was already sentenced while in a coma, big oof!) That grey area would always be grey ^^" Oh wow, I would have never thought Willow to be on defence (should I say that Max is very lucky to have Claire as his sister? LOL) and Theo to be the final witness!! Looks like Max doesn't have to live in a crammed cell anymore :')

Poor Farrah :'( She is suffering so much but I'm glad to see the tiniest progress that she is making since the day she was admitted into Mungo's. It that she doesn't really have any close friends around her except for Clara as all of her friends are all Muggles who wouldn't be able to understand what she had gone through because of the Statue. And now Clara is feeling slightly wary around her >.< Well, I don't blame Clara, she must be at a huge loss of what to do with someone so utterly broken, she had never been in her situation before and neither is she a trained medical professional. But it's great that Farrah is seeing a therapist and I can tell that Ellie is a good psychiatrist to her. Oh nooo, it must have been a last straw for Farrah when she heard that she's not allowed to see Christian as it was Christian who kept her fighting on for her life in the cells >.< Yet again, Christian prolly wouldn't be able to understand what happened to Farrah as a Muggle. But maybe, it's just the presence of Christian that she needs? Somehow, I don't think that Clara is a mean friend to Farrah or anything, it's just that Farrah is just so delicate right now and Clara obviously can't be there 24/7 for her >.< It's draining for both girls. Perhaps, a longer hospital stay would do them both good? The impact of war is just so harsh :"(

Da boss lady is in the house!! And she is getting straight to work!! With her schemings!! Poor Amos, he is so naive to think that he can get a taste of her LMAO and Yurina is using that to her strength, obviously. And voila, now she has information about Abeni Akingbade, which leads me wondering what exactly happened over the past twenty years?? The Akingbades must be pretty influential people in Nigeria?? And I'm pretty sure Yurina managed to wreck chaos in Nigeria and overthrew the government in some way or another?? I swear this little Japanese lady just doesn't stop :P Abeni must have gone through much turmoil, seeing the UFF's first teaser. Damn, everything is getting juicier and I can't wait for the tea to be spilled xD
luv_kero
2441 streak #10
Chapter 54: Oh man, I should've figured Lucas would end up dying from overwork. :'( The signs were all there, especially during his final main POV. T^T Him overworking himself was a constant theme and it so much that he had to go out this way. It reminds me a lot of karoshi, "overwork death" in Japanese, and I'm just glad that he got one final night with his mother and that he died in the comfort of his home. OTL But oh my god, his mother is going to be absolutely heartbroken when she finds him in the morning and my heart hurts so much for her, because she was probably so thankful that her son wasn't directly on the battlefield, but he ended up being a casualty anyway and she'll still have to bury him with all of the others. T^T In a way, Lucas' death sort of has a numbness to it and both Audreys are probably going to be devastated when they receive the news as well. :'( As well as Percy, Jemma, Jun, and anyone else who knew Lucas. ;~; He was a great guy though and he really did a lot for the war effort. In the end, he definitely died a hero like the others.

Oh my gosh, I've been anticipating the conclusion to Channer's story ever since his final main POV and I'm so glad he's in a much better state than some of the others. <3 Granted, things aren't perfect and they never will be, especially since Timon is dead, but at least he has a chance to make things better and that's what counts the most. Channer is still so young and he has his whole life ahead of him to strengthen the bonds he has with his remaining family members. It's something I'm personally trying to work on as well, although our circumstances are admittedly very different. One thing I definitely fear is leaving things unsaid when it's too late, and my heart hurts so much that Timon and Channer never got to properly bond before Timon died. :'( It's definitely going to weigh on Channer a lot from now on, and I hope that he'll be able to process his grief and regret in a healthy way. On the plus side, I'm so happy that Henry is okay and it's so cool that Adeline stayed with his dad while she was in hiding!! ^^ If anything, maybe Henry and Channer can become eventual friends with Henry easing some of Channer's regrets with stories of Timon in Azkaban and how Timon was always talking about how proud he was of his kids. It won't alleviate all of the pain, but it might help a bit, knowing that even though he never verbally expressed his feelings to his dad, Timon still deeply loved and cared for Channer until the very end. Linette, Adeline, and Channer are definitely going to struggle for years to come, but at least they have each other and that's what matters. <3

Oof, it does that Claire's still stuck between both sides, even after the end of the war. But it's nice to see that short moment between her and Fitzwilliam, and he's grown so much from his school days, ahhhhh :') And oh my, I guess since Claire does technically have a stake in the other side because of her family, what the Order is doing for clean-up probably does feel a lot more harsh to her, even though they probably feel completely justified in doing so. It's a very gray area and at the very least, Willow and Theo came through by helping out, even though they had no obligation to. I do wonder why they did. Maybe it was Holly asking for a favor, since she knew Claire?? Maybe it was just Willow not wanting someone else to lose a sibling after she did?? Maybe it was Theo knowing that Max was like him, brought up with Death Eater ideals but still capable of change?? At the very least, I'm glad that Claire doesn't have to lose a family member who's so precious to her and she's much luckier than most who've been affected by the war.

Oh wow, good to see that Farrah also survived Azkaban!! I'm guessing we'll find out Hazel's fate in Matangi's epilogue. Anyway, it's awesome that Farrah is already seeing a therapist and Ellie sounds wonderful. :) And considering how broken Farrah already was back in February, I'm not surprised she was even worse by the time all of the prisoners were released from Azkaban. Her fantasies were probably the only thing keeping her going while she was at Azkaban. x___x But yikes, I don't know if a happy ending with Christian is in the cards. Considering what she's been through, she'll really need someone by her side who'll understand the extent of this war and since Christian is a Muggle, I don't think he can be that person, realistically. >___< Maybe if this were set during UFF's time with magic finally being revealed, Christian could become her caretaker and they could have their happily ever after. But considering how Clara is Farrah's best friend and Clara's reaction to Farrah's breakdowns, I doubt Christian will be able to last long either. >___>

And finally, my beautiful and strong queen of darkness, Miss Yurina Nakayashi!! <3 Going to America was definitely the right call, HAHA. (Since no pandemic to worry about and the US was in a much better state back then OTL If this were 2020, I'd be like, NOOOOO, GO BACK TO ASIA!! ANYWHERE BUT THE US!!) And yesssss, what a QUEEEEEN, living in the lap of luxury in Vegas!! XD Love love love that she's already scheming and recruiting people to her cause!! She isn't wasting any time in making plans for world domination. XD And ooooooh, I've been so so so curious to find out about the bit with soap operas that you asked me about a while back and it's so cool to finally see it here!! :D And oof, looks like Amos is her newest puppet and I love her puppeteering so much!! XD She'd never give him a second glance if it weren't for the information he's gathering for her. He's too much of a lust-driven doormat and Yurina is WAY above that. x] If she ever does fall in love, it'll be with a man who can provide a challenge and keep up with her intellectually. He'll have to REALLY impress her with his cunning and capabilities, and men like that are few and far in between, especially relative to Yurina. She has no time to deal with small fries like Amos and he's probably only got an Avada Kedavra in his future once she's done with him. :') But ooh, Abeni better watch out since Yurina has her eye on her now!! The fox is on the prowl and no one is safe now, hehe <3

Ooh, super curious to see what life will be like ten years from now!! Definitely a lot happier than this, since most people will have healed considerably by then. :') And wizards probably won't be affected by everything that's happening in the Muggle world, LOL (collapse of the housing bubble, Great Recession, etc.) :P