Chapter Five

Confronting the Faceless 💀 Complete
October 3, 1997
"Think of the person who lives in disguise, who deals in secrets and tells naught but lies"
 
The Ministry takeover by the Deatheaters had, for the most part, been a very quiet affair. This was due in large part to the fact that the Dark Lord had several supporters already within the ranks of the Ministry, who were able to use bureaucracy rather than force to silently move the government in the direction they wanted.
 
Of course, those sympathetic allies didn't end up moving up the ranks by accident. No, that was the work of the Dark Lord's primary Ministry insider, who even after the takeover is keeping her ear to the ground and her eyes peeled for anyone who might be interested in helping her master - and who might be interested in trying to revolt.
 
Branwen Avery is easily the highest ranking Deatheater with no Dark Mark on her skin. She mingles amongst the general populace, analyzing her fellow Ministry workers and mentally categorizing how much of a threat they are. If not for her, the takeover might not have happened - and she's quite aware of that.
 
Indeed, to her mind she's the one who's keeping things running on the ground level, maintaining her role as just another poor employee, scared of the new regime but putting on a brave face to get through the work day.
 
In the two months since the takeover Branwen has maintained her old role of informant, mingling with the workers and pointing out the potential troublemakers to Yaxley, her new superior (and doesn't he love reminding her of that, the arrogant cad). The best part is that she doesn't have to maintain her old position anymore as a secretary in the Minister's offices - she can now wander freely listening to conversations and making polite small talk with her newly terrified coworkers.
 
Her favorite part is how absolutely no one has picked up on her allegiances, so people are a little more comfortable speaking openly to and around her, which helps her job tremendously.
 
The first Friday of October starts typically enough - she takes the new entrance into the Ministry, exchanges pleasantries with whichever coworkers happen to be nearby, and then heads up to the Minister's office in a pretense of her former employment.
 
She nods politely to the other secretaries in the office and heads straight into the Minster's office, shooting her usual teasing glance over at Weasley as she passes him.
 
The kid is ridiculous with how far backwards he's willing to bend to get people of authority to like him, and Branwen does find the look of annoyance he gets when he thinks no one is looking and there's someone of a higher secretarial rank than he is in the room quite funny. Still, Branwen can't fault his ambition or his organization so she's nice to him, especially as Yaxley has labelled him as someone to keep an eye on. Branwen disagrees - the kid is too far up his own arse to try anything, and it's very clear his family is uninterested in his situation or Arthur - who she has deemed a risk - would have tried some sort of communication by now.
 
"Good morning Ms. Avery. Mr. Yaxley has requested your presence at the advisory meeting this afternoon." Weasley greets her stiffly, clearly biting down on his annoyance at not also being invited into said meeting.
 
Branwen frowns - she usually briefs Yaxley after work hours, so as to not be associated with him to closely - it could damage her credibility and trustworthiness among their coworkers, destroying her ability to do her job in the process.
 
"Noted, though I do hope it doesn't take long, I have a full pile of paperwork I want to finish before the end of the day for once." She sighs, giving Weasley a knowing smile. "I don't suppose-"
 
"I say no every day Ms. Avery, and again today I'm saying no to your request for me to do some of your work. I do have my own." He cuts her off irritably, and she laughs and ruffles his hair.
 
"I know kid, but it's tradition now! See you around." She trots past him and into the Minister's office, mood lightened somewhat. It's always fun to mess with those people who think they know everything when they can't see past the end of their own noses.
 
Minister Thicknesse is mindlessly signing papers that are being placed in front of him by Dolores Umbridge, who looks annoyed at the intrusion until she sees who it is. "Ah, Ms. Avery, good morning dear." She smiles, an expression that Branwen is convinced her face wasn't built to make, but Branwen smiles back all the same.
 
"Good morning Madame Umbridge! So sorry if I'm interrupting, Minister Thicknesse told me last night he'd get a few files signed for me and I was hoping to pick them up and take them to the second floor - just a few new guidelines for the detaining of Undesirables. I wanted to make sure they're put into place as soon as possible." She puts on an expression of apology paired with an air of eagerness and as always Umbridge eats it right up. Really the woman is painfully simple - she was the first person Branwen had pegged as a potential ally for their cause.
 
Umbridge titters lightly. "Such a wonderful work ethic you have! Of course dear, the signed papers are in the out bin, grab whatever you need." She goes back to the Minister then, who had been sitting dumbly with a blank smile on his face for the entire exchange.
 
Branwen flicks through the outbox, grabs a few files that will get her access to most of the Ministry, and then heads back out, ruffling Weasley's untamable hair as she passes him, just to tick him off and boost her own mood a bit more.
 
She does head down to the Auror offices first to hand over the documents addressing the new Undesirable approach - Umbridge is an idiot and power blind but she'd still notice if no new guidelines were put into practice, particularly after Branwen specifically brought her attention to it. Besides, she wants to check in with her favorite flight risks and determine if they're planning anything that should be mentioned to her boss.
 
The Auror team she was hoping to see is in the training room when Branwen arrives - she can tell because the younger secretaries are away from their desks and giggling together. She gives them a cheerful half wave and trots past, smiling to herself as the group scrambles to look like they're busy. Branwen honestly isn't sure what everyone thinks her job is, but obviously it's apparent she does have some sort of authority, which isn't a terrible thing (though she does make a mental note to get to know the Auror secretaries a bit better - can't have them associating her too closely with the current leadership).
 
She waits outside the door of the training room, tapping on it twice with her wand to let the supervisor inside know to wrap up their current session. She'd learned very early on in her job not to simply walk in on an ongoing session - most of the time it works out fine, but it only takes one near-miss to keep her cautious. She simply doesn't have the time to take a leave, medical or otherwise, especially in the current situation. The Dark Lord needs her eyes and ears in the Ministry, at least until every potential rebellion has been rubbed out. Then she imagines she'll get to take a nice early retirement and rub it in her father and brother's faces how much more useful she's been to the Dark Lord than either of them could ever hope to be.
 
She's smiling when the door swings open, so naturally the Auror trainer on the other side smiles in response.
 
"Good morning Branwen, got the daily updates for us then?" The stockily built dirty blonde questions as the team she'd been working with files out and head for the water cooler. "Hey, back in five ya lumps!" She shouts at them before looking back to Branwen expectantly.
 
"Got it in one Travers." Branwen confirms, handing Clary Travers - top trainer and sympathetic enough to the Dark Lord's cause that Branwen long ago wrote her off as not likely to cause any problems - the documents from Thicknesse's office, which the woman accepts and skims through before nodding.
 
"I can incorporate this into most of today's sessions no problem, with a full integration by Monday." She promises, then turns towards one of the secretaries. "Hey, Goldstein! Get this filed properly, would you? And make sure Department Head Yaxley is made aware of the changes."
 
One of the younger secretaries - she looks maybe nineteen at the most - scurries over and collects the files from Branwen, who eyes her curiously.
 
"New hire or transfer?" She asks the girl with a light, inviting smile. Why would Yaxley bring in someone new without telling me? Self-important cad is trying to trip me up - nice try. I'm the best for a reason.
 
Goldstein startles at being addressed, looking over at Travers uncertainly and then clearing when she gets a nod from the superior.
 
"New hire ma'am." She declares. "Just started yesterday."
 
"Well best of luck, this is a great department to build up from, but you've gotta make a good impression. First rule, never listen to Travers here about anything, she's lying."
 
"Hey!" Travers protests, but she's grinning. "Fair advice though, I do heckle newbies."
 
Goldstein gives a nervous half-smile, and Branwen pats her shoulder lightly.
 
"Hey, I started just downstairs back when I was fresh out of Hogwarts - if you have any questions or anyone gives you a hard time don't hesitate to come to me." She caps off the offer with a warm, open expression and she can see the moment Goldstein buys it.
 
"Thank you Ms. Avery." She clutches the files to her chest. "I, um, I should get back to work then."
 
"Best of luck!" Branwen says and then waves to Travers before heading towards the water cooler. She lost precious observation time on Goldstein but she's nothing if not fantastic at getting a lot out of a little and really Yaxley needs to stop basing hiring decisions on pissing her off because Goldstein is giving off major 'intent to rebel' vibes that she'll happily rub in Yaxley's face during the meeting later.
 
Luckily the Hit Wizard squad that had been training is still getting water (and flirting with the secretaries who were all suddenly thirsty as well). "Good morning Sylvester." She smiles teasingly at her new target. Kent Sylvester, twenty-seven year old former Gryffindor and exactly Branwen's type if she's honest, if not for the clear propensity towards defecting.
 
He raises an eyebrow, charm flipping on as soon as she approaches. A seven year hasn't yet stopped him from responding to her flirtations, which has worked well since people tend to give a lot more away when they think there's an attraction involved. "Ms. Avery, pleasure to see you again. You're in here a lot, aren't you?"
 
She grins at him coyly, coming to a stop in front of him and placing a hand on her hip, leaning just so and knowing it's worked when his eyes flick over her form. "Just doing my job. The Minister's office has me running all around most days, I'd complain more if it wasn't toning my calves so well." She bats her eyes for effect, studying his expression carefully for any flicker when the Minister is mentioned.
 
There's the usual annoyance and dislike that's quickly crushed, but otherwise nothing new, which means he won't be acting just yet. Content with that information Branwen lets the flirting go only a few minutes more before waving him off and giving him a good show on her way out. He's easier to read if she keeps him sweet after all.
 
She flicks through her nabbed files and decides to head down the hall to check in on her highest risk priority.
 
She strides through the door of the Office for the Detection and Confiscation of Counterfeit Defensive Spells and Protective Objects with as much style as she can manage in her drab Ministry robes.
 
The secretary for the department (it's too small to warrant more than a single secretary, though it isn't the smallest office in the Department of Law Enforcement either) glances up at her entrance and rolls his eyes upon seeing her.
 
"More new legislation?" He asks dryly.
 
"This is standard for power shifts and you know it Jenson, you've been here almost as long as I have." Branwen drawls, dropping the required files on his desk. "Weasley in? Yaxley's been up in our office whining like a little about improper integration in this office and I'm sick of it."
 
"Out to lunch. I can send him up when he gets back if you want." Jenson offers, but Branwen grimaces and shakes her head.
 
"Your eminent Department Head is dragging me into a bull staff meeting today to take the minutes so don't bother. I'll come by again tomorrow." She sighs. It's less than ideal that Arthur Weasley is out, but it's an early lunch he's taken which is definitely suspect. She'll mention it to Yaxley at the meeting if he asks. Or if he doesn't - she's still pretty peeved over the Goldstein hiring and feels that giving him a return routine disruption is only appropriate.
 
Jensen does wince at that. "Good luck then. I'll still tell Mr. Weasley to maybe hold off on lunch tomorrow until you get here?" He offers, and Branwen rewards him with one of her rare, genuine smiles.
 
"Would you? That would be amazing. I'll see you tomorrow then." And get an updated reading on Weasley Sr. - the man is like a fish with how he's managed to slip away from me all week.
 
She at least knows the avoidance isn't intentional - between Jensen being content to follow the new regime with little more than an eyebrow raise (for a Ravenclaw, the man has very little in the way of intellectual curiosity) and the fact Weasley still shows her pictures of his kids (the wedding photographer was good, she has to admit) there's no way either has figured out she's with the Dark Lord. That doesn't stop the continued missing each other from being extremely irritating.
 
She heads up to the tenth floor next - she had been directly involved in selecting who was moved over to the Muggleborn Registration Commission but she still keeps her eyes open for revolt. The tenth floor secretaries are in an ideal position to cause sabotage that could stall the new regime for months.
 
She glares at the back of Runcorn's head as she walks in and then quickly corrects her expression into something neutral. She knows her coworker has managed to get himself rather thoroughly hated by his department so Branwen plays the roll of someone equally angered by his mere presence. In reality she finds Runcorn to be more amusingly pathetic than anything, but she's always liked him well enough to have placed him as one of her fellow insiders prior to the takeover.
 
"Lunch break." She tells Runcorn blandly, and he rolls his eyes but hits the bell nonetheless. He definitely knows lunch doesn't start for another thirty minutes. He also knows that Branwen doesn't care and can get him demoted quite easily.
 
The secretaries in the room all happily drop their paperwork and head past Branwen to the lifts. She waits patiently until she finds the person she's looking for and falls into step next to her.
 
"Heya Val, got time to talk?" She asks sweetly, already knowing the answer.
 
Valerie Phipps is a year younger than Kent Sylvester and thus eight years Branwen's junior, but she's still the insider's favorite person to get lunch with. In the five years that they've been friends, Valerie has never once suspected Branwen's loyalties, and it's a nice ego boost to spend part of each day with Val.
 
"Of course. The usual tea shop?" She suggests. "I'm about ready to pass out, I need some caffeine."
 
"Rough morning?" Branwen asks sympathetically. If she's honest, maintaining a friendship with Valerie had stopped being useful once Yaxley had secured his Imperius on Pius Thicknesse; however, Valerie is the sort of Ravenclaw who prides herself on her observant nature and ability to understand people and situations in their entirety before engaging with them. As such it is particularly satisfying to so completely deceive her.
 
The two women head down to the atrium and take the wizarding exit before Apparating to Diagon Alley a few streets over. Rosa Lee Teabag is usually pretty quiet around lunchtime as they don't serve full meals, but that's never stopped Valerie and Branwen from having their lunch breaks there almost everyday.
 
During the trip Valerie explains (she never rants, which Branwen does find a rather impressive trait and is part of the reason Valerie is so tolerable) her frustration over the continued failure of the filing system. Apparently her deskmate had fixed it for a short while before someone went in and purposefully messed with it a week before.

Branwen frowns and files the information away as she expresses her sympathy. Clearly she'll need to arrange a visit to records in the coming days to determine if anyone there could be the culprit. She admittedly hasn't gone down there quite as much as she, apparently, should have been due to the dark and damp atmosphere always lingering around the place.
 
In turn she shares carefully selected truths with Valerie about her own day so far, including an eye roll over the meeting.
 
"Honestly, Yaxley acts like he runs the Minister's Department sometimes. Last week he had Weasley running half a dozen errands for him and put the entire office behind by two days." She states irritably.
 
Valerie snorts. "What does that say about your office that a teenager being busy put you all behind?" She points out with a wry grin, and Branwen laughs and concedes the point.
 
"He's twenty-one, but fair."
 
Branwen lets herself run on autopilot as she chats with Valerie over their tea (and mini sandwiches), mentally running through each person she's seen so far today and trying to narrow her list of who else she needs to chat with before heading home for the day (Branwen never stays past five, it wouldn't do for her cover). Stupid Yaxley and his stupid meeting eating up most of her afternoon - she'll have to select her targets based on necessity for her image over actual need at this point, which is always frustrating.
 
Lunch with Valerie goes a little over an hour and then they head back to the Ministry.
 
"Good luck in the meeting." Valerie offers as they part on the lift, and Branwen makes a face that gets the other woman laughing before the doors close, separating them. Branwen promptly drops her expression and strides into the boardroom where all the most important tactical meetings take place.
 
"The is your problem Corban?" She demands as soon as she's through the doors and has confirmed that only loyal followers of her Lord are present.
 
"Ah Ms. Avery, good of you to join us. Shall we begin?" The older blond man at the end of the conference table completely ignores the question as he leers over the assembled Deatheaters.
 
Branwen sighs and takes the only available seat, which is next to Albert Runcorn. Also present are Lucius Malfoy (only here to serve as a messenger for dear Bellatrix and their Dark Master back in the Malfoy estate - his family has fallen embarrassingly far), Augustus Rookwood (Currently leading the team trying to hunt down the Potter boy and the Order of the Phoenix who have been weirdly quiet since they moved Potter back in July), her cousin Keaton Avery and his wife Sahana (High ranking Ministry officials in Transportation and Law Enforcement respectively, and two of Branwen's recruits from before the takeover), and of course Yurina Nakayashi (foreign, recruited by the Dark Lord himself, currently puppeting the Head of the Department of International Cooperation and supposedly planning for their expansion beyond England, but the other woman spends more time scaring Ministry workers than actually being useful).
 
"Now that we're all here, I'd like everyone to provide an update on their tasks, and then I have a few additional tasks to establish before we leave. Runcorn, if you please?"
 
Branwen already knows most of what the others will be reporting - Runcorn will talk about the filing system for the Muggleborn Registration Commission being continually messed with, Rookwood will try to make "we still haven't found anything" sound like it's important, Keaton will give an update on the Floo tracking system (no real progress, the best engineers were deemed by Branwen to not be usable - they won't do anything unless pushed, but a move to know exactly who's going where every time a fireplace is activated would probably be the thing), and his wife will only share that prisoner transfers to Azkaban have continued to be successful. It's only Yurina who Branwen properly tunes in for - she's never in the International Cooperation offices since they can't really do anything from there so she isn't up to date with what the young Japanese woman has been up to.
 
"I managed to make contact with Sigrid Eriksen earlier this week but she has no interest in helping our cause. Losing Karkaroff lost us Durmstrang support, this new Headmistress is annoyingly holier-than-thou with her backwards ideas of morals." Yurina declares. "I've got a few other people I can contact in the region, but it will take time and without Durmstrang a lot of northern Europe just became harder to take."
 
"And southern Europe?" Yaxley asks, sounding exactly as unimpressed as Branwen is. Honestly, what good is this woman if she can't even do her job correctly?
 
"Haven't started yet, but they were always going to be more difficult. I have secured a route in Asia once we reach it though." Yurina leans back in her chair smugly and Branwen resists the urge to roll her eyes. No need to piss off the Dark Lord's (inexplicable) favorite before Branwen's own plans are secure.
 
"Very well then. Branwen, anything to report?" Yaxley turns to her, and she sits straight and easily recites her findings from the week.
 
"Thank you Corban." She says smoothly. "As Runcorn mentioned someone has been messing with the files down in Records. I'll be paying them a visit tomorrow to ascertain if it's one of the workers there but based on my previous information I'm doubtful that's the case. The Auror office just hired a new secretary who should be watched closely in the coming weeks - if she does something it will be sooner rather than later. The Aurors themselves are twitchy but as the trainers and superiors are all loyal to us there are major limits to what they can actually accomplish before being taken out. The biggest concern there is the Hit-Wizard team six - a lot of Gryffindors in that group and while we're keeping them sweet it's definitely a ticking time bomb."
 
"My nephew is in that group, I'll be sure to put him on alert as well." Yaxley nods. "If that is all?"
 
Branwen gestures for him to proceed. There are more details of course, but Yaxley gets daily written reports from her so she doesn't need to elaborate here, especially when she has better places to be and the faster this meeting is over the sooner she can get to those places.
 
Yaxley nods slightly in acknowledgement before sitting straight and clearing his throat.
 
"As mentioned twice there has been difficulty with the Commission filing system recently, but this is not the first time the system has been tampered with. Ms. Avery, I expect a thorough review of every Records worker sent to me in the next few days as we believe that there may in fact be someone working from within the Ministry with the intent of sabotage."
 
"With all due respect no one is currently-" Branwen starts, but Yaxley keeps talking over her.
 
"Because of these acts, intentional or not, several Muggleborns have either gone into hiding or successful forged papers and vanished. As such we will be establishing a two-fold approach to correct this oversight." He looks pointedly at Branwen on the last word and she gives him a distinctly unimpressed look.
 
"If you'll allow me to speak?" She drawls, and Yaxley proceeds to make leaning back in his chair appear mocking. Branwen smiles flatly. "As I said before I will be looking over each Records employee in the coming days, but my previous findings in that department would indicate that most likely it's someone outside of the Ministry running the interference. The employees are terrified, and I helped personally select each secretary on the commission. None of them has the emotional wherewithal to rebel."
 
Runcorn clears his throat and Yaxley nods at him to proceed. "I would agree with Ms. Avery on that front. Maybe there's somebody outside the Ministry with connections that could get them in?"
 
"There are plenty of ways to get past security." Keaton Avery agrees. "If we are to properly investigate this matter perhaps there should be a team focused on external parties with ties to the Ministry as well as one on internal?"
 
Yaxley sighs. "Of course, I had already considered all of that." He says irritably.
 
No you didn't. Branwen thinks smugly, pleased with Runcorn and Keaton backing her up. "If I may make a suggestion? I can handle the internal investigation easily in the next few days, but perhaps you could set young Mr. Weasley to assist whoever handles the externals? He's quite good at catching details sir - it was his suggestions after Cresswell escaped custody that made the prisoner transfers more efficient and harder to escape from."
 
Yaxley narrows his eyes at her, clearly ready to argue but thinking the better of it at the last moment. "Yes, excellent idea Ms. Avery. Sahana, I'm placing you in charge of that, please speak with Mr. Weasley before the work day is over."
 
Sahana nods quietly and immediately begins writing on the parchment she'd brought into the meeting. Already planning her attack strategy, Branwen knows. Her cousin had scored well above his league with his wife.
 
"Well then, there is the other situation of the escaped Muggleborns. They are fugitives of the law but they're staying well out of our police force's usual patrol routes. As such I proposed to our Lord to create a specialized team focused particularly on hunting down these fugitives from the law. He agreed and stipulated that Ms. Nakayashi should have time enough to put together such a task force?"
 
Yurina raises an eyebrow. During the discussion she's leaned back in her chair and observed the entire affair with her usual detached amusement. Now she leans forward again. "Well if it's the Dark Lord's request I of course will begin arranging such a group right away." She agrees in that smooth voice Branwen absolutely hates. "Were there any specific guidelines given or am I getting free reign?" Her grin wouldn't be out of place on a starved wolf staring down a wounded deer.
 
Yaxley shakes his head. "You have full access to our resources as needed, just bring them in."
 
Yurina hums and leans back, her eyes narrowed but bright, a cruel smile twisting the corner of .
 
Branwen would feel sorry for the other woman's targets if she cared about them at all, but as things stand she's ready to wrap up the meeting and get back to work, especially that now she has an internal investigation to run (that she knows will turn up empty - mostly she'll be looking for people who could be the connection being used by the true saboteur).
 
They talk for a few more minutes, and then Sahana wants to consult briefly on the external investigation before Branwen can finally make her escape. In those minutes she's decided to just go back up to the desk reserved for her in the Minster's office (all part of her cover) and actually outline a plan of attack. She can chat with her coworkers a bit and see if there's anything suspicious on their level - not likely considering there was a heavy purge among the ranks after Scrimgeour was deposed and disposed of but still worth scanning just so her reports are thorough when she hands them in to Yaxley. She only has an hour and a half left in her work day anyhow, which isn't nearly enough time to do anything else of use.
 
She rides the lift down to the first floor, arranges her expression into one of vague exhaustion and annoyance, and then steps out into the office.
 
She greets a few coworkers distractedly as she hurries to her desk and promptly makes herself look busy, organizing notes from the meeting and scratching out a few new ones for herself. She doesn't worry about hiding her work - her handwriting is intentionally illegible to anyone but herself so no one will realize what she's up to, even if they walk over.
 
She does engage in some small talk, mostly complaining about having to keep meeting notes like she's some sort of lower-level secretary with the other thirty-somethings in the office while continuing to outline a plan of attack for Records in the morning. When the clock hits five she promptly drops her quill, rolls up her parchments, and tosses them into one of her drawers save one (the 'meeting minutes' that are actually a quick report to Yaxley with more detail on her morning escapades) that she tosses onto Weasley's desk instead.
 
"You're staying late again right? Can you just send that to Yaxley before you go? I've got a hot date tonight." She grins and winks at him.
 
Weasley barely looks up. "Fine, good. See you tomorrow."
 
Branwen hums and heads out of the office. All in all not her best day on the job, but at least she has a clear target for the next few days, which should be a fun change of pace.
 
In the meantime, her flat and a nice long bubble bath are waiting for her.
 
Author's Note: Meet the first of our evil lady trio~ Can you guys tell this chapter was written during the holiday rush? ^^'' As you can see things are starting to pick up a bit - while there's definitely still some set up going on the stuff from previous chapters is beginning to have an impact and that will continue as the story progresses! Also there are a few H:aH cameos in this one so hopefully those were well integrated and not jarring or confusing for anybody ^^'' And with that, I'll see you all in 2020! :D
 
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So I'm thinking I might do a final 'afterwords' chapter to share my thoughts and feelings on writing this story, if that's something people would be interested in? I'm also open to answering any lingering questions people might have there as well!

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Chapter 57: Hi!
I'm so sorry for taking so long to comment, but shall we begin!

I swear I should have made a bet omg. The moment I first heard of Python I was like "hmm.. what if she was Percy's Audrey?" And even though I knew that our Audrey would be Percy's girlfriend, I always thought how it would be nice if Python and him were endgame, but honestly... they wouldn't last long haha

I want to thank you for being so passionate about the story and truly understanding the characters and doing your best to give them justice. I loved how you put so much effort on everything!

When I first saw this story I first imagined a muggleborn with a fiery personality so after seeing that Tangi was created you have no idea how happy I was.
Claire was my first character for the story. When I thought about her I wanted a strong woman who was conflicted between her believes and her family, but who definitely couldn't turn a blind eye to people in need. Then I thought if she was an insider probably no one would suspect her because of her family, so she would have some advantage!
I'm truly proud of how she grew up. She was such a lonely girl who had only Bill and her cousin Petra as her friends. Then she loved her brother and her parents but she always thought that he didn't care about her. She didn't agree with her families believes and she truly had to do something to free herself from her fears and allow herself to be who she was. And being one of the leaders of the underground made me very proud of her! Especially after Max was able to change as well and they now became stronger together as a family. Honestly I wonder how Claire decided to do in the future, if she stayed in the ministry, if she dedicated herself to her family and if she made friends (because I'm so happy that she at least became friends with Python, she truly deserves friends), whether she ended up married or not, well I'm curious but I think if she ever got married she would choose someone she truly trusted and who she could be herself and for God sake, someone who could make that poor girl smile, because come on she looks so gloomy xD But I'm happy that she made at least one friend and that she got closure with her brother, so I'm blessed :) Ps: I always thought that Claire wouldn't make it until the end xD I always thought she would be killed or that she would sacrifice herself to protect someone.

Theo... Oh my little boy. When I visualised Theo I thought about a broken boy who always wanted his parents approval. Theo was meant to be an adult version of Draco Malfoy. When Kent appeared in the picture I imagined the rivalry such like Draco and Harry and that only made the adult version I imagined more lively. Theo was lucky to have a friend like Kent, even if he didn't understand what a friend truly meant. Theo lost his mother, his uncle hated him, his father well... they didn't have the best relationship, he didn't manage to be captain, he didn't manage to be a prefect, he had to give up on his dream, he couldn't trust anyone. Well everything about Theo was supposed to be tragic. His partnership with Zara was just amazing, I believe he saw himself on her (even though she was pure evil), and he believed that maybe people could change if someone believed in him. He betrayed his family, he betrayed his colleagues for something he believed to be the right thing, Kent could have abandoned him and Kingsley could have hit believed in him and hand him over. But people believed in him, he was the same person his mother believed he was. Seeing him trying to get thought his trauma was sad, but it fit him. I'm so so happy that he found happiness somehow. Val loved him by who he was, she didn't see him because of his family, blood heritage or even his mistakes, but she saw his pure heart and that is just beautiful. And of course Theo and Kent's bromance are still one of my favourite parts of the whole story! Thinking about the future, I wonder if he managed to keep working or his stability is not well yet, but he has Val, Kingsley, Kent, all of his friends, so he will he fine :)

I will miss these kids, but I'm making room for the new kids so hopefully we will have a more funny time on UFF rather than a more serious and gloomy one :) I hope everyone who made it to the end are now happy and even if they don't make a cameo on UFF, that they have success and find their happy endings :)
Once again, thank you so much for this ride. I just can't believed it already ended, it seemed like it was yesterday that Aiden made his first pov ;-;
This won't be a serious goodbye because we will still talk and of course I will still be hyped with UFF and I'll be commenting every single chapter :p
Oh and I'm curious, as you know I'm like a huge fan of Oliver :p did you imagine him getting married? I can totally imagine him marrying someone from his work honestly.
Ok now for real, thank you so so so much. You are an amazing writer and I want you to know that I anticipated every single chapter every week and reading it made my day, seriously, even if it took me a while to comment in the chapter.
I wish you the best and I hope you have a lot of fun writing UFF and finish this trilogy which I believe will bring tears of joy and will bring you the best feeling of accomplishement. You deserve it Dani! Thank you so much *takes off my hat* farewell Ctf, thank you for the ride, you will be always remembered!
From the bottom if my heart, thank you Dani, thank you very much! <3
I won't say goodbye so have a nice week and see you around ;) take care of yourself.
luv_kero
2443 streak #2
Chapter 57: I've been anticipating the Afterword chapter so much ever since you mentioned it, and I absolutely loved reading all of your thoughts on the cast and how you went about developing their arcs!! <3 Some of the things I knew (thanks to me loving spoilers and our insanely long back-and-forth responses via comments and PM, HAHA) and some of the things were a complete surprise, so it was so cool getting to learn and relearn these behind-the-scenes tidbits!! ^^

One thing I had no idea about (but probably should've figured out, LOOOOL) was Python's intended role as canon!Audrey Weasley!! Looking back now, it totally makes and I should've known you'd make sure every aspect of Percy's story was covered, even if they weren't intended to truly be endgame with the planned divorce. :P Does that mean Python would've been leading the MII with Cadi instead of Audrey Blishwick if the latter hadn't been submitted??

Ahhhh, not a day goes by where I wish Evera were still here with us, even though I know that her death was necessary. :') I take a lot of comfort in knowing that her death served so much purpose in the story and that it wasn't meaningless (not that anyone's death was ^^;) in the grand scheme of things. :) I do wonder how the story would've changed if she had stayed alive, since I imagine Kent would've been a much less broken man. But then his motivation to really get plans in motion within the Order of Phoenix wouldn't have been as strong as it was after suffering such a devastating loss. OTL All in all, Kent and Evera will always be the best dynamic duo, and I will never stop thanking you for bringing them to life in such a beautiful way!! <3 And I guess I don't know if they'll make cameos in UFF, but I'd love to know what happened to Drake and Jemma (and even little Roderick from H:aH, LOOOL, if you ever got to planning his future XD) after the events of CtF if you have that information readily available. ^^; If not, no worries!! I'm just very attached to my original trio, HAHA. :')

I'll be reiterating a lot of stuff I've said in previous comments and/or messages, but Channer was the first character I fully conceptualized when you announced CtF and its plot. I'm honestly drawn to charismatic, outgoing male characters (Kent, Drake, Landon), so writing a coward like Channer was such a fun challenge for me since I got to really step out of my comfort zone. I think part of me subconsciously wanted him to eventually join Adeline in the Underground, since I'm a er for the good side, but I loved that he stayed neutral throughout since I think that's the path truest to his character. It wouldn't have made sense if he had joined up and although it was painful to see him get bested by Yurina, I'm really happy that he's learned to hold his family a little closer now. <3

And now, MY FOX QUEEN, MISS YURINA NAKAYASHI!! I honestly don't enjoy writing Slytherin-like characters, but she was such a fun character to create and I became so attached to her in such a short amount of time. I really think it was her background that cinched it for me. The tiger parent mentality is often lauded by Asian parents as the "right" way to raise your child and while I do think there are some great parts about it, I also think it can be incredibly toxic with the wrong parents and the wrong children. So giving Yurina such a lonely childhood made me sympathize with her so much, even though I knew I was creating an evil character who really shouldn't be redeemed. ^^; I think I would've been really sad to see her caught by Abeni, so I'm stoked that UFF saved her in a way and I can't wait to see what mischief she's planning now!! :D Even though she's probably going to be defeated in UFF, at least she got a happy ending in CtF, HAHA. XD No matter what happens, she'll forever be my queen of darkness. <3

And then we have Odette, the strongest Fugitive out there who's absolutely killing it in life now, which she completely deserves after everything she went through during the war. :') Even though I made her to get tortured, I don't think I envisioned just how much she'd have to go through and my heart broke every time her situation got bleaker. OTL I honestly feared for her life the most out of my main four, especially after Evera died, since I knew that a Fugitive death would be incredibly possible. My other Fugitive characters, Xander and Cassie, were much more capable and resourceful than Odette was, so I figured that if a Fugitive had to die, she'd be the one. OTL So knowing that she ultimately made it out alive, even with immense trauma, made me so happy because I would've been crushed to bits by her death. ^^; Odette's a strong girl who shows that persistence and sheer will are key, and I'm so glad that sunnier skies graced her future. <3

I know I didn't write about everyone, basically focusing on my own characters, but I absolutely loved reading about every single member of the cast and seeing their stories get woven together in this amazing tale. Just as it was for H:aH, it was truly the greatest honor to be part of this story in some way and I'm eternally grateful that I was given the opportunity to help shape the HoM trilogy with my imperfect characters. :') They've all grown immensely over the course of CtF and I'm beyond ecstatic to see what kind of magic you'll weave next with UFF!! x] You know I'll be there writing essays after every chapter, because I can't stop myself from spazzing over even the tiniest details and I'm actually going to cry when it's all over. I would've cried when CtF ended, but knowing that there's still one installment left kept the tears at bay, HAHA. :') But we'll worry about UFF ending when the time comes, since it's just barely begun at this point and it's time to ENJOY what's about to come!! :D

Again, from the bottom of my heart, THANK YOU for writing Confronting the Faceless!! <3 You're forever one of my writing inspirations and a friend I've grown to cherish so much after getting to know you these past few years, and I will never stop saying how grateful and lucky I am to have stumbled across Hogwarts: a History back then. x] You're the absolute best, Dani!! <3
Susan15
#3
Chapter 56: Hi!! Ok I believe I am ready for this overwhelming final chapter ;-;

Honestly, I always thought about what would happen to Ava. A part of me continuously compared her to Claire, but I think Ava is a coward. While Claire didn't agree with the values that most of Slytherins believed, she actually tried to do something about it, and a good part was that she met Bill and had her cousin. Ava had Astoria and her friend wasn't what Ava thought about the others. I think she was obsessed with "I'm better than them" to the point that she disliked Clary who was different from what she hated and also she was shocked about Kingsley, someone she saw as an example, only to find that he was a Slytherin. She put all her hatress into the house instead of growing up and understanding that not everyone is the same.
I liked how everything wrapped for her, it was the best outcome became she herself did not grow up much within all those years. And I'm really happy that she and Anwen got to become friends :)

Theo... I'm so... shocked! And happy? I'm truly glad he managed to find peace with himself (or something similar to that) and that he found someone who went through something "similar" and somehow could understand him and love him by who he is. I actually wonder if he managed to face his father since he always wanted to make him proud on top of everything and honestly I wonder if he got to see his uncle getting arrested, because well he deserved that! And I'm so happy that Kent was the best man! Ok I'm happy by how everything just went, Kingsley too. And I'm so so proud of Max and it was great to see him and Claire at Theo's wedding. I hope Theo and Val can make things work and finally forgive themselves.

Aiden as a grandpa is the strawberry on top of the ice cream xD Mia is so cute and YES ONE OF MY SHIPS SAILED!! I'm so happy Logan and Susan got together! And am I sensing a rivalry between Albus and Mia? xD Or maybe something more? :p I'm so happy and proud that Aiden was able to retire and be happy, he deserves and honestly he is one of my favourite characters. It was not easy to be a adoptive father and now he became a proud grandfather, I'm so happy for him.

Minki and Padma got together <3 and they had twins omg poor Minki! But I'm so happy and proud that he was able to follow his dream even if it was smaller than his bigger one. Oh my and Terry and Parvati wow I wasn't expecting that! Friends becoming lovers is something I live for haha. I'm so happy that everything worked out. I know that he is probably the most neutral character in the story, I don't remember, was he in the battle?

Odette! And she is the final pov ;-; Omg Dean got married and they became friends, that's so great. I wouldn't have guessed that Dean would marry a muggle! Dirk would be proud of how both of them grown up so much after everything that happened. I'm so proud of Odette and happy too, she deserves all the happiness in this world!

I can't believe this story just ended. I believe I can speak by everyone that we became attached to these characters and I'm not ready to say goodbye. I love every single character and I believe you made such an incredible story that I don't have enough words to express what I feel. Thank you so much for your time, passion and for making this amazing story and capturing our hearts. You are a great writer and I hope you feel proud of yourself just like I'm proud of you :)

I hope you have a great weekend and honestly I'm making fingers crossed to see them somehow again in UFF because I think I'll miss some of them too much xD
Thank you so much and see you Sunday to see your amazing thoughts and feelings through this story <3. Take care of yourself and have an awesome time :)
Susan15
#4
I'll give you a proper comment about the final chapter but yes please, I'd live to read your thoughts and feelings!
I'm so happy and shocked at the same time with the final chapter, but I will leave it to another time!! I just wanted to let you know how much I loved it and that I really do want to hear what your opinions :)
Have a nice week and I hope to read your feelings and thoughts next sunday :')
luv_kero
2443 streak #5
Chapter 56: Oh my gosh, it's the final epilogue. I'm not ready. OTL

Dang, I legit wasn't expecting Ava to be an ice cream shop owner after twenty years, LOOOL. :P But yikes, I can imagine that leaving Hogwarts definitely turned the "Slytherin=bad" sentiment on its head. I don't blame Ava for thinking that way during her school years, since she was a teenager and she hated not fitting in with her house. But at least she's become more open-minded and chill now, and it does show a lot of her character growth. :) It's also really sweet that she revived Fortescue's ice cream shop, since it's such a cornerstone of Diagon Alley and it broke my heart when Florean disappeared. :'( But omg, I also didn't expect Anwen to have had a whirlwind romance with a Muggle, so I'm glad that she also seems to be a lot more open-minded now as an adult. ^^ Although it that it didn't work out and I hope Anwen is doing okay as a single mother, since I know that can be difficult. >___< The cameos of Albus, Rose, and Scorpius were also super cute and I love that they're this generation's trio, hehe. x]

Oh gosh, Theo looking at little Evan and thinking of his guilt towards Evera's death had me gutted too. Q___Q But also, I'M SCREAMING AT KENT BEING HIS BEST MAN!! AND I'M ALSO SCREAMING AT THEO MARRYING VALERIE???????? FORGET WHAT I SAID ABOUT AVA. THIS IS THE BIGGEST SURPRISE OUT OF ALL OF THE EPILOGUES. I'M SO SHOOK. THIS MIGHT BE THE MOST SHOOK I'VE EVER BEEN. NEVER IN A MILLION YEARS DID I EVER EXPECT VALERIE AND THEO TO END UP TOGETHER. Like it totally makes sense with them bonding over their trauma in this support group and I bet Valerie felt AWFUL for getting caught in Branwen's web after she found out Branwen was a Death Eater. T^T It's so so so cute that Theo and Valerie eventually fell for each other, and I'm so happy that Theo gets to experience this beautiful moment because he deserves it!! And ahhhhh, I love that Kent is Best Man (best boi forever!!) and Evan is the ring bearer (/cries i love this kid so much already help) and Zac also got happily married and Valerie's family is there, and Theo has so many friends and people who care about him. :') AND JUST THAT ENDING, OMG. SHOT ME IN THE HEART. *o* I'M DED FROM HOW CUTE THEY ARE. PROCLAIMING MYSELF AS CAPTAIN OF THIS NEW SHIP NOW, HAHAHA.

Ahhhh, Logan and Susan got together!! x] And Mia, like all the kids, sounds so adorable and Aiden is definitely best grandpa!! ^^ And ooh, looks like Oliver is teaching at Hogwarts now after retiring from the professional circuit?? :D Gah, that reminds me that he's also old now too. OTL And omg, I'm ded at Mia and Albus having a Quidditch rivalry. XD Try-outs will be a battlefield this year with those two gunning for positions, HAHA. And LOOOOOL, I also wasn't expecting that kiss comment from Mia. :P I imagine Albus will definitely be a heartthrob, especially when he gets older, and Mia will be one of many who have a crush on young Potter, LOLOLOL. But ahhhh, so happy that Aiden has such a beautiful family and that he's enjoying life so much now!! He completely deserves it after everything he went through!! And I also love that Ava made an appearance at the end, even though they never actually met in the main story, since everyone's stories are ultimately tied together in this epic. :)

Haha, definitely not surprised that Minki opened up a dance studio. XD He really suffered the least overall out of everyone in CtF, I think. Him and Venus. And awww, so cute that he and Padma ended up having twins!! x] And ooh, Padma is also a teacher now?? :D What kind?? (also there's a tiny typo where you wrote parvati instead of padma and i was like, wait which twin is which?? is padma the gryff and parvati the ravenclaw?? XD) And awwww, I wasn't expecting Terry and Parvati to get married, but I can totally see them together and it's so cute that the two best friends each got married to one of the twins, HAHA. :P They're all one big happy family now!! ^^ Minki and Padma's banter is also so cute, and I love how chill Minki is now in comparison to how he was in seventh year. :') And ooh, what does Terry do in the Department of Transportation?? Guess he followed the more traditional path of working for the Ministry while Jerome went traveling, LOOOOL. XD

And now, we're here at last at the final epilogue. T^T Odette was the last of my main characters submitted to CtF, she was the last POV chapter of the story (and the last Fugitive to be rescued), and now she's the last of the epilogues. But that doesn't mean she's last in my heart, because she's far from it!! <3 I figured she would eventually strike up a friendship with Dean, since they both had the connection of being on the run with Dirk at some point, and I bet they've shared a lot of stories about Dirk with each other over the years. :) My heart hurts knowing that Odette still suffered so much for so long, even though it's completely understandable that she wouldn't have mentally healed in an instant. That's just not possible when you've gone through what she did. And ahhhhh, HARRY COMING THROUGH TO GIVE HER A CHANCE MAKES ME SO HAPPY!! TRULY AN ICON. AND AHHHH, SO SO SO PROUD OF ODETTE FOR BECOMING HEAD OF THE IMPROPER USE OF MAGIC OFFICE!! *o* SHE OVERCAME ALL OF THE OBSTACLES LIFE THREW HER WAY AND WE LOVE SEEING FEMALE MUGGLEBORNS GETTING RIGHTFULLY RECOGNIZED FOR THEIR WORK IN THE MINISTRY!! x] Again, restating what I said in Kent's epilogue, I completely relate to Odette and Dean talking to Dirk's gravestone so this definitely hit home for me. It's a way to stay connected with them, even though they've passed, and I think it's very powerful that Dirk was able to create a very unique bond between Odette and Dean, even though he had long since passed. :) And I love that the ice skating figurine managed to survive the war!! It's definitely a beautiful, subtle reminder of the past before the war. ^^ And ahhhhh, that final sentence really pulled at my heartstrings. :') Everything is going to be just fine, Odette!! You've made it this far and you're only going to continue climbing to the top!! <3

Also, a big resounding YES to your A/N!! I'd love an Afterwords chapter!! :D I'll save my final CtF comment for then, hehe. ^^
Susan15
#6
Chapter 55: Hi!!

Omg yes! Venus had her dream come true, I'm so proud of her!
Oh and is she getting interested in that man?? :p
I kind of imagined her with someone from work since she would probably be a professional most of the time and she wouldn't go out on dates with just anyone, especially because she would care a lot about her job and would dedicate 100% of her time to that, so I truly see things work out between them :)

Tangi!! Our precious child who is not a child anymore :') I'm so glad she and Xander kept their friendship and managed to still be a part of each other's life!
Aw and Hazel made it out alive! And I can definitely imagine their marriage :) I'm also so happy that Clary and Kingsley got married too, like omg yes!

Gabe!! I truly thought that he was the groom!! I was shipping him with Romilda ;-; but it's still good that they kept being friends all this time. Same goes for Nathan, I'm truly happy that the two of them kept their friendship after all this time! Gabe also speaking in french with Fleur was just perfect haha.

Kent!! Aww I love the name Evan as I bet Evera would love it! He truly acts like a proud dad! And Tori already grown up omg ;-;. Why am I imagining those two in Hogwarts having the time of their lives? Haha. Kent is now a married man with two beautiful kids and I bet he feels the happiest man on Earth. Evera would be really proud of him. The final scene is just heartbreaking :') farewell Evera.

And finally but not last, Audrey!! I'm so glad that she and Percy got serious and started having a life together and forming a family. Their daughter Mai is really energetic haha. And I'm so glad to see that Audrey and Python still remained friends! Omg Lucy... that hit my poor heart ;-; I bet Lucas would feel proud and happy for her. I can imagine little Lucy in Hogwarts as a happy kid and perhaps who knows, maybe she would also become a healer! And Python becoming her godmother is just amazing!

I can't believe that next chapter is the last ;-; it's been a long journey and to see that everyone have grown up and becoming happier (even Yurina haha) is so heartwarming and we became attached to all of them so it will be hard to say goodbye. I hope that maybe some of them may make a cameo in UFF :')
I'm preparing tissues for the last chapter which will take another 10 years after this one and since it's set prior to the UFF events, I'm quite curious!

Thank you for this chapter, for the "romantic and couples" chapter haha. It's good to see everyone getting their dreams came true and them having their own families.
I hope you have an incredible week, great classes and I wish you everything the best :) Rest well and take good care of yourself.
I will see you later for the story's finale ;-; see ya~ :)
luv_kero
2443 streak #7
Chapter 55: Good on Venus for becoming the youngest ever Unspeakable!! Just like Rajani, we love seeing female Slytherins achieving their goals!! ^^ At the beginning of the story, I would've never expected Venus to be working in the Love Chamber. But after her work with identifying the loss of hope during the war, it does make sense that she'd end up in the chamber that's all about unraveling the mystery behind emotion. And omg, I wasn't expecting Cadfael to be an Unspeakable as well!! :D He's so much more chill now after his angsty Hogwarts days. XD Hopefully life has been much kinder to him since then. :') And ooooh, do I spy some sparks flying between him and Venus?? :P I can definitely see them together, bonding over their Slytherin days at Hogwarts, both of them with their air of mystery and very small social circles, haha. And since Unspeakables can't really share what goes on with their work, I imagine it'd be nice to be with someone who'll understand any workplace frustrations and such. ^^

Awwwww, love that Xander and Matangi are still so close after the war!! x] And yaaaay, so glad that Hazel survived and is thriving now!! :D It's so awesome to see that she's become an activist and hopefully things change for the better for the LGBTQ+ community with her leading the charge. :) And omg, Kingsley and Clary made up and married each other!! Ahhhhh, that's so sweet!! ^^ Wow, look at Clary, going from worrying about her grades in Hogwarts, to a bittersweet relationship with Lenox, to being one of the best Auror trainers in the Ministry, to being a member of the Underground, to becoming the Minister of Magic's wife while also being the Head of Magical Law Enforcement!! Again, we love seeing successful female Slytherins killing it in life!! :D And yesss, Xander is gonna be amazing in his new job and I'm so happy he's ending his dueling career on such a high note!! :D And ahhhh, Matangi and Hazel's wedding will be absolutely beautiful, and I really hope they'll be able to wed soon!! x]

Haha, you really threw me for a loop there in thinking that Gabe was the groom. XD I wonder who David is and how Romilda met him. :P But it's awesome to see that Gabe, Nathan, and Romilda are still best friends and as close as ever after all these years. ^^ And ooh, love the little bonding moment between Gabe and Fleur!! :D And also, dang, it's very cool that Gave is working as an investigative reporter. I definitely wasn't expecting that to be his career, since I thought he might go the Auror route or something similar. He was such an explosive kid, always gunning for justice. :P But I can see why he'd choose investigative reporting instead, especially since it does have a lot of freedom and traveling is so much fun. ^^ And he still gets to pursue justice, albeit in a more roundabout manner, LOOOL. And I guess he's going the Charlie route and staying a happy bachelor for the rest of his life, which is awesome and I'm glad he's happy without needing a partner to fulfill him. :)

Oh wow, another Weasley kid to add to the clan. XD They just don't stop coming. :') And it's funny that Mai is so different in temperament from her parents and Percy must have his hands full trying to make sure she doesn't upend everything in their lives. :P And it's so cute that Audrey Caldwell is still known as Python, even after all these years, HAHA. It's definitely a very cool nickname, even without the Underground attachment, so I can see why she'd keep it, LOOOOL. And omg, ahhhh, it's so sweet that Audrey decided to name Lucy after Lucas. T^T He really meant a lot to both her and Percy, so it's very beautiful that they're choosing to honor him through the newest addition to their family. :) He still lives in everyone's hearts, even though he's long gone now, and I'm sure he would've loved doting on Mai and Lucy if he had survived. >___< And I just realized that this means Audrey will have a pre-teen at home and a teenager at Hogwarts while she's dealing with stuff in UFF, LOL. What a busy woman. :')

And oh my gosh, Kent, my lovely boy, I don't think I'm ready to let go of him yet. Q___Q He's one of my absolute favorite OCs and I'm so happy I got a opportunity to expand on him for this story. <3 Like he was already an amazing side character that I loved to bits, but getting the chance to see him under the spotlight made me so incredibly happy, despite everything that happened to him during the war. :') And awww, Tori's a teenager now and I love how sassy she's become. XD Reminds me a lot of Holly in H:aH, LOLOLOL. :P And omg, so cute that she considers Jemma an aunt too, and I'm so so curious to know how Jemma and Drake are doing nowadays!! ^^ And omg, Ebony is such a beautiful name for Holly's daughter, hehe. x] It's awesome that Kent and Willow were able to find their way back to each other, even though it was so rough. Totally understandable that they broke up after the war. Kent was still grieving the loss of Evera and Willow then had to go through the exact same thing with Laurel. They definitely needed to grow separately as they processed their grief. You don't want to be at 50% when you're dating someone, using them to fill that other 50%. You want to be at 100% and dating another person who's at 100% for it to be a healthy, long-lasting relationship. At least that's my belief, LOL, although I don't have any personal experience to go off of (so who knows if I'm spouting nonsense). ^^; But Evan is such a great name, and Evera would've loved him and Sammy to pieces. x] And oh my gosh, my heart is dying because the end of Kent's epilogue is at Evera's grave. T^T I'll be very honest here, I talk a lot to the gravestone of one of my loved ones (and I use it as proxy for the other gravestones that I can't physically visit), so Kent talking to Evera this way was something I wholly related to. And my heart is breaking all over again, because I miss Evera so much and I don't think I'll ever get over her death. But I will stay strong, because she was a strong girl and Kent is staying strong too. I hope there're only clear skies for him for the rest of his life, even though I know things will get crazy with raising two boys in the house and there's still UFF's events to come ten years later. ^^; And omg, I just realized that Evan (and maybe Sammy) will be at Hogwarts when UFF starts!! XD Not that it's super relevant in the grand scheme of things, LOL, but I will have fun imagining the newest crop of Sylvesters at the best school in the world, having shenanigans of their own. :') And I'm just really really really happy that Kent got a happy ending, because he deserves it and I love him so much. He and Evera will always be my favorite pair of siblings, forever and ever, and I'm so happy that their bond will never be broken, even by death. <3

OMG, the final epilogue is coming soon and it's set right before UFF!! :D I'm not ready at all for CtF to end though. OTL But I'm also super excited to see the five remaining POVs and catch up with them twenty years later. ^^
Susan15
#8
Chapter 54: Hi!! Sorry for taking so long to comment!

First of all, my heart is hurting for Lucas. He was one of my favourite characters and honestly I feel like since half of the story he was making a rough path and the signals to his tragedy were there ;-; His last pov and Odette's pov showed how he was overworking and not taking care of himself. I liked him a lot, but somehow I feel like I knew that he would have a bad ending. I'm glad he had a painless passing and I'm sad that he didn't do a check up with Python because maybe he could have survived, but that's so Lucas.. And I'm really sad for his mother, she suffered so much and losing a son is like losing a part of her, especially since it's not natural. Oh my ;-; rest in peace Lucas.

Oh Channer ;-; poor boy, he must feel so guilty. But we all never know what is going to happen tomorrow so it's normal that we don't say "I love you" everyday. But of course it's truly painful and the last interaction is always what is pressed in our minds ;-; I know you will be able to process your grief and you will be better with time. You have your mother and sister, you will be fine!

I'm so glad that Max made it out alive. Now Claire and Max can really talk and pour their hearts to one another. They just "lost" their father who will be imprisoned after waking up (if he eventually wakes up), so they just have one another and their mother. And I truly understand what she means that everyone is biased and already settled their minds that everyone in the losing side is guilty. Fitz!! I'm so glad to see him!!! And I'm super glad that he is fine!!! Willow and Theo omg guys ;-; I'm so proud of Theo to try helping out and prove that everyone deserves a second chance like he had, because of their family environment and ideals. And I bet Willow feels like she compensated a lot from what she did. Everything is good now, I'm happy for them.

Oh Farrah :( you need time to heal my poor child. I understand that Christian is very important to her but he wouldn't understand what she has been through and she definitely needs to have a support near her who truly understands her and even though I know that Christian was what kept her sanity, she created a version of him in her mind who probably doesn't exist, and she needs time for herself now. You can get well child ;-;.

Yurina queen of the evil! Always causing trouble, really haha. Abeni must have a huge grudge on Yurina, because she is quite a pain in the haha. Let's see how Yurina will cause problems in Uff because I know you're involved young lady!

Wow next epilogue is 10 years from here! We're going to see the Hogwarts kids as grown ups!! I hope Venus and Minki managed to follow their dreams! I'm quite curious how Ava and Gabe became as adults haha. I bet everyone else is doing well now :)
I can't wait for the next epilogue!!
I hope you have a nice week, take care of yourself, rest well and see you later ;)
petitreveur
#9
Chapter 54: I told myself I was going to properly comment at the end of the three-part epilogue but I know I had to drop a comment after I read the first POV. NOOOOO LUCAS NOOOOOOO :"( Why do all my fav characters have to die hurhur /cries/ First Evera, then Laurel and now Lucas. My heart was literally squeezed tight when I read the line "He doesn't wake up" and I'm like NO NO NO, THAT CAN'T BE TRUE :"( I should have realised that foreshadowing when he was feeling way too exhausted than ever, that he w-wouldn't make it pass the night. Idk why but his death hits so much harder than anyone else's?? Lucas was (fk, I have to use the word 'was' now) such a golden boy, he did so much as a Healer and contributes sooo much as part of the Underground!! Although he didn't "fight" in the war, he was a true war hero!! I guess it's...relieving that his death wasn't a painful one and he passed in the comforts of his house....he will definitely be sorely missed :"( I can't imagine how broken his mother would be when she realises that her son is never going to wake up again >.< OH GOSHH, THAT START ALREADY SCREAMS DEPRESSING!! (I literally paused for five whole minutes before going on to the next POV)

Glad to see that Channel survived the war!! That sibling dynamic between Channel and Adeline has drastically changed. Damn, those two siblings must feel rather awkward and apologetic to each other but I feel it's neither their fault that things turned out that way. It's the awful circumstances that caused things to spiral out of control >.< It's so heartwarming to see Adeline and their mother visiting Channel in the hospital. , Channel must be feeling even more horrible and guilty for not actively doing anything during the war after learning that their father had passed away in Azkaban. Despite the awkwardness between the siblings, I'm sure Adeline never actually blamed Channel for ousting her and that's what family is all about. They are there for you no matter how much you might have forsaken them and at the end of the day, they still worry about you and welcome you back with open arms ^^ Things are never the same but Channel still has Adeline and their mother and things will get better with time :-)

Another POV that reflects the phrase "blood is thicker than water". Even though Max was a Death Eater, Claire can't bring herself to hate him or cut off ties with him. Sure, she does not agree with his dealings but after all, he is still her brother, her family. That conflicted feelings within her must be chewing her up for she knows that her brother deserved to be punished for the greater good but at the same time, Max is her brother, they are related by blood, and it must be hard to see him locked up in Azkaban (when their father was already sentenced while in a coma, big oof!) That grey area would always be grey ^^" Oh wow, I would have never thought Willow to be on defence (should I say that Max is very lucky to have Claire as his sister? LOL) and Theo to be the final witness!! Looks like Max doesn't have to live in a crammed cell anymore :')

Poor Farrah :'( She is suffering so much but I'm glad to see the tiniest progress that she is making since the day she was admitted into Mungo's. It that she doesn't really have any close friends around her except for Clara as all of her friends are all Muggles who wouldn't be able to understand what she had gone through because of the Statue. And now Clara is feeling slightly wary around her >.< Well, I don't blame Clara, she must be at a huge loss of what to do with someone so utterly broken, she had never been in her situation before and neither is she a trained medical professional. But it's great that Farrah is seeing a therapist and I can tell that Ellie is a good psychiatrist to her. Oh nooo, it must have been a last straw for Farrah when she heard that she's not allowed to see Christian as it was Christian who kept her fighting on for her life in the cells >.< Yet again, Christian prolly wouldn't be able to understand what happened to Farrah as a Muggle. But maybe, it's just the presence of Christian that she needs? Somehow, I don't think that Clara is a mean friend to Farrah or anything, it's just that Farrah is just so delicate right now and Clara obviously can't be there 24/7 for her >.< It's draining for both girls. Perhaps, a longer hospital stay would do them both good? The impact of war is just so harsh :"(

Da boss lady is in the house!! And she is getting straight to work!! With her schemings!! Poor Amos, he is so naive to think that he can get a taste of her LMAO and Yurina is using that to her strength, obviously. And voila, now she has information about Abeni Akingbade, which leads me wondering what exactly happened over the past twenty years?? The Akingbades must be pretty influential people in Nigeria?? And I'm pretty sure Yurina managed to wreck chaos in Nigeria and overthrew the government in some way or another?? I swear this little Japanese lady just doesn't stop :P Abeni must have gone through much turmoil, seeing the UFF's first teaser. Damn, everything is getting juicier and I can't wait for the tea to be spilled xD
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Chapter 54: Oh man, I should've figured Lucas would end up dying from overwork. :'( The signs were all there, especially during his final main POV. T^T Him overworking himself was a constant theme and it so much that he had to go out this way. It reminds me a lot of karoshi, "overwork death" in Japanese, and I'm just glad that he got one final night with his mother and that he died in the comfort of his home. OTL But oh my god, his mother is going to be absolutely heartbroken when she finds him in the morning and my heart hurts so much for her, because she was probably so thankful that her son wasn't directly on the battlefield, but he ended up being a casualty anyway and she'll still have to bury him with all of the others. T^T In a way, Lucas' death sort of has a numbness to it and both Audreys are probably going to be devastated when they receive the news as well. :'( As well as Percy, Jemma, Jun, and anyone else who knew Lucas. ;~; He was a great guy though and he really did a lot for the war effort. In the end, he definitely died a hero like the others.

Oh my gosh, I've been anticipating the conclusion to Channer's story ever since his final main POV and I'm so glad he's in a much better state than some of the others. <3 Granted, things aren't perfect and they never will be, especially since Timon is dead, but at least he has a chance to make things better and that's what counts the most. Channer is still so young and he has his whole life ahead of him to strengthen the bonds he has with his remaining family members. It's something I'm personally trying to work on as well, although our circumstances are admittedly very different. One thing I definitely fear is leaving things unsaid when it's too late, and my heart hurts so much that Timon and Channer never got to properly bond before Timon died. :'( It's definitely going to weigh on Channer a lot from now on, and I hope that he'll be able to process his grief and regret in a healthy way. On the plus side, I'm so happy that Henry is okay and it's so cool that Adeline stayed with his dad while she was in hiding!! ^^ If anything, maybe Henry and Channer can become eventual friends with Henry easing some of Channer's regrets with stories of Timon in Azkaban and how Timon was always talking about how proud he was of his kids. It won't alleviate all of the pain, but it might help a bit, knowing that even though he never verbally expressed his feelings to his dad, Timon still deeply loved and cared for Channer until the very end. Linette, Adeline, and Channer are definitely going to struggle for years to come, but at least they have each other and that's what matters. <3

Oof, it does that Claire's still stuck between both sides, even after the end of the war. But it's nice to see that short moment between her and Fitzwilliam, and he's grown so much from his school days, ahhhhh :') And oh my, I guess since Claire does technically have a stake in the other side because of her family, what the Order is doing for clean-up probably does feel a lot more harsh to her, even though they probably feel completely justified in doing so. It's a very gray area and at the very least, Willow and Theo came through by helping out, even though they had no obligation to. I do wonder why they did. Maybe it was Holly asking for a favor, since she knew Claire?? Maybe it was just Willow not wanting someone else to lose a sibling after she did?? Maybe it was Theo knowing that Max was like him, brought up with Death Eater ideals but still capable of change?? At the very least, I'm glad that Claire doesn't have to lose a family member who's so precious to her and she's much luckier than most who've been affected by the war.

Oh wow, good to see that Farrah also survived Azkaban!! I'm guessing we'll find out Hazel's fate in Matangi's epilogue. Anyway, it's awesome that Farrah is already seeing a therapist and Ellie sounds wonderful. :) And considering how broken Farrah already was back in February, I'm not surprised she was even worse by the time all of the prisoners were released from Azkaban. Her fantasies were probably the only thing keeping her going while she was at Azkaban. x___x But yikes, I don't know if a happy ending with Christian is in the cards. Considering what she's been through, she'll really need someone by her side who'll understand the extent of this war and since Christian is a Muggle, I don't think he can be that person, realistically. >___< Maybe if this were set during UFF's time with magic finally being revealed, Christian could become her caretaker and they could have their happily ever after. But considering how Clara is Farrah's best friend and Clara's reaction to Farrah's breakdowns, I doubt Christian will be able to last long either. >___>

And finally, my beautiful and strong queen of darkness, Miss Yurina Nakayashi!! <3 Going to America was definitely the right call, HAHA. (Since no pandemic to worry about and the US was in a much better state back then OTL If this were 2020, I'd be like, NOOOOO, GO BACK TO ASIA!! ANYWHERE BUT THE US!!) And yesssss, what a QUEEEEEN, living in the lap of luxury in Vegas!! XD Love love love that she's already scheming and recruiting people to her cause!! She isn't wasting any time in making plans for world domination. XD And ooooooh, I've been so so so curious to find out about the bit with soap operas that you asked me about a while back and it's so cool to finally see it here!! :D And oof, looks like Amos is her newest puppet and I love her puppeteering so much!! XD She'd never give him a second glance if it weren't for the information he's gathering for her. He's too much of a lust-driven doormat and Yurina is WAY above that. x] If she ever does fall in love, it'll be with a man who can provide a challenge and keep up with her intellectually. He'll have to REALLY impress her with his cunning and capabilities, and men like that are few and far in between, especially relative to Yurina. She has no time to deal with small fries like Amos and he's probably only got an Avada Kedavra in his future once she's done with him. :') But ooh, Abeni better watch out since Yurina has her eye on her now!! The fox is on the prowl and no one is safe now, hehe <3

Ooh, super curious to see what life will be like ten years from now!! Definitely a lot happier than this, since most people will have healed considerably by then. :') And wizards probably won't be affected by everything that's happening in the Muggle world, LOL (collapse of the housing bubble, Great Recession, etc.) :P