Chapter Twenty-Six

Confronting the Faceless 💀 Complete
February 1-5, 1998
"The best of us must sometimes eat our words"
 
Despite being made of stone, Hogwarts normally doesn't feel all that cold in the winter. Even the dungeons usually retain some form of warmth even on the coldest nights. But these days the halls have adopted a constant chill, and the lower you go the more damp that chill becomes.
 
Gabe mentally laments the terrible conditions as he follows his team leader - Ginny Weasley - further into the dim corridors of the dungeons, winding towards their ultimate goal. His robes are going to be wet and cold after this outing which is no fun, but it's well worth it.
 
This is the biggest raid Gabe has planned yet, and he's incredibly excited to see it to completion. Seamus had reported to the DA about a week after they got back - and after his third detention - that the Carrows are now keeping students locked up in one of the dungeons while they wait for their punishment. Gabe of course immediately saw an opportunity to cause some chaos.
 
And so here they are a few weeks later, sneaking down to release those students being kept chained up overnight. Gabe had put a bit more time into this one than the rest of his jobs, since the safety of non-DA affiliated students is involved, hence why it's taken so long to respond to the new form of punishment.
 
Gabe is with Nathan, Ginny, Logan Griffith, and new member Demelza Robbins. Coming in from the other direction is a team composed of Ernie Macmillan, Terry Boot, other new members Cole Blishwick and his younger cousin Dorian, lead by Neville Longbottom. A third team headed by Susan Bones hasn't entered the dungeons as they're serving as lookouts.
 
Gabe knows he probably should have divided the lookout team, but he's confident that his two strike teams can handle anything that comes their way, even if it's unexpected.
 
The halls are quiet as they move towards the room Seamus had indicated on the map of Hogwarts that one of the Ravenclaws had magic-ed up some time ago. Gabe's team is the point, while Neville's is serving as backup, and the two fourth years - Demelza and Dorian - are keeping in contact using the gold coins left over from Harry's time as leader of the group. So far everything is going according to plan.
 
Honestly, Gabe isn't sure when exactly everything starts going sideways - it didn't happen with his team so he only knows the part of the story that he was present for. What he does know is that the other team was caught off-guard by a patrolling Slytherin prefect, who then sent her patrol partner to get the Carrows while she tried to disarm the strike team alone. She'd failed, of course, but obviously the team didn't get her partner in time because Susan had sent an alarm to Gabe's group warning that Amycus and a whole group of Slytherin students were on their way to Gabe's team's location. From there they'd been forced to scatter, racing back to their respective common rooms but taking different routes in order to throw off any pursuit.
 
That had been five days ago, and tonight is the first DA meeting since the whole debacle.
 
Gabe goes early as he always does, walking with Nathan and Seamus Finnigan, whom Nate has struck up a casual friendship with in the months since they joined the DA. They aren't the first to the room, that's always Ginny and Neville, but they're close to.
 
Ernie Macmillan is already there as well when they arrive, and he waves distractedly in their direction, not moving his eyes from the training dummy he's dueling. Nathan waves back but continues his conversation with Seamus while Gabe beelines to where Neville and Ginny are sitting together, talking with their heads bowed close.
 
"Heyo fearless leaders." He greets lightly, and is startled when Ginny looks up at him with a flash of annoyance. Between her and Neville, Ginny usually is more open to his ideas, so being on the other end of her infamous Weasley glare is a new experience for Gabe.
 
"Good, you're here. We need to talk. Did Seamus- yeah, he did, good." Ginny is all business. "You. Sit. I'll get the other two."
 
Gabe frowns but does as directed - one does not argue with Ginny Weasley when she takes that tone. He looks over at Neville questioningly while Ginny rounds up Seamus and Ernie (both of whom have become something resembling lieutenants for the DA in the months they've been active and are thus included in all important decision making) in hopes the older boy will provide some hint as to why Ginny is so irked. However, Neville just looks at him somberly, giving nothing away.
 
Ginny returns shortly afterwards and doesn't waste any time getting to the point. "What happened Gabe? You had weeks to plan that raid, you knew how important it was. We're lucky none of us was caught!"
 
Gabe raises an eyebrow. "Obviously the lookout team should have been divided differently but I really thought we would be the ones to get jumped, not the other team. And besides, you should have been able to handle it, I picked the people working each side for a reason."
 
Ginny growls. "I'm getting sick of this Gabe. This is the fifth time one of your plans went awry."
 
"Only the first time it did not work though." He counters pointedly. "I have fixed it every other time."
 
"Well you need to stop doing that entirely! No more last-second patch jobs!" Ginny snaps, and three of the four boys in front of her flinch slightly (Seamus doesn't flinch at anything anymore, which Gabe thinks is very impressive). "There are lives on the line. Nathan told me that our little foray into Amycus's office a month ago was also seen - we're just lucky whoever it was didn't report us."
 
Gabe shoots a glare over at his friend - he'd told him not to say anything about that unless they were caught! - who's resolutely studying the walls of the room in an attempt to pretend he isn't eavesdropping.
 
"Don't blame Nathan, he was right to tell us." Seamus says tightly from where he's slumped tiredly in one of the love seats. "Your plans are good, but there's always something that almost seems like it's intended to go wrong weaved into each of them. Once is a mistake, twice is unfortunate, but this is a pattern Gabe."
 
Gabe glares at him (and now he's rather disappointed at the lack of a flinch). So what if he likes fixing things on the fly? All his plans have worked up until now!
 
"Well I do not see anyone else offering ideas." He points out angrily. "And it is not like I do not run plans past you."
 
"Which is why we've caught a lot of the problems." Ginny points out, still angry. "But we don't always have time to do that, and those are the situations when things fall apart."
 
"Point is we're taking you off point on planning." Neville interrupts when it looks like Ginny is about to start ranting. "Just for now, so other people can have a chance at sharing their thoughts, and so you can think about that unfortunate habit of yours."
 
Gabe just glares silently, but even that's not allowed apparently since Ernie addresses the look.
 
"People could have been seriously injured because of your oversight yesterday." He says sharply, posture perfect as ever and looking annoyingly holier-than-thou. "Don't look at us like you didn't bring this on yourself. This is a war Gabe, and you need to start treating it like one."
 
That seems to end the discussion, as Ginny gives him the clear 'now get lost' look and he makes his way back over to Nate, fuming.
 
"I cannot believe you told her, that girl did not say anything!"
 
Nate winces. "I'm sorry Gabe, but I kind of agree with Seamus?" His voice gets smaller as he speaks, and he's still resolutely studying the room's crown molding.
 
"You think I am not taking this seriously?"
 
"I think you're used to following your gut, but you forget that not everyone is on the same page as you are." His friend counters, still quiet and clearly nervous. "But, um, it's just temporary, right? And it'll be good for other people to have ideas?"
 
"I am the ideas guy Nate, and you know why?" Gabe snaps in reply, "Because no one else has good ideas! This group will fall apart without me, just watch."
 
"You aren't being kicked out drama queen, just sidelined for a bit. You can still be involved in DA activities." Ernie informs them lazily, and both boys jump having not heard him come up behind them. "You can even offer input on other ideas, you just aren't the sole planner anymore. It's too risky."
 
"War is risky!" Gabe argues back, still ticked off and unwilling to let it go.
 
Ernie nods. "I agree, so there's no need to make it worse. When you figure that out you can be the plan guy again." With that he heads back over to the training area and resumes his practice, joined shortly after by Ginny.
 
Gabe makes a rude gesture at his turned back before dropping onto the floor, crossing his arms and pulling his knees up to his chest, his back pressed to the wall. He feels a flash of betrayal as Nate awkwardly inches away to go talk to Seamus, which quickly adds itself to the fuel of his fury.
 
"They will regret it soon." He says bitterly as the other DA members begin arriving individually or in pairs. "There is not anyone else in the group who can be the idea guy."
 
The meeting is called to order about thirty minutes later, and though a few people had waved to Gabe as they came in they all seem to quickly read his mood and move to speak with someone else. As such he's still alone on the floor when Ginny stands up and shouts for attention.
 
"Alright, I know you all are feeling a little bummed about a few nights ago, but we have to regroup and keep moving!" Ginny says firmly.
 
Neville steps forward - now that Ginny has gotten everyone quiet and focused he'll run the meeting from here.
 
It's impressive, really, Gabe thinks as Neville explains that they're looking for other people to contribute ideas and plans for DA activities, how much Neville has grown even in the past month. With Luna gone and Ginny an enforcer more than a leader, Neville has had to step up and take primary control of the DA. Considering how hesitant he was even at the start of the year it's impressive how quickly he's taken up the mantle.
 
Of course, Gabe is distinctly less impressed right at this moment since Neville is using those newfound skills to take away his job.
 
However, when the floor is opened to ideas, to Gabe's delight no one steps up.
 
See? He thinks smugly, You can't do this without me. But he stays on the floor, waiting. He's not going to offer his plethora of possible jobs until the leaders apologize and ask him to. After how they treated him today-
 
His mental ramblings cut themselves off abruptly, and Gabe frowns and starts paying attention to the gathering again. Had he just heard what he thought he did?
 
Sure enough, Terry Boot is talking. "Obviously we'd need to talk to him, but Minki is absolutely brilliant with seeing all the angles. If we can recruit him I bet a lot of the stuff we weren't able to do before would become viable."
 
Gabe is standing before he can actually think about it. "Excuse me? Who is this Minki exactly? Can he be trusted?" He demands.
 
Terry Boot looks over with some caution. "Hey, no one is replacing you Gabe, but we do need more than one person making plans, don't you think? I mean, you can see why it makes sense logically to diversify-"
 
"You don't need to if what you have got works." Gabe counters heatedly. "This is war, if you guys turn tail and quit everytime something goes wrong-"
 
"Gabe." Neville snaps, and Gabe actually falls silent because that's the tone Ginny uses, not Neville. Heck, he didn't think it was possible to piss off Neville - the guy is the type to apologize to you after you'd dumped a bucket of soup on his head.
 
"That's enough." The leader continues. "Do you see any of us giving up? How many people here have been sent to Friday detention?"
 
Out of twenty six people Gabe counts nearly a dozen hands (then mentally subtracts one because Seamus is holding up two, the cheeky bastard).
 
Neville and Ginny's hands are both up as well. "And do you see any of us backing out or losing their nerve? No. So do not tell us we quit when things go wrong because that is blatantly incorrect. Just because you don't like how things are going does not give you the right to minimize what we've been through - some of us because of your plans."
 
Gabe glares, but it's more to keep up appearances at this point. Neville never raises his voice, but there's a power and frustration behind the words that sharpen them to points that drive straight into Gabe's ego.
 
He stays quiet for the rest of the meeting, during which the group does end up deciding to try and recruit 'Minki' - a seventh year Ravenclaw who apparently has a knack for thinking things through in unique ways.
 
So do I. Gabe thinks bitterly, but he holds his tongue. No need to start another fight that could end with him being sidelined even longer. With luck, this Minki won't even accept the offer - he doesn't sound like he's very friendly anyway, chances are high that Gabe will be back on the job within a week.
 
That doesn't stop him from wanting to be back sooner - especially not when he already has a plan in mind that he'd intended to share tonight.
 
Nathan waits for him after the meeting has ended and the others - minus the prefects getting ready to patrol - are all sneaking back to their common rooms.
 
Nate is with his brother, who looks amused when he spots Gabe walking over.
 
"You know I always wondered why you were in Gryffindor and not Ravenclaw, but I think I get it now." He jokes lightly.
 
"Poor taste." Gabe snaps back. "Shouldn't you be on patrol?"
 
"Nah, Anthony's the prefect, remember? I'm just waiting for Terry, he's doing something with the bosses."
 
Gabe grimaces, figuring he knows exactly what Terry would need to talk to Neville and Ginny about and not wanting to think about it. "Cool, great, see you later. Come on Nathan."
 
Nathan shrugs apologetically to his brother before hurrying after Gabe, who's stormed out of the room in a huff.
 
Gabe barely acknowledges his friend as they sneak back to the common room, but he immediately drags Nathan into a quiet corner once the Fat Lady has let them through with nary a remark on their being out after curfew. She's become very lax about such things this year, which the entire DA is quite thankful for.
 
"Am I in trouble?" Nathan asks immediately, practically in a squeak.
 
Gabe rolls his eyes. "No, idiot. I have ideas and since the DA does not wish to be reasonable we are going to do them ourselves and prove why I am the ideas guy."
 
"Just to put it on the record, I'm saying this is a bad idea." Nathan sighs. "What are we doing?"
 
Gabe grins. He knew Nate wouldn't argue about it - they're best friends for a reason after all.
 
They sit on the floor and Gabe begins laying out his plan.
 
"Obviously I'll need to adjust it for just the two of us, unless you think your brother would help." He muses, thinking out loud more than really asking Nathan, who answers anyway.
 
"Nah, Mike's loyal to Ginny, you know that." Nate says idly. "If you don't mind me saying-"
 
But he never gets to say it - a sound coming from the girls' dorms has both boys falling still and silent, hoping to not be spotted.
 
Gabe glowers silently when he recognizes the figure at the top of the girls' stairs. Can't he ever be free of Romilda Vane?
 
Luckily she doesn't seem to notice them, and after hesitating for a few moments longer returns to her room. Gabe exhales slowly, frowning.
 
"Bed time then?" Nate whispers after a moment, and Gabe reluctantly nods. If their planning woke Romilda it's only a matter of time before someone else shows. So they slink up the stairs and into their room, careful not to disturb their other roommate as they change and get into their beds.
 
The next morning Gabe is still in a rotten mood, and most of the House is avoiding where he and Nathan have settled to have breakfast. However, true to form, Romilda fails to read the situation and takes a seat across from the two boys, cheerfully helping herself to toast and eggs even as Gabe glares daggers at her.
 
"Morning boys." She declares once she's pleased with her spread.
 
"Good morning Romilda." Nathan responds, and then gives Gabe a sheepish shrug when the glare turns on him.
 
"Oh don't be mad at him for having manners Gabe, you could learn from it! I know they don't teach those in France but you're in England now." Romilda says airily, grinning like it's an inside joke.
 
" off Vane." Gabe snaps. "No one wants you around, least of all me."
 
"Well then it's a good thing I don't run my life according to what you want isn't it?" She replies cheekily. "Anyway, you'll want me here soon enough, when you hear what I've got to say."
 
Gabe rolls his eyes. "I never-"
 
"Need a third person for a certain nighttime caper?" She finishes for him, grinning knowingly as she spears some scrambled eggs onto her fork.
 
Gabe shuts up, and he feels Nathan tense next to him.
 
Romilda casually cuts off a piece of toast to adds to her fork as she continues. "You two  at being quiet you know, you really should work on that." She says idly, stuffing the food into and maintaining her lazily confident air.
 
Gabe kind of wants to punch her smug face but- "How much did you hear and what do you want?" He grits out.
 
Romilda swallows and leans forward, voice dropping in volume quickly. "I just want to help. You two need a third person, that much was clear. I can be that. Ginny doesn't trust me so has been keeping me away from DA activities - you two give me a chance to show what I've got and I'll help you out with whatever hairbrained nonsense you're getting into."
 
"Ginny has a point." Gabe grumbles, and Romilda rolls her eyes.
 
"I had a crush, so sue me. I was fourteen for Merlin's sake." She groans. "That girl needs to learn how to let things go."
 
"She's a Weasley." Nate points out with a grin. "To my recollection that's a flaw they all share."
 
Gabe sighs. If Nate's already in there's little else he can do. "Fine, you can help. Come down to the common room tonight after curfew and we will-"
 
"Counter offer, come meet me in the library after classes. I know a secret spot where no one will be able to hear us." Romilda declares cheekily, and Gabe has to remind himself that they're temporary allies now, and hexing her is a bad idea, no matter how satisfying he knows it would be.
 
And he'd never admit it, but Romilda comes through on her word. The corner of the library she leads them to is deserted, and no sound reaches them from the rest of the room.
 
"Don't you love this place? Jill and I found it a couple years back, brewed a whole attempt at a love potion without Pince even raising an eyebrow." She beams, and then abruptly frowns, forehead creasing in worry. "I hope she's alright." She sighs, before straightening up and pulling out one of the chairs. "So I only heard bits and pieces last night - gimme the full outline of what we're doing here."
 
"We are hitting the Dark Arts classroom." Gabe says, quickly shifting into planner mode, which helps him ignore who exactly he's planning with for the time being. "Full defacing, free that Kneazle if we can."
 
"Yes please, it hurts my heart every time he pulls out that cage." Romilda interrupts, and Gabe glares at her. She raises her hands in surrender and mime's spelling shut, waving for him to continue afterwards. He ignores Nate's amused snort as he does so.
 
"The goal is to make the classroom entirely unusable for at least a day, so it needs to happen during the week and it needs to be worse than just water or fire damage." He says briskly. "I believe that Confringo and Diffindo are our best options-"
 
"What about Fiendfyre?" Romilda interrupts again, then at least has the decency to look ashamed about it. "Sorry, but what about it? We're learning the theory behind it in class right now, so it wouldn't even be suspicious. Using their own tactics against them and all that. Wouldn't it be harder to link the destruction back to us in that case?"
 
Gabe glares at her. "Would you use the Cruciatus curse if you thought it would get you benefits as well?" He says dryly.
 
Romilda glares. "Please, I wouldn't." Then she hesitates, thinks about it, and shrugs. "Well, it would have to be a really bad situation, maybe. But I'd have to be in it to know."
 
And much to his chagrin Gabe can actually respect that answer - you can't know what you'd do in a situation until you're in it, that's basic common sense. He rather loathes that Romilda seems to have it now.
 
"You know how to cast it then?" He checks. "More importantly, you can control it? Water will not put it out."
 
"Having no fuel left will though." Romilda grins, and it's vicious but for once it's pointed somewhere that Gabe thinks it's well deserved.
 
And so he sighs, and then nods. "Only as a last resort though." He warns as Romilda punches the air triumphantly. "It is still more dangerous than it's worth."
 
Planning the whole thing thoroughly takes a few more days, but by Thursday they're ready to set the plan into motion (and to his chagrin Romilda had eventually convinced them that the risks outweighed the benefits with the FiendFyre so that added an entire other layer to work through - not that Gabe hadn't secretly enjoyed that).
 
Gabe knows that Neville is suspicious - Gabe was never quiet about his distaste for Romilda and now she's hanging out with him and Nathan like she's the Ignotus to their Antioch and Cadmus (though personally Gabe considers himself the Ignotus - Romilda is far more like Antioch). But the leader says nothing, just looks at Gabe warningly whenever they cross paths.
 
Gabe is unfazed. They're going to do the entire school a favor - no Defense classroom means no special Friday detentions after all. And maybe, a small, cruel part of himself he doesn't like acknowledging whispers, Amycus will get caught up in the middle of it all and we'll solve two problems with one act.
 
He's not sure how he'll feel if that actually ends up happening, but they don't need to worry - they sneak out of the common room well after curfew, when no teacher is anywhere near their classroom.
 
"I'll find the Kneazle." Romilda whispers once they've reached their destination, taking off before either boy can object.
 
Nathan shrugs and takes up his post by the door to keep watch for any Prefect patrols coming in, wand held in a white-knuckle grip. Gabe meanwhile gets started on locating which parts of the room will blow up with the least amount of noise, as well as determining what's flammable and what isn't.
 
They manage to get about twenty minutes of silent concentration before the first domino falls. "Found him!" Romilda declares cheerfully, a bit louder than Gabe is comfortable with. He glances towards her with a frown to see her levitating the still-silenced Kneazle and its cage into the air. "Nate, would you be a dear and hold him for me? Thanks." She drops the animal into Nathan's arms, and he has to lean against the doorframe for balance as he fumbles for his wand to start levitating the heavy object again.
 
From this point every detail of their movements is planned down to individual steps (which Gabe hadn't been too happy about but Romilda and Nathan had been insistent, especially once Fiendfyre got involved) and it all needs to happen very quickly.
 
Romilda joins Nathan at the door and begins working on transfiguring the wooden entrance into stone, while Nathan continues watching out for patrols and now the Kneazle as well.
 
Gabe moves to the spot he'd deemed best to start the fire and waits for Romilda's signal that she's succeeded. If she can't manage the Transfiguration he'll just blow some things up and move on, but he's admittedly gotten attached to the idea of burning the entire classroom to ashes.
 
It takes about five minutes before the girl gives him the all clear, and with a steadying breath Gabe pulls out his wand and mutters the Fiendfyre incantation.
 
He's admittedly a bit stunned by how quickly the entire area lights up, and he's racing for the exit with the flames lapping at his heels.
 
He dives through and Romilda slams the door behind him. They wait for a breathless minute, wondering if the stone will hold or if they've just written their own death warrants.
 
The door holds, and Romilda pumps her fist in silent victory. But the job isn't done yet - they still have a wild Kneazle to release back into the Forbidden Forest.
 
This part is much easier and less stressful than the last - since both Nathan and Gabe are accustomed to sneaking around with the DA it's easy for Gabe to lead the group silently through the castle and out onto the grounds without passing any patrols. Nathan and Romilda stick close behind him, carrying the Kneazle between them.
 
When they reach the forest, Romilda blasts the cage open after Alohamora fails to budge the lock, and the Kneazle has vanished into the snowy night moments later.
 
"You're welcome." Romilda mutters, rubbing at her forearms. "We should have worn our winter cloaks."
 
"Too flammable, remember? Let's just get back inside." Nathan replies, his teeth already starting to chatter.
 
Gabe concurs, the February chill settling far too quickly into his bones.
 
They run back to the castle, a bit less stealthily than when they'd left it, and continue the quick pace all the way back to the common room, where the Fat Lady admonishes them for going outside in their nightwear before letting them all back in.
 
Gabe is honestly on a bit of a high, right up until he realizes that Neville, Ginny, and Seamus are all sitting in the common room, the former two of whom look less than pleased (though Seamus mostly looks amused).
 
"So, um, good evening." Nathan says awkwardly after a few moments of everyone staring at each other silently, waiting for the other party to speak first.
 
"Good evening." Seamus echoes, still clearly entertained. "How's the weather outside then?"
 
"Freezing. That Kneazle better appreciate what we did for it." Romilda grumbles, as if all this is perfectly normal and they didn't just - probably - ruin their chances at ever working with the DA again (though that's their loss, not Gabe's).
 
"Kneazle?" Ginny asks, her annoyance briefly shifting into confusion. "What exactly were you three up to, and how much trouble will the DA be in?"
 
Gabe grins smugly. "Absolutely none. There's no trace left, they can't tie it back to any of us. And besides, they're not likely to suspect a Gryffindor." He pauses briefly, and then adds, "Though if any of you have Dark Arts tomorrow you might want to find something else to do during that time slot."
 
Seamus is outright grinning now. "Just to be clear, you guys are all banned from DA activities for the next three weeks, but I'll admit that if this actually works I'll be impressed."
 
Nathan grins back while Neville just looks exasperated.
 
"I'm not even DA." Romilda points out primly, and Ginny sighs.
 
"Welcome to the club, you're benched for three weeks." She says flatly. "We can't have members going off rouge like that without proper backup or any idea where you all were. If you'd been caught we wouldn't have been able to do anything. The entire point of the DA is to have a group of people supporting each other, not running off to show each other up."
 
Nathan is staring at his feet, and even Romilda looks a bit abashed, but Gabe holds eye contact with the redhead. "I get that, but if you refuse to-"
 
"Don't, Gabe." Ginny cuts him off sharply. "You've said your piece time and again and frankly at this point if you want to get yourself killed you can be my guest." Neville gives her a look but she presess on stubbornly. "But don't go risking other people with your intentionally half-baked schemes." She sighs. "Okay there, that's my piece. Neville, anything to add?"
 
Neville sighs. "Like Ginny and Seamus said, you're all going to be meetings-only members for the rest of the month, no going out at night with the rest of us. Gabe, I understand that you're frustrated, believe me we all are. But as Ginny pointed out you're part of a team, and if you want to remain a part of it you're going to have to respect the very few rules we place on this group. Is that clear?"
 
Gabe glares at the floor but nods. Ginny is easy to fight with, but Neville is tougher. And he gets the point, he does - he just hates that he's being needlessly replaced.
 
Nathan nudges him lightly in a show of support as the three older students head back up to bed, and Romilda gives him a grin. Gabe exhales heavily and smiles back at them.
 
Three weeks. He can handle three weeks.
 
Author's Note: I don't have all that much to say on this one, other than the fact we finally get mention of the final POV character! There are still 3 POVs who haven't had chapters, but we've at least met the other two at this point xD OH WAIT! This is also officially the half-way point of the story! Not including the three-part epilogue anyway xD Okay, I think that's everything. See you all next week!
 
Next Week: Why is it doing the right thing is always the harder option?
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So I'm thinking I might do a final 'afterwords' chapter to share my thoughts and feelings on writing this story, if that's something people would be interested in? I'm also open to answering any lingering questions people might have there as well!

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Chapter 57: Hi!
I'm so sorry for taking so long to comment, but shall we begin!

I swear I should have made a bet omg. The moment I first heard of Python I was like "hmm.. what if she was Percy's Audrey?" And even though I knew that our Audrey would be Percy's girlfriend, I always thought how it would be nice if Python and him were endgame, but honestly... they wouldn't last long haha

I want to thank you for being so passionate about the story and truly understanding the characters and doing your best to give them justice. I loved how you put so much effort on everything!

When I first saw this story I first imagined a muggleborn with a fiery personality so after seeing that Tangi was created you have no idea how happy I was.
Claire was my first character for the story. When I thought about her I wanted a strong woman who was conflicted between her believes and her family, but who definitely couldn't turn a blind eye to people in need. Then I thought if she was an insider probably no one would suspect her because of her family, so she would have some advantage!
I'm truly proud of how she grew up. She was such a lonely girl who had only Bill and her cousin Petra as her friends. Then she loved her brother and her parents but she always thought that he didn't care about her. She didn't agree with her families believes and she truly had to do something to free herself from her fears and allow herself to be who she was. And being one of the leaders of the underground made me very proud of her! Especially after Max was able to change as well and they now became stronger together as a family. Honestly I wonder how Claire decided to do in the future, if she stayed in the ministry, if she dedicated herself to her family and if she made friends (because I'm so happy that she at least became friends with Python, she truly deserves friends), whether she ended up married or not, well I'm curious but I think if she ever got married she would choose someone she truly trusted and who she could be herself and for God sake, someone who could make that poor girl smile, because come on she looks so gloomy xD But I'm happy that she made at least one friend and that she got closure with her brother, so I'm blessed :) Ps: I always thought that Claire wouldn't make it until the end xD I always thought she would be killed or that she would sacrifice herself to protect someone.

Theo... Oh my little boy. When I visualised Theo I thought about a broken boy who always wanted his parents approval. Theo was meant to be an adult version of Draco Malfoy. When Kent appeared in the picture I imagined the rivalry such like Draco and Harry and that only made the adult version I imagined more lively. Theo was lucky to have a friend like Kent, even if he didn't understand what a friend truly meant. Theo lost his mother, his uncle hated him, his father well... they didn't have the best relationship, he didn't manage to be captain, he didn't manage to be a prefect, he had to give up on his dream, he couldn't trust anyone. Well everything about Theo was supposed to be tragic. His partnership with Zara was just amazing, I believe he saw himself on her (even though she was pure evil), and he believed that maybe people could change if someone believed in him. He betrayed his family, he betrayed his colleagues for something he believed to be the right thing, Kent could have abandoned him and Kingsley could have hit believed in him and hand him over. But people believed in him, he was the same person his mother believed he was. Seeing him trying to get thought his trauma was sad, but it fit him. I'm so so happy that he found happiness somehow. Val loved him by who he was, she didn't see him because of his family, blood heritage or even his mistakes, but she saw his pure heart and that is just beautiful. And of course Theo and Kent's bromance are still one of my favourite parts of the whole story! Thinking about the future, I wonder if he managed to keep working or his stability is not well yet, but he has Val, Kingsley, Kent, all of his friends, so he will he fine :)

I will miss these kids, but I'm making room for the new kids so hopefully we will have a more funny time on UFF rather than a more serious and gloomy one :) I hope everyone who made it to the end are now happy and even if they don't make a cameo on UFF, that they have success and find their happy endings :)
Once again, thank you so much for this ride. I just can't believed it already ended, it seemed like it was yesterday that Aiden made his first pov ;-;
This won't be a serious goodbye because we will still talk and of course I will still be hyped with UFF and I'll be commenting every single chapter :p
Oh and I'm curious, as you know I'm like a huge fan of Oliver :p did you imagine him getting married? I can totally imagine him marrying someone from his work honestly.
Ok now for real, thank you so so so much. You are an amazing writer and I want you to know that I anticipated every single chapter every week and reading it made my day, seriously, even if it took me a while to comment in the chapter.
I wish you the best and I hope you have a lot of fun writing UFF and finish this trilogy which I believe will bring tears of joy and will bring you the best feeling of accomplishement. You deserve it Dani! Thank you so much *takes off my hat* farewell Ctf, thank you for the ride, you will be always remembered!
From the bottom if my heart, thank you Dani, thank you very much! <3
I won't say goodbye so have a nice week and see you around ;) take care of yourself.
luv_kero
2452 streak #2
Chapter 57: I've been anticipating the Afterword chapter so much ever since you mentioned it, and I absolutely loved reading all of your thoughts on the cast and how you went about developing their arcs!! <3 Some of the things I knew (thanks to me loving spoilers and our insanely long back-and-forth responses via comments and PM, HAHA) and some of the things were a complete surprise, so it was so cool getting to learn and relearn these behind-the-scenes tidbits!! ^^

One thing I had no idea about (but probably should've figured out, LOOOOL) was Python's intended role as canon!Audrey Weasley!! Looking back now, it totally makes and I should've known you'd make sure every aspect of Percy's story was covered, even if they weren't intended to truly be endgame with the planned divorce. :P Does that mean Python would've been leading the MII with Cadi instead of Audrey Blishwick if the latter hadn't been submitted??

Ahhhh, not a day goes by where I wish Evera were still here with us, even though I know that her death was necessary. :') I take a lot of comfort in knowing that her death served so much purpose in the story and that it wasn't meaningless (not that anyone's death was ^^;) in the grand scheme of things. :) I do wonder how the story would've changed if she had stayed alive, since I imagine Kent would've been a much less broken man. But then his motivation to really get plans in motion within the Order of Phoenix wouldn't have been as strong as it was after suffering such a devastating loss. OTL All in all, Kent and Evera will always be the best dynamic duo, and I will never stop thanking you for bringing them to life in such a beautiful way!! <3 And I guess I don't know if they'll make cameos in UFF, but I'd love to know what happened to Drake and Jemma (and even little Roderick from H:aH, LOOOL, if you ever got to planning his future XD) after the events of CtF if you have that information readily available. ^^; If not, no worries!! I'm just very attached to my original trio, HAHA. :')

I'll be reiterating a lot of stuff I've said in previous comments and/or messages, but Channer was the first character I fully conceptualized when you announced CtF and its plot. I'm honestly drawn to charismatic, outgoing male characters (Kent, Drake, Landon), so writing a coward like Channer was such a fun challenge for me since I got to really step out of my comfort zone. I think part of me subconsciously wanted him to eventually join Adeline in the Underground, since I'm a er for the good side, but I loved that he stayed neutral throughout since I think that's the path truest to his character. It wouldn't have made sense if he had joined up and although it was painful to see him get bested by Yurina, I'm really happy that he's learned to hold his family a little closer now. <3

And now, MY FOX QUEEN, MISS YURINA NAKAYASHI!! I honestly don't enjoy writing Slytherin-like characters, but she was such a fun character to create and I became so attached to her in such a short amount of time. I really think it was her background that cinched it for me. The tiger parent mentality is often lauded by Asian parents as the "right" way to raise your child and while I do think there are some great parts about it, I also think it can be incredibly toxic with the wrong parents and the wrong children. So giving Yurina such a lonely childhood made me sympathize with her so much, even though I knew I was creating an evil character who really shouldn't be redeemed. ^^; I think I would've been really sad to see her caught by Abeni, so I'm stoked that UFF saved her in a way and I can't wait to see what mischief she's planning now!! :D Even though she's probably going to be defeated in UFF, at least she got a happy ending in CtF, HAHA. XD No matter what happens, she'll forever be my queen of darkness. <3

And then we have Odette, the strongest Fugitive out there who's absolutely killing it in life now, which she completely deserves after everything she went through during the war. :') Even though I made her to get tortured, I don't think I envisioned just how much she'd have to go through and my heart broke every time her situation got bleaker. OTL I honestly feared for her life the most out of my main four, especially after Evera died, since I knew that a Fugitive death would be incredibly possible. My other Fugitive characters, Xander and Cassie, were much more capable and resourceful than Odette was, so I figured that if a Fugitive had to die, she'd be the one. OTL So knowing that she ultimately made it out alive, even with immense trauma, made me so happy because I would've been crushed to bits by her death. ^^; Odette's a strong girl who shows that persistence and sheer will are key, and I'm so glad that sunnier skies graced her future. <3

I know I didn't write about everyone, basically focusing on my own characters, but I absolutely loved reading about every single member of the cast and seeing their stories get woven together in this amazing tale. Just as it was for H:aH, it was truly the greatest honor to be part of this story in some way and I'm eternally grateful that I was given the opportunity to help shape the HoM trilogy with my imperfect characters. :') They've all grown immensely over the course of CtF and I'm beyond ecstatic to see what kind of magic you'll weave next with UFF!! x] You know I'll be there writing essays after every chapter, because I can't stop myself from spazzing over even the tiniest details and I'm actually going to cry when it's all over. I would've cried when CtF ended, but knowing that there's still one installment left kept the tears at bay, HAHA. :') But we'll worry about UFF ending when the time comes, since it's just barely begun at this point and it's time to ENJOY what's about to come!! :D

Again, from the bottom of my heart, THANK YOU for writing Confronting the Faceless!! <3 You're forever one of my writing inspirations and a friend I've grown to cherish so much after getting to know you these past few years, and I will never stop saying how grateful and lucky I am to have stumbled across Hogwarts: a History back then. x] You're the absolute best, Dani!! <3
Susan15
#3
Chapter 56: Hi!! Ok I believe I am ready for this overwhelming final chapter ;-;

Honestly, I always thought about what would happen to Ava. A part of me continuously compared her to Claire, but I think Ava is a coward. While Claire didn't agree with the values that most of Slytherins believed, she actually tried to do something about it, and a good part was that she met Bill and had her cousin. Ava had Astoria and her friend wasn't what Ava thought about the others. I think she was obsessed with "I'm better than them" to the point that she disliked Clary who was different from what she hated and also she was shocked about Kingsley, someone she saw as an example, only to find that he was a Slytherin. She put all her hatress into the house instead of growing up and understanding that not everyone is the same.
I liked how everything wrapped for her, it was the best outcome became she herself did not grow up much within all those years. And I'm really happy that she and Anwen got to become friends :)

Theo... I'm so... shocked! And happy? I'm truly glad he managed to find peace with himself (or something similar to that) and that he found someone who went through something "similar" and somehow could understand him and love him by who he is. I actually wonder if he managed to face his father since he always wanted to make him proud on top of everything and honestly I wonder if he got to see his uncle getting arrested, because well he deserved that! And I'm so happy that Kent was the best man! Ok I'm happy by how everything just went, Kingsley too. And I'm so so proud of Max and it was great to see him and Claire at Theo's wedding. I hope Theo and Val can make things work and finally forgive themselves.

Aiden as a grandpa is the strawberry on top of the ice cream xD Mia is so cute and YES ONE OF MY SHIPS SAILED!! I'm so happy Logan and Susan got together! And am I sensing a rivalry between Albus and Mia? xD Or maybe something more? :p I'm so happy and proud that Aiden was able to retire and be happy, he deserves and honestly he is one of my favourite characters. It was not easy to be a adoptive father and now he became a proud grandfather, I'm so happy for him.

Minki and Padma got together <3 and they had twins omg poor Minki! But I'm so happy and proud that he was able to follow his dream even if it was smaller than his bigger one. Oh my and Terry and Parvati wow I wasn't expecting that! Friends becoming lovers is something I live for haha. I'm so happy that everything worked out. I know that he is probably the most neutral character in the story, I don't remember, was he in the battle?

Odette! And she is the final pov ;-; Omg Dean got married and they became friends, that's so great. I wouldn't have guessed that Dean would marry a muggle! Dirk would be proud of how both of them grown up so much after everything that happened. I'm so proud of Odette and happy too, she deserves all the happiness in this world!

I can't believe this story just ended. I believe I can speak by everyone that we became attached to these characters and I'm not ready to say goodbye. I love every single character and I believe you made such an incredible story that I don't have enough words to express what I feel. Thank you so much for your time, passion and for making this amazing story and capturing our hearts. You are a great writer and I hope you feel proud of yourself just like I'm proud of you :)

I hope you have a great weekend and honestly I'm making fingers crossed to see them somehow again in UFF because I think I'll miss some of them too much xD
Thank you so much and see you Sunday to see your amazing thoughts and feelings through this story <3. Take care of yourself and have an awesome time :)
Susan15
#4
I'll give you a proper comment about the final chapter but yes please, I'd live to read your thoughts and feelings!
I'm so happy and shocked at the same time with the final chapter, but I will leave it to another time!! I just wanted to let you know how much I loved it and that I really do want to hear what your opinions :)
Have a nice week and I hope to read your feelings and thoughts next sunday :')
luv_kero
2452 streak #5
Chapter 56: Oh my gosh, it's the final epilogue. I'm not ready. OTL

Dang, I legit wasn't expecting Ava to be an ice cream shop owner after twenty years, LOOOL. :P But yikes, I can imagine that leaving Hogwarts definitely turned the "Slytherin=bad" sentiment on its head. I don't blame Ava for thinking that way during her school years, since she was a teenager and she hated not fitting in with her house. But at least she's become more open-minded and chill now, and it does show a lot of her character growth. :) It's also really sweet that she revived Fortescue's ice cream shop, since it's such a cornerstone of Diagon Alley and it broke my heart when Florean disappeared. :'( But omg, I also didn't expect Anwen to have had a whirlwind romance with a Muggle, so I'm glad that she also seems to be a lot more open-minded now as an adult. ^^ Although it that it didn't work out and I hope Anwen is doing okay as a single mother, since I know that can be difficult. >___< The cameos of Albus, Rose, and Scorpius were also super cute and I love that they're this generation's trio, hehe. x]

Oh gosh, Theo looking at little Evan and thinking of his guilt towards Evera's death had me gutted too. Q___Q But also, I'M SCREAMING AT KENT BEING HIS BEST MAN!! AND I'M ALSO SCREAMING AT THEO MARRYING VALERIE???????? FORGET WHAT I SAID ABOUT AVA. THIS IS THE BIGGEST SURPRISE OUT OF ALL OF THE EPILOGUES. I'M SO SHOOK. THIS MIGHT BE THE MOST SHOOK I'VE EVER BEEN. NEVER IN A MILLION YEARS DID I EVER EXPECT VALERIE AND THEO TO END UP TOGETHER. Like it totally makes sense with them bonding over their trauma in this support group and I bet Valerie felt AWFUL for getting caught in Branwen's web after she found out Branwen was a Death Eater. T^T It's so so so cute that Theo and Valerie eventually fell for each other, and I'm so happy that Theo gets to experience this beautiful moment because he deserves it!! And ahhhhh, I love that Kent is Best Man (best boi forever!!) and Evan is the ring bearer (/cries i love this kid so much already help) and Zac also got happily married and Valerie's family is there, and Theo has so many friends and people who care about him. :') AND JUST THAT ENDING, OMG. SHOT ME IN THE HEART. *o* I'M DED FROM HOW CUTE THEY ARE. PROCLAIMING MYSELF AS CAPTAIN OF THIS NEW SHIP NOW, HAHAHA.

Ahhhh, Logan and Susan got together!! x] And Mia, like all the kids, sounds so adorable and Aiden is definitely best grandpa!! ^^ And ooh, looks like Oliver is teaching at Hogwarts now after retiring from the professional circuit?? :D Gah, that reminds me that he's also old now too. OTL And omg, I'm ded at Mia and Albus having a Quidditch rivalry. XD Try-outs will be a battlefield this year with those two gunning for positions, HAHA. And LOOOOOL, I also wasn't expecting that kiss comment from Mia. :P I imagine Albus will definitely be a heartthrob, especially when he gets older, and Mia will be one of many who have a crush on young Potter, LOLOLOL. But ahhhh, so happy that Aiden has such a beautiful family and that he's enjoying life so much now!! He completely deserves it after everything he went through!! And I also love that Ava made an appearance at the end, even though they never actually met in the main story, since everyone's stories are ultimately tied together in this epic. :)

Haha, definitely not surprised that Minki opened up a dance studio. XD He really suffered the least overall out of everyone in CtF, I think. Him and Venus. And awww, so cute that he and Padma ended up having twins!! x] And ooh, Padma is also a teacher now?? :D What kind?? (also there's a tiny typo where you wrote parvati instead of padma and i was like, wait which twin is which?? is padma the gryff and parvati the ravenclaw?? XD) And awwww, I wasn't expecting Terry and Parvati to get married, but I can totally see them together and it's so cute that the two best friends each got married to one of the twins, HAHA. :P They're all one big happy family now!! ^^ Minki and Padma's banter is also so cute, and I love how chill Minki is now in comparison to how he was in seventh year. :') And ooh, what does Terry do in the Department of Transportation?? Guess he followed the more traditional path of working for the Ministry while Jerome went traveling, LOOOOL. XD

And now, we're here at last at the final epilogue. T^T Odette was the last of my main characters submitted to CtF, she was the last POV chapter of the story (and the last Fugitive to be rescued), and now she's the last of the epilogues. But that doesn't mean she's last in my heart, because she's far from it!! <3 I figured she would eventually strike up a friendship with Dean, since they both had the connection of being on the run with Dirk at some point, and I bet they've shared a lot of stories about Dirk with each other over the years. :) My heart hurts knowing that Odette still suffered so much for so long, even though it's completely understandable that she wouldn't have mentally healed in an instant. That's just not possible when you've gone through what she did. And ahhhhh, HARRY COMING THROUGH TO GIVE HER A CHANCE MAKES ME SO HAPPY!! TRULY AN ICON. AND AHHHH, SO SO SO PROUD OF ODETTE FOR BECOMING HEAD OF THE IMPROPER USE OF MAGIC OFFICE!! *o* SHE OVERCAME ALL OF THE OBSTACLES LIFE THREW HER WAY AND WE LOVE SEEING FEMALE MUGGLEBORNS GETTING RIGHTFULLY RECOGNIZED FOR THEIR WORK IN THE MINISTRY!! x] Again, restating what I said in Kent's epilogue, I completely relate to Odette and Dean talking to Dirk's gravestone so this definitely hit home for me. It's a way to stay connected with them, even though they've passed, and I think it's very powerful that Dirk was able to create a very unique bond between Odette and Dean, even though he had long since passed. :) And I love that the ice skating figurine managed to survive the war!! It's definitely a beautiful, subtle reminder of the past before the war. ^^ And ahhhhh, that final sentence really pulled at my heartstrings. :') Everything is going to be just fine, Odette!! You've made it this far and you're only going to continue climbing to the top!! <3

Also, a big resounding YES to your A/N!! I'd love an Afterwords chapter!! :D I'll save my final CtF comment for then, hehe. ^^
Susan15
#6
Chapter 55: Hi!!

Omg yes! Venus had her dream come true, I'm so proud of her!
Oh and is she getting interested in that man?? :p
I kind of imagined her with someone from work since she would probably be a professional most of the time and she wouldn't go out on dates with just anyone, especially because she would care a lot about her job and would dedicate 100% of her time to that, so I truly see things work out between them :)

Tangi!! Our precious child who is not a child anymore :') I'm so glad she and Xander kept their friendship and managed to still be a part of each other's life!
Aw and Hazel made it out alive! And I can definitely imagine their marriage :) I'm also so happy that Clary and Kingsley got married too, like omg yes!

Gabe!! I truly thought that he was the groom!! I was shipping him with Romilda ;-; but it's still good that they kept being friends all this time. Same goes for Nathan, I'm truly happy that the two of them kept their friendship after all this time! Gabe also speaking in french with Fleur was just perfect haha.

Kent!! Aww I love the name Evan as I bet Evera would love it! He truly acts like a proud dad! And Tori already grown up omg ;-;. Why am I imagining those two in Hogwarts having the time of their lives? Haha. Kent is now a married man with two beautiful kids and I bet he feels the happiest man on Earth. Evera would be really proud of him. The final scene is just heartbreaking :') farewell Evera.

And finally but not last, Audrey!! I'm so glad that she and Percy got serious and started having a life together and forming a family. Their daughter Mai is really energetic haha. And I'm so glad to see that Audrey and Python still remained friends! Omg Lucy... that hit my poor heart ;-; I bet Lucas would feel proud and happy for her. I can imagine little Lucy in Hogwarts as a happy kid and perhaps who knows, maybe she would also become a healer! And Python becoming her godmother is just amazing!

I can't believe that next chapter is the last ;-; it's been a long journey and to see that everyone have grown up and becoming happier (even Yurina haha) is so heartwarming and we became attached to all of them so it will be hard to say goodbye. I hope that maybe some of them may make a cameo in UFF :')
I'm preparing tissues for the last chapter which will take another 10 years after this one and since it's set prior to the UFF events, I'm quite curious!

Thank you for this chapter, for the "romantic and couples" chapter haha. It's good to see everyone getting their dreams came true and them having their own families.
I hope you have an incredible week, great classes and I wish you everything the best :) Rest well and take good care of yourself.
I will see you later for the story's finale ;-; see ya~ :)
luv_kero
2452 streak #7
Chapter 55: Good on Venus for becoming the youngest ever Unspeakable!! Just like Rajani, we love seeing female Slytherins achieving their goals!! ^^ At the beginning of the story, I would've never expected Venus to be working in the Love Chamber. But after her work with identifying the loss of hope during the war, it does make sense that she'd end up in the chamber that's all about unraveling the mystery behind emotion. And omg, I wasn't expecting Cadfael to be an Unspeakable as well!! :D He's so much more chill now after his angsty Hogwarts days. XD Hopefully life has been much kinder to him since then. :') And ooooh, do I spy some sparks flying between him and Venus?? :P I can definitely see them together, bonding over their Slytherin days at Hogwarts, both of them with their air of mystery and very small social circles, haha. And since Unspeakables can't really share what goes on with their work, I imagine it'd be nice to be with someone who'll understand any workplace frustrations and such. ^^

Awwwww, love that Xander and Matangi are still so close after the war!! x] And yaaaay, so glad that Hazel survived and is thriving now!! :D It's so awesome to see that she's become an activist and hopefully things change for the better for the LGBTQ+ community with her leading the charge. :) And omg, Kingsley and Clary made up and married each other!! Ahhhhh, that's so sweet!! ^^ Wow, look at Clary, going from worrying about her grades in Hogwarts, to a bittersweet relationship with Lenox, to being one of the best Auror trainers in the Ministry, to being a member of the Underground, to becoming the Minister of Magic's wife while also being the Head of Magical Law Enforcement!! Again, we love seeing successful female Slytherins killing it in life!! :D And yesss, Xander is gonna be amazing in his new job and I'm so happy he's ending his dueling career on such a high note!! :D And ahhhh, Matangi and Hazel's wedding will be absolutely beautiful, and I really hope they'll be able to wed soon!! x]

Haha, you really threw me for a loop there in thinking that Gabe was the groom. XD I wonder who David is and how Romilda met him. :P But it's awesome to see that Gabe, Nathan, and Romilda are still best friends and as close as ever after all these years. ^^ And ooh, love the little bonding moment between Gabe and Fleur!! :D And also, dang, it's very cool that Gave is working as an investigative reporter. I definitely wasn't expecting that to be his career, since I thought he might go the Auror route or something similar. He was such an explosive kid, always gunning for justice. :P But I can see why he'd choose investigative reporting instead, especially since it does have a lot of freedom and traveling is so much fun. ^^ And he still gets to pursue justice, albeit in a more roundabout manner, LOOOL. And I guess he's going the Charlie route and staying a happy bachelor for the rest of his life, which is awesome and I'm glad he's happy without needing a partner to fulfill him. :)

Oh wow, another Weasley kid to add to the clan. XD They just don't stop coming. :') And it's funny that Mai is so different in temperament from her parents and Percy must have his hands full trying to make sure she doesn't upend everything in their lives. :P And it's so cute that Audrey Caldwell is still known as Python, even after all these years, HAHA. It's definitely a very cool nickname, even without the Underground attachment, so I can see why she'd keep it, LOOOOL. And omg, ahhhh, it's so sweet that Audrey decided to name Lucy after Lucas. T^T He really meant a lot to both her and Percy, so it's very beautiful that they're choosing to honor him through the newest addition to their family. :) He still lives in everyone's hearts, even though he's long gone now, and I'm sure he would've loved doting on Mai and Lucy if he had survived. >___< And I just realized that this means Audrey will have a pre-teen at home and a teenager at Hogwarts while she's dealing with stuff in UFF, LOL. What a busy woman. :')

And oh my gosh, Kent, my lovely boy, I don't think I'm ready to let go of him yet. Q___Q He's one of my absolute favorite OCs and I'm so happy I got a opportunity to expand on him for this story. <3 Like he was already an amazing side character that I loved to bits, but getting the chance to see him under the spotlight made me so incredibly happy, despite everything that happened to him during the war. :') And awww, Tori's a teenager now and I love how sassy she's become. XD Reminds me a lot of Holly in H:aH, LOLOLOL. :P And omg, so cute that she considers Jemma an aunt too, and I'm so so curious to know how Jemma and Drake are doing nowadays!! ^^ And omg, Ebony is such a beautiful name for Holly's daughter, hehe. x] It's awesome that Kent and Willow were able to find their way back to each other, even though it was so rough. Totally understandable that they broke up after the war. Kent was still grieving the loss of Evera and Willow then had to go through the exact same thing with Laurel. They definitely needed to grow separately as they processed their grief. You don't want to be at 50% when you're dating someone, using them to fill that other 50%. You want to be at 100% and dating another person who's at 100% for it to be a healthy, long-lasting relationship. At least that's my belief, LOL, although I don't have any personal experience to go off of (so who knows if I'm spouting nonsense). ^^; But Evan is such a great name, and Evera would've loved him and Sammy to pieces. x] And oh my gosh, my heart is dying because the end of Kent's epilogue is at Evera's grave. T^T I'll be very honest here, I talk a lot to the gravestone of one of my loved ones (and I use it as proxy for the other gravestones that I can't physically visit), so Kent talking to Evera this way was something I wholly related to. And my heart is breaking all over again, because I miss Evera so much and I don't think I'll ever get over her death. But I will stay strong, because she was a strong girl and Kent is staying strong too. I hope there're only clear skies for him for the rest of his life, even though I know things will get crazy with raising two boys in the house and there's still UFF's events to come ten years later. ^^; And omg, I just realized that Evan (and maybe Sammy) will be at Hogwarts when UFF starts!! XD Not that it's super relevant in the grand scheme of things, LOL, but I will have fun imagining the newest crop of Sylvesters at the best school in the world, having shenanigans of their own. :') And I'm just really really really happy that Kent got a happy ending, because he deserves it and I love him so much. He and Evera will always be my favorite pair of siblings, forever and ever, and I'm so happy that their bond will never be broken, even by death. <3

OMG, the final epilogue is coming soon and it's set right before UFF!! :D I'm not ready at all for CtF to end though. OTL But I'm also super excited to see the five remaining POVs and catch up with them twenty years later. ^^
Susan15
#8
Chapter 54: Hi!! Sorry for taking so long to comment!

First of all, my heart is hurting for Lucas. He was one of my favourite characters and honestly I feel like since half of the story he was making a rough path and the signals to his tragedy were there ;-; His last pov and Odette's pov showed how he was overworking and not taking care of himself. I liked him a lot, but somehow I feel like I knew that he would have a bad ending. I'm glad he had a painless passing and I'm sad that he didn't do a check up with Python because maybe he could have survived, but that's so Lucas.. And I'm really sad for his mother, she suffered so much and losing a son is like losing a part of her, especially since it's not natural. Oh my ;-; rest in peace Lucas.

Oh Channer ;-; poor boy, he must feel so guilty. But we all never know what is going to happen tomorrow so it's normal that we don't say "I love you" everyday. But of course it's truly painful and the last interaction is always what is pressed in our minds ;-; I know you will be able to process your grief and you will be better with time. You have your mother and sister, you will be fine!

I'm so glad that Max made it out alive. Now Claire and Max can really talk and pour their hearts to one another. They just "lost" their father who will be imprisoned after waking up (if he eventually wakes up), so they just have one another and their mother. And I truly understand what she means that everyone is biased and already settled their minds that everyone in the losing side is guilty. Fitz!! I'm so glad to see him!!! And I'm super glad that he is fine!!! Willow and Theo omg guys ;-; I'm so proud of Theo to try helping out and prove that everyone deserves a second chance like he had, because of their family environment and ideals. And I bet Willow feels like she compensated a lot from what she did. Everything is good now, I'm happy for them.

Oh Farrah :( you need time to heal my poor child. I understand that Christian is very important to her but he wouldn't understand what she has been through and she definitely needs to have a support near her who truly understands her and even though I know that Christian was what kept her sanity, she created a version of him in her mind who probably doesn't exist, and she needs time for herself now. You can get well child ;-;.

Yurina queen of the evil! Always causing trouble, really haha. Abeni must have a huge grudge on Yurina, because she is quite a pain in the haha. Let's see how Yurina will cause problems in Uff because I know you're involved young lady!

Wow next epilogue is 10 years from here! We're going to see the Hogwarts kids as grown ups!! I hope Venus and Minki managed to follow their dreams! I'm quite curious how Ava and Gabe became as adults haha. I bet everyone else is doing well now :)
I can't wait for the next epilogue!!
I hope you have a nice week, take care of yourself, rest well and see you later ;)
petitreveur
#9
Chapter 54: I told myself I was going to properly comment at the end of the three-part epilogue but I know I had to drop a comment after I read the first POV. NOOOOO LUCAS NOOOOOOO :"( Why do all my fav characters have to die hurhur /cries/ First Evera, then Laurel and now Lucas. My heart was literally squeezed tight when I read the line "He doesn't wake up" and I'm like NO NO NO, THAT CAN'T BE TRUE :"( I should have realised that foreshadowing when he was feeling way too exhausted than ever, that he w-wouldn't make it pass the night. Idk why but his death hits so much harder than anyone else's?? Lucas was (fk, I have to use the word 'was' now) such a golden boy, he did so much as a Healer and contributes sooo much as part of the Underground!! Although he didn't "fight" in the war, he was a true war hero!! I guess it's...relieving that his death wasn't a painful one and he passed in the comforts of his house....he will definitely be sorely missed :"( I can't imagine how broken his mother would be when she realises that her son is never going to wake up again >.< OH GOSHH, THAT START ALREADY SCREAMS DEPRESSING!! (I literally paused for five whole minutes before going on to the next POV)

Glad to see that Channel survived the war!! That sibling dynamic between Channel and Adeline has drastically changed. Damn, those two siblings must feel rather awkward and apologetic to each other but I feel it's neither their fault that things turned out that way. It's the awful circumstances that caused things to spiral out of control >.< It's so heartwarming to see Adeline and their mother visiting Channel in the hospital. , Channel must be feeling even more horrible and guilty for not actively doing anything during the war after learning that their father had passed away in Azkaban. Despite the awkwardness between the siblings, I'm sure Adeline never actually blamed Channel for ousting her and that's what family is all about. They are there for you no matter how much you might have forsaken them and at the end of the day, they still worry about you and welcome you back with open arms ^^ Things are never the same but Channel still has Adeline and their mother and things will get better with time :-)

Another POV that reflects the phrase "blood is thicker than water". Even though Max was a Death Eater, Claire can't bring herself to hate him or cut off ties with him. Sure, she does not agree with his dealings but after all, he is still her brother, her family. That conflicted feelings within her must be chewing her up for she knows that her brother deserved to be punished for the greater good but at the same time, Max is her brother, they are related by blood, and it must be hard to see him locked up in Azkaban (when their father was already sentenced while in a coma, big oof!) That grey area would always be grey ^^" Oh wow, I would have never thought Willow to be on defence (should I say that Max is very lucky to have Claire as his sister? LOL) and Theo to be the final witness!! Looks like Max doesn't have to live in a crammed cell anymore :')

Poor Farrah :'( She is suffering so much but I'm glad to see the tiniest progress that she is making since the day she was admitted into Mungo's. It that she doesn't really have any close friends around her except for Clara as all of her friends are all Muggles who wouldn't be able to understand what she had gone through because of the Statue. And now Clara is feeling slightly wary around her >.< Well, I don't blame Clara, she must be at a huge loss of what to do with someone so utterly broken, she had never been in her situation before and neither is she a trained medical professional. But it's great that Farrah is seeing a therapist and I can tell that Ellie is a good psychiatrist to her. Oh nooo, it must have been a last straw for Farrah when she heard that she's not allowed to see Christian as it was Christian who kept her fighting on for her life in the cells >.< Yet again, Christian prolly wouldn't be able to understand what happened to Farrah as a Muggle. But maybe, it's just the presence of Christian that she needs? Somehow, I don't think that Clara is a mean friend to Farrah or anything, it's just that Farrah is just so delicate right now and Clara obviously can't be there 24/7 for her >.< It's draining for both girls. Perhaps, a longer hospital stay would do them both good? The impact of war is just so harsh :"(

Da boss lady is in the house!! And she is getting straight to work!! With her schemings!! Poor Amos, he is so naive to think that he can get a taste of her LMAO and Yurina is using that to her strength, obviously. And voila, now she has information about Abeni Akingbade, which leads me wondering what exactly happened over the past twenty years?? The Akingbades must be pretty influential people in Nigeria?? And I'm pretty sure Yurina managed to wreck chaos in Nigeria and overthrew the government in some way or another?? I swear this little Japanese lady just doesn't stop :P Abeni must have gone through much turmoil, seeing the UFF's first teaser. Damn, everything is getting juicier and I can't wait for the tea to be spilled xD
luv_kero
2452 streak #10
Chapter 54: Oh man, I should've figured Lucas would end up dying from overwork. :'( The signs were all there, especially during his final main POV. T^T Him overworking himself was a constant theme and it so much that he had to go out this way. It reminds me a lot of karoshi, "overwork death" in Japanese, and I'm just glad that he got one final night with his mother and that he died in the comfort of his home. OTL But oh my god, his mother is going to be absolutely heartbroken when she finds him in the morning and my heart hurts so much for her, because she was probably so thankful that her son wasn't directly on the battlefield, but he ended up being a casualty anyway and she'll still have to bury him with all of the others. T^T In a way, Lucas' death sort of has a numbness to it and both Audreys are probably going to be devastated when they receive the news as well. :'( As well as Percy, Jemma, Jun, and anyone else who knew Lucas. ;~; He was a great guy though and he really did a lot for the war effort. In the end, he definitely died a hero like the others.

Oh my gosh, I've been anticipating the conclusion to Channer's story ever since his final main POV and I'm so glad he's in a much better state than some of the others. <3 Granted, things aren't perfect and they never will be, especially since Timon is dead, but at least he has a chance to make things better and that's what counts the most. Channer is still so young and he has his whole life ahead of him to strengthen the bonds he has with his remaining family members. It's something I'm personally trying to work on as well, although our circumstances are admittedly very different. One thing I definitely fear is leaving things unsaid when it's too late, and my heart hurts so much that Timon and Channer never got to properly bond before Timon died. :'( It's definitely going to weigh on Channer a lot from now on, and I hope that he'll be able to process his grief and regret in a healthy way. On the plus side, I'm so happy that Henry is okay and it's so cool that Adeline stayed with his dad while she was in hiding!! ^^ If anything, maybe Henry and Channer can become eventual friends with Henry easing some of Channer's regrets with stories of Timon in Azkaban and how Timon was always talking about how proud he was of his kids. It won't alleviate all of the pain, but it might help a bit, knowing that even though he never verbally expressed his feelings to his dad, Timon still deeply loved and cared for Channer until the very end. Linette, Adeline, and Channer are definitely going to struggle for years to come, but at least they have each other and that's what matters. <3

Oof, it does that Claire's still stuck between both sides, even after the end of the war. But it's nice to see that short moment between her and Fitzwilliam, and he's grown so much from his school days, ahhhhh :') And oh my, I guess since Claire does technically have a stake in the other side because of her family, what the Order is doing for clean-up probably does feel a lot more harsh to her, even though they probably feel completely justified in doing so. It's a very gray area and at the very least, Willow and Theo came through by helping out, even though they had no obligation to. I do wonder why they did. Maybe it was Holly asking for a favor, since she knew Claire?? Maybe it was just Willow not wanting someone else to lose a sibling after she did?? Maybe it was Theo knowing that Max was like him, brought up with Death Eater ideals but still capable of change?? At the very least, I'm glad that Claire doesn't have to lose a family member who's so precious to her and she's much luckier than most who've been affected by the war.

Oh wow, good to see that Farrah also survived Azkaban!! I'm guessing we'll find out Hazel's fate in Matangi's epilogue. Anyway, it's awesome that Farrah is already seeing a therapist and Ellie sounds wonderful. :) And considering how broken Farrah already was back in February, I'm not surprised she was even worse by the time all of the prisoners were released from Azkaban. Her fantasies were probably the only thing keeping her going while she was at Azkaban. x___x But yikes, I don't know if a happy ending with Christian is in the cards. Considering what she's been through, she'll really need someone by her side who'll understand the extent of this war and since Christian is a Muggle, I don't think he can be that person, realistically. >___< Maybe if this were set during UFF's time with magic finally being revealed, Christian could become her caretaker and they could have their happily ever after. But considering how Clara is Farrah's best friend and Clara's reaction to Farrah's breakdowns, I doubt Christian will be able to last long either. >___>

And finally, my beautiful and strong queen of darkness, Miss Yurina Nakayashi!! <3 Going to America was definitely the right call, HAHA. (Since no pandemic to worry about and the US was in a much better state back then OTL If this were 2020, I'd be like, NOOOOO, GO BACK TO ASIA!! ANYWHERE BUT THE US!!) And yesssss, what a QUEEEEEN, living in the lap of luxury in Vegas!! XD Love love love that she's already scheming and recruiting people to her cause!! She isn't wasting any time in making plans for world domination. XD And ooooooh, I've been so so so curious to find out about the bit with soap operas that you asked me about a while back and it's so cool to finally see it here!! :D And oof, looks like Amos is her newest puppet and I love her puppeteering so much!! XD She'd never give him a second glance if it weren't for the information he's gathering for her. He's too much of a lust-driven doormat and Yurina is WAY above that. x] If she ever does fall in love, it'll be with a man who can provide a challenge and keep up with her intellectually. He'll have to REALLY impress her with his cunning and capabilities, and men like that are few and far in between, especially relative to Yurina. She has no time to deal with small fries like Amos and he's probably only got an Avada Kedavra in his future once she's done with him. :') But ooh, Abeni better watch out since Yurina has her eye on her now!! The fox is on the prowl and no one is safe now, hehe <3

Ooh, super curious to see what life will be like ten years from now!! Definitely a lot happier than this, since most people will have healed considerably by then. :') And wizards probably won't be affected by everything that's happening in the Muggle world, LOL (collapse of the housing bubble, Great Recession, etc.) :P