Epilogue One

Confronting the Faceless 💀 Complete
Summer, 1998
"The consequences of our actions are always so complicated, so diverse"
 
Lucas Elstewart
 
"You're going home tonight Lucas, I'm getting sick of seeing you asleep on the staff room couch."
 
There was a time in his life when Lucas Elstewart would have flinched in poorly-disguised fear hearing that sharp tone coming from Audrey Caldwell. That time no longer exists - after everything they've survived, Audrey's temper is pretty low on the list of things that worry him. Heck, they're close enough now that he regularly, openly refers to her by a nickname that once upon a time only her sister could get away with using.
 
"There are still patients in the Muggleborn Ward." He says flatly, and Python sighs.
 
"Yes, and you're going to be one of them if you don't go home. Seriously Lucas, you look more gaunt than they do at this point. No one needs you working yourself to death right now, we're all mourning enough already."
 
Right for the guilt complex - she really is pissed. It works though, it always does, and he can feel himself caving.
 
"I should just check in on-"
 
"No." She says firmly. "Your shift ended yesterday Lucas. Go home and see your mom, I'm getting sick of her calling me every two hours asking where you are."
 
Lucas grimaces. "Why do you have my mom's number?"
 
"Because we're teaming up to make sure you don't work yourself into a heart attack." Python replies shortly. "Go home, she's making dinner."
 
Lucas grumbles a bit more, but they both know he's going to go. If he wasn't, he'd have walked away from the conversation by now, like he usually would. But today... today he's just feeling too tired to really resist. Not that he isn't always tired, but today's exhaustion feels like a physical force, weighing down his limbs and seeping through his organs, squeezing around his chest, making each inhale a bit of a chore.
 
Maybe that should concern him, but medical magic is tiring, and like Python had pointed out he's pulling a lot of overtime making sure all the Muggleborns still staying with them are stable and on the way to recovery. And they all are now - they lost about a dozen at the beginning to malnutrition and shock, but every other patient is officially out of the danger zone and will be released some time between now and the end of July.
 
They'd released their first two dozen patients already, and another eight are being cleared to go home in the morning, leaving around fourty five or so people in the Ward, primarily the most extreme cases from Azkaban, the worst of whom are still on IVs.
 
That was an ingenious move on Python's part - Lucas is confident they either would have lost more patients or lost some of the Healers had they not had the Muggle contraptions to help stabilize the malnourished patients. It's probably taking longer for some people to get out of the hospital than if they were being healed magically, but no one is complaining.
 
He blinks out of his thoughts and realizes that Python has already swept out of the staff room, leaving him to haul himself off the couch and stumble over to the Floo connection they'd had set up a few weeks back. Most of the Healers are too tired at the end of their shifts these days to safely apparate home, so Audrey had coordinated with Gryphon to finally connect the Mungo's staff room to the Floo Network. It's only temporary, of course, it's too dangerous to leave an open connection in the center of Mungo's, but for the time being it's a lifesaver.
 
He goes straight home (his mother had hooked their home up to the Floo Network as well, though he doesn't know the story behind that decision. His mother had been viciously against anything magic in their house for years - aside from Holly - and he suspects Python has something to do with this change as well) and is greeted with the promised smell of dinner.
 
"Lucas? Oh good, Audrey got you to come home." His mother sounds relieved, and he can hear her bustling around the kitchen, probably making sure nothing is going to burn before coming out to check if it's really him.

He wanders over to their couch and collapses onto it gracelessly, his legs too tired to keep him up for very long. Yeah, he definitely needs to sleep - maybe for a few days. Maybe a week.
 
Holly hops up onto his lap and starts loudly demanding attention. She settles on his stomach, purring happily, when he aquiesces.
 
Amelia Elstewart hurries into view a moment later, and she pauses in the kitchen doorway and regards Lucas with sad eyes. "Darling, you're going to work yourself to death." She scolds. "We'll eat in here. How does a movie night sound? They're making a new Star Wars movie, we could rewatch the first one."
 
Lucas hums idly in response, more focused on Holly than his mother. Splitting his attention feels too exhausting just now.
 
He thinks his mother frowns before she turns to go back into the kitchen, and Lucas sort of loses time after that, Holly's thrumming purrs lulling him into a sort of trance-like state. His cat kneads happily at his stomach, little claws biting into his skin but not really hurting. After the battle, not much really hurts anymore.
 
Food does appear in his line of sight at some point, and Holly is shooed away. He's disappointed about that, but doesn't complain, just shifts laboriously so he can eat without spilling.
 
His mother does put on Star Wars, and he gets caught up in the story, chewing robotically despite not really feeling hungry. But he can't remember the last time he'd eaten, and everyone is always on him about taking better care of himself, so he obediently swallows down the entire plate. His mother looks pleased at least.
 
He goes to bed afterwards, his mother assuring him that she'll clean up and that he needs to rest. He lies down on his bed after shrugging off his Healers' robes, and drops into darkness only moments later.
 
He doesn't wake up.
 
 
Channer Lindberg
 
Channer is one of the first people in the Muggleborn Ward released, and he's glad for it - he'd felt like an invader being inside a ward meant for Muggleborns when he himself was comfortably half-blood and had really, barely been impacted by the war at all. There was the end, of course, but he'd been in Azkaban for maybe a month as compared to the rest of the people in the rooms around him.
 
Adeline and his mother had both visited him during his stay at Mungo's, but discussion had been clipped and uncertain. He'd tried to apologize to Adeline at the same time she'd tried to apologize to him and they'd both ended up falling silent so neither of them had gotten the apology out.
 
Not that Channer thinks Adeline owes him anything. He can vaguely remember Yurina's interrogation and he's certain that his sister had to go into hiding after he'd revealed everything she'd told him in confidence. He'd ruined her life - she's definitely not the one who needs to apologize.
 
It's the day before he's released that his mother finally tells him that his father had died while locked away in Azkaban. His funeral is scheduled for the next day, and Channer numbly agrees to go even though the nurse had urged him to take it easy for at least another week.
 
When his mother leaves he tries to remember the last time he'd spoken to his father, remember what he'd said. Had he said "I love you?" No, probably not. Channer isn't sure he'd ever told his dad that.
 
Now he doesn't have the option to any more.
 
The next day is sunny and clear, and the witch working the desk who helps him sign out is chipper enough that it feels like she might be insane.
 
"Great day for freedom!" She jokes brightly as he signs off on his own release forms. "Got any plans coming up?"
 
"I'm..." He considers telling her. It would probably ruin her mood though (and hasn't he ruined enough?) so he settles on a half-truth. "I'm seeing my mom and my sister later."
 
"Oh how fun!" The witch beams. "Linette and Adeline, right? Lovely women, always a joy to see them come in."
 
Channer decides he'll freak out about this stranger knowing his family later, which is a new trick he learned while in prison. So it was good for something, apparently.
 
His sister is waiting outside the hospital. "Hey." She greets quietly. "Um, we're actually waiting for someone else." She adds with an awkward smile, and if this is going to be how it it with his sister now Channer doesn't blame her. But the idea that she won't want to be around him anymore hurts more than he thought it would.
 
"Oh." He says, taking a long moment to realize that he probably just sounded incredibly rude. He's not used to talking to people anymore, not that he was very good before. "Um, who is it?"
 
"You don't know him. He let me stay at his place after mine was ransacked so we've become friends." Adeline says, and then flinches at the same time that Channer does, but she doesn't apologize for bringing up his betrayal. He'd already told her not to.
 
"Anyway, he's visiting his son - Henry is still in the Ward for now, but he's stable. Healers say he should be out next week some time, which is exciting for Charles." Adeline quickly finishes the thought. "He should be back in a bit, he's going to drive us over to the funeral."
 
Channer blinks instead of verbally replying, uncertain how to take that. Also drive? What the heck does that even mean? He thinks his father mentioned something of the sort a few times, but Channer honestly had never paid it much mind, as it was a Muggle travel method and he was always more interested in the magical variety of transportation.
 
Now that he's thinking about it, he has no idea if he still has a job. The thought nearly breaks through the walls he's built up around his emotions after weeks in solitary, but despite a few cracks he does manage to hold steady. No need to start panicking now - he'll save it for when he's home by himself and isn't bothering anyone.
 
The man who eventually joins them - he introduces himself as Charles Davies - looks to be pushing fourty, with broad shoulders and calloused hands that speak to a life of manual labor that Channer has to stop himself from physically recoiling from.
 
"So you're Adeline's brother. She was right worried about you so I'm glad to see you're safe and sound." The man says with a grin that's warm despite the stress lines pressed deep into his face.
 
Channer just nods, not sure how to respond to that. Charles leads them over to a strange contraption, and he hopes his sister knows how much he's trusting her right now because the damn thing looks like a death trap.
 
Still, he gets in and they manage to reach their destination without incident, though Channer is feeling a bit ill from the endless jerking of the machine. When he steps out he needs to take a few moments to breath in the clean air and clear his head.
 
"Thanks Charles." He hears his sister say, followed by the sound of the death trap rattling away. When he focuses again he realizes his mother is standing in the archway of the graveyard, wrapped in black and looking far older than her actual age.
 
Something in Channer twists, and he follows his sister as she hurries over to their mother to pull her into a hug.
 
"I'm so glad you two are alright." He hears as he approaches, and for once when he mother turns to hold out an arm to him he allows himself to be folded into the embrace.
 
He can never tell his father he loves him - he wont make that mistake with the family he has left.
 
 
Claire Rosier
 
Max survives the Battle of the Ministry, despite Claire's near-certainty that Yurina would kill him when she'd run away that night. He's found unconscious and bleeding heavily in the same hallway Claire had abandoned him in, and he's put under watch as St. Mungo's until he's healed, at which point he's put into a Ministry holding cell pending trial for his actions with the Unit during the war.
 
Claire isn't allowed to see him, but a friend from her time employed with the Wizengamot Administrative Services who's working the case takes pity and keeps her updated on his situation.
 
Max was a lower level Snatcher who never took the Mark and didn't participate in the Battle of Hogwarts, so he mostly likely won't get a life sentence for Azkaban (unlike their father, who was sentenced while still in a coma in St. Mungo's and it's moments like this Claire wishes she was still blind to the similarities between the two sides). However, up until now every trial has resulted in a prison sentence, and Claire feels sick just thinking about her brother being locked up when he really was just doing what he thought was right.
 
Not that he was right but... Claire sighs and kicks at her desk leg mournfully.
 
She's been moved back to her former job, but it doesn't have quite the same effect that it used to. These days they aren't hunting down dangerous criminals, at least not to her mind. Now the reports she reads and files are of young men and women, some only teenagers, being sent to the worst prison in the wizarding world because they were on the losing side of a war.
 
"It's a witch hunt." Fitzwilliam Selwyn observes from the cubicle beside hers, glancing up at her startled jump. "You were sighing again. Thinking about your brother?"
 
She smiles ruefully tilting her head in confirmation. Fitz had been an early recruitment for her - she knew he'd married a Muggleborn, but was protected thanks to his last name, and he'd been a perfect fit for the Underground. He's continuing now to prove that he's probably the best person in this whole damn Department. "Yeah. His court hearing is tomorrow but I'm not allowed to testify. They're not allowing any witnesses who would be 'biased'." She takes the extra effort to make the sarcastic air quotes with her fingers.
 
Fitz rolls his eyes as well. "You'd think they'd learn after how badly things went with the trials last time." He says sadly. "We should get word to Kingsley - I think he left the justice stuff in the hands of the highest ranking Aurors left after the battle, and they're obviously working through their anger still."
 
Claire hums. She knows the acting Minister has his hands full unravelling all the legal damage done - Rat complains about it at their weekly dinners with Python (and there's a sentence she never thought she'd say, but honestly the outings are the only source of happiness in her life at the moment) - but she wishes Kingsley was doing a better job choosing the people he puts in charge of the projects he can't attend to himself. Just being part of the Order doesn't automatically make you a fair judge.
 
Not that Claire has any actual control in the area though - she just compiles documents and magically sticks them together so they can be passed on to the lawyers involved with each case.
 
"You can't testify, but aren't the trials open to the public?" Fitz says after a moment, startling Claire out of her thoughts. "Why don't you go be there as emotional support for him? He'd probably appreciate it."
 
I abandoned him and our father repeatedly for almost a year, but sure, sitting and watching him be sentenced to prison will make up for all that. She thinks, but outwardly she gives a small smile.
 
"I was already planning to. It's the least I can do." Is the understatement of the year.
 
The next day Claire arrives  early for the trial, hoping maybe she can see her brother before he's brought into the courtroom.
 
Instead she sees two lawyers bickering quietly near the entrance.
 
"I'm not approving this witness!" One hisses as Claire draws close enough to hear."And that's final."
 
"Too bad for you the judge has already approved him." The other lawyer says evenly, but her posture is tense and irritated. She glances up and sees Claire. "And that's all I'm going to say on it." She declares and strides away. The other lawyer looks ready to argue until he sees Claire as well and backs off.
 
The female lawyer had looked familiar, but it isn't until Claire is inside the courtroom and watching the opening statements that she realizes it's Willow Kiddell, one of the prosecutors who had worked with the Muggleborn Registration Commission. Which is... a weird choice, but Claire can't say anything unless she wants to be thrown out of court.
 
Max sees her as soon as he's led in, and she tries to convey support, apology, and strength in a single look but she's not sure she actually succeeded.
 
From there the trial feels like a joke. Willow is on defense (which is a surprise) but the prosecutor is nailing both her and Max to the door rather firmly when Willow finally calls her final witness.
 
Theodore Yaxley looks good for someone who was on the run from the Ministry for almost four months, and he has a confidence about him that feels far more genuine that the kind he used to carry around him like armor.
 
He gives his name and takes the mandatory dose of Verasiterum before Willow begins her cross-examination.
 
"Max took the job with the Unit because he needed to support his family." Theo says clearly. "If you're going to send him to jail, then shouldn't the same sentence be given to everyone who worked for the Ministry during the war?"
 
Claire gets why the prosecutor didn't want Theo on the stand, and she can't stop grinning as the judge releases Max on the condition that he be under supervision.
 
Claire is more than happy to volunteer for the job.
 
 
Farrah Krychelle Parker
 
Farrah is one of the last people to be released from Mungo's specially set up Muggleborn Recovery Ward, and if she's honest with herself she's both anticipating returning to Oxford and absolutely dreading it. She's been gone for almost a year, and most of her friends aren't magic so she can't exactly explain where she'd gone.
 
Clara has visited her a few times, but the passage to London is often too out of the way to make the trip, so Farrah mostly saw her on weekends, and only for an hour or so at a time.
 
Farrah thinks Clara just doesn't know what to say - Farrah hasn't looked in a mirror yet but she's certain she must look absolutely awful based on how Clara can't keep eye contact when she does visit. It's disheartening, and the main reason Farrah isn't looking forward to going home, despite definitely being sick of colorless walls after eleven months of staring at one form of them or another.
 
She has a standing appointment with one of the psychologists Mungo's contracted from the Squib rights group that has been the one somewhat positive part of her life since she was released from Azkaban. Her therapist is a young woman name Ellie, who's happy to let Farrah talk about absolutely anything except for her time locked up in the dark with little food or comfort for months.
 
Farrah can pretend she's okay around Ellie, even though Ellie probably knows better than anyone exactly how cracked and lost and broken she always feels these days. After all, Ellie was only brought in because Farrah was entirely disassociated for the first five weeks that she was free and it was freaking out the nurses in a major way.
 
But Farrah is fine now. She can tell the difference between fantasy and reality a good ninety percent of the time these days, and Ellie says she's improving impressively fast. Which, of course she is. She's Farrah Krychelle Parker and she refuses to be anything less than perfect. Or to look at herself in a mirror.
 
Clara does make time in her schedule to pick Farrah up on her release day, and Farrah is given some clothes so she doesn't have to go home in a hospital gown. She changes and brushes her hair without looking at herself and quickly hurries to the lift as soon as the Healer in charge clears her to leave.
 
Clara is in the waiting room, slightly dusty from the Floo over, and attempting an easy smile. Farrah gives a tense grin of her own, all too aware of how fake it feels glued to her face.
 
"Good to see you up and about. And in... clothes." Clara offers after and awkwardly long moment of silence.
 
"I definitely need to get home and put on something more presentable before I see Christian." Farrah agrees, hoping they can start talking about cute outfits and date ideas like they used to.
 
Clara coughs. "Um, right. Maybe we should stay in tonight though? Just so, you know, you settle in again. You're supposed to take it easy, right?"
 
Farrah frowns. That... sounds like Clara is hiding something. And sure, maybe some part of Farrah had suspected that (visiting Mungo's isn't that hard) but now that Christian has been thrown in she's taking note. Thinking about Christian is the only thing that kept her sane in that cell - Clara can't take that from her, she can't-
 
"Your friend is right dear, you're under instructions from your therapist and your doctor to keep stressful activities to a minimum." The welcome witch confirms. She'd snuck up behind the two without Farrah noticing, holding a stack of files in one hand. "And it would likely be best to limit visitors as well. They'll want to know what happened and if you don't feel ready to talk about it it could hurt your progress."
 
She then holds the files out to Clara. "These are the release forms. By signing them you're taking full responsibility for-"
 
Farrah zones out as the woman walks Clara through the terms and guidelines of Farrah's release, her mind reeling from what the witch had said. No visitors? But... she wants to see Christian. But if she sees him he will have questions about where she was and she can't actually tell him, can she? He's not a wizard, she can't break the Statute of Secrecy and tell him, they aren't even dating yet (she thinks, that fact is still a little fuzzy but she's pretty sure they weren't dating yet. Maybe).
 
She doesn't realize she's started hyperventilating until someone gently takes hold of her wrist and helps her sit in one of the waiting room chairs. Farrah obediently puts her head down to her knees and focuses on her breathing. Once upon a time she'd need someone to walk her through the exercises to bring herself down from the edge, but now she can do it herself so long as someone else catches her slipping.
 
When she comes down enough to begin registering the world around her again she hears Clara talking.
 
"-not ready to be released yet? I mean, she just did... whatever that was, and I'm at work most days I can't... I can't just sit around doing whatever that was to calm her down!"
 
Something in Farrah's chest twists. Oh. That's why Clara has been so uncomfortable. She doesn't know how to deal with Farrah anymore.
 
That's fair, though. Farrah doesn't know how to deal with herself anymore. Why would anyone else want to?
 
 
Yurina Nakayashi
 
Yurina's escape had gone perfectly - as suspected no one had thought to look for her in the Muggle world until she'd already gotten out of England. Charming (literally and figuratively) her way onto a trans-Atlantic ocean liner bound for New York is easy enough, and then she has three and a half long, boring days to work out her exact plan of attack once she's back on solid ground.
 
She knows she needs to reach out to her contacts, determine who's still with her and who was just agreeing because they thought they could get power out of the deal. From there she can determine where to go next.
 
She's got time to work things out - the people pursuing her have no idea where to start and are on the entirely incorrect continent for the moment, and once she has her contacts back in order she'll see about getting eyes inside that particular operation so she knows her enemies' moves before they make them.
 
Nothing too difficult, really.
 
And that's how, three months later, Yurina is "on the run" in a comfortable, luxury hotel suite in Los Vegas, waiting on the person currently hiding her to get back from his meeting with an informant he insists will have what Yurina is looking for.
 
A surprising number of her contacts turned out to be legit in their commitment to the cause, so Yurina has had no shortage of places to lay low and continue planning. Unfortunately, she also hasn't secured an insider to keep tabs on the group chasing her yet, which is what her current host is hopefully fixing now.

In the meantime, she's actually been getting used to living in the Muggle world. Their technology is something rather marvelous, and Yurina has quickly learned that the fastest way to get Muggles to like you is to use the media. It's always keeping her up to date on events from around the world as well, so she knows who all the most powerful Muggles are currently, and she's already working on how to use the information to her advantage.
 
She's currently flipping through the offered channels on the television, trying to find anything that isn't a soap opera - the things are pure idiocy and the fact they're apparently quite popular among Muggles only confirms how utterly vapid they are.
 
She eventually leaves the television running on the local news and wanders over to one of the floor-to-ceiling windows that line her current accommodations, looking out on the nonstop bustle of the city. Vegas isn't Yurina's favorite place that she's been so far, but she can appreciate that at least it wears its misery out in the open for anyone to see. Sure, a lot of people are too drunk or too naive to see it, but Vegas is a cesspool of filth and sin and it knows it, even plays into the image. Yurina can appreciate that.
 
She glances over her shoulder when she hears the front lock click open. It's most likely her contact returned from his meeting, but she keeps a hand lightly resting against the wand up her sleeve just in case. She still doesn't know where exactly the British troops looking for her are right now.
 
But it is just Amos returning, and she relaxes slightly, though her hand doesn't leave her wand. "Any luck?" She prompts, all big eyes and hopeful tone (Amos thinks he has a shot at sleeping with her, and she's stringing him along since so far he's proven to be useful).
 
"I know who's funding the search." He declares grandly, and Yurina arches an eyebrow to indicate she's listening. It's not the best lead, but she could use it to kill the cash flow and seriously stunt the search efforts.
 
"Abeni Akingbade. Rumor says she was already funding the Order of the Phoenix during the war and she just kept providing assistance afterwards since the acting Minister in England is former Order as well."
 
Yurina purses her lips, recognizing the name. "The daughter of the current Supreme Mugwump." She drawls in distaste. The International Confederation of Wizards had claimed neutrality in the war, but obviously they had been lying. Or the woman had been acting alone, not that Yurina buys that. Luckily she already had plans to take down the Confederation, and though they can no longer be executed in full she's pretty sure she knows where she can squeeze now to hinder her pursuers. "If I remember correctly she was always very hands on - I'm certain she's offering more than just money to the efforts." She gives Amos one of her patent silver smiles that has him melting. "Thank you Amos, this is incredibly helpful."
 
"Anything you need my lady." He says eagerly, and Yurina rewards him with another smile before dismissing him.
 
"I will see you for dinner tonight." She assures him at his obvious disappointment. "But I need to make plans."
 
"Of course, I will see you soon then." He gives what she's sure he thinks is a charming smile, and then bows low to kiss her hand. She rolls her eyes when his back is turned - Americans are so odd. Westerners in general, she muses as the door clicks shut, are strange in their methods of courting.
 
But now is not the time to think about such things - she need to get to work. The Akingbades live in Nigeria, which is politically corrupt (in the Muggle world too, which is an interesting parallel but one she'll dig into later) and thus Yurina already has a list of names of people who can be bribed into helping her cause. In fact, she already had a man willing to help overthrow the current Nigerian government during the war - she's certain he'll help her now.
 
Best of all, organizing an assassination is far from a difficult task, and can even be done before dinner tonight. So she gets to work.
 
Author's Note: This is what I like to call the "depression epilogue" OTL The only happy person is Yurina because she gets to murder people xD And also, in case it wasn't clear - Lucas worked himself into organ failure so... that's the final official death of the war ;;
 
Next Time: Summer, 2008
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So I'm thinking I might do a final 'afterwords' chapter to share my thoughts and feelings on writing this story, if that's something people would be interested in? I'm also open to answering any lingering questions people might have there as well!

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Chapter 57: Hi!
I'm so sorry for taking so long to comment, but shall we begin!

I swear I should have made a bet omg. The moment I first heard of Python I was like "hmm.. what if she was Percy's Audrey?" And even though I knew that our Audrey would be Percy's girlfriend, I always thought how it would be nice if Python and him were endgame, but honestly... they wouldn't last long haha

I want to thank you for being so passionate about the story and truly understanding the characters and doing your best to give them justice. I loved how you put so much effort on everything!

When I first saw this story I first imagined a muggleborn with a fiery personality so after seeing that Tangi was created you have no idea how happy I was.
Claire was my first character for the story. When I thought about her I wanted a strong woman who was conflicted between her believes and her family, but who definitely couldn't turn a blind eye to people in need. Then I thought if she was an insider probably no one would suspect her because of her family, so she would have some advantage!
I'm truly proud of how she grew up. She was such a lonely girl who had only Bill and her cousin Petra as her friends. Then she loved her brother and her parents but she always thought that he didn't care about her. She didn't agree with her families believes and she truly had to do something to free herself from her fears and allow herself to be who she was. And being one of the leaders of the underground made me very proud of her! Especially after Max was able to change as well and they now became stronger together as a family. Honestly I wonder how Claire decided to do in the future, if she stayed in the ministry, if she dedicated herself to her family and if she made friends (because I'm so happy that she at least became friends with Python, she truly deserves friends), whether she ended up married or not, well I'm curious but I think if she ever got married she would choose someone she truly trusted and who she could be herself and for God sake, someone who could make that poor girl smile, because come on she looks so gloomy xD But I'm happy that she made at least one friend and that she got closure with her brother, so I'm blessed :) Ps: I always thought that Claire wouldn't make it until the end xD I always thought she would be killed or that she would sacrifice herself to protect someone.

Theo... Oh my little boy. When I visualised Theo I thought about a broken boy who always wanted his parents approval. Theo was meant to be an adult version of Draco Malfoy. When Kent appeared in the picture I imagined the rivalry such like Draco and Harry and that only made the adult version I imagined more lively. Theo was lucky to have a friend like Kent, even if he didn't understand what a friend truly meant. Theo lost his mother, his uncle hated him, his father well... they didn't have the best relationship, he didn't manage to be captain, he didn't manage to be a prefect, he had to give up on his dream, he couldn't trust anyone. Well everything about Theo was supposed to be tragic. His partnership with Zara was just amazing, I believe he saw himself on her (even though she was pure evil), and he believed that maybe people could change if someone believed in him. He betrayed his family, he betrayed his colleagues for something he believed to be the right thing, Kent could have abandoned him and Kingsley could have hit believed in him and hand him over. But people believed in him, he was the same person his mother believed he was. Seeing him trying to get thought his trauma was sad, but it fit him. I'm so so happy that he found happiness somehow. Val loved him by who he was, she didn't see him because of his family, blood heritage or even his mistakes, but she saw his pure heart and that is just beautiful. And of course Theo and Kent's bromance are still one of my favourite parts of the whole story! Thinking about the future, I wonder if he managed to keep working or his stability is not well yet, but he has Val, Kingsley, Kent, all of his friends, so he will he fine :)

I will miss these kids, but I'm making room for the new kids so hopefully we will have a more funny time on UFF rather than a more serious and gloomy one :) I hope everyone who made it to the end are now happy and even if they don't make a cameo on UFF, that they have success and find their happy endings :)
Once again, thank you so much for this ride. I just can't believed it already ended, it seemed like it was yesterday that Aiden made his first pov ;-;
This won't be a serious goodbye because we will still talk and of course I will still be hyped with UFF and I'll be commenting every single chapter :p
Oh and I'm curious, as you know I'm like a huge fan of Oliver :p did you imagine him getting married? I can totally imagine him marrying someone from his work honestly.
Ok now for real, thank you so so so much. You are an amazing writer and I want you to know that I anticipated every single chapter every week and reading it made my day, seriously, even if it took me a while to comment in the chapter.
I wish you the best and I hope you have a lot of fun writing UFF and finish this trilogy which I believe will bring tears of joy and will bring you the best feeling of accomplishement. You deserve it Dani! Thank you so much *takes off my hat* farewell Ctf, thank you for the ride, you will be always remembered!
From the bottom if my heart, thank you Dani, thank you very much! <3
I won't say goodbye so have a nice week and see you around ;) take care of yourself.
luv_kero
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Chapter 57: I've been anticipating the Afterword chapter so much ever since you mentioned it, and I absolutely loved reading all of your thoughts on the cast and how you went about developing their arcs!! <3 Some of the things I knew (thanks to me loving spoilers and our insanely long back-and-forth responses via comments and PM, HAHA) and some of the things were a complete surprise, so it was so cool getting to learn and relearn these behind-the-scenes tidbits!! ^^

One thing I had no idea about (but probably should've figured out, LOOOOL) was Python's intended role as canon!Audrey Weasley!! Looking back now, it totally makes and I should've known you'd make sure every aspect of Percy's story was covered, even if they weren't intended to truly be endgame with the planned divorce. :P Does that mean Python would've been leading the MII with Cadi instead of Audrey Blishwick if the latter hadn't been submitted??

Ahhhh, not a day goes by where I wish Evera were still here with us, even though I know that her death was necessary. :') I take a lot of comfort in knowing that her death served so much purpose in the story and that it wasn't meaningless (not that anyone's death was ^^;) in the grand scheme of things. :) I do wonder how the story would've changed if she had stayed alive, since I imagine Kent would've been a much less broken man. But then his motivation to really get plans in motion within the Order of Phoenix wouldn't have been as strong as it was after suffering such a devastating loss. OTL All in all, Kent and Evera will always be the best dynamic duo, and I will never stop thanking you for bringing them to life in such a beautiful way!! <3 And I guess I don't know if they'll make cameos in UFF, but I'd love to know what happened to Drake and Jemma (and even little Roderick from H:aH, LOOOL, if you ever got to planning his future XD) after the events of CtF if you have that information readily available. ^^; If not, no worries!! I'm just very attached to my original trio, HAHA. :')

I'll be reiterating a lot of stuff I've said in previous comments and/or messages, but Channer was the first character I fully conceptualized when you announced CtF and its plot. I'm honestly drawn to charismatic, outgoing male characters (Kent, Drake, Landon), so writing a coward like Channer was such a fun challenge for me since I got to really step out of my comfort zone. I think part of me subconsciously wanted him to eventually join Adeline in the Underground, since I'm a er for the good side, but I loved that he stayed neutral throughout since I think that's the path truest to his character. It wouldn't have made sense if he had joined up and although it was painful to see him get bested by Yurina, I'm really happy that he's learned to hold his family a little closer now. <3

And now, MY FOX QUEEN, MISS YURINA NAKAYASHI!! I honestly don't enjoy writing Slytherin-like characters, but she was such a fun character to create and I became so attached to her in such a short amount of time. I really think it was her background that cinched it for me. The tiger parent mentality is often lauded by Asian parents as the "right" way to raise your child and while I do think there are some great parts about it, I also think it can be incredibly toxic with the wrong parents and the wrong children. So giving Yurina such a lonely childhood made me sympathize with her so much, even though I knew I was creating an evil character who really shouldn't be redeemed. ^^; I think I would've been really sad to see her caught by Abeni, so I'm stoked that UFF saved her in a way and I can't wait to see what mischief she's planning now!! :D Even though she's probably going to be defeated in UFF, at least she got a happy ending in CtF, HAHA. XD No matter what happens, she'll forever be my queen of darkness. <3

And then we have Odette, the strongest Fugitive out there who's absolutely killing it in life now, which she completely deserves after everything she went through during the war. :') Even though I made her to get tortured, I don't think I envisioned just how much she'd have to go through and my heart broke every time her situation got bleaker. OTL I honestly feared for her life the most out of my main four, especially after Evera died, since I knew that a Fugitive death would be incredibly possible. My other Fugitive characters, Xander and Cassie, were much more capable and resourceful than Odette was, so I figured that if a Fugitive had to die, she'd be the one. OTL So knowing that she ultimately made it out alive, even with immense trauma, made me so happy because I would've been crushed to bits by her death. ^^; Odette's a strong girl who shows that persistence and sheer will are key, and I'm so glad that sunnier skies graced her future. <3

I know I didn't write about everyone, basically focusing on my own characters, but I absolutely loved reading about every single member of the cast and seeing their stories get woven together in this amazing tale. Just as it was for H:aH, it was truly the greatest honor to be part of this story in some way and I'm eternally grateful that I was given the opportunity to help shape the HoM trilogy with my imperfect characters. :') They've all grown immensely over the course of CtF and I'm beyond ecstatic to see what kind of magic you'll weave next with UFF!! x] You know I'll be there writing essays after every chapter, because I can't stop myself from spazzing over even the tiniest details and I'm actually going to cry when it's all over. I would've cried when CtF ended, but knowing that there's still one installment left kept the tears at bay, HAHA. :') But we'll worry about UFF ending when the time comes, since it's just barely begun at this point and it's time to ENJOY what's about to come!! :D

Again, from the bottom of my heart, THANK YOU for writing Confronting the Faceless!! <3 You're forever one of my writing inspirations and a friend I've grown to cherish so much after getting to know you these past few years, and I will never stop saying how grateful and lucky I am to have stumbled across Hogwarts: a History back then. x] You're the absolute best, Dani!! <3
Susan15
#3
Chapter 56: Hi!! Ok I believe I am ready for this overwhelming final chapter ;-;

Honestly, I always thought about what would happen to Ava. A part of me continuously compared her to Claire, but I think Ava is a coward. While Claire didn't agree with the values that most of Slytherins believed, she actually tried to do something about it, and a good part was that she met Bill and had her cousin. Ava had Astoria and her friend wasn't what Ava thought about the others. I think she was obsessed with "I'm better than them" to the point that she disliked Clary who was different from what she hated and also she was shocked about Kingsley, someone she saw as an example, only to find that he was a Slytherin. She put all her hatress into the house instead of growing up and understanding that not everyone is the same.
I liked how everything wrapped for her, it was the best outcome became she herself did not grow up much within all those years. And I'm really happy that she and Anwen got to become friends :)

Theo... I'm so... shocked! And happy? I'm truly glad he managed to find peace with himself (or something similar to that) and that he found someone who went through something "similar" and somehow could understand him and love him by who he is. I actually wonder if he managed to face his father since he always wanted to make him proud on top of everything and honestly I wonder if he got to see his uncle getting arrested, because well he deserved that! And I'm so happy that Kent was the best man! Ok I'm happy by how everything just went, Kingsley too. And I'm so so proud of Max and it was great to see him and Claire at Theo's wedding. I hope Theo and Val can make things work and finally forgive themselves.

Aiden as a grandpa is the strawberry on top of the ice cream xD Mia is so cute and YES ONE OF MY SHIPS SAILED!! I'm so happy Logan and Susan got together! And am I sensing a rivalry between Albus and Mia? xD Or maybe something more? :p I'm so happy and proud that Aiden was able to retire and be happy, he deserves and honestly he is one of my favourite characters. It was not easy to be a adoptive father and now he became a proud grandfather, I'm so happy for him.

Minki and Padma got together <3 and they had twins omg poor Minki! But I'm so happy and proud that he was able to follow his dream even if it was smaller than his bigger one. Oh my and Terry and Parvati wow I wasn't expecting that! Friends becoming lovers is something I live for haha. I'm so happy that everything worked out. I know that he is probably the most neutral character in the story, I don't remember, was he in the battle?

Odette! And she is the final pov ;-; Omg Dean got married and they became friends, that's so great. I wouldn't have guessed that Dean would marry a muggle! Dirk would be proud of how both of them grown up so much after everything that happened. I'm so proud of Odette and happy too, she deserves all the happiness in this world!

I can't believe this story just ended. I believe I can speak by everyone that we became attached to these characters and I'm not ready to say goodbye. I love every single character and I believe you made such an incredible story that I don't have enough words to express what I feel. Thank you so much for your time, passion and for making this amazing story and capturing our hearts. You are a great writer and I hope you feel proud of yourself just like I'm proud of you :)

I hope you have a great weekend and honestly I'm making fingers crossed to see them somehow again in UFF because I think I'll miss some of them too much xD
Thank you so much and see you Sunday to see your amazing thoughts and feelings through this story <3. Take care of yourself and have an awesome time :)
Susan15
#4
I'll give you a proper comment about the final chapter but yes please, I'd live to read your thoughts and feelings!
I'm so happy and shocked at the same time with the final chapter, but I will leave it to another time!! I just wanted to let you know how much I loved it and that I really do want to hear what your opinions :)
Have a nice week and I hope to read your feelings and thoughts next sunday :')
luv_kero
2437 streak #5
Chapter 56: Oh my gosh, it's the final epilogue. I'm not ready. OTL

Dang, I legit wasn't expecting Ava to be an ice cream shop owner after twenty years, LOOOL. :P But yikes, I can imagine that leaving Hogwarts definitely turned the "Slytherin=bad" sentiment on its head. I don't blame Ava for thinking that way during her school years, since she was a teenager and she hated not fitting in with her house. But at least she's become more open-minded and chill now, and it does show a lot of her character growth. :) It's also really sweet that she revived Fortescue's ice cream shop, since it's such a cornerstone of Diagon Alley and it broke my heart when Florean disappeared. :'( But omg, I also didn't expect Anwen to have had a whirlwind romance with a Muggle, so I'm glad that she also seems to be a lot more open-minded now as an adult. ^^ Although it that it didn't work out and I hope Anwen is doing okay as a single mother, since I know that can be difficult. >___< The cameos of Albus, Rose, and Scorpius were also super cute and I love that they're this generation's trio, hehe. x]

Oh gosh, Theo looking at little Evan and thinking of his guilt towards Evera's death had me gutted too. Q___Q But also, I'M SCREAMING AT KENT BEING HIS BEST MAN!! AND I'M ALSO SCREAMING AT THEO MARRYING VALERIE???????? FORGET WHAT I SAID ABOUT AVA. THIS IS THE BIGGEST SURPRISE OUT OF ALL OF THE EPILOGUES. I'M SO SHOOK. THIS MIGHT BE THE MOST SHOOK I'VE EVER BEEN. NEVER IN A MILLION YEARS DID I EVER EXPECT VALERIE AND THEO TO END UP TOGETHER. Like it totally makes sense with them bonding over their trauma in this support group and I bet Valerie felt AWFUL for getting caught in Branwen's web after she found out Branwen was a Death Eater. T^T It's so so so cute that Theo and Valerie eventually fell for each other, and I'm so happy that Theo gets to experience this beautiful moment because he deserves it!! And ahhhhh, I love that Kent is Best Man (best boi forever!!) and Evan is the ring bearer (/cries i love this kid so much already help) and Zac also got happily married and Valerie's family is there, and Theo has so many friends and people who care about him. :') AND JUST THAT ENDING, OMG. SHOT ME IN THE HEART. *o* I'M DED FROM HOW CUTE THEY ARE. PROCLAIMING MYSELF AS CAPTAIN OF THIS NEW SHIP NOW, HAHAHA.

Ahhhh, Logan and Susan got together!! x] And Mia, like all the kids, sounds so adorable and Aiden is definitely best grandpa!! ^^ And ooh, looks like Oliver is teaching at Hogwarts now after retiring from the professional circuit?? :D Gah, that reminds me that he's also old now too. OTL And omg, I'm ded at Mia and Albus having a Quidditch rivalry. XD Try-outs will be a battlefield this year with those two gunning for positions, HAHA. And LOOOOOL, I also wasn't expecting that kiss comment from Mia. :P I imagine Albus will definitely be a heartthrob, especially when he gets older, and Mia will be one of many who have a crush on young Potter, LOLOLOL. But ahhhh, so happy that Aiden has such a beautiful family and that he's enjoying life so much now!! He completely deserves it after everything he went through!! And I also love that Ava made an appearance at the end, even though they never actually met in the main story, since everyone's stories are ultimately tied together in this epic. :)

Haha, definitely not surprised that Minki opened up a dance studio. XD He really suffered the least overall out of everyone in CtF, I think. Him and Venus. And awww, so cute that he and Padma ended up having twins!! x] And ooh, Padma is also a teacher now?? :D What kind?? (also there's a tiny typo where you wrote parvati instead of padma and i was like, wait which twin is which?? is padma the gryff and parvati the ravenclaw?? XD) And awwww, I wasn't expecting Terry and Parvati to get married, but I can totally see them together and it's so cute that the two best friends each got married to one of the twins, HAHA. :P They're all one big happy family now!! ^^ Minki and Padma's banter is also so cute, and I love how chill Minki is now in comparison to how he was in seventh year. :') And ooh, what does Terry do in the Department of Transportation?? Guess he followed the more traditional path of working for the Ministry while Jerome went traveling, LOOOOL. XD

And now, we're here at last at the final epilogue. T^T Odette was the last of my main characters submitted to CtF, she was the last POV chapter of the story (and the last Fugitive to be rescued), and now she's the last of the epilogues. But that doesn't mean she's last in my heart, because she's far from it!! <3 I figured she would eventually strike up a friendship with Dean, since they both had the connection of being on the run with Dirk at some point, and I bet they've shared a lot of stories about Dirk with each other over the years. :) My heart hurts knowing that Odette still suffered so much for so long, even though it's completely understandable that she wouldn't have mentally healed in an instant. That's just not possible when you've gone through what she did. And ahhhhh, HARRY COMING THROUGH TO GIVE HER A CHANCE MAKES ME SO HAPPY!! TRULY AN ICON. AND AHHHH, SO SO SO PROUD OF ODETTE FOR BECOMING HEAD OF THE IMPROPER USE OF MAGIC OFFICE!! *o* SHE OVERCAME ALL OF THE OBSTACLES LIFE THREW HER WAY AND WE LOVE SEEING FEMALE MUGGLEBORNS GETTING RIGHTFULLY RECOGNIZED FOR THEIR WORK IN THE MINISTRY!! x] Again, restating what I said in Kent's epilogue, I completely relate to Odette and Dean talking to Dirk's gravestone so this definitely hit home for me. It's a way to stay connected with them, even though they've passed, and I think it's very powerful that Dirk was able to create a very unique bond between Odette and Dean, even though he had long since passed. :) And I love that the ice skating figurine managed to survive the war!! It's definitely a beautiful, subtle reminder of the past before the war. ^^ And ahhhhh, that final sentence really pulled at my heartstrings. :') Everything is going to be just fine, Odette!! You've made it this far and you're only going to continue climbing to the top!! <3

Also, a big resounding YES to your A/N!! I'd love an Afterwords chapter!! :D I'll save my final CtF comment for then, hehe. ^^
Susan15
#6
Chapter 55: Hi!!

Omg yes! Venus had her dream come true, I'm so proud of her!
Oh and is she getting interested in that man?? :p
I kind of imagined her with someone from work since she would probably be a professional most of the time and she wouldn't go out on dates with just anyone, especially because she would care a lot about her job and would dedicate 100% of her time to that, so I truly see things work out between them :)

Tangi!! Our precious child who is not a child anymore :') I'm so glad she and Xander kept their friendship and managed to still be a part of each other's life!
Aw and Hazel made it out alive! And I can definitely imagine their marriage :) I'm also so happy that Clary and Kingsley got married too, like omg yes!

Gabe!! I truly thought that he was the groom!! I was shipping him with Romilda ;-; but it's still good that they kept being friends all this time. Same goes for Nathan, I'm truly happy that the two of them kept their friendship after all this time! Gabe also speaking in french with Fleur was just perfect haha.

Kent!! Aww I love the name Evan as I bet Evera would love it! He truly acts like a proud dad! And Tori already grown up omg ;-;. Why am I imagining those two in Hogwarts having the time of their lives? Haha. Kent is now a married man with two beautiful kids and I bet he feels the happiest man on Earth. Evera would be really proud of him. The final scene is just heartbreaking :') farewell Evera.

And finally but not last, Audrey!! I'm so glad that she and Percy got serious and started having a life together and forming a family. Their daughter Mai is really energetic haha. And I'm so glad to see that Audrey and Python still remained friends! Omg Lucy... that hit my poor heart ;-; I bet Lucas would feel proud and happy for her. I can imagine little Lucy in Hogwarts as a happy kid and perhaps who knows, maybe she would also become a healer! And Python becoming her godmother is just amazing!

I can't believe that next chapter is the last ;-; it's been a long journey and to see that everyone have grown up and becoming happier (even Yurina haha) is so heartwarming and we became attached to all of them so it will be hard to say goodbye. I hope that maybe some of them may make a cameo in UFF :')
I'm preparing tissues for the last chapter which will take another 10 years after this one and since it's set prior to the UFF events, I'm quite curious!

Thank you for this chapter, for the "romantic and couples" chapter haha. It's good to see everyone getting their dreams came true and them having their own families.
I hope you have an incredible week, great classes and I wish you everything the best :) Rest well and take good care of yourself.
I will see you later for the story's finale ;-; see ya~ :)
luv_kero
2437 streak #7
Chapter 55: Good on Venus for becoming the youngest ever Unspeakable!! Just like Rajani, we love seeing female Slytherins achieving their goals!! ^^ At the beginning of the story, I would've never expected Venus to be working in the Love Chamber. But after her work with identifying the loss of hope during the war, it does make sense that she'd end up in the chamber that's all about unraveling the mystery behind emotion. And omg, I wasn't expecting Cadfael to be an Unspeakable as well!! :D He's so much more chill now after his angsty Hogwarts days. XD Hopefully life has been much kinder to him since then. :') And ooooh, do I spy some sparks flying between him and Venus?? :P I can definitely see them together, bonding over their Slytherin days at Hogwarts, both of them with their air of mystery and very small social circles, haha. And since Unspeakables can't really share what goes on with their work, I imagine it'd be nice to be with someone who'll understand any workplace frustrations and such. ^^

Awwwww, love that Xander and Matangi are still so close after the war!! x] And yaaaay, so glad that Hazel survived and is thriving now!! :D It's so awesome to see that she's become an activist and hopefully things change for the better for the LGBTQ+ community with her leading the charge. :) And omg, Kingsley and Clary made up and married each other!! Ahhhhh, that's so sweet!! ^^ Wow, look at Clary, going from worrying about her grades in Hogwarts, to a bittersweet relationship with Lenox, to being one of the best Auror trainers in the Ministry, to being a member of the Underground, to becoming the Minister of Magic's wife while also being the Head of Magical Law Enforcement!! Again, we love seeing successful female Slytherins killing it in life!! :D And yesss, Xander is gonna be amazing in his new job and I'm so happy he's ending his dueling career on such a high note!! :D And ahhhh, Matangi and Hazel's wedding will be absolutely beautiful, and I really hope they'll be able to wed soon!! x]

Haha, you really threw me for a loop there in thinking that Gabe was the groom. XD I wonder who David is and how Romilda met him. :P But it's awesome to see that Gabe, Nathan, and Romilda are still best friends and as close as ever after all these years. ^^ And ooh, love the little bonding moment between Gabe and Fleur!! :D And also, dang, it's very cool that Gave is working as an investigative reporter. I definitely wasn't expecting that to be his career, since I thought he might go the Auror route or something similar. He was such an explosive kid, always gunning for justice. :P But I can see why he'd choose investigative reporting instead, especially since it does have a lot of freedom and traveling is so much fun. ^^ And he still gets to pursue justice, albeit in a more roundabout manner, LOOOL. And I guess he's going the Charlie route and staying a happy bachelor for the rest of his life, which is awesome and I'm glad he's happy without needing a partner to fulfill him. :)

Oh wow, another Weasley kid to add to the clan. XD They just don't stop coming. :') And it's funny that Mai is so different in temperament from her parents and Percy must have his hands full trying to make sure she doesn't upend everything in their lives. :P And it's so cute that Audrey Caldwell is still known as Python, even after all these years, HAHA. It's definitely a very cool nickname, even without the Underground attachment, so I can see why she'd keep it, LOOOOL. And omg, ahhhh, it's so sweet that Audrey decided to name Lucy after Lucas. T^T He really meant a lot to both her and Percy, so it's very beautiful that they're choosing to honor him through the newest addition to their family. :) He still lives in everyone's hearts, even though he's long gone now, and I'm sure he would've loved doting on Mai and Lucy if he had survived. >___< And I just realized that this means Audrey will have a pre-teen at home and a teenager at Hogwarts while she's dealing with stuff in UFF, LOL. What a busy woman. :')

And oh my gosh, Kent, my lovely boy, I don't think I'm ready to let go of him yet. Q___Q He's one of my absolute favorite OCs and I'm so happy I got a opportunity to expand on him for this story. <3 Like he was already an amazing side character that I loved to bits, but getting the chance to see him under the spotlight made me so incredibly happy, despite everything that happened to him during the war. :') And awww, Tori's a teenager now and I love how sassy she's become. XD Reminds me a lot of Holly in H:aH, LOLOLOL. :P And omg, so cute that she considers Jemma an aunt too, and I'm so so curious to know how Jemma and Drake are doing nowadays!! ^^ And omg, Ebony is such a beautiful name for Holly's daughter, hehe. x] It's awesome that Kent and Willow were able to find their way back to each other, even though it was so rough. Totally understandable that they broke up after the war. Kent was still grieving the loss of Evera and Willow then had to go through the exact same thing with Laurel. They definitely needed to grow separately as they processed their grief. You don't want to be at 50% when you're dating someone, using them to fill that other 50%. You want to be at 100% and dating another person who's at 100% for it to be a healthy, long-lasting relationship. At least that's my belief, LOL, although I don't have any personal experience to go off of (so who knows if I'm spouting nonsense). ^^; But Evan is such a great name, and Evera would've loved him and Sammy to pieces. x] And oh my gosh, my heart is dying because the end of Kent's epilogue is at Evera's grave. T^T I'll be very honest here, I talk a lot to the gravestone of one of my loved ones (and I use it as proxy for the other gravestones that I can't physically visit), so Kent talking to Evera this way was something I wholly related to. And my heart is breaking all over again, because I miss Evera so much and I don't think I'll ever get over her death. But I will stay strong, because she was a strong girl and Kent is staying strong too. I hope there're only clear skies for him for the rest of his life, even though I know things will get crazy with raising two boys in the house and there's still UFF's events to come ten years later. ^^; And omg, I just realized that Evan (and maybe Sammy) will be at Hogwarts when UFF starts!! XD Not that it's super relevant in the grand scheme of things, LOL, but I will have fun imagining the newest crop of Sylvesters at the best school in the world, having shenanigans of their own. :') And I'm just really really really happy that Kent got a happy ending, because he deserves it and I love him so much. He and Evera will always be my favorite pair of siblings, forever and ever, and I'm so happy that their bond will never be broken, even by death. <3

OMG, the final epilogue is coming soon and it's set right before UFF!! :D I'm not ready at all for CtF to end though. OTL But I'm also super excited to see the five remaining POVs and catch up with them twenty years later. ^^
Susan15
#8
Chapter 54: Hi!! Sorry for taking so long to comment!

First of all, my heart is hurting for Lucas. He was one of my favourite characters and honestly I feel like since half of the story he was making a rough path and the signals to his tragedy were there ;-; His last pov and Odette's pov showed how he was overworking and not taking care of himself. I liked him a lot, but somehow I feel like I knew that he would have a bad ending. I'm glad he had a painless passing and I'm sad that he didn't do a check up with Python because maybe he could have survived, but that's so Lucas.. And I'm really sad for his mother, she suffered so much and losing a son is like losing a part of her, especially since it's not natural. Oh my ;-; rest in peace Lucas.

Oh Channer ;-; poor boy, he must feel so guilty. But we all never know what is going to happen tomorrow so it's normal that we don't say "I love you" everyday. But of course it's truly painful and the last interaction is always what is pressed in our minds ;-; I know you will be able to process your grief and you will be better with time. You have your mother and sister, you will be fine!

I'm so glad that Max made it out alive. Now Claire and Max can really talk and pour their hearts to one another. They just "lost" their father who will be imprisoned after waking up (if he eventually wakes up), so they just have one another and their mother. And I truly understand what she means that everyone is biased and already settled their minds that everyone in the losing side is guilty. Fitz!! I'm so glad to see him!!! And I'm super glad that he is fine!!! Willow and Theo omg guys ;-; I'm so proud of Theo to try helping out and prove that everyone deserves a second chance like he had, because of their family environment and ideals. And I bet Willow feels like she compensated a lot from what she did. Everything is good now, I'm happy for them.

Oh Farrah :( you need time to heal my poor child. I understand that Christian is very important to her but he wouldn't understand what she has been through and she definitely needs to have a support near her who truly understands her and even though I know that Christian was what kept her sanity, she created a version of him in her mind who probably doesn't exist, and she needs time for herself now. You can get well child ;-;.

Yurina queen of the evil! Always causing trouble, really haha. Abeni must have a huge grudge on Yurina, because she is quite a pain in the haha. Let's see how Yurina will cause problems in Uff because I know you're involved young lady!

Wow next epilogue is 10 years from here! We're going to see the Hogwarts kids as grown ups!! I hope Venus and Minki managed to follow their dreams! I'm quite curious how Ava and Gabe became as adults haha. I bet everyone else is doing well now :)
I can't wait for the next epilogue!!
I hope you have a nice week, take care of yourself, rest well and see you later ;)
petitreveur
#9
Chapter 54: I told myself I was going to properly comment at the end of the three-part epilogue but I know I had to drop a comment after I read the first POV. NOOOOO LUCAS NOOOOOOO :"( Why do all my fav characters have to die hurhur /cries/ First Evera, then Laurel and now Lucas. My heart was literally squeezed tight when I read the line "He doesn't wake up" and I'm like NO NO NO, THAT CAN'T BE TRUE :"( I should have realised that foreshadowing when he was feeling way too exhausted than ever, that he w-wouldn't make it pass the night. Idk why but his death hits so much harder than anyone else's?? Lucas was (fk, I have to use the word 'was' now) such a golden boy, he did so much as a Healer and contributes sooo much as part of the Underground!! Although he didn't "fight" in the war, he was a true war hero!! I guess it's...relieving that his death wasn't a painful one and he passed in the comforts of his house....he will definitely be sorely missed :"( I can't imagine how broken his mother would be when she realises that her son is never going to wake up again >.< OH GOSHH, THAT START ALREADY SCREAMS DEPRESSING!! (I literally paused for five whole minutes before going on to the next POV)

Glad to see that Channel survived the war!! That sibling dynamic between Channel and Adeline has drastically changed. Damn, those two siblings must feel rather awkward and apologetic to each other but I feel it's neither their fault that things turned out that way. It's the awful circumstances that caused things to spiral out of control >.< It's so heartwarming to see Adeline and their mother visiting Channel in the hospital. , Channel must be feeling even more horrible and guilty for not actively doing anything during the war after learning that their father had passed away in Azkaban. Despite the awkwardness between the siblings, I'm sure Adeline never actually blamed Channel for ousting her and that's what family is all about. They are there for you no matter how much you might have forsaken them and at the end of the day, they still worry about you and welcome you back with open arms ^^ Things are never the same but Channel still has Adeline and their mother and things will get better with time :-)

Another POV that reflects the phrase "blood is thicker than water". Even though Max was a Death Eater, Claire can't bring herself to hate him or cut off ties with him. Sure, she does not agree with his dealings but after all, he is still her brother, her family. That conflicted feelings within her must be chewing her up for she knows that her brother deserved to be punished for the greater good but at the same time, Max is her brother, they are related by blood, and it must be hard to see him locked up in Azkaban (when their father was already sentenced while in a coma, big oof!) That grey area would always be grey ^^" Oh wow, I would have never thought Willow to be on defence (should I say that Max is very lucky to have Claire as his sister? LOL) and Theo to be the final witness!! Looks like Max doesn't have to live in a crammed cell anymore :')

Poor Farrah :'( She is suffering so much but I'm glad to see the tiniest progress that she is making since the day she was admitted into Mungo's. It that she doesn't really have any close friends around her except for Clara as all of her friends are all Muggles who wouldn't be able to understand what she had gone through because of the Statue. And now Clara is feeling slightly wary around her >.< Well, I don't blame Clara, she must be at a huge loss of what to do with someone so utterly broken, she had never been in her situation before and neither is she a trained medical professional. But it's great that Farrah is seeing a therapist and I can tell that Ellie is a good psychiatrist to her. Oh nooo, it must have been a last straw for Farrah when she heard that she's not allowed to see Christian as it was Christian who kept her fighting on for her life in the cells >.< Yet again, Christian prolly wouldn't be able to understand what happened to Farrah as a Muggle. But maybe, it's just the presence of Christian that she needs? Somehow, I don't think that Clara is a mean friend to Farrah or anything, it's just that Farrah is just so delicate right now and Clara obviously can't be there 24/7 for her >.< It's draining for both girls. Perhaps, a longer hospital stay would do them both good? The impact of war is just so harsh :"(

Da boss lady is in the house!! And she is getting straight to work!! With her schemings!! Poor Amos, he is so naive to think that he can get a taste of her LMAO and Yurina is using that to her strength, obviously. And voila, now she has information about Abeni Akingbade, which leads me wondering what exactly happened over the past twenty years?? The Akingbades must be pretty influential people in Nigeria?? And I'm pretty sure Yurina managed to wreck chaos in Nigeria and overthrew the government in some way or another?? I swear this little Japanese lady just doesn't stop :P Abeni must have gone through much turmoil, seeing the UFF's first teaser. Damn, everything is getting juicier and I can't wait for the tea to be spilled xD
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Chapter 54: Oh man, I should've figured Lucas would end up dying from overwork. :'( The signs were all there, especially during his final main POV. T^T Him overworking himself was a constant theme and it so much that he had to go out this way. It reminds me a lot of karoshi, "overwork death" in Japanese, and I'm just glad that he got one final night with his mother and that he died in the comfort of his home. OTL But oh my god, his mother is going to be absolutely heartbroken when she finds him in the morning and my heart hurts so much for her, because she was probably so thankful that her son wasn't directly on the battlefield, but he ended up being a casualty anyway and she'll still have to bury him with all of the others. T^T In a way, Lucas' death sort of has a numbness to it and both Audreys are probably going to be devastated when they receive the news as well. :'( As well as Percy, Jemma, Jun, and anyone else who knew Lucas. ;~; He was a great guy though and he really did a lot for the war effort. In the end, he definitely died a hero like the others.

Oh my gosh, I've been anticipating the conclusion to Channer's story ever since his final main POV and I'm so glad he's in a much better state than some of the others. <3 Granted, things aren't perfect and they never will be, especially since Timon is dead, but at least he has a chance to make things better and that's what counts the most. Channer is still so young and he has his whole life ahead of him to strengthen the bonds he has with his remaining family members. It's something I'm personally trying to work on as well, although our circumstances are admittedly very different. One thing I definitely fear is leaving things unsaid when it's too late, and my heart hurts so much that Timon and Channer never got to properly bond before Timon died. :'( It's definitely going to weigh on Channer a lot from now on, and I hope that he'll be able to process his grief and regret in a healthy way. On the plus side, I'm so happy that Henry is okay and it's so cool that Adeline stayed with his dad while she was in hiding!! ^^ If anything, maybe Henry and Channer can become eventual friends with Henry easing some of Channer's regrets with stories of Timon in Azkaban and how Timon was always talking about how proud he was of his kids. It won't alleviate all of the pain, but it might help a bit, knowing that even though he never verbally expressed his feelings to his dad, Timon still deeply loved and cared for Channer until the very end. Linette, Adeline, and Channer are definitely going to struggle for years to come, but at least they have each other and that's what matters. <3

Oof, it does that Claire's still stuck between both sides, even after the end of the war. But it's nice to see that short moment between her and Fitzwilliam, and he's grown so much from his school days, ahhhhh :') And oh my, I guess since Claire does technically have a stake in the other side because of her family, what the Order is doing for clean-up probably does feel a lot more harsh to her, even though they probably feel completely justified in doing so. It's a very gray area and at the very least, Willow and Theo came through by helping out, even though they had no obligation to. I do wonder why they did. Maybe it was Holly asking for a favor, since she knew Claire?? Maybe it was just Willow not wanting someone else to lose a sibling after she did?? Maybe it was Theo knowing that Max was like him, brought up with Death Eater ideals but still capable of change?? At the very least, I'm glad that Claire doesn't have to lose a family member who's so precious to her and she's much luckier than most who've been affected by the war.

Oh wow, good to see that Farrah also survived Azkaban!! I'm guessing we'll find out Hazel's fate in Matangi's epilogue. Anyway, it's awesome that Farrah is already seeing a therapist and Ellie sounds wonderful. :) And considering how broken Farrah already was back in February, I'm not surprised she was even worse by the time all of the prisoners were released from Azkaban. Her fantasies were probably the only thing keeping her going while she was at Azkaban. x___x But yikes, I don't know if a happy ending with Christian is in the cards. Considering what she's been through, she'll really need someone by her side who'll understand the extent of this war and since Christian is a Muggle, I don't think he can be that person, realistically. >___< Maybe if this were set during UFF's time with magic finally being revealed, Christian could become her caretaker and they could have their happily ever after. But considering how Clara is Farrah's best friend and Clara's reaction to Farrah's breakdowns, I doubt Christian will be able to last long either. >___>

And finally, my beautiful and strong queen of darkness, Miss Yurina Nakayashi!! <3 Going to America was definitely the right call, HAHA. (Since no pandemic to worry about and the US was in a much better state back then OTL If this were 2020, I'd be like, NOOOOO, GO BACK TO ASIA!! ANYWHERE BUT THE US!!) And yesssss, what a QUEEEEEN, living in the lap of luxury in Vegas!! XD Love love love that she's already scheming and recruiting people to her cause!! She isn't wasting any time in making plans for world domination. XD And ooooooh, I've been so so so curious to find out about the bit with soap operas that you asked me about a while back and it's so cool to finally see it here!! :D And oof, looks like Amos is her newest puppet and I love her puppeteering so much!! XD She'd never give him a second glance if it weren't for the information he's gathering for her. He's too much of a lust-driven doormat and Yurina is WAY above that. x] If she ever does fall in love, it'll be with a man who can provide a challenge and keep up with her intellectually. He'll have to REALLY impress her with his cunning and capabilities, and men like that are few and far in between, especially relative to Yurina. She has no time to deal with small fries like Amos and he's probably only got an Avada Kedavra in his future once she's done with him. :') But ooh, Abeni better watch out since Yurina has her eye on her now!! The fox is on the prowl and no one is safe now, hehe <3

Ooh, super curious to see what life will be like ten years from now!! Definitely a lot happier than this, since most people will have healed considerably by then. :') And wizards probably won't be affected by everything that's happening in the Muggle world, LOL (collapse of the housing bubble, Great Recession, etc.) :P