Chapter 4 *EDITED

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Minha's POV

     The car was being put to a stop and I sat there sensing an inviting smell of fresh baked pizza. Delicious! The blindfold was taken off and what I saw shot shooting stars right into my eyes! This place was called the Pizza Peel. Strange name, I know, but this place had kept a lot of memories of my brother and I. We went here for a celebration right after the news of us being accepted into the company! There was a deal also. If one of us were to debut, we would be able to go back once again. It was a deal so here I am. I'm supposed to be on a diet right now but nobody can will be willing to stop me! 

     I don't know if this debut thing will work out for me though. It seemed like a lot of fun but I've heard the stress weighed more than the party. I was snapped out of my thoughts from my brother though. I was going in too deep. 

     "What do you want to eat Minha?" I looked at him with the a face palmed expression. 

     "I don't know really...pizza?"I said sarcastically. 

     "Fine then. I see how it is,"He said jokingly in a threatening manner. "What do you want as your toppings?" 

     "Does tomato sauce work?"I asked with a straight face. 

      "Minha..." He sighed but then smiled. 

     "What? Tomato sauce can't be my choice of topping?"I asked trying to be a smarty pants. He looked at me with no emotion and I knew he was about to kick me off my seat if I continued. "Okay, I'm sorry. Pepperoni is what I choose as my topping." 

     "Okay then." We ordered and then waited at one of the dining tables.

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Min-yeon
#1
Chapter 62: Great story Author-nim! although i was a bit disappointed with when the time skipping started as I kinda hoped to see it all and not just short moments from this specific year and so on in from when it started....

what I mean to say is that it ended too quickly and if you wouldnt have time skipped I bet this story would have had a hundred of chapters which would all have been worth to read because I bet the whole story would have been even more amazing then. (not that it's already amazing now but you know it would have been even better despite it being great now already)

I have to say I'm somewhat surprised at myself for somehow manage to finish reading this entire story from intro+ch1 to the ch60 (the end)
in just 2 days. There was many times when I really wanted to comment something that caught my interest while reading the story.... and then there were times when I had been preventing myself from commenting when something really cracked me up in laughter because there were those times too. But in the end I decided to save all those comments for the end as I wanted to really focus on the story.

I really enjoyed reading this story. It was well written (despite some time skips at the end).... And the story was great (even the time skips were good, but I'd still wish they wern't time skips but full stories with those same lines at some point and a bit more slower, action and experience).... anyhow it was a truly amazing story. It's one of the favorite stories I've read which has been about Twice.
Jubgkookie
#2
Chapter 62: AWW AUTHOR- NIM thank you very much for uploading many Chapter for us(Readers)
Saranghae *heartue* ^-^
SanaCheeseKimbap_
#3
Chapter 62: NUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU WAIIIIIIIIIIIIIII THIS IS MAI FAVORITE STORY!!!!!!! WHEN I FIRST SAW THIS STORY I THOUGHT I WONT LIKE IT BUT IM BORED THEN I READ THIS STORY AND I FELL IN LOVEEEEEEE
Jubgkookie
#4
Chapter 61: WAIT WHAT!! I am also ASIAN and I am 13 years old and you are 12 deabak you are really good at writing
hehe this chapter was so cute and haha about the kids
SanaCheeseKimbap_
#5
Chapter 60: NUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU! WAI 3 CHAPTER???!!!! YASSSSSSSDSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS! #SANHAISREAL
SanaCheeseKimbap_
#6
Chapter 60: NUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU! WAI 3 CHAPTER???!!!! YASSSSSSSDSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS! #SANHAISREAL
SNsoneSD #7
Chapter 60: Mah heart ~♥♥
MelonCatNyan
#8
Chapter 60: YAAAAAAZZZZZ