Chapter 10

New Addition(Twice)
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Dahyun's POV

      The Ice Water Bucket Thingy. Doesn't sound cool but seems cool. Who am I kidding? It's not cool at all. Anyways I did it without telling the members. I took a bucket and filled it with ice and cold water. I went back to where Minha was sleeping and all of my members' eyes widen. I was about to throw it over her but a certain someone interrupted me again.

     "You know throwing ice on somebody is very dangerous,"Tzu-yu informed me.

      "Well to bad I am going to do it anyways,"I said. I was so close to pouring it on Minha but I got interrupted by somebody else. 

     "I wouldn't do it if I were you,"Kaylie said.

     "Why not?"I asked her.

     "She still wouldn't wake up."Kaylie said.

     "Will you help us wake her up?"I asked her.

     "Sure but I am not doing it,"She said. I guess I have to do it then.

     "So what am I suppose to do?"I asked her.

     "Step one get her blanket off,"Kaylie said. I did as told.

     "Step 2 Take her pickachu and watch out,"Kaylie said. I slowly took her pickachu and an explosion came.

      "DAHYUN GIVE ME MY PICKACHU BACK!!!,"Minha yelled out loudly into the pillow but you can still hear it clearly.

     "No"I said

     "Give me it baaackk!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!,"She yelled but a little quieter this time. She looked at me and her eyes can kill you so much right now.

Everybody but Minha's POV

Dan

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Min-yeon
#1
Chapter 62: Great story Author-nim! although i was a bit disappointed with when the time skipping started as I kinda hoped to see it all and not just short moments from this specific year and so on in from when it started....

what I mean to say is that it ended too quickly and if you wouldnt have time skipped I bet this story would have had a hundred of chapters which would all have been worth to read because I bet the whole story would have been even more amazing then. (not that it's already amazing now but you know it would have been even better despite it being great now already)

I have to say I'm somewhat surprised at myself for somehow manage to finish reading this entire story from intro+ch1 to the ch60 (the end)
in just 2 days. There was many times when I really wanted to comment something that caught my interest while reading the story.... and then there were times when I had been preventing myself from commenting when something really cracked me up in laughter because there were those times too. But in the end I decided to save all those comments for the end as I wanted to really focus on the story.

I really enjoyed reading this story. It was well written (despite some time skips at the end).... And the story was great (even the time skips were good, but I'd still wish they wern't time skips but full stories with those same lines at some point and a bit more slower, action and experience).... anyhow it was a truly amazing story. It's one of the favorite stories I've read which has been about Twice.
Jubgkookie
#2
Chapter 62: AWW AUTHOR- NIM thank you very much for uploading many Chapter for us(Readers)
Saranghae *heartue* ^-^
SanaCheeseKimbap_
#3
Chapter 62: NUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU WAIIIIIIIIIIIIIII THIS IS MAI FAVORITE STORY!!!!!!! WHEN I FIRST SAW THIS STORY I THOUGHT I WONT LIKE IT BUT IM BORED THEN I READ THIS STORY AND I FELL IN LOVEEEEEEE
Jubgkookie
#4
Chapter 61: WAIT WHAT!! I am also ASIAN and I am 13 years old and you are 12 deabak you are really good at writing
hehe this chapter was so cute and haha about the kids
SanaCheeseKimbap_
#5
Chapter 60: NUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU! WAI 3 CHAPTER???!!!! YASSSSSSSDSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS! #SANHAISREAL
SanaCheeseKimbap_
#6
Chapter 60: NUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU! WAI 3 CHAPTER???!!!! YASSSSSSSDSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS! #SANHAISREAL
SNsoneSD #7
Chapter 60: Mah heart ~♥♥
MelonCatNyan
#8
Chapter 60: YAAAAAAZZZZZ