Chapter 29

New Addition(Twice)
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   Minha's POV

     Right after we finished the dance I was completely exhausted. 

     "Does anybody have water?"I managed to ask.

     "Here,"A guy about my brother's age said as he threw a water bottle at me. He threw it from the crowd and I surprisingly caught it. I went over to the crowd and oh gosh the crowd started screaming so loud that my ear drums could've beated away. (Get it? No? Okay bye) 

     "Thank you,"I said to him as I handed him 500 won(43 cents). "Sorry but it is all I got,"I said.

     "Anni it's okay you don't have to,"He said as he shoved my hand with money back to me.

      "Nah I insist,"I said as I put my hand towards him. 

      "But I-"

      "You want it or not you still gonna take it,"I demanded him with my dark tone.

      "O-Okay then,"He stuttered out with fear.

     "Thank you! Hope you have a nice day!"I said with my own charm and then gave him a wink. I then went back to my brother and his group.

     "Minha you can't do that when I'm around,"He said. Oh no he's getting protective again. 

     "S-"I tried to say but got interrupted.

     "Actually you are not aloud to do that at all,"He said as he was becoming even more protective. 

     "Anyways, how was my dance?"I asked him.

     "You did good...but you slacked something,"He said.

     "Excuse me?"I said as I arched an eyebrow.

     "You just lacked the coolness ya know?"He said as he did the body wave. 

     "And when did you ever have 'the coolness' Oppa,"I said as I mimicked his body wave.

     "Ever since I was born,"He said as he lifted the shoulder of his hoodie.

     "Mhm okay,"I said as I was getting slightly annoyed on how cocky he was being right now.

      "Since you lacked the coolness pay up,"He said as he put his hand out for money.

     "You got to kidding right?"I said as I was going to hand him  23,557 won($20) but then I got stopped.

     "You know hyung your dongsaeng di

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Min-yeon
#1
Chapter 62: Great story Author-nim! although i was a bit disappointed with when the time skipping started as I kinda hoped to see it all and not just short moments from this specific year and so on in from when it started....

what I mean to say is that it ended too quickly and if you wouldnt have time skipped I bet this story would have had a hundred of chapters which would all have been worth to read because I bet the whole story would have been even more amazing then. (not that it's already amazing now but you know it would have been even better despite it being great now already)

I have to say I'm somewhat surprised at myself for somehow manage to finish reading this entire story from intro+ch1 to the ch60 (the end)
in just 2 days. There was many times when I really wanted to comment something that caught my interest while reading the story.... and then there were times when I had been preventing myself from commenting when something really cracked me up in laughter because there were those times too. But in the end I decided to save all those comments for the end as I wanted to really focus on the story.

I really enjoyed reading this story. It was well written (despite some time skips at the end).... And the story was great (even the time skips were good, but I'd still wish they wern't time skips but full stories with those same lines at some point and a bit more slower, action and experience).... anyhow it was a truly amazing story. It's one of the favorite stories I've read which has been about Twice.
Jubgkookie
#2
Chapter 62: AWW AUTHOR- NIM thank you very much for uploading many Chapter for us(Readers)
Saranghae *heartue* ^-^
SanaCheeseKimbap_
#3
Chapter 62: NUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU WAIIIIIIIIIIIIIII THIS IS MAI FAVORITE STORY!!!!!!! WHEN I FIRST SAW THIS STORY I THOUGHT I WONT LIKE IT BUT IM BORED THEN I READ THIS STORY AND I FELL IN LOVEEEEEEE
Jubgkookie
#4
Chapter 61: WAIT WHAT!! I am also ASIAN and I am 13 years old and you are 12 deabak you are really good at writing
hehe this chapter was so cute and haha about the kids
SanaCheeseKimbap_
#5
Chapter 60: NUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU! WAI 3 CHAPTER???!!!! YASSSSSSSDSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS! #SANHAISREAL
SanaCheeseKimbap_
#6
Chapter 60: NUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU! WAI 3 CHAPTER???!!!! YASSSSSSSDSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS! #SANHAISREAL
SNsoneSD #7
Chapter 60: Mah heart ~♥♥
MelonCatNyan
#8
Chapter 60: YAAAAAAZZZZZ