Chapter 24

New Addition(Twice)
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Minha's POV

     My lips were about a centimeter away from hers and then I...I stopped.

     "Sorry but I can't do this,"I mumbled as tears went flowing down my face. I ran out of the atmosphere and somewhere else where it was calm and peaceful. As I ran I past Momo. Oh yeah I was suppose to make her food. "Sorry Momo but I will have to get you food later. Right now was 7:26 so I have about an hour and a half to go. 

     "Okay!"Momo shouted giving me a thumbs up. Well that cheered me up a little bit. I went to this fountain place I usually go to when I have problems. Sometimes I go here with my brother and we just express our feelings. I wish he was here right now. I walked around and went into this guitar store. The owner knows me well since I came in here a lot. I asked the owner a guitar and he gave me one. Then I sat back at the fountain and played a tune that my brother and I used to sing together. Then I started to sing. (Song I made up) 

~Hey Brother~(Minha)

~Hey Sister~(Minho)

No it can't be! I turned and found my brother as he walked and sat down next to me. 

~We will always be by each other's side~(Both)

~To make sure you're fine~(Minha)

~To make sure you're alright~(Minho)

~We will find~(Minha)

~A way~(Minho)

~To make each other's day~(Both)

~Cause we are brother and sister~(Both)

Dahyun's POV

     Oh no. This is not good. We need to

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Min-yeon
#1
Chapter 62: Great story Author-nim! although i was a bit disappointed with when the time skipping started as I kinda hoped to see it all and not just short moments from this specific year and so on in from when it started....

what I mean to say is that it ended too quickly and if you wouldnt have time skipped I bet this story would have had a hundred of chapters which would all have been worth to read because I bet the whole story would have been even more amazing then. (not that it's already amazing now but you know it would have been even better despite it being great now already)

I have to say I'm somewhat surprised at myself for somehow manage to finish reading this entire story from intro+ch1 to the ch60 (the end)
in just 2 days. There was many times when I really wanted to comment something that caught my interest while reading the story.... and then there were times when I had been preventing myself from commenting when something really cracked me up in laughter because there were those times too. But in the end I decided to save all those comments for the end as I wanted to really focus on the story.

I really enjoyed reading this story. It was well written (despite some time skips at the end).... And the story was great (even the time skips were good, but I'd still wish they wern't time skips but full stories with those same lines at some point and a bit more slower, action and experience).... anyhow it was a truly amazing story. It's one of the favorite stories I've read which has been about Twice.
Jubgkookie
#2
Chapter 62: AWW AUTHOR- NIM thank you very much for uploading many Chapter for us(Readers)
Saranghae *heartue* ^-^
SanaCheeseKimbap_
#3
Chapter 62: NUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU WAIIIIIIIIIIIIIII THIS IS MAI FAVORITE STORY!!!!!!! WHEN I FIRST SAW THIS STORY I THOUGHT I WONT LIKE IT BUT IM BORED THEN I READ THIS STORY AND I FELL IN LOVEEEEEEE
Jubgkookie
#4
Chapter 61: WAIT WHAT!! I am also ASIAN and I am 13 years old and you are 12 deabak you are really good at writing
hehe this chapter was so cute and haha about the kids
SanaCheeseKimbap_
#5
Chapter 60: NUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU! WAI 3 CHAPTER???!!!! YASSSSSSSDSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS! #SANHAISREAL
SanaCheeseKimbap_
#6
Chapter 60: NUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU! WAI 3 CHAPTER???!!!! YASSSSSSSDSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS! #SANHAISREAL
SNsoneSD #7
Chapter 60: Mah heart ~♥♥
MelonCatNyan
#8
Chapter 60: YAAAAAAZZZZZ