Chapter 17

New Addition(Twice)
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 Tzu-yu's POV

What ever happens he can not hurt her!

Sana's POV

Why do I feel so much jealousy in me?!? Do I perhaps like her?

Minha's POV

     "So are you going to call him?"Kaylie asked as she picked up the spoon of strawberry ice cream.

     "Sure why not?"I said.

      "What if he likes you?"Kaylie asked.

      "Then he likes me. There's nothing to it."I said

      "I will prevent anyone from dating my cousin!"Dahyun yelled. Luckily we were sitting far away from the customers, cause if we did all the attention would have been on us. 

     "Dahyun remember I'm older than you so I get to control my own life,"I said to her.

     "Wait does that mean that you get to control my life since I am younger?!?"Dahyun loudly asked scared. Hmm. I never thought of that!

     "Hmm, I never thought of that but that's a great idea! Lets do it!,"I said joking but I don't think Dahyun caught on since she widened her eyes.

    "Noooo! Please don't do this to me!"Dahyun cried out begging as she tugged on my arm. Again we were far way from the customers so it was better. Although I don't think anybody remembers about the fake crying lesson I taught them. Since Dahyun fake cried I flicked her forehead.

    "Owww!"She yelled out hurt.

      "Well that is what you get for fake crying,"I said.

      "Meany,"Dahyun mumbles but I still heard it.

      "What was that?"I asked her putting my hand over my ear.

      "Nothing Minha,"Dahyun said trying to cover herself.

      "I was just kidding. Anyways I will not be controlling your life since people's life

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Min-yeon
#1
Chapter 62: Great story Author-nim! although i was a bit disappointed with when the time skipping started as I kinda hoped to see it all and not just short moments from this specific year and so on in from when it started....

what I mean to say is that it ended too quickly and if you wouldnt have time skipped I bet this story would have had a hundred of chapters which would all have been worth to read because I bet the whole story would have been even more amazing then. (not that it's already amazing now but you know it would have been even better despite it being great now already)

I have to say I'm somewhat surprised at myself for somehow manage to finish reading this entire story from intro+ch1 to the ch60 (the end)
in just 2 days. There was many times when I really wanted to comment something that caught my interest while reading the story.... and then there were times when I had been preventing myself from commenting when something really cracked me up in laughter because there were those times too. But in the end I decided to save all those comments for the end as I wanted to really focus on the story.

I really enjoyed reading this story. It was well written (despite some time skips at the end).... And the story was great (even the time skips were good, but I'd still wish they wern't time skips but full stories with those same lines at some point and a bit more slower, action and experience).... anyhow it was a truly amazing story. It's one of the favorite stories I've read which has been about Twice.
Jubgkookie
#2
Chapter 62: AWW AUTHOR- NIM thank you very much for uploading many Chapter for us(Readers)
Saranghae *heartue* ^-^
SanaCheeseKimbap_
#3
Chapter 62: NUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU WAIIIIIIIIIIIIIII THIS IS MAI FAVORITE STORY!!!!!!! WHEN I FIRST SAW THIS STORY I THOUGHT I WONT LIKE IT BUT IM BORED THEN I READ THIS STORY AND I FELL IN LOVEEEEEEE
Jubgkookie
#4
Chapter 61: WAIT WHAT!! I am also ASIAN and I am 13 years old and you are 12 deabak you are really good at writing
hehe this chapter was so cute and haha about the kids
SanaCheeseKimbap_
#5
Chapter 60: NUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU! WAI 3 CHAPTER???!!!! YASSSSSSSDSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS! #SANHAISREAL
SanaCheeseKimbap_
#6
Chapter 60: NUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU! WAI 3 CHAPTER???!!!! YASSSSSSSDSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS! #SANHAISREAL
SNsoneSD #7
Chapter 60: Mah heart ~♥♥
MelonCatNyan
#8
Chapter 60: YAAAAAAZZZZZ