The Winter's Remnants

by sweetsonata

angst, drama, romance, slice of life

Soojung was now alone.
But, she would still keep the memories...
The tears...
And their love.

Title: 10/10

Your title sounds so mature and fancy. It definitely has a angst feeling too it. 

Story Description: 9/10

Your description doesn't really pull me in but I like how it makes the reader want more. Short but to the point. 

Graphics: 5/5

Grammar / Vocabulary: 20/20

Perfect grammar and perfect vocabulary. 

Story plot: 23/25

I really like how the story was short but still had that strong angst feel to it. You described Soojung's emotions perfectly. The only thing that I have to complain is about Jongin. Yes he is Soojung's love but there's nothing in the story that shows it (besides her saying so and the teddy bear). 

Characterization: 7/10

Similarly to the story plot, I don't know about Jongin. I know that Soojung is reserved and all but what's Jongin's backstory?

Creativity: 10/10

The formatting of the story was nice. Especially where you transitioned from the main ideas to Soojung's short little thoughts. 

Overall Enjoyment: 9/10

Overall Grade: A