Tainted Blades by -KAIWAII

Genre: angst, fantasy/supernatural, romance

Description:

Life is a game. When you're dead, it's game over.

Be careful while you're playing.




..

If only we could be together.



I'm sorry.
 

Title: 10/10

I like how it's mysterious drama filled title. 

Story Description: 4/10

This description told me absolutely nothing other than the fact that it's some love story. I wouldn't even call that a description. Maybe in your description you could explain why the title is called "Tainted Blades." 

Character Description: 0/0

No character description. This will not be included with the grade. 

Graphics: 5/5

The poster is so pretty! The sword pictures look a bit random though.

Grammar / Vocabulary: 17/25

The story should be revised and checked thoroughly for any grammar and vocab. mistakes. There were some fragments and misspelled words. You should reread the story, use a spell-checker, or use the basic spell-checking machine on Asianfanfics to fix the mistakes. 

Story plot / Content: 20/25

The topic was an interesting idea but it was a little bit boring to read. To me, it already sounds really predictable. The first few chapters are important because those are the chapters that pull the reader in. 

Overall Enjoyment: 16/20

I enjoyed reading it because it was different comprared to other fanfics but nothing exciting made me want to read more. Hopefully future chapters will impress me. 

Overall Grade: C