[Rv] Namjoon the Great

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warning: some spoilers may be in this review

 

Namjoon the Great By dhaatk [M]

Genre: Drama

Description: Namjoon Kim is a famous fashion model, but his life is messed up.

 

Title: 10/10 

The title makes the audience think that Namjoon is really great. However Namjoon isn't the perfect model he claims to be. He has a fragile background and this story shows the true side of him. 

Story Description: 10/10

I liked how it was mysterious, but still didn't give much of the story away.

Character Description: 0/0 points (not included with grade)

There were no descriptions. However some nicknames were well thought of and played a part in the story.

Graphics: 5/5

The poster fit with the storyline of the fanfic.

Grammar / Vocabulary: 25/25

The story was well written. There were some very minor grammar mistakes, but they could be overlooked. 

Story plot / Content: 21/25  

I was very impressed with the storyline and plot. However it was a little bit confusing with the flashback. I also had to slow down and reread some passages a few times to fully understand it. The character development was decent. Even though you said that Luhan was Namjoon's true love, it never crossed my mind that it actually happened. I got that Luhan liked Namjoon, but not the other way around. 

Overall Enjoyment: 16/20

Total Grade: A

 

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Hello everyone! Sorry but I have been backed up with work and projects. But I promise that I will finish all request soon. *pinky promise

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kjdzyx
#1
Chapter 86: thanks so much for the review!!! I'm sorry I was caught up with school thepast few weeks... But I really appreciate sthe efforts you make :)
I'll credit the shop right away
JaeKnight
#2
Chapter 87: thanks for the ad. But can I credit you after I got my review? hehe
trotinetka
#3
I requested for ad too ! :) Have a nice evening/day ^.^
iamout #4
Requested for a review. :)
constipatedpotato
#5
I've requested! :)
Infinite-Infinity20
#6
I requested!
This is my poster link: http://i.imgur.com/cWNQqg9.jpg
I forgot to put it in.
JaeKnight
#7
ive requested :D I really like how you price your ads. I think ads should be price like this. I mean, 1 kp is too expensive for a simple wallpost haha. Anyway, thanks in advance :D