[Rv] Namjoon the Great
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Namjoon the Great By dhaatk [M]
Genre: Drama
Description: Namjoon Kim is a famous fashion model, but his life is messed up.
Title: 10/10
The title makes the audience think that Namjoon is really great. However Namjoon isn't the perfect model he claims to be. He has a fragile background and this story shows the true side of him.
Story Description: 10/10
I liked how it was mysterious, but still didn't give much of the story away.
Character Description: 0/0 points (not included with grade)
There were no descriptions. However some nicknames were well thought of and played a part in the story.
Graphics: 5/5
The poster fit with the storyline of the fanfic.
Grammar / Vocabulary: 25/25
The story was well written. There were some very minor grammar mistakes, but they could be overlooked.
Story plot / Content: 21/25
I was very impressed with the storyline and plot. However it was a little bit confusing with the flashback. I also had to slow down and reread some passages a few times to fully understand it. The character development was decent. Even though you said that Luhan was Namjoon's true love, it never crossed my mind that it actually happened. I got that Luhan liked Namjoon, but not the other way around.
Overall Enjoyment: 16/20
Total Grade: A
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