The Man in the Portrait by yifannie

Genre: angst, tragedy, romance,

Description: Chanyeol only needed 24 hours to be with someone he had loved since then and Baekhyun happened to be that person. However, Baekhyun didn’t know that Chanyeol was only a man in the portrait because Chanyeol didn’t bother to tell the truth until the time had nearly come.

Title: 10/10

I like it. It's original and it gives off a nice mysterious vibe. 

Story Description: 6/10

The description had no hook. It’s supposed to pull the excited reader into the story. Based on the description alone, I'm assuming that this fanfic is like any other romance drama fanfic. However after I read the first two chapters, I realized what the fanfic was about. You need to give the reader a idea about the fanfic. Luckly your title and forward helped with me understand the fanfic. 

Character Description: 0/0 

There was no character description. This will not included with grade.

Graphics: 5/5

Grammar / Vocabulary: 25/25

Nice use of vocabulary because there wasn't any overuse of words. As far as I read it, there were no grammar mistakes. 

Story plot / Content: 25/25

The story was extremely descriptive which was nice to read. I like the overall idea of the story. I hope it continues to grow into an amazing story. 

Overall Enjoyment: 18/20

Overall Grade: A