Early mornings, warm coffee & Kim Jongin [M] by allyouneedislove

Genre: , romance, fluff,

Description: Jongin is a grumpy customer that always seems to be late for something, Kyungsoo makes him coffee as fast as possible.

Title: 9/10

It was a little bit too long for my liking. However it did get to the point of the story so I'll accept it. 

Story Description: 7/10

The description was decent.  I could tell that this fanfic is going to be about romance. Something that annoyed me was that comma in the middle. It just doesn't seem right when it's separating two complete sentences. 

Character Description: 0/0

No character description. This will not be included with the grade.

Graphics: 4.5/5

One of the pictures did not show up. I'm not sure if that's just me but you should have that checked. 

Grammar / Vocabulary: 21/25

There was a lot of misuse of commas and grammar mistakes in here. It made the story really hard to read. Make sure to check over the story to fix them. 

Story plot / Content: 21/25

The fanfic's story line was interesting to read. I do have to say that it's different from most fanfics. Don't worry; it was a good kind of different.  It was also a nice transition from starting off as innocent to hot and fluffy. 

Overall Enjoyment: 15/20

Overall Grade: B