008: Very Benevolent

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Very Benevolent...

 

 

Jeno couldn't help but smile as he walked into his house. He'd somehow managed to get this girl to open up a bit. Maybe he was dramatic in thinking she was lonely, or that there's some huge reason she isn't friendly with others. But, he did, he thought those things and he even worried for her. That's part of the reason he abruptly opened up to her, usually if he wouldn't tell people he didn't know well about his past, and present, home life. But something about her made him spill everything. She seemed like someone who could hold secrets, that could be why he'd been so comfortable with her from the get-go 

The only downside of this moment was the fear in the back of his mind that told him she'd be the same after break. Jeno blinked at his own thoughts, two weeks is a long time. But he had her number. He almost wanted to smack himself, why was he so hung up on getting close to her...did a part of him want to unravel whatever mystery surrounded her? He rolled his eyes at himself. Stupid. 

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Jaemin was more confused than anyone as he walked into his room. Somehow his walk in the park had ended up with him and Doyeon agreeing to be friends. The funny thing is, his heart skipped a beat in that moment. "I'm tired." He said to himself. There was still some awkward air that hung around him and Doyeon. Are you hiding something too? His head turned to the music room right across from his bedroom. A somewhat determined smile lifted his lips, "I hope you meant what you said, because now you're stuck with me." 

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Doyeon woke the next morning to the sound of a plant falling on her balcony. She turned to the other side, she wasn't going to get out of bed to clean right now. But before she could fully drift back into dreamland, she heard a knock. "It's open," she mumbled, thinking the sound was from out in the hallway. But when nobody walked in, she grumbled and sat up. She swung the door open in annoyance, but nothing was out there. She slowly closed it...then the knock came again. This time she was sure it was coming from the balcony door. She made her way over to the door, unease taking it's spot in her stomach. When she opened the door she was greeted by a familiar smiling face. "Good morning, friend~" He sang. Doyeon stood there in shock, "What the-" she stopped talking and just walked over to her bed. Jaemin snorted, "What are you doing?" He asked. 

"I'm dreaming." She mumbled, snuggling farther into her sheets. Jaemin leaned against the door frame with a fond smile. "Have you dreamed of me before?" He asked. Doyeon sat up, "You're real aren't you?" She asked. He nodded, "What gave it away?" 

"The cold air coming into my room." She stood up and pushed him back out onto the balcony, shutting the door behind them. "Why are you on my balcony?" She asked, anger coating her voice. Jaemin didn't seem at all phased, "Well, I climbed over so I could invite you to hang out." He informed her. Doyeon shook her head, "Thanks but no thanks, I plan on spending this vacation by myself." His forehead creased. 

"What happened to, 'Jaemin please please be my friend'?" He batted his eyelashes. She clenched her fist, "I never, said that." She took a deep breath, "And even if I did, that offer wouldn't start till we're back in school." She informed him.

"Are you serious right now?" He asked. Doyeon nodded as she walked back into her room, "Dead serious." She smiled before slamming the door in his face. 

Just give me a few weeks to prepare myself. 

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She stayed true to those words all break. And even when school started back up, they didn't get many chances to hang out. Test and end of the year exams were approaching at that fast holiday season speed. There were only a few times all Jaemin and his friends ate lunch with her. But even then everyone was mostly revising notes and talking about how they couldn't wait for the weekend. 

In barely a blink of an eye, it was already two days before New Years. Somehow she'd already been in this town for six months, some times that seemed like such a small amount of times. But at other times it seemed like it had been years. One of those times was right now. 

Jaemin was on her balcony, again, with his stupid smile. 

"What do you want?" She asked. "Did Jeno invite you to his grandmother's New Years Eve party?" He asked. Doyeon thought for a moment before nodding, "Yeah." Her and Jeno had actually become a tad bit closer, some with her and Jaemin. During the last few weeks they'd all gotten more comfortable in each other's presence. "Are you going?" He asked, annoyed,

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Aketza #1
Chapter 42: OMG, this was amazing! I loved it. It was so lovely. Thank you for not giving up at chapter 5. 😊❤
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#2
Chapter 41: Omg such a sweet update!! It’s so cute to see them go from liking each other to officially dating, the way the chapter started was so cute, and Jeno being happy for them <3 I really liked how you focused on the other characters too, especially Haechan whose my fave and Jisung (why is it so easy to picture him in the kind of dilemma) :P. One more chapter omg can’t wait hope it’s an epic ending <3
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#3
Chapter 40: Omg how can I be late to such a monumental chapter!! Honestly it wasn’t abrupt at all I was wondering when they would finally talk but this chapter was so sweet!! So glad that Doyeon realised her feelings and admitted them to herself as well as to Jaemin - and when they kissed *swoon* love the fluff. Also have I not payed attention all this time I had no idea Doyeon had a mother and sister - how bad of me if I forgot that detail. And 2 more chapters left omg sad but can’t wait <3
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#4
Chapter 39: Glad to know there are still a few more chapters until the end of the story - I’m not ready for it to end yet. They’ve all come so far now talking about university plans and whatnot. Also I love that Jeno is such a good friend still to both Doyeon and Jaemin. As for those two, they need to talk ASAP. “But Doyeon, she was what he needed. He couldn’t imagine not liking her now that he did” I love this line omg <3
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#5
Chapter 38: Omg I’m late but catching but up now your 2 latest chapters~~ I think you should definitely make a bonus chapter with the interviews because I love that Chenle is doing that. It fits into the story’s youthful vibe so well. As for other highlights of this chapter, Soeun is such an interesting character. Also Doyeon omg!! I’m glad Chenle asked her straight out, even if she denied it she was still put on the spot and it will make her realise her feelings quicker. Poor Jaemin who overheard though!!
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#6
Chapter 37: Yep, I definitely don’t see Jaemin getting jealous and walking away like his character. So glad you added the extra thousand words and made it turn out like this. Omg the emotions are so real, I really felt for Doyeon in this chapter. The poor girl doesn’t want to hurt Jeno but I’m glad he confessed and made her realise that she doesn’t see him that way - now she just needs to realise what she feels for Jaemin. And Jaemin needs to confess soon but not yet. Can’t wait for the next chapter, not enough Jaemin and Doyeon moments here so I need more hehe~ And I’m so sad that we’re in the final stages of the story :( I love this story so much what am I gonna do without your updates
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#7
Chapter 36: Omg it finally happened!! I feel so sorry for Jeno but wow I was really impressed by how he confessed he made it so genuine and impactful the poor boy, even though I’m team Jaemin I love how you portray Jeno. Hmmm that Soeun girl was interesting, that little moment between her and Jeno makes me think she could potentially heal his broken heart? And I am very much looking forward to the next chapter as I need more Jaemin and Doyeon moments - I wonder if he knew they went to the treehouse together? Thanks for your update and can’t wait for the next one!!! <3
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#8
Chapter 35: Omg I was thinking about your story earlier in the day how funny - and then you updated!! Just wanted to say again this is one of the best stories I’m curently reading; I love the positive and youthful vibe of the story, it really ignites a sense of hope and purity which is rare to find in fan fiction honestly. Omg I hope you can upload chapter 29 before the end of the week, that would really top my weekend hehe. Awww Mark and Mira are so cute - as soon as I saw her name I thought of Gugudan’s Kang Mina whom Mark is actually close with in real life~ not sure if there was any correlation but cute nonetheless. Poor Jaemin for not getting a seat next to Doyeon but he seems to have more game than Jeno anyway - glad to see that she’s starting to like him more. Looking forward to the school trip and more moments between them, and that upcoming scene you hinted at earlier that had to do with rejection :O Thanks for the update :)
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#9
Chapter 7: Omg skimming through past chapters because they feel so long ago compared to how much the story’s progressed!! I love the last line in this chapter intimating how Jaemin would fall for her in the future
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#10
Chapter 33: Thank you for your regular updates, always nice to read them ~ omg she finally read the letter!! Glad she found closure, also I love the dinner scene with the grandparents. Jaemin is so cute honestly, I love how you portray him here and how enamoured he is by Doyeon. Outside of this story I’d pick Jeno over Jaemin but within this story I’m Team Jaemin all the way hehehe I feel like he cares about her so much~ can’t wait for the senior trip <3