010: Balcony Chords

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The sound of an acoustic guitar traveled into Doyeon's room. It sounded muffled, she could just barely hear it as she blinked the sleep out of her eyes. It was already Friday, meaning it was the last day of school for the week. That gave her the extra push she needed to get out of bed. Her feet seemed to take control of her as she found herself padding along to her balcony door. Gently...She told herself, opening the door a crack as slowly and quietly as possible. The guitar continued on, she couldn't decipher what song it was, but for some reason it had a familiar melody that made her close her eyes. She felt secure as the strumming seemed to wrap around her. Her fingers tapped against the door as she listened. It felt like the lyrics for the song were on the tip of her tongue, but she couldn't quite form them...was this some sort of feeling of nostalgia?

"I hear you." Jaemin's voice said, in tune with the chords he was playing. He said it so casually that Doyeon almost missed it. She could close the door and walk away, but she didn't really feel like leaving the feeling behind. So, she opened the door, stepping out onto the plant littered balcony. Jaemin gave her a sweet smile, still strumming away. But, he'd stopped playing whatever that song was. "What are you doing awake so early?" He asked. Doyeon's eyebrows creased, for the first time she noticed that the sun wasn't fully up. She'd usually be asleep for at least another hour. 

"How can I stay asleep when you're playing that?" She asked, pointing to his guitar. The least he could do was close his window, but she wasn't going to complain about that now. "What are you doing up?" She asked back. Jaemin had to fend off a smile, it felt good to hear her ask him questions. Too bad it wasn't one he wanted to answer. 

"I woke up when my parents left for work." He cleared his throat, "I decided playing was easier than falling back asleep." Doyeon nodded, going on her knees in front of the railing, leaning her arms against it. 

"What song were you playing?" Her curiosity was piqued as she looked at the instrument, she'd always wanted to learn how to play...her grandfather used to play it to help her fall asleep. Jaemin didn't answer, instead he changed the subject. 

"Do you know how to play?" He asked, easily seeing the look in her eyes. He used to hold that same look in his back when his father played--that was back when he wanted to be just like his father. Doyeon shook her head. 

"No, It looks fun though." She felt her fingers tingle as she remembered the sensation of the strings under her fingers. She used to try and play with her grandfathers, but the guitar wasn't easily self taught, hence why she never figured out a single chord. 

"I'll teach you, just tell me when." He said eagerly. Doyeon looked at him, taken aback by the sudden sound of determination in his voice. She meant to shake her head, but instead she nodded. 

"Okay." She said before standing up, she should probably get ready for school since she's up. She almost closed the door behind her, but she paused. Looking back at Jaemin, she sent him a genuine small smile, "See you at school." It was odd to feel so relaxed around him, usually she had her guard up; or at least tried her best to keep it up, but I think the fact she talks to him now shows she strayed a bit away from her original plan. 

Jaemin looked on the door, now shut. Isn't it crazy how she keeps showing up when he needs someone the most. If she didn't have that habit, they'd probably still be close to strangers. Now she was coming up on a year here, and he finally felt like progress was being made between her and everyone here. It wasn't just him that noticed her smile growing more and more genuine, was it? 

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Doyeon walked into the classroom. Jaemin wasn't in his seat yet, but Mark was, and Jeno was sitting in the chair in front of him. Doyeon looked at the two, slightly intrigued to hear what they were talking about. Jeno noticed her first, waving at her to come quicker.  She didn't go any faster though, slow and steady wins the race. When she was finally seated, Jeno began telling his story again. "I saw some girl confessing to Jaemin by the bathrooms!" He informed her excitedly. She wasn't sure how she wa

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Aketza #1
Chapter 42: OMG, this was amazing! I loved it. It was so lovely. Thank you for not giving up at chapter 5. 😊❤
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#2
Chapter 41: Omg such a sweet update!! It’s so cute to see them go from liking each other to officially dating, the way the chapter started was so cute, and Jeno being happy for them <3 I really liked how you focused on the other characters too, especially Haechan whose my fave and Jisung (why is it so easy to picture him in the kind of dilemma) :P. One more chapter omg can’t wait hope it’s an epic ending <3
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#3
Chapter 40: Omg how can I be late to such a monumental chapter!! Honestly it wasn’t abrupt at all I was wondering when they would finally talk but this chapter was so sweet!! So glad that Doyeon realised her feelings and admitted them to herself as well as to Jaemin - and when they kissed *swoon* love the fluff. Also have I not payed attention all this time I had no idea Doyeon had a mother and sister - how bad of me if I forgot that detail. And 2 more chapters left omg sad but can’t wait <3
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#4
Chapter 39: Glad to know there are still a few more chapters until the end of the story - I’m not ready for it to end yet. They’ve all come so far now talking about university plans and whatnot. Also I love that Jeno is such a good friend still to both Doyeon and Jaemin. As for those two, they need to talk ASAP. “But Doyeon, she was what he needed. He couldn’t imagine not liking her now that he did” I love this line omg <3
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#5
Chapter 38: Omg I’m late but catching but up now your 2 latest chapters~~ I think you should definitely make a bonus chapter with the interviews because I love that Chenle is doing that. It fits into the story’s youthful vibe so well. As for other highlights of this chapter, Soeun is such an interesting character. Also Doyeon omg!! I’m glad Chenle asked her straight out, even if she denied it she was still put on the spot and it will make her realise her feelings quicker. Poor Jaemin who overheard though!!
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#6
Chapter 37: Yep, I definitely don’t see Jaemin getting jealous and walking away like his character. So glad you added the extra thousand words and made it turn out like this. Omg the emotions are so real, I really felt for Doyeon in this chapter. The poor girl doesn’t want to hurt Jeno but I’m glad he confessed and made her realise that she doesn’t see him that way - now she just needs to realise what she feels for Jaemin. And Jaemin needs to confess soon but not yet. Can’t wait for the next chapter, not enough Jaemin and Doyeon moments here so I need more hehe~ And I’m so sad that we’re in the final stages of the story :( I love this story so much what am I gonna do without your updates
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#7
Chapter 36: Omg it finally happened!! I feel so sorry for Jeno but wow I was really impressed by how he confessed he made it so genuine and impactful the poor boy, even though I’m team Jaemin I love how you portray Jeno. Hmmm that Soeun girl was interesting, that little moment between her and Jeno makes me think she could potentially heal his broken heart? And I am very much looking forward to the next chapter as I need more Jaemin and Doyeon moments - I wonder if he knew they went to the treehouse together? Thanks for your update and can’t wait for the next one!!! <3
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#8
Chapter 35: Omg I was thinking about your story earlier in the day how funny - and then you updated!! Just wanted to say again this is one of the best stories I’m curently reading; I love the positive and youthful vibe of the story, it really ignites a sense of hope and purity which is rare to find in fan fiction honestly. Omg I hope you can upload chapter 29 before the end of the week, that would really top my weekend hehe. Awww Mark and Mira are so cute - as soon as I saw her name I thought of Gugudan’s Kang Mina whom Mark is actually close with in real life~ not sure if there was any correlation but cute nonetheless. Poor Jaemin for not getting a seat next to Doyeon but he seems to have more game than Jeno anyway - glad to see that she’s starting to like him more. Looking forward to the school trip and more moments between them, and that upcoming scene you hinted at earlier that had to do with rejection :O Thanks for the update :)
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#9
Chapter 7: Omg skimming through past chapters because they feel so long ago compared to how much the story’s progressed!! I love the last line in this chapter intimating how Jaemin would fall for her in the future
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#10
Chapter 33: Thank you for your regular updates, always nice to read them ~ omg she finally read the letter!! Glad she found closure, also I love the dinner scene with the grandparents. Jaemin is so cute honestly, I love how you portray him here and how enamoured he is by Doyeon. Outside of this story I’d pick Jeno over Jaemin but within this story I’m Team Jaemin all the way hehehe I feel like he cares about her so much~ can’t wait for the senior trip <3