017: Sudden Form of Comfort

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Jisung had ended up going to Chenle's, and telling his parents. It took a couple weeks for the school to give in to Mr. and Mrs. Park, but when they did; both Yunho and Yesung got expelled. Jisung had the bruises as proof, along with Doyeon and Jaemin giving their witness statements. The school only tried to get around it without exploration because the both of them were was apparently a very good student, with very rich parents. Jisung's morale had increased by tenfold  over the weeks that had passed. Doyeon wondered if the feeling of relief and happiness she felt looking at him, was what her father had felt when he saw her slowly get better. Even now is he noticing her continued progression? It was a sweet thought, a nice change of pace from her usual attitude that leaned more towards pessimism. In less words; it was nice to see someone else climb out from the hole you once lived in.

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Jaemin hummed along to the tune of 'Someone Like You' by Adele, as his fingers danced across the piano. He faltered when he heard the sound of the front door being opened. He chose to ignore the sounds of keys being thrown onto the kitchen counter, of a jacket being tossed onto the stair railing, and the sound of footsteps approaching the music room. His mom appeared in the doorway, she watched intently as he played. "You missed a note." She told him, disapproval was evident in her voice. Jaemin stiffened, even more than he already had when she first appeared. 

"I was distracted." He said, trying his best not to fumble over his own fingers. 

His mom nodded, even though he couldn't see her movements, he knew exactly what she was doing. So he knew when she stood up straighter, and started walking out of the room. And he could hear her pause, and sense her looking back at him. "Can you run to Mr. Kim's house? His wife picked up a package for me earlier." She didn't wait for Jaemin's reply, instead she continued the walk down the hall to her bedroom.  

"Sure," Jaemin said around a sigh as he stood up, grabbing  his jacket from his room before he headed out.

 

He tucked the package under his arm as he walked back in the direction of his house. The sun had already set, which made it a bit creepy to have both earphones in. So, he removed the one that was in his left ear. He faltered as he walked past the park, he was on the opposite side of the street, but he was positive that he'd just seen Haechan out of the corner of his eye. He whipped his head to the side, and sure enough, Haechan had just walked out of the park. Jaemin quickly looked both ways before jogging across the street, he slowed down a bit, trying to follow behind Haechan without him noticing. His objective was to scare Haechan--who had just turned down the street that led to his house--but when he turned his head to the side as he passed the entrance to the park; that objective was completely forgotten. Doyeon sat with her head in her hands, from what he could see of her facial expression; she looked distraught. He was about to walk forward, but the sound of his phone dinging made him reluctantly grab the device from his back pocket. 

His mom had texted asking what was taking him so long, Jaemin's thumbs fiddled over the device for a minute. He eventually opted for sending a quick explanation of: 'The walk is taking longer than I thought it would.', before stuffing his phone back in his pocket. As he did so, he looked back in Doyeon's direction. 

For a second, he questioned if he should go up to her. Did she want anyone to bug her? Should he just wait until she starts heading home, then pretend to bump into her? He didn't feel right leaving her alone at night. He was pulled out of his thoughts as she jumped up from her seat on the swing. Just as quickly, she fell onto the ground, then laid back on the rubber mulch. Jaemin could tell something wasn't right, so for once, he didn't second guess himself as he walked up to her. 

 

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November rolled around quickly, and with it came a new page in her book of memories. Doyeon thought that it would be quiet for a while, considering Jisung's situation had only just been fully dealt with. But, now that Doyeon was standing by the entrance of the park, a grocery bag of chocolate she'd just purchased in her hand, and questioning how she kept finding herself into these situations. Doyeon toyed with the thought of just walking home, and not potentially over stepping some sort of boundary. She sighed, she wasn't good at turning a blind eye, especially when it came to a certain group of boys. 

Doyeon walked towards the swings, she took a seat on the open swing right beside the one the  boy occupied. "Haechan?" She asked, looking at him. He sat with his head in his hands, slouched over. He straightened up at the sound of his name. When Doyeon got a clear look of his face she realized just how bad he looked, there were dark circles under his eyes, and if she wasn't mistaken his whole face looked a little puffed like he'd been crying, or at least on the verge of doing so. 

"I-" he stopped speaking as soon as he'd started to. 

Doyeon waited a minute, but he still hadn't said anything. It seemed he was trying to find some type of explanation for why he was in the park alone at night, with red eyes. "Is something wrong?" She tried to coax him into speaking--which was weird for Haechan. He was similar to Chenle in that way, they were both very talkative. Though Chenle isn't  quite as abrasive as Haechan is. 

Haechan twisted his lips up, "I, uh...got kicked out" Doyeon's face pulled up in confusion, she wasn't sure if she'd heard him right, since he'd basically whispered. 

"You what?" She asked unsurely, she didn't want to make him repeat himself, but she also was truly confused as to what he'd said. Maybe it would have been better to just make up a reaction, because her words seemed to have moved him to his breaking point. 

"I got kicked out!" He yelled loudly. Doyeon's eyes widened a bit from the volume. Haechan slumped down, his head going back into his hands. "I made the mistake of getting a bit too daring, and I got kicked out." He sounded so defeated, something Doyeon had never heard from him before. Haechan was always happy, outgoing, loud, sarcastic--you get the point--he wasn't ever upset like this. Doyeon took a deep breath befo

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Aketza #1
Chapter 42: OMG, this was amazing! I loved it. It was so lovely. Thank you for not giving up at chapter 5. 😊❤
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#2
Chapter 41: Omg such a sweet update!! It’s so cute to see them go from liking each other to officially dating, the way the chapter started was so cute, and Jeno being happy for them <3 I really liked how you focused on the other characters too, especially Haechan whose my fave and Jisung (why is it so easy to picture him in the kind of dilemma) :P. One more chapter omg can’t wait hope it’s an epic ending <3
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#3
Chapter 40: Omg how can I be late to such a monumental chapter!! Honestly it wasn’t abrupt at all I was wondering when they would finally talk but this chapter was so sweet!! So glad that Doyeon realised her feelings and admitted them to herself as well as to Jaemin - and when they kissed *swoon* love the fluff. Also have I not payed attention all this time I had no idea Doyeon had a mother and sister - how bad of me if I forgot that detail. And 2 more chapters left omg sad but can’t wait <3
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#4
Chapter 39: Glad to know there are still a few more chapters until the end of the story - I’m not ready for it to end yet. They’ve all come so far now talking about university plans and whatnot. Also I love that Jeno is such a good friend still to both Doyeon and Jaemin. As for those two, they need to talk ASAP. “But Doyeon, she was what he needed. He couldn’t imagine not liking her now that he did” I love this line omg <3
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#5
Chapter 38: Omg I’m late but catching but up now your 2 latest chapters~~ I think you should definitely make a bonus chapter with the interviews because I love that Chenle is doing that. It fits into the story’s youthful vibe so well. As for other highlights of this chapter, Soeun is such an interesting character. Also Doyeon omg!! I’m glad Chenle asked her straight out, even if she denied it she was still put on the spot and it will make her realise her feelings quicker. Poor Jaemin who overheard though!!
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#6
Chapter 37: Yep, I definitely don’t see Jaemin getting jealous and walking away like his character. So glad you added the extra thousand words and made it turn out like this. Omg the emotions are so real, I really felt for Doyeon in this chapter. The poor girl doesn’t want to hurt Jeno but I’m glad he confessed and made her realise that she doesn’t see him that way - now she just needs to realise what she feels for Jaemin. And Jaemin needs to confess soon but not yet. Can’t wait for the next chapter, not enough Jaemin and Doyeon moments here so I need more hehe~ And I’m so sad that we’re in the final stages of the story :( I love this story so much what am I gonna do without your updates
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#7
Chapter 36: Omg it finally happened!! I feel so sorry for Jeno but wow I was really impressed by how he confessed he made it so genuine and impactful the poor boy, even though I’m team Jaemin I love how you portray Jeno. Hmmm that Soeun girl was interesting, that little moment between her and Jeno makes me think she could potentially heal his broken heart? And I am very much looking forward to the next chapter as I need more Jaemin and Doyeon moments - I wonder if he knew they went to the treehouse together? Thanks for your update and can’t wait for the next one!!! <3
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#8
Chapter 35: Omg I was thinking about your story earlier in the day how funny - and then you updated!! Just wanted to say again this is one of the best stories I’m curently reading; I love the positive and youthful vibe of the story, it really ignites a sense of hope and purity which is rare to find in fan fiction honestly. Omg I hope you can upload chapter 29 before the end of the week, that would really top my weekend hehe. Awww Mark and Mira are so cute - as soon as I saw her name I thought of Gugudan’s Kang Mina whom Mark is actually close with in real life~ not sure if there was any correlation but cute nonetheless. Poor Jaemin for not getting a seat next to Doyeon but he seems to have more game than Jeno anyway - glad to see that she’s starting to like him more. Looking forward to the school trip and more moments between them, and that upcoming scene you hinted at earlier that had to do with rejection :O Thanks for the update :)
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#9
Chapter 7: Omg skimming through past chapters because they feel so long ago compared to how much the story’s progressed!! I love the last line in this chapter intimating how Jaemin would fall for her in the future
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#10
Chapter 33: Thank you for your regular updates, always nice to read them ~ omg she finally read the letter!! Glad she found closure, also I love the dinner scene with the grandparents. Jaemin is so cute honestly, I love how you portray him here and how enamoured he is by Doyeon. Outside of this story I’d pick Jeno over Jaemin but within this story I’m Team Jaemin all the way hehehe I feel like he cares about her so much~ can’t wait for the senior trip <3