002: Full of New People

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Full of New People...

 

"I was trying to stay quiet so you could stare at the swing longer, but I was getting really bored." 

The smile stayed on his face as Doyeon stared at him. She hadn't noticed how close the sun was to setting, until the rays started shining into her eyes. She turned to leave, not feeling any need to reply to the odd boy. He hadn't really left his sentence off as an opening to a conversation. If anything it was just a simple statement. A part of her felt bad for not noticing the boy in the tree,  she had no idea how long he'd been waiting for her to leave. 

Before she was even three steps away, his voice ruined the peace once more. "Hey!" She heard a thud behind her, her curiosity got the better of her, and she turned back to see the boy picking himself up off of the floor. "Aren't you going to say something?" He asked, his smile turning into a pout. Doyeon noticed his looks first, he was a bit too soft looking. The thought was shallow, but she was comparing him to her favorite actor in her mind. You should know not to compare. She told herself. When his question came back to the forefront of her mind, she decided to answer  it with a question of her own. 

"What am I supposed to say? Sorry?" 

The words felt rude as they rolled off her tongue, but she hoped he would see that wasn't her intention. "You don't have anything to be sorry for," he assured her, he seemed amused that she even mentioned that word, "I was thinking something more along the lines of an introduction." He looked at her closely, "I could be wrong, but I don't think I've seen you before." Her eyebrows furrowed, was this that part where she tried to make a friend? In all honesty that thought wasn't too enticing. She'd had plenty of those before, and now she had none. I think that explains the outcome of them all too well.  He noticed her hesitance, so he took it into his own hands.

"I'm Na Jaemin." He put his hand out to her. A second's hesitation came before her hand slipped into his. "Nam Doyeon, I just moved here." The hand shake lasted two seconds before her hand was back at her side. The setting sun came back into her mind. "I should get home." She told him, he nodded, "It was nice meeting you." He smiled, somehow she felt like she'd always known that smile. 

She didn't say anything else, that would just be prolonging the conversation. She got ten steps away before she noticed the sound of footsteps behind her. She glanced back and saw him, he waved, and her forehead creased. She probably would have been more concerned with the situation if she wasn't in a neighborhood full of houses. He was probably just heading home too. He had said he was getting bored. 

But as she got closer to her house, and he was

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Aketza #1
Chapter 42: OMG, this was amazing! I loved it. It was so lovely. Thank you for not giving up at chapter 5. 😊❤
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#2
Chapter 41: Omg such a sweet update!! It’s so cute to see them go from liking each other to officially dating, the way the chapter started was so cute, and Jeno being happy for them <3 I really liked how you focused on the other characters too, especially Haechan whose my fave and Jisung (why is it so easy to picture him in the kind of dilemma) :P. One more chapter omg can’t wait hope it’s an epic ending <3
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#3
Chapter 40: Omg how can I be late to such a monumental chapter!! Honestly it wasn’t abrupt at all I was wondering when they would finally talk but this chapter was so sweet!! So glad that Doyeon realised her feelings and admitted them to herself as well as to Jaemin - and when they kissed *swoon* love the fluff. Also have I not payed attention all this time I had no idea Doyeon had a mother and sister - how bad of me if I forgot that detail. And 2 more chapters left omg sad but can’t wait <3
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#4
Chapter 39: Glad to know there are still a few more chapters until the end of the story - I’m not ready for it to end yet. They’ve all come so far now talking about university plans and whatnot. Also I love that Jeno is such a good friend still to both Doyeon and Jaemin. As for those two, they need to talk ASAP. “But Doyeon, she was what he needed. He couldn’t imagine not liking her now that he did” I love this line omg <3
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#5
Chapter 38: Omg I’m late but catching but up now your 2 latest chapters~~ I think you should definitely make a bonus chapter with the interviews because I love that Chenle is doing that. It fits into the story’s youthful vibe so well. As for other highlights of this chapter, Soeun is such an interesting character. Also Doyeon omg!! I’m glad Chenle asked her straight out, even if she denied it she was still put on the spot and it will make her realise her feelings quicker. Poor Jaemin who overheard though!!
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#6
Chapter 37: Yep, I definitely don’t see Jaemin getting jealous and walking away like his character. So glad you added the extra thousand words and made it turn out like this. Omg the emotions are so real, I really felt for Doyeon in this chapter. The poor girl doesn’t want to hurt Jeno but I’m glad he confessed and made her realise that she doesn’t see him that way - now she just needs to realise what she feels for Jaemin. And Jaemin needs to confess soon but not yet. Can’t wait for the next chapter, not enough Jaemin and Doyeon moments here so I need more hehe~ And I’m so sad that we’re in the final stages of the story :( I love this story so much what am I gonna do without your updates
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#7
Chapter 36: Omg it finally happened!! I feel so sorry for Jeno but wow I was really impressed by how he confessed he made it so genuine and impactful the poor boy, even though I’m team Jaemin I love how you portray Jeno. Hmmm that Soeun girl was interesting, that little moment between her and Jeno makes me think she could potentially heal his broken heart? And I am very much looking forward to the next chapter as I need more Jaemin and Doyeon moments - I wonder if he knew they went to the treehouse together? Thanks for your update and can’t wait for the next one!!! <3
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#8
Chapter 35: Omg I was thinking about your story earlier in the day how funny - and then you updated!! Just wanted to say again this is one of the best stories I’m curently reading; I love the positive and youthful vibe of the story, it really ignites a sense of hope and purity which is rare to find in fan fiction honestly. Omg I hope you can upload chapter 29 before the end of the week, that would really top my weekend hehe. Awww Mark and Mira are so cute - as soon as I saw her name I thought of Gugudan’s Kang Mina whom Mark is actually close with in real life~ not sure if there was any correlation but cute nonetheless. Poor Jaemin for not getting a seat next to Doyeon but he seems to have more game than Jeno anyway - glad to see that she’s starting to like him more. Looking forward to the school trip and more moments between them, and that upcoming scene you hinted at earlier that had to do with rejection :O Thanks for the update :)
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#9
Chapter 7: Omg skimming through past chapters because they feel so long ago compared to how much the story’s progressed!! I love the last line in this chapter intimating how Jaemin would fall for her in the future
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#10
Chapter 33: Thank you for your regular updates, always nice to read them ~ omg she finally read the letter!! Glad she found closure, also I love the dinner scene with the grandparents. Jaemin is so cute honestly, I love how you portray him here and how enamoured he is by Doyeon. Outside of this story I’d pick Jeno over Jaemin but within this story I’m Team Jaemin all the way hehehe I feel like he cares about her so much~ can’t wait for the senior trip <3