MESS WITH ME?

Original Fluff Ball

" Darling! I bought you some pizza!"
The loud shouting of Jimin's fills the house. Lurin who heard that rolls her eyes as she makes way to where the boys are.

(raising her brows)" Dinner? "

" Yeah! Jin-Hyung didn't let me because it's not healthy for dinner but it tastes good, so you must eat okay?! I fight him for it! "

(ignoring Jimin)" Dining table, now. Wait for me there. "

Jimin blows a raspberry, mumbling " So demanding " under his breath but eventually paddles his small feet there with the exhausted boys. Lurin who come a good five minutes later, puts down some stuff in black boxes, so cliché I swear to God! She then distributes the boxes to the each of the boys causing them to look at her, confused.

" Open it. "

They do as told and their visions dine with a set of accessories. They still can't brush off their confused facial expression off of their faces.

" Not to break your heart but are you giving us accessories as a present? "

(rolls eyes) " Nah, it's some trackers that I modified for you since you're an idol. Don't want it to be too suspicious, so... "

" How on earth is all of this a tracker? "

" How on earth do you manage to live in this world when you're so stupid? "

Taehyung gets hurt by what she said and it flashes right in his eyes. Everyone noticed but one heart breaks, I don't have to point out who, right? Suga who sees Taehyung's sullen face decide to try ease out the tension.

" That's plain mean. "

 (scoffed) " Don't be so fancy with that. As if you're not accustomed by that. You even called him a weird kid when he was falling off the staircase but that muscle pig held him by his waist, yelling ' Imma die ' kinda bull. Well, I'm not saying it's your fault, I'm just blaming you. "


" Sometimes you really make me wonder how people put up with you and.. " (Lurin cuts him off...)

" And I remember how I put up with them so we are all even. End of story.

Sighing, Lurin then takes Jimin's box of accessories, well he's the nearest. She then exposes what in Jimin's box and the boys are mesmerized by the detailed and smooth design.

She places the ring on her palm and traces her index finger along the loop before she looks up, staring intensely on Jimin's puppy-like eyes which she earns a raised eyebrows from the latter.

" What? "

" See this tiny jewel? This is the tracker that I had created where it is embedded within the loop of the ring. No one will ever be able to detect this tiny friend but me as I'm the creator. You got me, hmm? I'm not that free to explain where I put the tracker in all of your accessories but just know that you DO NOT go out without 'em. I repeat, DO NOT go out without wearing any of them. "

" So, I have to wear all of this? "

" Nope. At least one, according to your preference. Seokjin, Namjoon, Hobie, Jimin, Taehyung, Jungkook and especially you! (pointing to him) Min Yoongi. I command, you follow. Always. Understood? "


J-Hope who hears Lurin calling him by his nickname squeal in joy thinking that maybe Lurin gets a bit soft with him compared to the boys.

" Is this what you mean by trying to protect us? "

All attentions are on her now and she nods at that.

" Yes, so please with the utmost respect, do as I say. It's for your own good. From now on, do not go anywhere on your own. At least take someone with you, yeah? "


She says softly so that they won't feel their self-esteem get trampled on by her because well, a girl is saying that she wants to protect them, guy, who has much more strength than her. It's not all about strength, she knows some of the members had learned self-defense when they were young but still, the villains are on a whole lot another level. She can't risk them getting hurt.
After a moment of silence, they nod, agreeing on what she had said.

" Urm, sorry to interrupt but can we eat the pizzas now? I'm sooo~~ hungry after the tiring practices...  "

She chuckles at Taehyung's expression, they boys keep quiet but in their mind, they hope that she will smile even more. The smile on her face suits her best instead of an expressionless look that she always gives away.

" Go ahead, no one's stopping you. "

"I'll eat well" is chanted among them and they start devouring the pizzas in front of them and soon enough a slice of pizza is shoved in front of Lurin's face.

" Why aren't you eating? "

She just shrugs him off and reaches for the pizza from Suga's grip only to end in annoyance as he takes it away from her reach.

" Didn't your mom teach you not to play with food? Seokjin, your child is such a spoiled brat. Geez... "


Before Jin can say anything, he gets surprised by what Suga does...

" Say "ahh~~ "

(facepalmed😑)  " What kind of bull's poop are you trying to pull with me huh? "

Well, Jungkook told her he wasn't a fan of his Angel's cursing so she kinda filters her cussing. Hearing her filtered cussing makes Jungkook smiles proudly and makes a mind-note to reward her later.

" You won't get any slice if you don't finish this one. So now, say "ahh~~ "

 (rolls her eyes and turns her back to Suga) " Hobie, gimme a slice. "

J-Hope grins at her attempt to get away from Suga's unusual acts and reaching out to grab a pizza for her but stop midway when Suga interrupts. Others watch in amusement with the drama upon their eyes, Jimin trying to hide his laughter, failing miserably.

" Where did you learn your manners, Hoseok? You don't listen to your elder now, do you? I clearly said she won't get any piece if she doesn't finish the one I'm holding. "


At this point, Lurin is beyond annoyed and she had enough of Suga's questionable attitude. What he's trying to pull on me? Didn't he say he hates me? What's with the sudden playfulness? She keeps throwing questions into her mind that left unanswered cause she doesn't know the answer, obviously.

" Dear God! Did you wake up on the wrong side of the bed? What's wrong with you?! If you hate me, then act like you do! Don't play around... " (Pizza get shoved in )

" See, it's not that hard to open your mouth. Now all you have to do is chew. " (Smirks)

Unsatisfied, glaring at him thinking how it would be nice if she can slap him across his face. Still, she chews with an angered mood. When she's done chewing, she swallows it down and is about to say something just to be cut off by another mouthful of pizza from non-other than Suga, the damn culprit. With food full in , she can't stop her anger so she pulls on his ear, earning a loud painful yelp.

" Why on earth are you feeding me?! "

" Because I want to! Geez! Let go you strong, small pepper! "

" My hands didn't get amputated! Let me eat on my own! "

" Okay! Okay! Let go first! "

With a huff of annoyance, she let go of his ear which he held with his big veiny hand, hissing in pain. When the pain goes away, slightly (sigh, she's really strong) he smiles at her direction, wanting to finish his very own mission, to feed her.

(still trying to feed her) " I'll allow you to eat on your own, ONLY after you finish this one slice. It shall be feed BY ME. Understood? I command, you follow. " (Smirks, knowing he gets on her nerves for copying her sentences.)

Wanting to get over it quickly, she reluctantly opens , agreeing on being feed by him. He smiles his signature gummy smiles that make her heart skip a beat but she will never admit that.

" Such a good girl. " (Smiling at her 'adorableness')

Suga ruffles her hair and it's making Lurin feels some sort of way. Loved, she feels loved but he hates her right? He shouldn't be doing that to a person he hates, no? She shoves his hand away from her head and opens again, asking to feed the last piece from that dreadful ONE slice. As soon as she's finished being feed, she asks J-Hope for some juice as she's not a fan of coke, differs to the boys. That earns her a loud "Why? " from them.

" It's too strong. It hurts my throat and it's suffocating when I swallow it, somehow. "

 " As a big fan of fast food, I have a question. May I proceed? "

" Since when did you ever ask permission to ask something? Anyhow, ask away. "

" What's your preference for eating fast food? "

" Hmm... I prefer lemon tea when I eat KFC, sprite when I get burgers at McDonald and Minute Maid Pulpy when I have Subway. "

" You like mild one huh? Not too strong, not too plain.. That's cool and interesting. "

" That's all? What about pizza? "

" I don't eat pizza that much. Ever since I exist, I ate pizza..um, like thrice? Yeah, three times only. Once was when my brother had his craving, the second was when Edward got his first salary as a part-timer. The third one is now. "

" Now that you eat it with us? Do you like it? "

" I guess? It's quite good. "

" Yes!! I'm gonna treat you to lots and lots of pizza. You're gonna love me so bad for that! "

" Quiet down Kim Taehyung. You think I'd allow you to keep feeding her with fast food? In your dreams. Try and do that, I'll kick your . "

The said boy pursed out his lip, pouting by the statement of getting his kicked.

(he did,👉👈) " But I just want her to gain weight. She's too skinny! "

Lurin can't help but reaches out to caress his hair. He's too adorable for his own good. Taehyung grasps her hand from his head and keeps it intertwined with his own.

" Knowing you, you didn't eat the day you were out, don't you? "

" Well, urm... I... "

" Don't even try. You know you can't lie. "

" Aish, what a confession. Well, yeah I didn't. I'm too busy fighting, so yeah. The thought of eating was thrown out of my mind. "

She can tell when they stiffened at the word fighting, so she let out a sigh and grab a slice of pizza, munching on it before saying,

" What do you wanna know? Jimin, you're so obvious. "

" Urm, I wanna say sorry. "

" Exactly for? "

" For getting mad earlier. I should've w-wait for you to open up. So, b-being angry about it just, erm kinda make you distant yourself? "

Lurin doesn't want to dig deep with the apology, she just thinks they need to know what's going on. At least they can stay alert and won't let their guards down. She drinks her apple juice before continuing.

(sigh deeply) " Someone was lurking around the house, like four days ago. "

" That's impossible. The security here is so tight, no one can... "

" When it comes to villain, they are in a whole lot another level. Getting background information, planting a tracker, get near their target's house, all of that is so easy and they don't have to work hard for it. Remember when I said to let me out to eat instead? "

They nod, listening attentively.

" I caught a glimpse of a figure from the window near the kitchen. When I'm eventually out, he ran away. That night Jungkook got into my room, I was within the area of the house and when I scanned through, I found nine little, small fella. Trackers. "

They are all shocked, like how? When did they plant the tracker?

" Where did you find it? "

" Your belongings. Your phones, two of it were from the van and I've yet to go through your notebooks. Which also the reason why I'm out fighting. They wanted to get inside and who knows, maybe hurt you or something? I have to prevent it from happening. Whenever you're out, I tried to urm, sorry for an instant, go through your stuff to find any more trackers but I didn't find any. I figured they have the trackers on your notebook because I got an alarm notifying that they were nearby, 30 meters range from you, ready to attack. Thankfully, the moment I got the notification, I wasn't that far away. Before they could get near all you, I... "

" So the fight, was you all along? "

" What do you mean, Hyung? "

" I saw someone fighting on our way to the company. All of them were wearing black attire and there was this one person who wore a mask and he was so cool! Beating the out of the others. "

" I'm flattered. It's a she, it was me who wore the mask. Thank you for the compliment. "

" I take that back. It wasn't cool at all. She's all limp and weak punches were... "

" Oh, stop with that facade! Geez... Anyway, I kinda went to their base camp and I... "

" Don't tell me you fought the gang all alone?! "

" Seokjin, you mad? Cause I did. (he was about to burst but she cuts him off) but! But I did come back as soon as I'm done! You even treated my wound. It's all fine, alright? "

" At least tell us before you do anything. Do you know how worried I was when Jungkook-ie told me you were gone? "

Lurin stands up and makes her way to Seokjin's seat. She feels so bad cause she knows what they've been up to while she was away. What she did surprised everyone but she doesn't seem to be aware of what she's doing. She's way too overwhelmed with guilt to even notice what she's doing. Guess what? She sits on his lap and snakes her arm around his neck, hiding her face while apologizing.

" I'm sorry. I'm so sorry. I'm so very sorry. I know you weren't able to sleep well each night when I'm away. Each of you didn't, I don't know about Suga. He was working on his music, too focused on making the right beat. Just because I'm away and you can't see me, doesn't mean I'm not around. I'm watching over you from a safe distance and you should trust me, okay? I'll be alright. "


I had to try my best to focus on making the right beat cause your image decided to invade my mind and occupy it. Not even considering leaving me alone.


Hearing her explanation and apology send shivers down their spine. She doesn't really apologize, so when she does, it's like a new experience. Jin rubs a comforting circle on her back, she's still hugging him tightly. Jin realizes that she wants affection, attention and feel loved but she's holding herself up. Jin realizes something by her attitude and he feels terrible, horrible even. He knows he needs to have a talk with the boys.

Jin knows his feeling for her, he loves her. So much more than his life and people might think that it's way too early to feel that way considering it wasn't that long ever since they know each other but he can't help it. Ever since their first encounter at MdLavian High, he was attracted to her and the boys feel it as well. He let out a small sigh and pulls away from her a bit to give her a kiss on her forehead.

" It's okay now, Princess. You're all good. Just tell us before anything else and if any, don't get hurt. I'll give you my full cooperation, is that okay Princess? "

She nods enthusiastically and grins happily.

" Thank you, Jinnie! "

She kisses him, on the lips. SHE KISSED HIM. The moment she felt the softness of Jin's lip, it's like she gets dragged out of her trance. She realized what she just did and jumped away from him. She was a blushing mess while the latter who got kissed stay still, a bit flustered. She runs away from the dining table, shouting...

" I'M SORRY! IT WAS AN ACCIDENT!


She slams the door but the boys can still hear the way she screams "Oh my God! What did I just do?! That was embarrassing! " They put a genuine smile on their face, thinking how she can lighten up their day, life but they still can't feel content with it. As usual, no promising future. They are all scared to lose her but they choose to enjoy the present, the future is yet to come.

" That must've felt good, eh mate? You got her kiss. Among us, you're the first one. "

(proudly) " Well, she loves me. Are you hoping to get one too? "

(under his breath) " Old geezer. "


It's already bedtime and there is a figure in front of Jungkook's room. That person is a bit hesitant but eventually open the door after knocking a few time but got no response. There's Jeon Jungkook, on the bed with earplugs in, eyes focused on his phone, playing games. The person slowly steps closer to him and stand in front of him, fiddling with the fingers. Noticing someone's existence with him, he looks up and raises his eyebrows.

" Cookie chips, cuddles? "

" You mean, sleep with me? Right now? In my bed, cuddling? "

" I got a no-no? Okay, Lulu's going. "

Pouting slightly, she walks away to find other members that she can sleep with. She just wants a cuddle buddy that night. Before she can even exit the room, Jungkook holds her on her waist and uses his strength to carry her to his bed, games long forgotten. He sets her on his soft, comfy bed and slips them under his fluffy blanket, not letting go of her from his sturdy arms. He also leaves a loving chaste kiss on her cheek causing her to let out tiny giggles and he swears he melts.

" What's the occasion? Why with the sudden aegyo? Cuddles, huh? "

(shrugs) " Miss your cuddles is all. Can we sleep now? I'm so tired. "

" How can you not be tired if you're out there fighting for three days and didn't eat at all. Stop worrying me, Angel. Don't get hurt, okay? When I first saw you in the kitchen this evening, it's like my heart was shredded to pieces. I get that you're trying to... "


She puts his index finger on his lips, shutting him and raises her head to reach his face. She pecks his nose and smiles sweetly at him, holds his face with both of her tiny hands.

" I'll be extra careful next time. I promise.


She changes into a comfortable position, laying her head on his chest, cuddling close to him. She let out a sigh of contentment when she feels him squeezing her tighter and kissing her forehead, greeting her goodnight before they both drift to dreamland.

*

Xiao Lurin's POV

It's been two weeks and nothing really happens. No attack, no tailing, nothing. In those two weeks, I didn't treat them too harsh but still kept in the lane. Every night I'd go to the members' room to cuddle with them cause they're so warm and comfy, how can I reject that? Nothing can ever beat the feeling of falling asleep and waking up in the arms of your loved ones. They still don't know that all of them are my soulmates, I didn't tell them yet. I'm afraid actually, cause I don't know how they will react. Seven guys sharing one young female adult? Can they accept it? Will they feel disgusted?
I shrug off the thought of that and start getting ready. I am home alone now, the boys left me a few hours ago to be at the company. I'm in my room, getting change and heard the front door opening.
Lurin: Hmm, no bad vibe. Must've been Sejin.
From the living room, he shouts...

" Miss Lurin? Where are you? Are you done? Should I wait some more? "

(going down the stairs)"  Nu-uh, I'm ready and really? "

(raises eyebrows) " What? "

" Hyung, just call me Lurin, no need to call me Miss. It's our first time meeting, right?

(rubs his neck) " I saw you a few time before but that's all. If you ever gonna call me anything, it should be Oppa, not Hyung. " (Smiles with adoration)

" Lulu no call you Hyung? B-but I like it 👉👈 "

He is beyond flustered. I just wanted to pull off some aegyo that I've hidden all this while. Guess it disgusts him, haih...

 (snaps her finger, laughing) " Sejin Hyung, no need to be that flustered. I was just kidding. I prefer Hyung better than that, so be cool with it, yeah? "

" Alright, alright. Shall we go now? Give me your bag. "

" Come on, let's go. I'll carry my bag on my own. "


Sejin brings me to the car workshop first saying that my car that involved in the accident way back is now in a perfectly nice state. He tells me to drive it, following him from behind which I agree without any argument. The worker gives me the car key and I am going to settle the bills buy he said it was already paid.

" By who? "

" A man named Kim Namjoon. He entrusted me with your car and to take good care of it. Change every single part so that it'll be like it's new. "

I huffed in annoyance. Who does he think he is to pay for the damage?! It's not even his ing car!

" Alright, I get it. Thank you and keep up good work. "

I start the ignition and head to the company, following Sejin from behind. I really wanna call Namjoon and tell him off for doing what he did but that can wait for later when I beat the out of him. I thanked Sejin after we both parked our car and go our separate ways. As for me, I'd go talk to Yoona first. As soon as I reach the receptionist desk(?) she beams at the sight of me which I replied with a scoff.

" Lurin! Sweetheart! I can finally see you! Come here, give me a hug! "

Shall I pull some drama?

" No, stay right there. Where're your manners? Do you know who I am? I'm the daughter of Bang Sihyuk and what did you just call me? Lurin? JUST Lurin? You didn't even bow to me. (Smirks evilly) Oh, now I should tell my Appa that you're not doing your job well enough. Might as well, get you fired. Would that be good? "


I can see her gulps in fear at my sudden change of attitude. She then bows to me, saying that she's sorry. She even calls me Young Miss! I laugh my off and she looks at me dumbfounded.

" Urm, Young Miss? What's wrong? "

" Oh my God, Yoona! That was priceless! You should've seen your expression when I got all evil just now. "

(through gritted teeth) " So that was just a joke? "

I nod furiously, still can't recover from laughing that I don't see her reaching out for my ear, pulling it to her direction. I yelped in pain loudly, begging her to let go which she finally does after a few dreadful seconds.
The pain on my ear eased up and I grin at her, making my way behind the counter where she's at, giving her a tight hug.

" Thank you! I can't thank you enough for taking care of me when I was out it before. You're like an older sister. "


She loosens the hug and holds my face with her hands saying,

" An older sister should look after her younger sister. That's exactly what I did, what I do and what I will do for you. You're precious and hold onto that, okay? "


I nod and grin again at her. After a little bit of hugging session, I tell her that I want to see the boys or maybe my Appa but she says that they're all super busy right now so I just spent my time chatting with Yoona. I don't know why but I'm so comfortable with her. We talked for about two hours without any specific topic actually until we are interrupted by the loud noise of footsteps and people talking. I knew it's the boys but don't really want to greet them.
Being the polite boys they are, they greet Yoona before they leave the building, noticing me in the process.

" Sweetheart? What are you doing here?? "

I frown at them, not bothering to answer cause something's bugging me. I can feel something's off, the vibe isn't that great as before.

" Why it's only six? Where's another one? Specifically speaking, where on earth is MIN YOONGI? "

I can see them gulp in fear cause my tone might sound calm but they know it won't last long. They're also aware that I used Yoongi's full name which I never did unless I'm being really, REALLY serious. Yoona chooses to keep quiet, not knowing what to do.

" Oh? Yoongi Hyung went to the toilet just now and he might be... "

" WHAT DID I SAY ABOUT NOT GOING ANYWHERE ALONE?! "

All of them are taken aback by my sudden outburst but I couldn't care less. Yoongi is in danger, I can feel it. I grab my backpack and take out the tracker to track him down only to have more anger surge through my body.

" THAT BASTARD GOT OUT OF THE HOUSE WITHOUT ANY TRACKER! ING !! "

I'm beyond mad right now. I know he doesn't really listen but I didn't think it would be to this extent, I mean his life is on the line!
Keep calm, Lu. You can handle it better that way. You have one more lifeline to track him. Dear God! Please work, please work!
I try the way that I think might work which thanks the Almighty God, it does. I see Sejin coming our way, wanting to send the boys home I guess but that's not happening. I don't think the house is safe right now. I have to think fast.

" Sejin Hyung, give the van key to Jin and don't ask any question, for now, I can't answer it. Just do as I say. "

That's exactly what he does.

" Jin, get in the car with the boys and follow this GPS ( give him a device) This device will help you with anything that you need to do there so hurry up and get out of here right now! "

He's about to say something but I'm having none of it. "NOW!"
I sprint to where Yoongi is at right now and when I arrive, the sight makes my blood boil. The villains that I had warned not to come near the boys are punching him right across his face and stomach, on the floor he plummets. A rush of adrenaline wash through my system and I can feel my eyes getting shades of red, a sign of how mad I am. I fight them with all I can without getting a single scratch and when they're down, faint on the cold toilet floor, I drag Yoongi harshly to get out of the building.
I push him into the car with a cold "Get in" and drive off to where the boys are at right now. Yoongi seems to be aware of what he did wrong so he tries to start a conversation with me.

" Lurin, I... "

" Say one more word, I'll ing choke you with the seat belt. "

Soon we arrive at my hideout before I move to their house. I still visit this place from time to time. It's not that different from an image of a house, except it's abandoned and dark and creepy and yeah~~
He follows me like a lost puppy, on other occasions, I'd say that he's so cute being like that but in this situation, a single mistake will end up in a huge disaster. I push him to sit on the sofa, right beside Seokjin who instantly inspects his cuts. Geez, such a momma hen.

I throw the car key on the glass-type coffee table, letting out a loud echo, filling the whole space of the room making them flinch on their sit.

" Why don't you listen? What I said to all of you wasn't worth being obeyed? Why did you let him go somewhere by himself?!  I THINK OF EVERY CONSEQUENCE WHEN I TOLD YOU WHAT TO DO! IN CASE OF SOMEONE DON'T HAVE THEIR TRACKER ON, THE PERSON WHO'S WITH HIM DOES AND I CAN FREAKING EASILY TRACK YOU WHENEVER THERE ARE DANGERS AROUND! MIN YOONGI, YOU! HOW CAN YOU BE SO RECKLESS?! DO YOU KNOW HOW WORRIED I WAS WHEN I GOT TO KNOW YOU WERE ALONE WHEN THE BAD VIBES KICKING MY SENSES?! MY HEART FEEL LIKE STOPPING! MY BREATH HITCHED THAT I HAVE TO CALM MYSELF DOWN BECAUSE OF YOU! YOU ARE IN DANGER! THAT I HAVE TO BE STRONG TO ING SAVE YOU! KNOWING HOW YOU DON'T TAKE MY WARNING AS SOMETHING UTTERLY IMPORTANT, I EVEN PUT A TRACKER ON YOUR FAVORITE SHOES. IMAGINE IF YOU DON'T WEAR THAT PAIR TODAY, HOW WOULD I FOUND YOU THROUGH THE HUGE BUILDING?! WHAT WOULD'VE HAPPEN TO YOU IF I WAS TAD BIT LATE?! THEY MIGHT HOLD YOU A HOSTAGE! WHAT IF THEY HURT YOU?! THEY CAN EVEN KILL YOU WITHOUT BLINKING AN EYE, DO YOU GET THAT IN YOUR ING MIND, MIN YOONGI!"

I'm a crying mess already. The tears keep on falling, showing how frustrated I am with the current situation. Yoongi needs to know and I have to let it out. I can't keep it any longer.

" I DON'T WANT THE HISTORY TO REPEAT ITSELF. YOU'RE MY FREAKING SOULMATE, YOU HEAD! ALL OF YOU ARE MY SOULMATES! NOW DO YOU UNDERSTAND WHY I'M KEEN ON PROTECTING ALL OF YOU?! CAUSE I LOVE YOU! I'M IN LOVE WITH ALL OF YOU AND NONE OF YOU COULD EVER IMAGINE HOW MISERABLE I FEEL CAUSE I'M AFRAID OF YOUR REACTIONS. I DON'T WANT ANYONE TO GET HURT NOR DIE! I COULDN'T PROTECT HIM BEFORE, NOW THAT I GOT REPLACEMENTS WHICH ARE ALL OF YOU, I WANNA DO IT RIGHT. BUT HOW CAN I DO THAT WHEN YOU CAN'T EVEN FOLLOW A SIMPLE INSTRUCTION?!"

I've had enough already, I'm tired of this all, I wanna rest but before I go, let me just say this,

" Min Yoongi, you said I was being ungrateful right? Now that we had to stoop this low, who's the one being ungrateful actually? "

I make my way upstairs, heading to my room. As I reach the last step, I said,

" Go choose any room that you like, but don't ever step your feet upstairs. No one leaves until I say so. Don't disappoint me again. "

I get into my room, wiping the remaining tears and listen to the movement downstairs. Once I'm sure they're all sleeping, I get out from there heading somewhere.

"내 애들 건들지 말라고, 분명히 얘기 했는데.."

Shall we start the game now?
Let the games begin!

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I'm thinking of taking down both of my story cause I don't know how you feel about it.. What I really mean here is, I'm afraid that mine is not good enough and doesn't satisfy anyone. If you still want me to continue, do let me know. If not, I'll just take it down. For now, that's what I think.

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imemyself07 #1
Chapter 25: Oooh 0_0
imemyself07 #2
Chapter 22: Omg so happy with the update! :)
omgsunnie
#3
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Big_Mama
#4
Chapter 20: It is a good piece of writing. Do continue writing it please.
BilliePark #5
Chapter 20: " Place your hand over your heart. Feel that? That's called a purpose." Loved this. And many are forgetting about it.
hunmi94 #6
Chapter 20: Waaa,hope lurin will go back to earth...im sure that bts worrying her to much...
itchycrotch
#7
cool
imemyself07 #8
Chapter 19: Your story is amazing! I look forward to the rest of it :)
hunmi94 #9
Chapter 16: good chapter authornim...and jungkook looks so damn funny when he is jealous...
hunmi94 #10
Chapter 15: good job authornim,this chapter is great... poor lurin tho,she seems suffering too much..and,kookie looks cute worried sick for her...