Chapter Fifty-Five

Drenched

When the first piece of clothing reached the cold floor, the atmosphere became sweet and tender, smooth like a good ice cream texture. Chorong’s eyes were open wide, like a curious child who didn’t want to miss a millisecond of the movie they were watching. Bomi couldn’t help but smile at the innocent expression that her girlfriend was wearing, mouth half-opened in absorption and her plump lips there for Bomi to admire.

She couldn’t help it. Bomi leaned forward and captured Chorong’s bottom lip with , her teeth tracing the edge of the leader’s red lip, which tasted Chorong-like in every aspect, as sweet as her reddish cheeks and as musky as her deep stare.

They kissed like they never wanted to be apart, sweet at the beginning until Bomi didn’t hesitate to deepen the kiss. Bomi grabbed Chorong’s wrists and lifted the other girl’s arms so they were embracing her neck. Chorong smiled against Bomi’s lips at the action, and the younger girl let her fingertips go down on Chorong’s back and even downer, lifting the edge of her dress. The older girl opened in surprise at the sudden contact with her bare skin and Bomi used the opportunity to enter the girl’s mouth without permission. The dance of tongues had Chorong panting in seconds, like she was fighting for control in a battle she knew she would lose. Even though, she would not pull back.

Once they were both panting heavily, Bomi leaned back far enough to contemplate Chorong’s full features, the older girl’s lips swollen from the hard kiss. Without a word, Chorong understood Bomi’s intentions from her expression and lifted her arms high, her fingertips aiming for the ceiling, for the night sky above. Bomi didn’t hesitate to pull the hem of the girl’s dress and lift it over the girl’s body, leaving Chorong in her underwear, exposed to Bomi’s deep stare. Chorong smiled, her cheeks slightly flushed because of how conscious she was about what they were doing, and she lifted an eyebrow before grinning and pointing her chin towards Bomi’s chest. Bomi laughed, the light-hearted sound filling the room and making the atmosphere even more comfortable. Chorong’s eyes shone in the darkness, her intentions very clear to Bomi, who couldn’t wait to get out of her clothes, the thin layer of cotton that was separating her from Chorong’s warm skin. So she helped the older girl get rid of that shirt she loved and those shorts who suddenly did nothing but bother them both.

Once the two girls had gotten rid of their clothes, lying there in nothing more than their underwear, Chorong became really conscious of Bomi’s touch. Her skin felt the warmth of the other girl’s fingertips, leaving a trace of fire-like heat wherever she touched Chorong. But no matter how much she loved those shivers that Bomi was causing, Chorong knew that she wanted to be in control first, her fingers aching to touch every inch of her girlfriend’s body that she had grown to love and know more than her own. Bomi noticed the girl’s intentions as well, and her expression lightened up with a mischievous grin when she decided to surrender to Chorong’s wish. She let her girlfriend pull her back, laying her down with all the carefulness in the world. Bomi closed her eyes, letting touch be the main source of what she was feeling, and let her body relax under Chorong’s spell.

Chorong looked at her girlfriend like she was a masterpiece exposed in some high-class museum, the kind of wonder people travel miles to see. Chorong’s eyes traced every inch of Bomi’s body, every fold, every curve, every freckle. Bomi could swear she could feel Chorong’s gaze on her skin, caressing her up and down in every inch of her body. Chorong even reached spots that the younger girl didn’t remember having, making her shiver in anticipation of what was about to come. The older girl lifted Bomi’s upper body, slowly but putting in her strength, and her smooth fingertips, light as flower petals, played with the contour of the girl’s bra until she unclasped it. Once the piece of clothing was off, Chorong continued her way around Bomi’s body, tracing her fingertips from the back to the front of her chest, staying still on that soft spot under Bomi’s s. The skin was soft there, and when Chorong let her nails make her way around it, up and down that same spot, Bomi couldn’t contain the moan that had been threatening to go out of her lips for quite some time now.

Chorong smiled at the sound, and it gave her enough courage to lean forward and continue her adventure down Bomi’s body with her lips instead of her fingertips. Bomi shivered when she felt Chorong’s plump lips part while touching her smooth skin. She felt Chorong’s smile against her chest, the tip of the girl’s tongue going down on her stomach. Bomi could feel her girlfriend kissing her waist, smiling against the soft skin under her navel. She could feel shooting stars beneath her eyelids, Chorong laying her hand in the soft spot under Bomi’s knee. Chorong’s smile travelled further down on Bomi’s body, stopping on the juncture between her thigh and her hip to lay a kiss, sticking her tongue slightly out between her lips. Chorong’s fingertips slid down Bomi’s back, ending their trip at the hem of the younger girl’s underwear. When Chorong stuck her fingers beneath the elastic band that covered Bomi’s hips, the younger girl closed her eyes, her lips parting because of the pleasant sensation. The older girl got rid of the silken piece of underwear in the blink of an eye, her gaze wandering down on Bomi’s body, all bare for her. The two girls locked their eyes for a couple of seconds, sending shivers of pleasure through the air, their hearts connected with everything they had.

Chorong’s kisses went lower and lower, the sweet touch of her lips sending electric signals all over Bomi’s body. Her daring tongue, combined with the sweet touch of her fingertips, sent sensations all over Bomi’s body that had been unknown to the girl up to that moment, making her shiver up and down her body. Bomi’s cry of pleasure was loud enough for Chorong to get an earth-shattering shiver, the younger girl’s back arching like a growing smile.

She was panting heavily after that, her eyes showing a shiny glint. Chorong went up her girlfriend’s body once again, her curiosity and desire satisfied for the moment. She nibbled on Bomi’s neck for a moment and raised her head so she could look right into her girlfriend’s eyes, their gazes completely locked.

After a few seconds of staying completely still, Bomi lifted her chest upwards, pressing against Chorong’s skin. The older girl was still covered by her underwear, but she felt every inch of Bomi’s skin against her, their bodies drawn together by a force stronger than gravity.  The younger girl parted her lips, longing for Chorong’s touch there, longing for a lip locking kiss. They kissed passionately until there was no more air for them to share. Out of breath, they dived into each other’s eyes, longing for more.

“It’s your turn to stay still, unnie.”

Chorong opened her eyes wide, and Bomi lifted her hands to her girlfriend’s shoulders in order to turn her over, pushing her down on her back against the messy sheets of the bed they were sharing. The younger girl pecked Chorong on her lips and grinned mischievously.

She was harsher than Chorong had been. And way wilder.

Chorong’s underwear was off in a heartbeat, Bomi’s nails scratching the skin of her girlfriend’s thighs when she pulled the underwear down, smiling at the sight. Chorong couldn’t help but blush when she felt Bomi’s gaze on her warmth, electrical impulses going up and down her spine. The scratching of Bomi’s long nails down her legs sent Chorong into a frenzy spiral, her eyes closing because of the sensation. Her bra was also off in the blink of an eye, Bomi kissing the skin on Chorong’s cleavage until she reached the piece of clothing.

“This is bothering me,” she grunted, and her hands moved to the girl’s back to unclasp it, nails digging into skin.

When Chorong was bare for Bomi, the younger girl had a whole banquet of staring, her eyes tracing every contour of her girlfriend’s body. While Chorong must have felt uncomfortable in that position before, she couldn’t think of anything as pleasurable as having Bomi eat her with her eyes. Except maybe what the younger girl was about to do to her next.

While kissing the warm skin around Chorong’s s, Bomi moved her nails up the pale skin of the girl’s ribcage, making Chorong’s muscles tense because of the ticklish but oddly pleasing feeling. The older girl was getting goosebumps because of the intense pleasure of having Bomi nibbling on her skin, the tender flesh of her chest subjected to the pleasurable small bites.

Bomi explored Chorong’s body like it was one of the Seven Wonders, like she would never have the opportunity of stepping through that not-that-foreign land again. Bomi’s kisses were like drops of rain, as light as feathers, going further down on Chorong’s body. When she reached the smooth skin of Chorong’s waist, her fingers tracing the edge of the girl’s hipbone, she started nibbling on the older girl’s skin, going down her inner thigh. Having Chorong’s body completely right in front of her made her open her eyes wide in anticipation, her mind wandering around the multiple choices of actions she had from then on. But, as she’d been doing since she took control, there was no trace of weakness in her actions, no trace of her illness or her possibly imminent death, no trace of fear or anger or sadness. There was only lust. And love.

Bomi looked right into Chorong’s dark orbs, the two chocolate spheres looking at her in wonder. Chorong was smiling, not a grin nor a smirk but a sweet smile of pure happiness. There was nowhere else in the world where she would choose to be at the moment which wasn’t right there, under Bomi’s warm body.

When Bomi lowered her face on Chorong’s body, going down from the girl’s navel to that certain spot near her inner thigh, the older girl closed her eyes shut, her lips parting. Oh, how much did Bomi want to kiss those lips, to enter that sweet mouth… But she longed for a certain part of Chorong’s body even more at the moment. Bomi kissed certain spots that Chorong wouldn’t even name out loud, but it wasn’t time to feel shy. When the younger girl parted Chorong’s legs so she would fit in between, the older girl shivered, ready for the next contact. Bomi smiled and blew on the spot, the cold air sending frenzies of pleasure up and down Chorong’s spine. Bomi’s fingers traced her inches of skin carefully, just the way she played her guitar, letting the fingertips be in control of the touch on their own. The leader was awestruck, her mind unaware that she would be able to feel all of that. Her fingers tangled on Bomi’s hair, her hands acting strong enough to push Bomi down on her, fixing her head on the exact spot she needed it, refusing to let go of the sensation.

On that final moment, Bomi’s fingertips scratching Chorong’s inner thighs while her daring tongue explored every corner, the older girl’s back arched in a perfect crescent moon, her fingers unconsciously grabbing the tender flesh of Bomi’s back to pull her even closer while her moans reached every corner of the room.

Bomi raised her head to look into Chorong’s eyes, her arms lifting her own body until she was up again, her lips right in front of her girlfriend’s. Bomi leaned down in search of the parted plump lips, Chorong’s eyes still closed shut observing the fireworks that were still taking place beneath her eyelids. They kissed like they were each other’s air, the only thing they needed for survival. They kissed like they could never get enough of each other, enough of the other’s touch. Their kiss was tender, nothing of the wild frenzy that had taken control of their bodies barely minutes ago. Bomi traced Chorong’s features with her lips, changing between giving sweet kisses and using the wet tip of her tongue to explore every spot. She slid her hands down Chorong’s body, pulling her into an embrace without lifting her from that lying position. With the girl in her arms, she felt complete.

And when they drifted off to sleep, they did so together, their bodies tangled in every way possible so nothing would ever be able to tear them apart.

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ckaz99
#1
Chapter 70: This has taken me a long time to read, maybe around the same amount of time to read as you did writing it at the time, which, first of all, is impressive you wrote all this in that time.. a story that was well-planned and completed, and with impactful themes of love, grief, loss. It's heavy, so heavy with emotion, and the characters are authentic to their personalities and why they do what they do and how they think in this situation.. It's a story as deep as this that makes me amazed and grateful for the kind of writing contributed to here with my favourite girls, something this serious and profound. It's also taken me this long to read because it would surely have me in tears and my heart can only take so much.

You knew what you were writing and didn't shy away from the reality, the slow pain of this journey, but you were also able to paint a wonderful love story throughout it. From the past and how Chorong and Bomi took a chance together, to their struggles in this, their underlying pains and sadness, but even so, there's never a moment to doubt their love for each other and how strong it stays ;_; thank you for writing this piece
AegyoPRASH
#2
Chapter 70: I’ve just re-read this fic all over again, and for the first time, I cried the last three chapters, even though I knew how it’s going to end. This story brought me so much memories and feelings, as someone who lost a dear person for cancer, knowing the ending broke me. I get why Bomi wrote the letters though, it’s a deep and meaningful sign of goodbye. We never fully heal, but it gets manageable somehow. Thank you for this fanfic!
Panda0619
#3
Chapter 70: This is really one of the best that I've read so far.. very well-developed plot with extremely vivid descriptions of the emotions.. most of all, it was beautiful reading of friendship, love and hardship that one can only fathom of, something that perhaps many of us, deep down, hope to have the luck of experiencing in our lifetime..

Thanks for sharing this with us!
seikiri #4
Damn i know its a fanfic but it feels so real i remembered the time my father died and i tried to CPR him while my mom is hysterically bawling near me so i can relate to their reactions :(. If this will become a live drama seriously this will be a hit. One thing i want to know is what are the contents of the letters for the other members? it would be nice to have them read their letters as well but anyways good job on this fanfic author-nim.
AegyoPRASH
#5
This is one of my firsts. And damn, I missed this.
Slice-Lish
#6
im back to read this very depressing fanfic again. Im having an emotional time, and these fanfics is one of the best that i have ever read. So salute to you, author-nim. I'm gonna binge read this through the night
Myeonsshi
#7
Chapter 70: That was a rollercoaster ride of emotions I had felt. Not only did I learn from the story, but it also made 'feel' things that I didn't know I can. Wow. This story, I can tell, made a lasting impression in my heart. I will cherish what I learned here well. Thank you for this story. :)
Myeonsshi
#8
Chapter 69: :(
Myeonsshi
#9
Chapter 9: Isn't it supposed to be a pharmacist instead of a chemist?