Story: The Part Where I Scream (M/)

Requestor's Username: 54starr

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Date Received - Date Completed: 31 July 2014 - 31 July 2014

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(10/10) Title: Having finished reading this one-shot, I felt the title applies mostly to Kyung il and not Jae ho. Then on second thought, I felt the title applies to its readers! This story will make its reader want to squeal and 'scream' so it's a PERFECT title!

(9/10) Character: There wasn't much details on the characters, but it works for this type of story. Since you placed your details somewhere else, I could tell Jea ho is mischievous as Kyung il is a very impatient person.

(10/10) Originality: The reality and feels of the story is real. This story will make their reader blush to the point of almost having a nosebleed. Very original, never read one like it.

(40/40) Storyline/Plot: The storyline/plot is short, simple, and clean. You don't use any unnecessary words that leads the reader astray, so it flows well. The pace that the story progresses at is perfect. It does leave me wondering how/when did they started having feelings for the each other.

(21/25) Grammar/Errors: Your choices of words is spot on. You don't over use specific words, which makes the story being read smoothly. I love how it's, once again, short, simple, and clean. I do see 2 minor errors, which isn't a big deal. I do have to suggest, maybe not cluttering all the quotes. Some readers might not know who is saying what.

(5/5) Overall Enjoyment: I've heard of History, but not familiar with them. I did a little research on them and saw both the bodies of Kyung il and Jae ho. It helped with my visual/imagination of the story. I also checked their Psycho MV and the beginning of the story totally drew me in. It made me laughed. It's a great, fun, and a steaming story that I recommend to all fans. I enjoyed it a lot!

(95/100) Points Total

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