NOTE: 11 Chapters

(10/10) Title: I love it, I love it, I love it. (Not sure if the other two "I love it" makes any difference to you, but to me it does xD). I thought the title was so perfect for the story, you kept Baekhyun and Chanyeol together when I thought it was really going to be a BaekYi! Kudos here. 

(9/10) Character: Baekhyun developed well after meeting Chanyeol and Yixing. He went from a careless hard cusser, to a less cusser and more friendly person. Of course it wasn't just because of the other characters, but what he had to go through to change. I really love his character in here. Chanyeol's feelings developed and turned into love near the end so I thought that was adorable. Jongin and Sehun, well, they were perfect too (lol). Suho was mentioned in the foreword, I thought he was going to appear too! I wanted to see how he does his job. 

(9/10) Originality: This society is quite interesting and different. I wished there were more explanation as to where everything is taking place at or in. For some reason I imagined a large theater and then a prison/jail building with cells. I'm not sure if that's the kind of location the story was set up in but I enjoyed it. 

(40/40) Storyline/Plot: Although the story was short (in my opinion) the flow and everything was so smooth and easy to follow. I honestly thought this was the best story I've ever read on here. It's so different and I love stories like these, I love how each rule setted up each chapter. The storyline was sad and tragedy in general but hey, that's the catchy part of it. I can't find words to describe this story other than "outstanding", it was an outstanding story that deserved more views and attention. 

(24/25) Grammar/Errors: I saw a few run ons but other than that I didn't see any errors; minor nor major. Great job here~

(5/5) Overall Enjoyment: Well I already said it before but I guess I'll say it again, I LOVE IT! It's like THANKS SO MUCH FOR REQUESTING ME! I really enjoyed it, nothing distracted me and I was really into this story. It was beautiful and out of the norm. I upvoted and subscribed because I want you to know, it deserves both. (Strange reason huh?) Anyway, thanks for writing this story!

(97/100) Points Total

Bonus: Your questions and focuses for us:

Plot/character development (especially in second half): Under storyline/plot + character

Writing style consistency: I had no issues with your writing style consistency.

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