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KillerGal
request on: 9/19/15
REVIEWER: eunriehyun
finished on: 9/19/15
score: 96/100
Title: (10/10)
LOGICAL (3/3)-the title ties in legitimately with the story and its plot.
EYE-CATCHING (3/3)-The TITLE is really interesting,it hook my attention right away.
original (4/4) - is it new and refreshing. From the title I knew right away that I could expect death,gore, and brutality,which did occur in different ways.
story's foreword/description (10/10)
story's summary (5/5) - it lure me in from the first sentence. I was like,"damn,this is gonna be good!"
appearance (5/5) - its well organize and NICELY done.
characters/casts (10/10)
character development (5/5) - Lu Han's character reminded me of Rikako oryo from Psycho pass,is a very awesome anime. (I seriously recommend!) And I felt the similarities, except for the originality you build him up.
character's relations (5/5) - it was short the inner action between the oc and Lu han, but what little did you write I perceived that he stalked her, and waited for the end which we know what happend.
the author's mindset (36/40)
LOGICALLY (10/10) - IT made sense and it was done at a well pace.
ORIGINALITY (08/10) -I found THE STORYLINE NEW and original when it comes to the fan-fictional world,but as in general it was a bit cliché. (A wonderful one,to say the least.)
TONE (5/5) - loved it~ very well put.
NARRATION (3/5) - I would have loved a bit more detail on the whOle master piece he created. (A bit to much?) But it was at a excellent good pace and it was understandable.
STORYLINE (10/10) - ALL IN ALL,THE STORY'S PLOT AND STORYLINE was smooth.
proper use of the english language (25/25)
proper grammar/punctuation (10/10) - I didn't see any errors,actually it was good writing.
termonology (5/5) -The vocabulary was expanded.
language barrier (10/10) -Although English isn't your first language, you did great!
Reviewer's enjoyment (5/5)
I enjoyed it!Like I said it reminded me of psycho pass and of Rikako oryo and her 'lovely' art work and it just appeared perfect. The ending! My, I wonder why he thought of putting a silver moon together with his black rose,wouldn't have been better if it was a gem:a ruby or a beautiful pearl to shOw the resemblance of the girls purty. NOw that wouldve beeN a perfect score.
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