Chapter Five

I'm in love with a criminal

Chapter Five

“We won’t go with you,” Minwoo spat out to Eric and turned his back at him. “Come Dongwan,” he mumbled to the husband, grabbed his hand and took him upstairs.

Minwoo commenced getting his clothes on, while Dongwan was sitting on the bed. He was contemplating, getting thrown at by clothes, when the older guy stopped rummaging the room and was finally in his broken clothes.

“What?” he asked.

“Nothing…” Dongwan looked down at his feet.

“If you’re wondering about me and Eric, forget it, ok? He became an enemy as soon as that bullet hit me.” Minwoo explained and crossed his arms onto his chest. “And before that it was just plain disaster.” He muttered and grabbed some bullets from the nightstand.

The slightly taller man twiddled his fingers and pondered on what to say next, when Minwoo crouched down in front of him and looked up at the upset face. He knew why the other man had such a long face, but they had no time to stay there and talk. Eric had barged into the restaurant and possibly attracted every police officer in town.

“You could have told it was him…” Dongwan murmured. “Eric…”

“And what? You wouldn’t have married me?” The older man cupped the jaw. “Wannie…he is your frenemy, and he is my ex, but my heart doesn’t beat for him anymore.” He grabbed the other hand forcibly, wrinkling the skin, and brought it onto his chest. “I love you…”

“Really…? He didn’t unleash old feelings or anything…?” Dongwan whispered, feeling speedy heartbeats against his palm.

The shorter man threw his head back to chuckle handsomely, and when he stood up, he pulled the other guy onto his feet and kissed him.

“What feelings?” Minwoo crooned.

               

***

 

“Tell me,” Dongwan glared at the slender man.

“Where is the stuff…?” The tall friend sniffed, and reached his hand to Dongwan’s pocket.

“Na-ah, Hyesung…” The criminal moved his finger around and caused the police officer to narrow his eyes and squeeze the lips together. “You will tell me when it is a good time to strike, or you won’t get this grass, ok?” the police officer growled, but nodded.

Hyesung took a step back when the older man shoved his hand back and forth, and they both looked around in case someone took them off guard from the alley. Dongwan had hidden his face underneath a mask again, and his sunglasses were big enough to cover the other half (he had stolen them from some rich dude – celebrity or something) and the dark hair peeked only a little under the hoodie. Something protruded in the pocket, and Hyesung looked at it deliciously, knowing it was his reward.

“The jewelry store opens at 7AM, and at 11PM the owner will go and have a lunch.” Hyesung whispered. “Approximately at 12PM, he’s done and he will return. Which means you have an hour to steal whatever you are looking for.” He sniffed again, pupils dilated and cheeks flushed.

Dongwan nodded.

“What about security cameras?” He interrogated.

“They haven’t worked for weeks after the fire at the restaurant next to the store, therefore I have been working as his guard.” Hyesung could smell the grass. “You come in when he is eating, knock me out, and steal whatever you need.” He told.

The older man smirked evilly, and retreated from the police officer, whose hand kept rubbing the spot on top of the crook of the elbow. The slender man was about to attack the pocket again, when Dongwan pulled it out and threw it at the guy like it was a filthy bag and watched the police officer kneel down to the ground to save the precious bag of goodness.

“Once again, Hyesungie, good job.” Dongwan tapped the shoulder and walked away.

“Detective Jung, do you hear me?” The criminal hurried out of the alley, and when he was gone, Hyesung grabbed the walkie-talkie from the belt and spoke to it. “Where were you detective Jung?”

“Something came up and I had to switch it off. What is up?” Hyesung mumbled, inhaling the reek coming from the bag.

“Something came up, Detective Jung Pil Kyo is needed.” The lady voice said and the police officer answered. He hid the bag inside his suit and walked out of the alley like he had been peeing or something.

                Dongwan glanced at his watch right on time, as the jewelry store owner exited the shop and left the snitch police officer in charge. The criminal watched the guy walk away from the boutique and cross some road, as he looked around and advanced the store.

Normally, like he was a customer, he opened the door and smiled at the guy standing at the corner, greeting him and taking a note that the cameras had been hidden with some random cloth. Marvelous, Dongwan thought and strolled around the small store, trying to find what he was looking for.

The police officer kept examining him; this time Dongwan hadn’t covered his face, but showed it in full glory to Hyesung. The criminal poked the glass as if studying the gold relics when he jumped to the other side of the line, pushed Hyesung and made sure he hit the back of his head to the wall. It was only to pass him out. Dongwan checked he indeed was breathing.

“You have served me well, Hyesung.” He tapped the crown of the head, grabbed an object that was hanging from the wall and broke the glass. “No alarms. Huh,” Dongwan sniggered and hauled everything he could in one bag.

All this he had managed to do in 15 minutes.

Dongwan jumped onto the other side again, and was about to leave the shop, when he noticed two very fancy rings in a very big vitrine. He had not planned to take anything extra, besides some money of course, but those two stones blinded him.

“Sorry Hyesung,” he apologised to the police officer, broke the glass with his elbow and took the two rings. “But I gotta eat okay?”

Satisfied by his haul, Dongwan disguised himself properly, hid his gun under the loose shirt and exited the shop like he had been shopping. He walked off back to the place he had been scrutinizing the shop and waited for the owner to come back and see that his shop had been robbed.

“I love this job,” Dongwan chuckled.

               

                    ***

 

“Where will you go?” Eric asked.

“As far away from you as possible,” Minwoo flashed a fake smile.

“You don’t have to act like a ,” The leader of the mafia spoke dryly and gestured his arm at his men who one by one exited the bar. “It never looked good on you.” He added.

The shorter guy put his hands onto his hips, unamused by the leader’s remark, waiting for Dongwan to finally come back downstairs. There was tension between Eric and Minwoo – like you couldn’t see it – and Andy was afraid to leave them alone. Just because his bar smelled and looked disgusting, it didn’t mean they could wreck it every damn time Dongwan was there.

“You never knew what looked good on me.” Minwoo commented.

“And he does?” Eric meant Dongwan.

“Yes,” The shorter one answered. “Dongwan knows what is good for me.”

The leader snorted annoyed and yanked Minwoo closer to him by the hand. The younger man gasped and tried to pry himself free when Eric leaned in and murmured, “Does your precious Dongwan know about our ravenous night at the abandoned cottage? Or do you want me to enlighten him?”

“What’s going on?” Minwoo stomped Eric’s foot and managed to get himself free, as he walked to Dongwan and kissed him. “I trust you Eric, even though you left me back then, but if you dare touch Minwoo with your filthy hands, I know how to use every single weapon in this world.” The youngest guy muttered. “And I won’t be afraid to do that…”

Minwoo glowered at the tall man.

“Whatever,” Eric snarled. “He will beg for the days he and I were together,” with his last words, he exited the bar and stepped into the fancy black car.

Junjin appeared back from the backroom, and meanwhile the others had been talking and arguing, he had changed his clothes to his stripper outfit. Dongwan and Minwoo were looking at him, as he stood right in front of them, arms crossed above his chest.

“Where are you going now?” the younger man questioned.

“We don’t know.”

“Well, remember,” Andy joined the tall man. “Whatever happens to you; if you two ever mention my bar, I will make sure that’s the end of you.”

Junjin nodded.

“We won’t…” the two criminals exhaled.

“Awesome...” Andy was serious when he added, “Good luck. Now get the out of my bar.”

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zhendy-mf #1
Chapter 20: nice story and perfect end


great job author-nim
ayuwannie #2
Chapter 1: After so long not read fanfic, finnaly i had the time to read again~ and i think i will addicted with this story too ^^ kyaaa saraaaa

Ahhhh...why do you use Dane ? Thats makes me haha.. Dane just too Hawwwttt ~~ and also minbongie too, uhhh my cute woodong

Oke i will continue reading kekekeke
nananene #3
Chapter 20: like.. what happened?!! the fight was messy but the end ended well so thats all we all need TT
IzzyBreezy #4
Chapter 20: What the hell is going on?!! But i love it... Like were eric and syung in love the whole time and just hiding their feelings...but wow this story was just a really badass movie in my head i loved it so much. Kinda happy no one died in the end hope more stories like this happen i loved it!!
-chapter 20
Deng_Yat
#5
Chapter 20: aahhh...it's ended...dongwan is finally with minwoo...the two of them were broken but since they have each other,everything is going to be fine^^
I'm glad andy regained his consciousness. that makes junjin's story less sad. andy lost his ability to walk but I think junjin can lift him all the way around and and that's happier for andy^^
oh?eric didn't want to lose hyesung?he said he wanted minwoo but he actually already had feeling for hyesung
hyesung will take care of him
the ending is great as well as the story^^
thank you for writing this story^^
IzzyBreezy #6
Chapter 19: Ohmygodohnygodohmugpdohmygod!!!!! This is getting so intense and i need so much more of it!!! Love the chapter a d how junjin is able to walk and was able to break wan out!! PLUS ANDY IS BREATHIN!?!! And i hope minwoo stays strong and alive for dongwan and junjin to save him!! AAHAHA IM SO EXCITED CANT WAIT!!!
- chapter 19
Deng_Yat
#7
Chapter 19: dong wan is heroic but i need to credit choong jae for his escape...n his suffering too...not to mention that andy has not regained his conciousness yet...he is truly a strong guy...but when i remember he was an ex-stripper....hhmm...u know what come into my mind...lol^^
i hope minwoo is safe...he had been in this situations more than once...n he kept being away from dong wan...thanks to the villain eric...
and hyesung......i have nothing to say to him...drugs isnt good from the start..it ruined lives...
dongwan, i wish u manage to save ur husband and live happily ever after.....u can come to my house...LOL^^
IzzyBreezy #8
Chapter 18: YEEEEEAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!! DONGWAN IS BACK BABY AND HES GOING TO SAVE HIS CRIMINAL!! Im so happy this didnt take a turn for the worst..yet...and jindy please Andy has to be alive and his brain HAS to work please!! My god i was getting a little teary eyed at minus part and jinnies part...i so cant wait till this continues i feel like im watchin a really badass shinhwa movie!! FIGHTING AUTHORNIM!!
-chaptet 18
Deng_Yat
#9
Chapter 18: this is so sad...and I can totally imagine how did it go with minwoo n wannie..lifeless,soulless woodong....despites being roughly treated,they r still thinking of their partners...and jindy..I'm happy for them as andy is alive vut he is probably shocked of what jinnie said..lol^^ heart goes dugeun dugeun applies here lol
yes!minwoo knew wannie is alive and he escaped~~aigoo,my criminal wannie is slippery..haha^^ but I know I can't get happy too much since I haven't know how this goes^^
eric n hyesung sounded sad actually...they loved them too much to get in that measure but at the end they still unsatisfied with it....they keep forcing it...