Chapter Twelve

I'm in love with a criminal

Chapter Twelve:

Andy kept screaming.

It sounded tragic.

And the gunshots stopped after couple of seconds – nothing seemed to be in order downstairs. Dongwan grabbed his gun and protected Minwoo in case something was definitely wrong downstairs. Minwoo was breathing heavily.

“Wan ah…” he clung onto the younger man.

“Shh…” Dongwan ordered, gun in front of his face.

They stopped behind the wall, breathing slowly. Dongwan’s finger was on the trigger, Minwoo hugging his other arm, shirt undone, as Dongwan peeked over the side and gasped. He dropped the gun by his feet, and his husband panicked.

“Wan…Wannie…?”

Dongwan grabbed the hand, squished the fingers, and yanked him behind him. Something had happened – there were signs of a fight, and Minwoo could see the tables upside down, chairs being thrown away and…he startled and halted his steps, Dongwan standing in front of him, pale white.

“Junjin…Junjin ah…Jin ah…” Andy cried, slapping the face. “This is not funny. Open your eyes…please…” he was on his knees next to the tall man, who was eyes closed, blood oozing under the body.

Minwoo and Dongwan were frozen.

“Junjin ah…”

“What happened…?” Minwoo questioned.

Andy neglected the two guys, trying to wake his stripper up, repeating that this was not a funny joke at all. Eventually Dongwan wrapped his hand and pulled him up, slapping the chubby cheek brutally, a red handmark tattooed to the skin.

“Talk or he will never survive!” Dongwan yelled in anger.

“Wa…Wan ah…” Minwoo tried.

“TALK AND WE CAN STILL SAFE HIM!”

Andy swallowed his tears, wiped them to his sleeve and then faced the two older hyungs. “Some guys came here – some, I had never seen before – and demanded money. They said they were impatient and needed it now, and I tried to convince them that they were at the wrong bar. I owe money to no one!” he explained. “Junjin appeared, and he told them to leave. That was after they had attacked me, and he rescued me. I thought he could actually do it…” he sniffled. “…then I heard a gunshot…and Junjin fell down…”

Dongwan gritted his teeth, and Minwoo kept gasping.

“I heard another gunshot…” The other criminal muttered. “What happened?”

Andy had kneeled down beside Junjin again, and was trying to press the oozing wound. “The guy…he was about to shoot him again, but I managed to shove him away…” he said.

“Did they say anything?” Minwoo murmured, leering at Junjin, while someone was calling the ambulance. “Did they say anything at all?”

Andy nodded.

“What?”

“This was a message from Mun Jung Hyuk…”

                ***

Eric bit the side of his bottom lip and glared at the figure in the darkness. The figure was shuddering, possibly because he was nervous and glowered at. The gang leader’s eyes were dark with fury as he stood up and placed his arms above his chest.

“You have failed me…” he mumbled.

“I…I didn’t mean to…I…I have tried…”

“Stop with this nonsense!!” Eric shrieked. “You let your precious little feelings affect your work and that led you betraying me!” he added.

The person in the shadows gulped loudly.

“You were supposed to make sure they would never see each other again!” The leader exclaimed, advancing the person. “Yet…you made me look foolish in front of Minwoo.”

“I promise you Eric…” The guy stated. “You will get him. I will make sure…”

“You better…or I won’t grant your wish either…You may go…”

The person bowed quickly, turned around and approached the door.

“Oh, and Pilkyo-sshi…”

The guy halted.

“If you betray me, you will have to say goodbye to Dongwan.” Eric said coldly.

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zhendy-mf #1
Chapter 20: nice story and perfect end


great job author-nim
ayuwannie #2
Chapter 1: After so long not read fanfic, finnaly i had the time to read again~ and i think i will addicted with this story too ^^ kyaaa saraaaa

Ahhhh...why do you use Dane ? Thats makes me haha.. Dane just too Hawwwttt ~~ and also minbongie too, uhhh my cute woodong

Oke i will continue reading kekekeke
nananene #3
Chapter 20: like.. what happened?!! the fight was messy but the end ended well so thats all we all need TT
IzzyBreezy #4
Chapter 20: What the hell is going on?!! But i love it... Like were eric and syung in love the whole time and just hiding their feelings...but wow this story was just a really badass movie in my head i loved it so much. Kinda happy no one died in the end hope more stories like this happen i loved it!!
-chapter 20
Deng_Yat
#5
Chapter 20: aahhh...it's ended...dongwan is finally with minwoo...the two of them were broken but since they have each other,everything is going to be fine^^
I'm glad andy regained his consciousness. that makes junjin's story less sad. andy lost his ability to walk but I think junjin can lift him all the way around and and that's happier for andy^^
oh?eric didn't want to lose hyesung?he said he wanted minwoo but he actually already had feeling for hyesung
hyesung will take care of him
the ending is great as well as the story^^
thank you for writing this story^^
IzzyBreezy #6
Chapter 19: Ohmygodohnygodohmugpdohmygod!!!!! This is getting so intense and i need so much more of it!!! Love the chapter a d how junjin is able to walk and was able to break wan out!! PLUS ANDY IS BREATHIN!?!! And i hope minwoo stays strong and alive for dongwan and junjin to save him!! AAHAHA IM SO EXCITED CANT WAIT!!!
- chapter 19
Deng_Yat
#7
Chapter 19: dong wan is heroic but i need to credit choong jae for his escape...n his suffering too...not to mention that andy has not regained his conciousness yet...he is truly a strong guy...but when i remember he was an ex-stripper....hhmm...u know what come into my mind...lol^^
i hope minwoo is safe...he had been in this situations more than once...n he kept being away from dong wan...thanks to the villain eric...
and hyesung......i have nothing to say to him...drugs isnt good from the start..it ruined lives...
dongwan, i wish u manage to save ur husband and live happily ever after.....u can come to my house...LOL^^
IzzyBreezy #8
Chapter 18: YEEEEEAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!! DONGWAN IS BACK BABY AND HES GOING TO SAVE HIS CRIMINAL!! Im so happy this didnt take a turn for the worst..yet...and jindy please Andy has to be alive and his brain HAS to work please!! My god i was getting a little teary eyed at minus part and jinnies part...i so cant wait till this continues i feel like im watchin a really badass shinhwa movie!! FIGHTING AUTHORNIM!!
-chaptet 18
Deng_Yat
#9
Chapter 18: this is so sad...and I can totally imagine how did it go with minwoo n wannie..lifeless,soulless woodong....despites being roughly treated,they r still thinking of their partners...and jindy..I'm happy for them as andy is alive vut he is probably shocked of what jinnie said..lol^^ heart goes dugeun dugeun applies here lol
yes!minwoo knew wannie is alive and he escaped~~aigoo,my criminal wannie is slippery..haha^^ but I know I can't get happy too much since I haven't know how this goes^^
eric n hyesung sounded sad actually...they loved them too much to get in that measure but at the end they still unsatisfied with it....they keep forcing it...