Chapter Three

I'm in love with a criminal

Chapter Three

Two years ago:

It was raining for the 10th time that week and no one was as tired of it as Minwoo. He had been locked inside the house since the first drops had hit the ground. There was no reason particular why he had been locked inside the house to be honest. It was just that he was a difficult man. His mother said that Minwoo had come to his father just like his sister had come to the mother.

“Don’t ever fall in love with a criminal, I tell you.” She spoke. “You never know when they come home; and if they do promise you; you don’t know whether they mean dead or alive.” She added.

Young Mi nodded and put the tray down beside the mother, who thanked her and took the coffee cup. She lifted her pinky up and cocked her head back when the warming tea entered . Minwoo was staring out the window as he was in charge of protecting them when his father was gone, and the sister was in charge of food and beverages.

“Dad will come back, mom.” Young Mi swore.

The old lady scoffed loudly, and took another sip of the coffee. “That’s what you said two weeks ago.” She said.

Minwoo leaned to the wall, arms in front of his chest, and gawked outside. There was nothing unusual in front of their yard. It was even dangerous to go out now, even though danger was Minwoo’s middle name. But it was his mother’s very strict orders.

“Minwoo ya,” the lady spoke. “Get away from the window. Someone might see you.”

The man chuckled and quickly turned around, advancing the seating area and sitting down to the very old armchair. The women looked at him and he knew it was because he had sit down to the place his father always sat to. But Minwoo didn’t care. He just leaned back and brought his other leg up and put it onto the other one, smiling at the sister and the mother.

“Min—“

The youngest member’s phone rang and he fished it out from the pocket of his leather jacket. He excused himself and walked out of the room to get it. From the living room, he approached the study room and entered it, as he silently lifted the phone onto his ear.

Sweetcheeks,” The husky voice greeted.

Minwoo knew he was smoking at the same time.

“Hi, honey,” he sighed lovingly to the device. “I thought you’d never call…”

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Dongwan pointed at the long hallway in the small tube like thing between the two rooms, and walked in front of Minwoo towards the end. They held their hands lazily, but when they could hear voices, the grips tightened and the men panted louder.

“What do you want?” Junjin spoke. “You are stressing my husband out.”

Minwoo shuddered, being held by Dongwan, as they saw a small hole in the wall and looked down at the bar. They saw the two guys, Junjin embracing Andy and Andy having his hand behind his back to reach a gun if they needed to, and they could see a shadow of a man. It must’ve been the officer. Dongwan brought his hand above Minwoo’s and muffled the panicky pants.

“We heard you didn’t let our officer to snoop around your bar last night,” A deadly serious man voice said. “So, we sent a whole police station…” he added.

Dongwan bit his bottom lip, his heart racing so damn fast that he could not remember a day when it had beaten that fast. And Minwoo was sweating, eyes wide staring at the door from the hole. Junjin moved out of the way and gestured with his arm.

Fine, come on in.” He welcomed. “Please, do what you need fast, we kind need to open.

Andy too stepped out of the way, glancing at his fake husband briefly and then walked back upstairs like nothing was going on. When the men in uniforms had entered the bar and Minwoo and Dongwan were being silent, the two of them furrowed their eyebrows confused. A tall man, black hair, big eyes, and a cigarette between his lips stepped over the small curb and snorted. He was not a police officer, he was not even working for a police officer, but the two criminals widened their eyes.

“Eric?!” They both said in unison and turned to look at one another surprised.

 Dongwan retreated from his husband and whispered, “How do you know him?”

Minwoo blinked his eyes and then asked the other one, "How do you know him...?"

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zhendy-mf #1
Chapter 20: nice story and perfect end


great job author-nim
ayuwannie #2
Chapter 1: After so long not read fanfic, finnaly i had the time to read again~ and i think i will addicted with this story too ^^ kyaaa saraaaa

Ahhhh...why do you use Dane ? Thats makes me haha.. Dane just too Hawwwttt ~~ and also minbongie too, uhhh my cute woodong

Oke i will continue reading kekekeke
nananene #3
Chapter 20: like.. what happened?!! the fight was messy but the end ended well so thats all we all need TT
IzzyBreezy #4
Chapter 20: What the hell is going on?!! But i love it... Like were eric and syung in love the whole time and just hiding their feelings...but wow this story was just a really badass movie in my head i loved it so much. Kinda happy no one died in the end hope more stories like this happen i loved it!!
-chapter 20
Deng_Yat
#5
Chapter 20: aahhh...it's ended...dongwan is finally with minwoo...the two of them were broken but since they have each other,everything is going to be fine^^
I'm glad andy regained his consciousness. that makes junjin's story less sad. andy lost his ability to walk but I think junjin can lift him all the way around and and that's happier for andy^^
oh?eric didn't want to lose hyesung?he said he wanted minwoo but he actually already had feeling for hyesung
hyesung will take care of him
the ending is great as well as the story^^
thank you for writing this story^^
IzzyBreezy #6
Chapter 19: Ohmygodohnygodohmugpdohmygod!!!!! This is getting so intense and i need so much more of it!!! Love the chapter a d how junjin is able to walk and was able to break wan out!! PLUS ANDY IS BREATHIN!?!! And i hope minwoo stays strong and alive for dongwan and junjin to save him!! AAHAHA IM SO EXCITED CANT WAIT!!!
- chapter 19
Deng_Yat
#7
Chapter 19: dong wan is heroic but i need to credit choong jae for his escape...n his suffering too...not to mention that andy has not regained his conciousness yet...he is truly a strong guy...but when i remember he was an ex-stripper....hhmm...u know what come into my mind...lol^^
i hope minwoo is safe...he had been in this situations more than once...n he kept being away from dong wan...thanks to the villain eric...
and hyesung......i have nothing to say to him...drugs isnt good from the start..it ruined lives...
dongwan, i wish u manage to save ur husband and live happily ever after.....u can come to my house...LOL^^
IzzyBreezy #8
Chapter 18: YEEEEEAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!! DONGWAN IS BACK BABY AND HES GOING TO SAVE HIS CRIMINAL!! Im so happy this didnt take a turn for the worst..yet...and jindy please Andy has to be alive and his brain HAS to work please!! My god i was getting a little teary eyed at minus part and jinnies part...i so cant wait till this continues i feel like im watchin a really badass shinhwa movie!! FIGHTING AUTHORNIM!!
-chaptet 18
Deng_Yat
#9
Chapter 18: this is so sad...and I can totally imagine how did it go with minwoo n wannie..lifeless,soulless woodong....despites being roughly treated,they r still thinking of their partners...and jindy..I'm happy for them as andy is alive vut he is probably shocked of what jinnie said..lol^^ heart goes dugeun dugeun applies here lol
yes!minwoo knew wannie is alive and he escaped~~aigoo,my criminal wannie is slippery..haha^^ but I know I can't get happy too much since I haven't know how this goes^^
eric n hyesung sounded sad actually...they loved them too much to get in that measure but at the end they still unsatisfied with it....they keep forcing it...