The Promise

Description

Sojin was left by everyone. Her family saying she’s guilty for her brother’s death and leaving her at a young age. She had many part time jobs so she can live. She got kidnapped by a crazy man.

After all this, she felt ruined and couldn’t do anything. The things she was best to do was to cry and stare at a wall, waiting. She thought many times about suicide.

But then a very innocent boy came into her life and wanted to help her. But she was still scared and uncomfortable with humans around her. She was completely ruined. 

 

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Luhan

- 19 years old

- Very innocent looking

- Works at a grocery store

- Wants to help Sojin

- Lives alone at a apartment

  

       

    

Sojin 

- 18 years old

- Wants to commit suicide 

- Left alone

- The last time she smiled was when she was 13 years old

- Afraid of people

- Ruined

 

Exo

- Luhan's friends

- Are like Luhan's brothers

- They are not famous in this story

Foreword

Hi there! This is my new story and I'm really nervous so please comment on what you think. English is not my first language so it is some grammar fail, please ignore them. This story will be updated slowly but the more comments I get about updating, then I will write more chapter’s to update.

Please be nice since it is kind of my first story. I have another one but that’s more of an oneshot. If you have any idea what you want to happen in this story then tell me because I can suddenly get lost of ideas. If you want to make a cover to this story then send me because I am not sure how I get the cover I made here :( None of the pictures are mine!

Love you and your comments!

Comments

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nnmsdks #1
Chapter 17: Yeahhhh finally happy ending!! Yeayy thank you author-nim for making such a lovely story!
aboura-kpopfan #2
Chapter 17: Aaaaahhhh my felling *.* this story is amazing i love it ^^
ifsehun #3
Chapter 13: Dongsunn is so ing wicked
mankaevideos
#4
Chapter 13: I hope that they can get her back safely
stellarstarlight
#5
Chapter 11: i want everyone to happy !
Nana0622
#6
Chapter 10: I find it cute that their both on the same bed now, Luhan comforting Sojin because she's scared. Yes! Cute fluff~ I wonder what's been going through his mind....something important? Anyway, they look like a married couple. Since their both worried of each other and they listen ro each other too. HWAITING!
nnmsdks #7
Chapter 9: You better keep your promise Luhan. No no author-nim don't end this story yet, this is not enough for me I want more sugarrrrr (I mean sweet fluff) hahaha and maybe you can make it a plot twist. That is will make this story more alive and interesting. I just hope you not stop writing and left me hanging there evryday waiting for your update hmmm why I say this hahaha. And one more thing I hope you got featured you have a potiential lastly sorry for my terrible english :D
Nana0622
#8
Chapter 9: Arraso, author-nim. Just pls do not end this story I find it very interesting. Kind relates to Exo Promise song. You should put that as the song for the fanfic. Probably get a trailer. I love this so far, it's sad how Sojin had no one until Luhan showed up in her life ;)