Pick Up-BarmyDew

DEATH N♔TE Review Sh♔p [CLOSED/Finishing Request]

Story title: Flower boy Ramyun hair and his 2 wives

by: BarmyDew 

Reviewed by: teatee

Title: [4/5]

Comment: Title sangat menarik dan menambat hati pembaca! Pembaca pun curious bagaimana Junhong menghadapi hari-harinya dengan dua isteri xD

Apperance: [4/5]

Poster:  Poster boleh dipertingkatkan lagi! Salute you for making an awesome poster!^^ Trailer pun awesome!

Background: Letakkan background yang menarik. Yang boleh menyejukkan hati pembaca :D

Keseluruhan: Description bagus! ^^ 

Vocabulary/ Grammar/Tatabahasa: [14/15]

Keseluruhannya, mudah difahami dan saya boleh membayangkan situasi mereka ketika bersweet2 (Hyebin & Junghong xD)

Originality: [8/10]

Saya boleh katakan fic ni original. Jarang jumpa male characternya kahwin dengan dua ya o.O Dan Junhong tak jerk sangat. Dia sangat sweet dan manja dengan bini-bininya XD  

Flow: [4/5]

Saya dapat membayangkan situasi mereka xD Overall, jalan ceritanya berjalan bagus dan pembaca dapat memahami perasaan Hye Bin 

Excitement: [5/5]

Tergelak kat moments Lay dan Mak timah xD Karakter Jongup juga sangat best dan cute! Sanagat curious pasal Yongguk ni >< 

Bonus: [5/5]

Sesungguhya, cerita ni sangat menarik, recommended untuk orang yang suka romance comedy macam ni.

Total: 44/50 = 88%

My notes:

Yah! Choi Junhong! Kenapa pula tiba-tiba jatuh cinta dengan boyoung ni?! xD Markah yang bagus! Keep up the good work :D

 

 

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JunAra
#1
bile nak bukak ni? sy suka shop ni
darkclov3r #2
Hello.I've made a request for review some time ago. Could you put my requests (title : aku&potret, memori17) on hold/cancel it if you guys haven't start? (either way is fine) I'll be going away for quite some time& will deactivate my acc during that period. I'm sorry.
azure_bliss
#3
Chapter 40: Thank you so much for the review!
I don't mind the lateness at all, it was worth it ^^
Pick-up!
Will credit and edit my mistakes in the story.
Once again, thank you ^^
AiSyah98
#4
Chapter 38: first terkejut,sy tk ingat pun sy hantar req utk yg ni *lol*
oh..thenkiu ^^ esok ade mse sy edit dn credit ^^
DiamondSakura
#5
Chapter 36: hurm,,saya nak britau yang saya dah kreditkan..^^
DiamondSakura
#6
Chapter 36: Thanks for the review..saya tau masih ada yang kurang dalam cerita saya..takpe.nanti saya cuba baiki cara penulisan saya tu.. ^^..maaflah..internet saya tak brape baik..ni pun guna phone..jadi saya kreditkan shop ni agak lambat nanti...sayamintak maaf sangat2 ><
izzyeol #7
Saya nk tnya soalan. Awak awak semua dh tk ambik request untk review ke? Baru eksaited nk mintak korang review kn cerita 。・゚・(ノД`)・゚・。