Chapter 23: After a long time

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Jiyeon POV:

 

I’ve never had this kind of feeling in my entire life, having this second chance again, was like a merely a big impossible dream to me. A dream that this time seems come true once again. And I’m more than glad. More than happy.

 

Happiness.

 

Overwhelming feeling of joy.

 

 

I don’t know what the exact word to say was, the feeling of once again being fulfilled from being empty, completed from being nothing, whole from being broken. Though words may not be enough for how my heart feels this time.

 

Boram: Hey. Why are you crying now? *snapping Jiyeon’s senses* You’re probihited to cry aren’t you? You ruining you’re make up.

 

Jiyeon: Mianhe unnie.

 

Boram: you look so beautiful Jiyeon-ah, more than beautiful for the first time I saw you wearing this.

 

Jiyeon: thank you unnie *she was about to cry again*

 

Boram: I told you not to cry arraso?

 

Jiyeon: *nodded*

 

Door opens…

 

Boram: Seems someone wants to talk to you *she smiles as she looks at the door*

 

Mrs. Jung was standing to the door, her both hands placing on her heart, she looks happy though there’s a hint of guilty in her eyes.

 

Jiyeon bowed her head giving her respect to the old lady.

 

Boram: mom, c’mon it’s okay.

 

Mrs. Jung: Jiyeon-ah *as the old lady came to her side, she was hesitating to speak, though she have a lot to say* I’m sorry and thank you. I don’t know how to--

 

Jiyeon: it’s okay madam. I’m the one who supposed to thank you and tell sorry too. Mrs. Jung—I’m sorry, though I’m not qualified for your son as his bride but still I want to thank you for giving your blessings to us.

 

Mrs. Jung: Jiyeon-ah *as she hugs her* Please for now on—call me eomma. I’m your mom too.

 

They both smiled and hug each other when the door opens once again. All of them look at the door, they saw Junhee who was smiling at them sweetly, and she was wearing a simple yet elegant knee gown. She smiled at Jiyeon same goes at Jiyeon who smiled at her back.

 

Junhee steps her feet forward, as Boram and her mom smiles as they went outside the room.

 

Junhee: So the gown perfectly fitted on you huh. How nice. *she smiles*

 

Jiyeon: Yeah, thanks for picking this for me.

 

Junhee: no worries, well congratulation, I will not going to say please take care of him—coz I know you’re going to do that so.

 

Jiyeon: Thank you and sorry—

 

Junhee: Enough for saying sorry okay . *she smiles though inside of her heart there still pain*

 

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Meanwhile:

 

At Jinwoon’s room:

 

Jinwoon was walking from back and forth of the room, he biting his one fingernail, with nervousness written all over his face, Wooyoung, Seulong and jokwon came inside.

 

Wooyoung: whooaah! Dude that gross! Biting your fingernail? Are you still a child? **

 

Jinwoon: Damn you Woo! *smiling as he saw his friends*

 

Seulong: Still nervous? It’s been your third time isn’t it?

 

The three of them laughed, but Jinwoon glared at them.

 

Changmin: So what’s the commotion here? *As he entered the room* Teasing the third time groom?

 

For that, they all laughed again causing to Jinwoon to smile shaking his head in disbelief.

 

Changmin: Congrats bro!

 

Taecyeon: And please take care of my sister *he was now standing to the door smiling*

 

Jinwoon: I will hyung! I will.

 

In Jinwoon’s face it was written all over the happiness, he smiles like there’s no tomorrow waiting. The room echoed nothing but laughter’s as they tease Jinwoon for his nervousness.

 

On the other hand, Key was standing right next to the wall of the door, he was smiling secretly seeing his best friend smiling like this again, he was about to walk away when Jinwoon calls for his name.

 

Jinwoon: Hey Key! Mind joining us? 

 

Key step his feet inside, the other boys stood up as they properly leave the room just to make sure that Key and Jinwoon have a talk privately.

 

As the moment the boys leave the room, Key walks in Jinwoon side, seating on the chair while holding the tie from that chair.

 

Key: Nervous?

 

Jinwoon: A bit.

 

Key: Wae? Jiyeon was now wearing her gown, and she’s right here next to this room, so what’s that nervous for? *he stares at Jinwoon almost teasing him*

 

Jinwoon: Well—

 

Key: let me guess; are you afraid I’m going to run again with her? *he laugh*

 

Jinwoon: YAH! You’re not doing it again aren’t you?

 

Key: who knows? If you only see how beautiful jiyeon now.. Aiggoo.. *tries to act* Now I really want to run with her again *he looks at Jinwoon teasing him*

 

Jinwoon: YAH! *he was about to punch Key in joking way*

 

Key: *laughed* Relax! I’m not doing it, unless Jiyeon say so *smiles* but I doubt it.

 

Jinwoon: Key-- *there’s a sadness in his voice, knowing that even how much Key hides what he really felt this time, he knows deep down in him he was really hurt*

 

Key: Jin—I’m happy. Really. *as he taps Jinwoon shoulder*

 

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The wedding started as the tuned of the wedding song start.

 

 

Heart beats fast
Colors and promises
How to be brave
How can I love when I'm afraid to fall

 

Jiyeon breathe deeply as she starting to walk on the aisle with his brother Taecyeon.

 

Taecyeon: Relax *as he squeeze Jiyeon’s hands*

 

Jiyeon smiled sweetly. They both walk on the aisle slowly.

 

 

But watching you stand alone

All of my doubt

Suddenly goes away somehow

 

One step closer

 

 

 

In every face they pass through, there’s nothing but happiness written on it. They smiles seems genuine and true, their friends almost teary as they saw Jiyeon walking to the aisle once again.

 

 

I have died every day

waiting for you

Darlin' don't be afraid

 

Jiyeon seems like walking

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bhebesha
#1
Chapter 31: Awww...now I'm taking back my words last chapter authormin, thank you...thank you for saving Jiyeon, thank you for bringing her back to Jinwoon...they truly deserves happiness for a long-long time and thank you for that...you really didn't disappoint me for the twist I've been asking for you (for thinking Jiyeon was gone) I even checked the last chapter for confusion because I thought she really did gone, but thank you for giving us the happy ending they truly deserves for (Jiyeon & Jinwoon)...thank you for this story...looking forward for more G-Minor stories from you.
Carinrina #2
Chapter 31: Congratulations!!!!!! and Thank you for an update plus finish the story
The story is beautiful will be waiting for your next update for the other story
ShainaloveTara #3
Chapter 31: Authornim Congrats you're so cool :'( you made me cry I never thought the ending will be like this. Thank you becoz you bring her back I really love this story. I hope you create more stories of jiyeon with t ara I miss them so much thank you.
unfortunately_ayu #4
Chapter 30: Chapter 30: Okay...this killed me. It's just so sad that Jiyeon didn't wake up, didn't had the chance to watch her daughter grow and be at her side. What happened is too painful for everyone, for Jinwoon and their daughter, her loved ones...but what killed me even more is the fact that Jiyeon's mother decided to let her go, it was too painful for someone who brought that person into this world to do that, imagine the immense pain it brought when she watched her child go before her when it's supposed to be the opposite. I feel sad for Lauren for not having her mother by her side as she grow up but I know that she is aware that her mother loves her even when she's not of this world anymore and that she is loved by the people around her. And...Jinwoon, to lose your other half is truly painful, it's like losing your life, he is brave to be able to carry on for his daughter, who became his source of happiness and who brought him back to life, to stand up as both a father and a mother to her. I don't love the ending actually but not all stories have happy endings...and there are also stories like this in real life. Thank you for sharing this beautifully tragic love story, Author-nim.
bhebesha
#5
Chapter 30: I hate you authornim :( Huhuhuhuhu, why would it end like that? Jiyeon and Jinwoon already suffered enough w/ her cancer way back, and they just getting started once again but you tore them apart once again, it breaks my heart too (esp. for Jinwoon part). He wasn't even given the chance to take care Ji the time she's suffering w/ her sickness (because they hide everything from him), and it's not even a year of happiness of getting back each other but you tore them apart again by accident? Why would they have to suffer more pain through out this story? I seriously love this story chingu...but seriously I can't really accept the fact that Ji (character) will gone after those fights and pain, it breaks me...really breaks me...huhuhuhu why? Please make it all just a DREAM please...please authornim give us a Big Twist for this one....huhuhu
Carinrina #6
Chapter 30: Oh my godddddddddd. It make me tear
Thank you for an update
bhebesha
#7
Chapter 29: Nooooo....please don't make it with a bad ending please (jebal I'm begging you) this is one of my favorite story ever read so please give up a happy ending for this one. We already cried a river for what happened on their lovestory, please don't let death of anyone tore them apart again, I won't take it...so I'm begging you authornim, save them and give us one picture of a happy family for this story.
Carinrina #8
Chapter 29: What happened to little Ji
Thank you for an update
ShainaloveTara #9
Chapter 29: I'm glad you came back authornim :-) hope you update again and what happen to jiyeon :'(
bhebesha
#10
Chapter 28: Thanks for the update chingu, that was a HOT SCENE, hehe....I'm blushing ^^