Chapter 11: Unfaded Feelings

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You know what hurts me most? It’s not that you can’t loved me back, BUT—the fact that even how huge efforts I put just to make  you smiles, even I put so much hardship just top see you smiled like that; but  with him, just his presence was enough to see you smiles, he never did anything. And it hurts me a lot.

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(At their resort)

 

Boram: KYYAAHH!! *scream as she stretching her body after going out of her car* FINALLY! It’s so nice to be back here *inhales the air*

 

Hyomin: Geez. Seriously? This place never changes. Aiggooo.

 

Junhee: *while she was wraps in Jinwoon’s arms* I’m glad you like my idea.

 

Boram: *turn her head to Junhee and crack a simple smile*

 

On the other hand, Jiyeon and Key were simply arguing their things. Key keeps on insisting that he was the one who will bring her things; which in the first place Jiyeon was opposing too.

 

Nichkhun: Seems they really grew close right? *while looking at Jiyeon and Key*

 

Key: *in not so distant far* I told you I can bring all these! *hiding all the luggage in his back*

 

Jiyeon: Give my luggage or else? *with her serious tone*

 

Key: or else what? *teases and runs away*

 

Jiyeon: YAH!!!

 

Hyomin: Geez, but they become closer right now. See? The way Key protect Jiyeon was so.. hmm.. *observing the two, with her one hand on her chin*

 

Wooyoung: I bet, sooner or later we will hear the ringing bells. *winks* I’m excited!

 

All of them including Jinwoon look at Wooyoung.

 

Seulong: Stop talking non sense *taps Wooyoung head hard*

 

Junhee: *looks at Jinwoon who was looking fiercely at Jiyeon and Key, his eyebrow twitch, he was really disgust.*

 

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(At the Dining)

 

They were all at the dining area eating their breakfast since they haven’t eaten yet since they need to travel far. They were all came to Jinwoon’s resort to have their little vacation plus the welcome back party for Jiyeon and Key as well.

 

Wooyoung: WAH! Food! Aiiggoo. I’m really hungry. *as he seat on the chair*

 

Changmin: Aiggoo. *shook his head*

 

Junhee: Yeah, eat a lot Woo, I prepare more foods. *as she gives wooyoung a plate, she was the one who cook their foods*

 

Boram: Oh. Dino Ji, Ki-bum come here! *as she saw the two walking down the stair*

 

KEY: YAH! NOONA! Don’t call me like that. It’s so embarrassing.

 

Qri: *holding back her laughter* seems your brother Seulong-ssi was really hated his name that much

 

Seulong: *smiles* yeh.

 

Key: *frowned as he pulled the chair back to Jiyeon*

 

Eunjung: Let’s eat!

 

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Key: what do you want to eat Yeongie-ah? *he was busy fixing Jiyeon’s plate*

 

And all of them just watch them silently. Indeed, Jiyeon and Key were really that close since then, but the way Key treated Jiyeon make some difference.

 

Jiyeon: Yah! Don’t put too much vegetable *she protested*

 

Key: you should eat that! It’s good for you *try to put more on her plate*

 

Junhee: *looks again with Jinwoon who was looking at them too*

 

Hyomin: Key-ssi, since when you become conscious with Jiyeon’s diet? *she asks, she can take the closeness of the two*

 

Key: Wae? I’ve been doing these for years that’s why I used to it.

 

Jokwon: YEARS? *blurt out*

 

Key: *nodded* waeyo? Is there wrong with that?

 

Jiyeon: *she was alarmed where Key was heading to, that’s why she put a chicken in Key‘s mouth to make him shut.* eat this! You talked too much!

 

All of them laugh, including Junhee but Jinwoon just made a serious face.

 

KEY: YAH! You really that sweet huh!

 

Junhee: *looks again with Jinwoon to distract him* jagiya! Eat *feeding Jinwoon*

 

Jinwoon: *looks at Junhee and eat*

 

Wooyoung: Aiggoo. *goose bumps* seriously? Are we needed to look over these love birds here?

 

Nichkhun: you’re just jealous coz you don’t bring IU here. *laughed*

 

 

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At the beach…

 

 

Jiyeon was standing in the beach, with hands holding her hat in her head, she just enjoying the scene she was witnessing right now.

 

Flashback:

 

(Jiyeon’s side part)

 

Jinwoon: YAH! Go back here! *running with his full speed to chase Jiyeon*

 

Jiyeon: Ani! Shiruh. Catch me if you can! *still running in the sea*

 

But Jiyeon suddenly trip on something in the sea.

 

Jiyeon: Ahh. *scream*

 

Jinwoon: Gwenchana? *looks really worried, *

 

Jinwoon runs hurriedly with her,

 

Jiyeon: *holding his feet*

 

Jinwoon: Let me see

 

Jiyeon: aniyo. It’s fine. Don’t worry

 

Jinwoon: I said, let me see.

 

Jiyeon: I’m fine.

 

Jinwoon: You don’t want huh. *carried Jiyeon and bring Jiyeon to sit in his lap, while jinwoon was sitting*

 

Jiyeon: *blushes, as she realizes the awkward position of them, Jinwoon was looking at her feet, while Jiyeon was blushing so hard looking at him*

 

Jinwoon: Tsk. You should be careful, look. *She looks at Jiyeon who was looking at him, they eyes lock to each other*

 

No one breaks the eye contact, their faces were just inch apart, and both of them were blushing so hard. Heart beating so fast, in just a snap, Jinwoon breaks the tension by simply landing his lips to hers. They both fascinated to the feeling. A very lingering sensation that they both felt for the very first time; it took a seconds before they parted, as they both catching to their air, Jinwoon mumbled the words she didn’t expect her to hear.

 

Jinwoon: Saranghae Jiyeon-ah *eyes lock with her, he was blushing so hard*

 

Jiyeon: *Shocked *

 

End of flashback…

 

At that time, while Jiyeon was busy mesmerizing from her thoughts, Jinwoon was walking in the same place she was. Jinwoon suddenly stops after seeing her standing on his front. He silently looking at her, then he looks to the direction Jiyeon was looking at.

 

Flashback:

 

(Jinwoon’s side part)

 

Jinwoon: *looks down and quickly get up in the water*

 

Jiyeon: *still in shocked but got back in her senses when she saw Jinwoon walking away* YAH! Jung Jinwoon!

 

Jinwoon: *ignore her, he just continues walking *

 

Jiyeon: YAH! JUNG JINWOON!

 

Jinwoon: *still walking*

 

Jiyeon: YAH! Are you not going to stop in walking? YAH! I want to say something!

 

Jinwoon: *still ignoring her*

 

Jiyeon: Fine! If that what’s you want. I just want to say I LOVE YOU TOO

 

Then suddenly Jinwoon stops from walking, he looks at Jiyeon who was smiling widely to him.

 

Jiyeon: but I change my mind, I will not going to say that I loved ---

 

Splasshh…

 

Jinwoon throw himself to her to give her a hug, it almost a dive that’s why  they both landed on the water, causing Jiyeon to drank the salty water of the sea.

 

Jiyeon: Yah! Are you planning to drown me or what?

 

Jinwoon: well I’m willing to give you a CPR! *he grins*

 

Jiyeon: YAH! You —

 

Jinwoon: *put his finger on * Chincha? You loved me too right? * There’s an unbearable happiness written in his face.*

 

Jiyeon can’t help herself but to nod. From that Jinwoon gives her a warmest hug.

 

Jinwoon: Komawo! I’m really happy. *faces Jiyeon* can you say it again?

 

Jiyeon: *smiles, she cupped jinwoon’s face and mouthed* I L-O-V-E-Y-O-U!

 

END OF FLASHBACK…

 

Jiyeon: Do you remember it also? *she was looking at Jinwoon*

 

Without his knowing, Jiyeon was looking at him from the seconds past, he was been caught by that memories that’s why he didn’t realized that Jiyeon was now looking at him. In return Jinwoon just looking at Jiyeon.

 

Jiyeon: I was hoping that looking at this place; you also remember the same memory I have right now. *she smiles and walks away *

 

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At night...

 

All of them were on the sea shore they prepare a bonfire; they all seated encircling the bonfire.

 

 

                                Hyomin- Eunjung- Seulong-Boram-Qri

                Jinwoon                                                                               Key

                     |                                 Bonfire                                            |

                Junhee                                                                                 Jiyeon

                                Wooyoung-Nichkhun-Changmin-jokwon

                                             (Their sitting arrangement)

 

 

Qri: Why the two of you took so long? *looking at Key and Jiyeon they both seated besides Qri and jokwon in front of Jinwoon and Junhee*

 

Wooyoung: YAH! You two! Don’t say that you---

 

Nichkhun: *snap his head hard* Shut up! You talked nonsense things!

 

Key just smirked, while Jiyeon pretends nothing to hear.

 

Jokwon: So… what we were going to do now?

 

Changmin: Jinwoon why don’t you play a guitar instead? *persuading Jinwoon*

 

Seulong: that’s right! Play a song for us!

 

Jinwoon: I don’t want.

 

Boram: YAH! It’s just for fun! Don’t be so hard headed dear brother. *try to tease his younger brother*

 

Jinwoon: then why don’t you sing instead? It will be more fun listening to your ugly voice. *teases his noona but looks serious*

 

Boram: YAH!! *annoyed*

 

Junhee: Jagiya! *holds Jinwoon arm* please? Just one song! Please *doing her aegyo way of persuading*

 

Jinwoon: *just close his eyes and sighed* alright. *he stands up and got his guitar*

 

 

(A/N: please play this song chingus ^^ the below lyrics was the English translation of this song^^ Just not to confused you guys the following italics with bold was the lyrics, then the other italics here was their inside thoughts. They were just thinking of it^^ if the song ended please play it again until to the last part where Jinwoon thoughts. ^^ haha. Sorry guys but I loved this scenes, hope you enjoy it)

 

Jinwoon started to strum his guitar. They were all remaining silent as they listening to his st

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bhebesha
#1
Chapter 31: Awww...now I'm taking back my words last chapter authormin, thank you...thank you for saving Jiyeon, thank you for bringing her back to Jinwoon...they truly deserves happiness for a long-long time and thank you for that...you really didn't disappoint me for the twist I've been asking for you (for thinking Jiyeon was gone) I even checked the last chapter for confusion because I thought she really did gone, but thank you for giving us the happy ending they truly deserves for (Jiyeon & Jinwoon)...thank you for this story...looking forward for more G-Minor stories from you.
Carinrina #2
Chapter 31: Congratulations!!!!!! and Thank you for an update plus finish the story
The story is beautiful will be waiting for your next update for the other story
ShainaloveTara #3
Chapter 31: Authornim Congrats you're so cool :'( you made me cry I never thought the ending will be like this. Thank you becoz you bring her back I really love this story. I hope you create more stories of jiyeon with t ara I miss them so much thank you.
unfortunately_ayu #4
Chapter 30: Chapter 30: Okay...this killed me. It's just so sad that Jiyeon didn't wake up, didn't had the chance to watch her daughter grow and be at her side. What happened is too painful for everyone, for Jinwoon and their daughter, her loved ones...but what killed me even more is the fact that Jiyeon's mother decided to let her go, it was too painful for someone who brought that person into this world to do that, imagine the immense pain it brought when she watched her child go before her when it's supposed to be the opposite. I feel sad for Lauren for not having her mother by her side as she grow up but I know that she is aware that her mother loves her even when she's not of this world anymore and that she is loved by the people around her. And...Jinwoon, to lose your other half is truly painful, it's like losing your life, he is brave to be able to carry on for his daughter, who became his source of happiness and who brought him back to life, to stand up as both a father and a mother to her. I don't love the ending actually but not all stories have happy endings...and there are also stories like this in real life. Thank you for sharing this beautifully tragic love story, Author-nim.
bhebesha
#5
Chapter 30: I hate you authornim :( Huhuhuhuhu, why would it end like that? Jiyeon and Jinwoon already suffered enough w/ her cancer way back, and they just getting started once again but you tore them apart once again, it breaks my heart too (esp. for Jinwoon part). He wasn't even given the chance to take care Ji the time she's suffering w/ her sickness (because they hide everything from him), and it's not even a year of happiness of getting back each other but you tore them apart again by accident? Why would they have to suffer more pain through out this story? I seriously love this story chingu...but seriously I can't really accept the fact that Ji (character) will gone after those fights and pain, it breaks me...really breaks me...huhuhuhu why? Please make it all just a DREAM please...please authornim give us a Big Twist for this one....huhuhu
Carinrina #6
Chapter 30: Oh my godddddddddd. It make me tear
Thank you for an update
bhebesha
#7
Chapter 29: Nooooo....please don't make it with a bad ending please (jebal I'm begging you) this is one of my favorite story ever read so please give up a happy ending for this one. We already cried a river for what happened on their lovestory, please don't let death of anyone tore them apart again, I won't take it...so I'm begging you authornim, save them and give us one picture of a happy family for this story.
Carinrina #8
Chapter 29: What happened to little Ji
Thank you for an update
ShainaloveTara #9
Chapter 29: I'm glad you came back authornim :-) hope you update again and what happen to jiyeon :'(
bhebesha
#10
Chapter 28: Thanks for the update chingu, that was a HOT SCENE, hehe....I'm blushing ^^