Chapter 13: A Moment Like This

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you can't cover what you really felt by means of HATRED, even you put your true feelings in the deepest part of you, in the deepest corner of your soul, Your HATRED was the only simple proof how much you LOVED HER.

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At their new site…

 

Jiyeon: Ajussi! Please hold on for a second, *She shouted to one man working on the site* there. Please put those there.

 

Worker 1: ma’am where did I put this? *pointing the huge wood on his hand*

 

Jiyeon: *smiles* ah. Please put it down here. Thanks.

 

Wooyoung: Jiyeon! Just look *giving the papers to her*

 

 

They were all busy in their preparation as they start the construction of their project, since Mr. Kim agrees with Jiyeon’s proposal of trading her own place to Jinwoon’s place; they start to build the area as Mr. Kim wants. Jinwoon, on the other hand looks at Jiyeon in the distant far. He was silently observing her, without his own knowing, Mr. Kim was looking at him also, observing him while exchanging his looks to Jinwoon and Jiyeon.

 

Mr. Kim: *as he went near at Jinwoon* this place was indeed beautiful right *he stated to get Jinwoon’s attention*

 

Jinwoon: Oh… Yeh. *looks shocked*

 

Mr. Kim: and now, I wonder why Ms. Park exchanges this place for your place, *smiled*

 

Jinwoon: I don’t know either. *fake a smile*

 

Mr. Kim: *he looks at Jiyeon who was really busy* and indeed, she grew beautiful, like her mother. *smiles*

 

Jinwoon: Do you know her mother? *shocked*

 

Mr. Kim: Apparently yes, she really looks like her mother but the way she acts; she does like her father too much, a very brave yet vulnerable one. *he paused* at first, I didn’t notice it, it was late when I found out this, but, just like her father, she was really have a strong heart and treasured things a lot of those she thinks important to her.

 

Flashback:

 

(Jiyeon went to Mr. Kim office before the day of their vacation)

 

Mr. Kim: What brings you here Ms. Park? I thought we don’t have any appointment, and after all, I already canceled my projects with your team.

 

Jiyeon: I got to be straight to the point Mr. Kim, I came here to ask you to withdrew your decision and continue your projects with us.

 

Mr Kim: *smirked* you’re really brave enough huh? After what you did? I know it’s clear to you, if I can’t bought that place of Mr. Jung’s property, I will never continue my pending projects. So you can leave now.

 

Jiyeon: I have a better proposal, how about trading my property with Jinwoon’s? My place, it’s better than him, you don’t have to worry about the price, same price but in return withdrew the cancelation of projects and give that place to me.

 

Mr Kim: are you teaching me for what I need to do? *mad, he was about to press the intercom to call guard, but Jiyeon stops him*

 

Jiyeon: I’m begging, My place and Jinwoon’s place were two important place to me honestly, but if I need to chose between the two, I’d rather choose the second. *she closes her eyes as she was restraining for the tears that any moment will fall*

 

Mr Kim: *shocked, he looks at Jiyeon and listen to her every words that she saying*

 

Jiyeon: I’m willing to give up my own place, even I know how much my late father treasured it most, I know I’m being selfish, call me cruel, but I can’t let go of that place Mr. Kim, it’s the only place I have my memories with him—with Jinwoon.

 

Mr. Kim: if it’s important to you’re father, why? Do you think you’re father will be happy knowing this?

 

Jiyeon: I know, that was the place where my father lasts days past, but-- *as she kept her tears to fall* but… I do believe that my father will do understand me.

 

Mr. Kim: how come young lady?

 

Jiyeon: Before my father died, he said to me that I can’t  hold everything in my hand, maybe he’s true, coz this time, honestly, I cant’ hold on to the last memories I have in my own place, it’s wrecking me, the only memories I have was all in pain, but in Jinwoons’ all of my happiest and  unforgotten memories are there.

 

Mr. Kim: *smiles as he remembers something in the past* you like someone I know Ms. Park, like you, he’s said those things to me. And you are getting me there Ms. Park. *smiles at her*

 

Jiyeon: maybe my father trains me well *smiles*

 

Mr. Kim: so, now I’m agreed with it. But---

 

Jiyeon: *looks nervous*

 

Mr.Kim: I will just get the half of you’re place, I don’t want your father go in my room at night and frightened me because of you. *laughed*

 

Jiyeon: Chincha? *can’t believe*

 

Mr. Kim: yes, honestly, someone told me years ago, don’t hold to the memories that makes you sad, let go of it. You made a right decision Ms. Park. And I guess, your father was really proud of your decision. There are no parents in this world want to see their children in pain.

 

Jiyeon: thanks.

 

Mr. Kim:  just go back here and give me the documents and I will sign again with your team.

 

Jiyeon: Chincha? *amazed* komawo Mr. Kim. *bow*

 

Mr. Kim: but—may I know your father’s name is?

 

Jiyeon: He’s Hyun- Woo Park.

 

Mr. Kim POV: Just what I thought, you really like your dad too much.

 

End of flashback

 

Mr. Kim: and now, I really know why. You really lucky to have her *smiled*

 

Jinwoon:  *didn’t answer instead excuse himself* Ah. Mr. Kim I think I need to go, my other employees needs me. *he said without waiting for his answer, he already turns his back and acts to walk away*

 

Mr. Kim: I know, I don’t have any rights to intervene with you both, I don’t know what the story between or behind you two both, but—just looking at both of you right now, I can clearly conclude, the feeling was still mutual. It clearly seems the way you both look in each other.

 

Without looking, Jinwoon just listen to the old man in his back.

 

Jinwoon: You dont know everything Sir, please mind your own business, and don't interfere with us.

 

Mr. Kim: I'm might be too old and don't know evrything young man, but-- just let me give you some words of wisdom coming from a old man like me, you can't cover what you really felt by means of HATRED, even you put your true feelings in the deepest part of you, in the deepest corner of your soul, Your HATRED was the only simple proof how much you LOVED HER. I clearly saw it, your eyes telling what the opposite of what your saying, so DONT HOLD ON THE MEMORIES THAT MAKE YOU SAD. Do you know that regrets are the most pabo word I've ever encountered in my existence?

 

Then Jinwoon didn’t mind him and walk away.

 

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It was already lunch break and all of them were eating their food. Jiyeon, on the other hand, was sitting in the bench near on the big tree; she was talking with Mr. Kim’s grand daughter with so much delighted.

 

Shin Bi (Mr. Kim’s grand daughter): unni, why are you pretty? *she said innocently, looking at Jiyeon*

 

Jiyeon: Chincha? unni was pretty?

 

Shin Bi: *just nodded* you’re really pretty unnie.

 

Jiyeon: you’re pretty too.

 

Shi n Bi: Really? When I grow up I want to be like you unnie, and I will go to marry my prince charming.

 

Jiyeon: Kurom. And if that day happens invite unnie in your wedding huh? *as she plays with her hair*

 

Shin bi: *nodded* but unnie? Where’s your prince charming?

 

Jiyeon: Huh? *shocked, then images of Jinwoon flashes on his mind*

 

Shin Bi: Waeyo? Unnie don’t you have prince charming? Granpa always tell me that pretty girls have they prince charming so why you don’t have? *ask innocently*

 

Jiyeon:  *she goes back with her senses and tries to answer the young kid* Yeh. Unnie---

 

Shin Bi: *looks surprised when she saw someone at they back she runs excitedly* prince charming! *she happily exclaimed*

 

Jiyeon automatically turn her head and saw Shin Bi running to Jinwoon’s direction, in return Jinwoon knelled and give a hug the young kid.

 

Shin Bi: Unnie! He’s my prince charming! Once I grow up I will marry him! Right prince?

 

Jinwoon: *he chuckled in amazement*

 

Shin Bi: *looks at Jinwoon then looks at Jiyeon and smiled as she runs towards to Jiyeon’s direction and pulled her to get near in Jinwoon*

 

Jiyeon: Ah. Shin Bi-ah! *she said while the young kid, pulling her to Jinwoon*

 

Jiyeon and Shin Bi were now in Jinwoon’s side, still in his position Jinwoon was looking to the both of them.

 

Shi Bi: But--- *held the hand of them both to hold*

 

Both Jiyeon and Jinwoon were surprised, they didn’t expect Shin bi will do that gestured to both of them, still both holding their hands due to Shin Bi’s hold to them both, their eyes met in each other.

 

Shin Bi: since you don’t have your own prince, I will give my prince to you unnie.  Unnie, from now on, he will be your prince charming *she smiled* oppa *looks at Jinwoon* she’s pretty right? take care of your princess huh? Arraso?

 

Mr. Kim: Shin Bi-ah! *called out*

 

Shin Bi: Granpa *as she runs to her grandfather*

 

Jiyeon and Jinwoon both turn they head to Mr. Kim’s direction, without noticing that they still holding each other hands, Mr. Kim just smiled from what he saw.

 

Jiyeon: *she  smiled looking at Shin bi and his grand father, she looks at Jinwoon in her side who still looking at the two;but was surprised when she saw they still holding they both hands*

 

Jinwoon: *still looking at the bubbly Shin Bi, but notices Jiyeon was staring at him, he  lift his head to Jiyeon and saw he was still holding her hand, he’s the one who let go of their hold as he stood up and walk away*

 

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At the hospital…

 

Junhee was looking no where in her own office, one hand in her chin, she was occupiedby something, even lots of paper works ion her table, seems her mind was not focusing in her work, and she didn’t realize that Ga In enters to her room.

 

Ga In: So what’s that horrible look? *smirked as she went nearer to her*

 

Junhee: what are you talking about? I’m busy *as she went back on reading*

 

Ga In: Chincha? *chuckled, she looks at her with her famous one eye brow rising* I don’t believe you

 

Junhee: *she her death glared*

 

Ga In: hahaha. Relax. I’m not your enemy here.

 

Junhee: just shut up okay.

 

Ga In: if you really bothered that much, why don’t y

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bhebesha
#1
Chapter 31: Awww...now I'm taking back my words last chapter authormin, thank you...thank you for saving Jiyeon, thank you for bringing her back to Jinwoon...they truly deserves happiness for a long-long time and thank you for that...you really didn't disappoint me for the twist I've been asking for you (for thinking Jiyeon was gone) I even checked the last chapter for confusion because I thought she really did gone, but thank you for giving us the happy ending they truly deserves for (Jiyeon & Jinwoon)...thank you for this story...looking forward for more G-Minor stories from you.
Carinrina #2
Chapter 31: Congratulations!!!!!! and Thank you for an update plus finish the story
The story is beautiful will be waiting for your next update for the other story
ShainaloveTara #3
Chapter 31: Authornim Congrats you're so cool :'( you made me cry I never thought the ending will be like this. Thank you becoz you bring her back I really love this story. I hope you create more stories of jiyeon with t ara I miss them so much thank you.
unfortunately_ayu #4
Chapter 30: Chapter 30: Okay...this killed me. It's just so sad that Jiyeon didn't wake up, didn't had the chance to watch her daughter grow and be at her side. What happened is too painful for everyone, for Jinwoon and their daughter, her loved ones...but what killed me even more is the fact that Jiyeon's mother decided to let her go, it was too painful for someone who brought that person into this world to do that, imagine the immense pain it brought when she watched her child go before her when it's supposed to be the opposite. I feel sad for Lauren for not having her mother by her side as she grow up but I know that she is aware that her mother loves her even when she's not of this world anymore and that she is loved by the people around her. And...Jinwoon, to lose your other half is truly painful, it's like losing your life, he is brave to be able to carry on for his daughter, who became his source of happiness and who brought him back to life, to stand up as both a father and a mother to her. I don't love the ending actually but not all stories have happy endings...and there are also stories like this in real life. Thank you for sharing this beautifully tragic love story, Author-nim.
bhebesha
#5
Chapter 30: I hate you authornim :( Huhuhuhuhu, why would it end like that? Jiyeon and Jinwoon already suffered enough w/ her cancer way back, and they just getting started once again but you tore them apart once again, it breaks my heart too (esp. for Jinwoon part). He wasn't even given the chance to take care Ji the time she's suffering w/ her sickness (because they hide everything from him), and it's not even a year of happiness of getting back each other but you tore them apart again by accident? Why would they have to suffer more pain through out this story? I seriously love this story chingu...but seriously I can't really accept the fact that Ji (character) will gone after those fights and pain, it breaks me...really breaks me...huhuhuhu why? Please make it all just a DREAM please...please authornim give us a Big Twist for this one....huhuhu
Carinrina #6
Chapter 30: Oh my godddddddddd. It make me tear
Thank you for an update
bhebesha
#7
Chapter 29: Nooooo....please don't make it with a bad ending please (jebal I'm begging you) this is one of my favorite story ever read so please give up a happy ending for this one. We already cried a river for what happened on their lovestory, please don't let death of anyone tore them apart again, I won't take it...so I'm begging you authornim, save them and give us one picture of a happy family for this story.
Carinrina #8
Chapter 29: What happened to little Ji
Thank you for an update
ShainaloveTara #9
Chapter 29: I'm glad you came back authornim :-) hope you update again and what happen to jiyeon :'(
bhebesha
#10
Chapter 28: Thanks for the update chingu, that was a HOT SCENE, hehe....I'm blushing ^^