Three

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Storyline:

Three months. Three, very short months. 

Sara would've turned twenty-two. She would've been an adult. She would've been capable of making her life decisions.

She would've have married Eric.

 

Characters:

Sara Ahn Ji Hyun | 22 years old

 

Eric Mun Jung Hyuk | 35 years old

 

Andy Lee Sun Ho | 33 years old

 

* Ages stated are in international age.

Foreword

Hi, everyone! This is the second time I'm writing a long story. I'm not sure how long I'm going to write for this story, though.

Usually for me, I will only publish completed stories. However, I accidentally published this before I completed it, and by the time I changed the settings back to 'Draft', I have already gained many subscribers. Thanks to all of you who subscribed, really means a lot to me!

As I'm writing out this story, I am also drowned in school work. Sometimes, I actually wrote a chapter out during lecture or times when I'm supposed to do my work. So please do wait patiently and continue supporting me. On my part, I'll try to update as often as I can.

Once again, thanks for all the support! Hope you like the story so far!

 

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baekdokai #1
Chapter 16: Wippeee another update. Xie xie ni~~
baekdokai #2
Chapter 15: Yay!!! You've updated authornim~~
fren123 #3
Chapter 15: I miss Andy ~ T____T
baekdokai #4
Chapter 13: Please update~~~~~~~ Please~~~~ Your storyline is daebak~~~
fren123 #5
Chapter 13: aigoooo...im goin crazy !!
this is getting interedting as it goes !
Next update please <3
sueyachangjo #6
Chapter 13: Andy-why are you being so evasive? Aigoo. But yeah; I get it. He's leaving the jacket to her so that he has a reason to see her next time. Hehehe.
aznfangirl_ #7
Chapter 12: Plot twist: Eric is actually alive.

Tell me that's not just that....
sueyachangjo #8
Chapter 12: Because the chapters are very short, the transition from one scene to another, it felt very rushed and awkward.

I think you should ease down a bit, write out the scenes longer for example, Sara's interaction with Minwoo. Let the readers indulge with their emotions for a bit, describe them and maybe add a few more dialogues before moving on to the next scene.

I hope I didn't sound too critical though ><; Because your plot is very engaging so far and I want to help make your story better. This is my take on it, I hope you don't take it personally. I look forward to how the song will come out :)
aznfangirl_ #9
Chapter 11: awwwwwwww shiiiiiiiit.... the feels. crying hard, authornim. why eric. why???? /creys
fren123 #10
Chapter 11: hope to see Andy again :)
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