Morning

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Sara POV

The moment I opened my eyes, a strong scent of bacon entered my nose. I got up to sitting position and smiled, only to replace it with a frown soon after.

Who is in my kitchen this early?

I silently climbed out of bed, feeling the wooden floor beneath my feet. Cautiously, I exited my room and made my way to the kitchen.

In front of the stove stood a familiar-looking back, straps of the blue apron hanging off the body. I stood there, trying to figure out who it was when that man turned around.

Eric..?

I stared at Eric's face who looked right back at me. Slowly, I shook my head and rubbed my eyes. Once I reopened my eyes again, Eric's face disappeared and was replaced by Andy's.

I let out a soft sigh and quickly sat down at the table where there was a bowl of hangover soup. I reached for the soup and slowly sipped it, hoping that it would get rid of the pounding in my head.

Just as I emptied my bowl, a plate of bacon and scrambled eggs was placed in front of me. I muttered a 'thanks' and started digging into the eggs with a fork.

The sound of water running from the tap made me look up. Andy was busy washing the pan and bowl. My gaze fell on the table and realised something.

"You didn't eat?" 

I watched as Andy shook his head, still busy with the washing. I looked back down on my full plate. Getting up from my seat, I stood beside him, my plate in my hand. 

"Oppa, open you

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baekdokai #1
Chapter 16: Wippeee another update. Xie xie ni~~
baekdokai #2
Chapter 15: Yay!!! You've updated authornim~~
fren123 #3
Chapter 15: I miss Andy ~ T____T
baekdokai #4
Chapter 13: Please update~~~~~~~ Please~~~~ Your storyline is daebak~~~
fren123 #5
Chapter 13: aigoooo...im goin crazy !!
this is getting interedting as it goes !
Next update please <3
sueyachangjo
#6
Chapter 13: Andy-why are you being so evasive? Aigoo. But yeah; I get it. He's leaving the jacket to her so that he has a reason to see her next time. Hehehe.
aznfangirl_ #7
Chapter 12: Plot twist: Eric is actually alive.

Tell me that's not just that....
sueyachangjo
#8
Chapter 12: Because the chapters are very short, the transition from one scene to another, it felt very rushed and awkward.

I think you should ease down a bit, write out the scenes longer for example, Sara's interaction with Minwoo. Let the readers indulge with their emotions for a bit, describe them and maybe add a few more dialogues before moving on to the next scene.

I hope I didn't sound too critical though ><; Because your plot is very engaging so far and I want to help make your story better. This is my take on it, I hope you don't take it personally. I look forward to how the song will come out :)
aznfangirl_ #9
Chapter 11: awwwwwwww shiiiiiiiit.... the feels. crying hard, authornim. why eric. why???? /creys
fren123 #10
Chapter 11: hope to see Andy again :)