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Andy POV

"Judging by his bad deeds, it's more likely he's down there!"

As Hyesung was busy stomping his foot, I noticed a hurt expression flashed across her face. 

Ever since Sara said that she's alright at the recording studio, I thought that she was. After all, the bags under her eyes were more or less gone. I assumed that she got back all the lost sleep.

Her laughter echoed around the room. 

Fake laughter.

Before she could take another gulp, I quickly snatched her glass away. She turned towards me. 

"You've had enough. Come, I'll take you home," I mumbled.

It was then that I realised that her eyes still did not have the usual sparkle.

She's not fully okay yet.

How could I blame her, though. Even I am not fully over my lost.

None of us are.

But all of us are trying to move on, subtly avoiding the topic on Eric. Come to think of it, tonight's the first time in a long while that someone mentioned Eric's name. And it was purely because they had lost their senses to the alcohol.

I let out a sigh and quickly holding onto Sara and her bag. I mumbled out a 'goodbye', knowing that I could count on Junjin to bring the rest home as he's the most sober out of all of them.

 

 

The ride to Sara's home was silent. Her eyes were closed but I wasn't sure if she was sleeping or just taking a rest. When we've arrived, I quickly grabbed her bag and escorted her to

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baekdokai #1
Chapter 16: Wippeee another update. Xie xie ni~~
baekdokai #2
Chapter 15: Yay!!! You've updated authornim~~
fren123 #3
Chapter 15: I miss Andy ~ T____T
baekdokai #4
Chapter 13: Please update~~~~~~~ Please~~~~ Your storyline is daebak~~~
fren123 #5
Chapter 13: aigoooo...im goin crazy !!
this is getting interedting as it goes !
Next update please <3
sueyachangjo
#6
Chapter 13: Andy-why are you being so evasive? Aigoo. But yeah; I get it. He's leaving the jacket to her so that he has a reason to see her next time. Hehehe.
aznfangirl_ #7
Chapter 12: Plot twist: Eric is actually alive.

Tell me that's not just that....
sueyachangjo
#8
Chapter 12: Because the chapters are very short, the transition from one scene to another, it felt very rushed and awkward.

I think you should ease down a bit, write out the scenes longer for example, Sara's interaction with Minwoo. Let the readers indulge with their emotions for a bit, describe them and maybe add a few more dialogues before moving on to the next scene.

I hope I didn't sound too critical though ><; Because your plot is very engaging so far and I want to help make your story better. This is my take on it, I hope you don't take it personally. I look forward to how the song will come out :)
aznfangirl_ #9
Chapter 11: awwwwwwww shiiiiiiiit.... the feels. crying hard, authornim. why eric. why???? /creys
fren123 #10
Chapter 11: hope to see Andy again :)