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Andy POV

Secretly, I glanced at Sara from the mirror. Ever since that incident, she refused to make any eye contact with me.

Not that I want to, anyway. After all, I am embarrassed.

But you want that kiss, an inner voice echoed.

"But she doesn't like you," I muttered under my breath.

"What did you say, oppa?" Sara asked.

I gulped. "Ah, n-no. I was just t-thinking of something."

I mentally did a face palm. I need to stop muttering my thoughts aloud, especially in front of her. 

 

 

"Thank you for driving me around, Andy oppa," she bowed to me as we got out of the car after arriving back at the car park.

I shook both my hands in front of me. "Ah, Sara-ah. You don't have to be so formal to me. Here," I returned the car key.

She looked at the key in her hand before stuffing it in her pocket. "I'm just going to pop by Eric oppa's apartment for a while. Good bye, Andy oppa."

I nodded as I watched her walked towards the lift. Once she was out of sight, I let out a sigh.

"She really has not been sleeping well," I muttered to myself, recalling the bags under her once-sparkling eyes.

 

 

(Last Night)

For the upteenth time, I let out a soft sigh as I walked through the graveyard.

My day was very stressful. Normally, I would meet up with Eric at the bar to let out my concerns. But since he was no longer around, th

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baekdokai #1
Chapter 16: Wippeee another update. Xie xie ni~~
baekdokai #2
Chapter 15: Yay!!! You've updated authornim~~
fren123 #3
Chapter 15: I miss Andy ~ T____T
baekdokai #4
Chapter 13: Please update~~~~~~~ Please~~~~ Your storyline is daebak~~~
fren123 #5
Chapter 13: aigoooo...im goin crazy !!
this is getting interedting as it goes !
Next update please <3
sueyachangjo
#6
Chapter 13: Andy-why are you being so evasive? Aigoo. But yeah; I get it. He's leaving the jacket to her so that he has a reason to see her next time. Hehehe.
aznfangirl_ #7
Chapter 12: Plot twist: Eric is actually alive.

Tell me that's not just that....
sueyachangjo
#8
Chapter 12: Because the chapters are very short, the transition from one scene to another, it felt very rushed and awkward.

I think you should ease down a bit, write out the scenes longer for example, Sara's interaction with Minwoo. Let the readers indulge with their emotions for a bit, describe them and maybe add a few more dialogues before moving on to the next scene.

I hope I didn't sound too critical though ><; Because your plot is very engaging so far and I want to help make your story better. This is my take on it, I hope you don't take it personally. I look forward to how the song will come out :)
aznfangirl_ #9
Chapter 11: awwwwwwww shiiiiiiiit.... the feels. crying hard, authornim. why eric. why???? /creys
fren123 #10
Chapter 11: hope to see Andy again :)