Jacket

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Andy POV

"Alright!" Minwoo said suddenly, "Let's stop here for tonight."

I let out a relieved sigh. Finally.

"Hm. It's Friday," Dongwan thought aloud.

"So?" Hyesung replied, in the middle of packing his bag.

Dongwan suddenly approached me from behind, wrapping his muscular arms around me. "Andy-ah, it's your turn!"

"Oh! The sending-Sara-home mission?" Junjin said.

"Oppa, y-you don't have to do that.." Sara said nervously.

Ever since that incident in Eric's car, both of us didn't have a proper conversation. It is obvious that she's trying to avoid me, probably due to embarrassment. But it seemed like it wasn't obvious enough for the guys as none of them pointed out our lack of interaction.

"No, no, no! Andy must do it! All of us have done it, and it won't be fair if Andy escapes this one," Dongwan replied.

"Yah, you make Sara sound like a burden. Sara-ah, you are not a burden, okay? Don't listen to Wannie! He's weird!" Junjin quickly added in, as he playfully strangled the shorter man.

"Dongwan's trying to say that all of us will get worried if you go home alone," Hyesung explained. In the background, Minwoo tried to separate the two but got stuck in between them instead. Hyesung sighed, shaking his head at the sight of his childish members.

"You two should go. By the looks of it, a fight may break out soon," Hyesung said as he approached s.

"Yah! You do not strangle your hyung! Remember, I'm your hyung!" Dongwan yelled.

"Yah, yah! My hair! Jinnie-ah, your armpit c

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baekdokai #1
Chapter 16: Wippeee another update. Xie xie ni~~
baekdokai #2
Chapter 15: Yay!!! You've updated authornim~~
fren123 #3
Chapter 15: I miss Andy ~ T____T
baekdokai #4
Chapter 13: Please update~~~~~~~ Please~~~~ Your storyline is daebak~~~
fren123 #5
Chapter 13: aigoooo...im goin crazy !!
this is getting interedting as it goes !
Next update please <3
sueyachangjo
#6
Chapter 13: Andy-why are you being so evasive? Aigoo. But yeah; I get it. He's leaving the jacket to her so that he has a reason to see her next time. Hehehe.
aznfangirl_ #7
Chapter 12: Plot twist: Eric is actually alive.

Tell me that's not just that....
sueyachangjo
#8
Chapter 12: Because the chapters are very short, the transition from one scene to another, it felt very rushed and awkward.

I think you should ease down a bit, write out the scenes longer for example, Sara's interaction with Minwoo. Let the readers indulge with their emotions for a bit, describe them and maybe add a few more dialogues before moving on to the next scene.

I hope I didn't sound too critical though ><; Because your plot is very engaging so far and I want to help make your story better. This is my take on it, I hope you don't take it personally. I look forward to how the song will come out :)
aznfangirl_ #9
Chapter 11: awwwwwwww shiiiiiiiit.... the feels. crying hard, authornim. why eric. why???? /creys
fren123 #10
Chapter 11: hope to see Andy again :)