Song

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Since it was very late, Minwoo offered to send me home. Throughout the car ride, I kept staring out the window, thinking of our previous conversations.

"Minwoo oppa," I said after a while, "I think you should let Shinhwa continue."

"What do you suggest?"

I shrugged my shoulders. "Maybe you guys could compose a song as tribute to Eric oppa.."

 

 

 

From that day on, the Shinhwa members became more busy, especially with the sudden addition of a song in their almost complete album. Day and night, they worked hard in the studio, composing the song and writing out the lyrics. 

"Yah, Sara-ah," Junjin said when I visited them with lunch one day, "why don't you compose a song too? You know, from your point of view. It can be a continuation of our song, and we can include it in our album too."

I was about to protest, saying that I don't have any experience whatsoever, but all the members started persuading me.

Since then, I practiced dancing in the day and joined them in the studio at night. It was tiring, yes, but I truly enjoyed my time with them. For the first time in weeks, I actually laughed. And it's all thanks to the members' never-ending antics.

Contrary to what I thought, recording a song takes lots of time. No matter how long we stayed over at night, we would always find some fault in the previous recording and thus, had to record again the following night and do some adju

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baekdokai #1
Chapter 16: Wippeee another update. Xie xie ni~~
baekdokai #2
Chapter 15: Yay!!! You've updated authornim~~
fren123 #3
Chapter 15: I miss Andy ~ T____T
baekdokai #4
Chapter 13: Please update~~~~~~~ Please~~~~ Your storyline is daebak~~~
fren123 #5
Chapter 13: aigoooo...im goin crazy !!
this is getting interedting as it goes !
Next update please <3
sueyachangjo
#6
Chapter 13: Andy-why are you being so evasive? Aigoo. But yeah; I get it. He's leaving the jacket to her so that he has a reason to see her next time. Hehehe.
aznfangirl_ #7
Chapter 12: Plot twist: Eric is actually alive.

Tell me that's not just that....
sueyachangjo
#8
Chapter 12: Because the chapters are very short, the transition from one scene to another, it felt very rushed and awkward.

I think you should ease down a bit, write out the scenes longer for example, Sara's interaction with Minwoo. Let the readers indulge with their emotions for a bit, describe them and maybe add a few more dialogues before moving on to the next scene.

I hope I didn't sound too critical though ><; Because your plot is very engaging so far and I want to help make your story better. This is my take on it, I hope you don't take it personally. I look forward to how the song will come out :)
aznfangirl_ #9
Chapter 11: awwwwwwww shiiiiiiiit.... the feels. crying hard, authornim. why eric. why???? /creys
fren123 #10
Chapter 11: hope to see Andy again :)