Car

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The next day, I got a call from Eric's mum.

"Sara-ah, Eric had placed his car under your name. Would you like to collect it from his apartment?"

I stood in front of the familiar black car for five minutes before unlocking the door and got into the passenger seat. Leaving the door slightly ajar, I looked around the interior of the car.

The first thing that my eyes fell on was the familiar snow globe resting on the dashboard. It has an orange base. In it, two figurines, a boy and a girl, were holding hands.

"Oppa, look! I custom-made it. Both of them look just like us!"

"Oh, you're right! Hahaha! She has your double chin!" he joked.

"I do?! Oppa, don't tease me ~"

"It's alright, chagiya. I still find you cute ~"

Is it too much to envy a pair of figurines right now, oppa?

I forced my eyes away from the snow globe and opened up the compartment in front of me. A black, leather-clad book was placed neatly on top of the small pile of mess. I picked it up, realising it was Eric's schedule book.

Gently, I flipped the book open. As I browsed through the pages, suddenly a small photograph dropped onto my lap. The moment I took a glance at it, tears started to form in my eyes.

You kept our wedding shoot photo in your schedule book..?

I picked it up, my thumb brushing against Eric's face in the photograph. Both of us were looking into each other's eyes and smiling wi

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baekdokai #1
Chapter 16: Wippeee another update. Xie xie ni~~
baekdokai #2
Chapter 15: Yay!!! You've updated authornim~~
fren123 #3
Chapter 15: I miss Andy ~ T____T
baekdokai #4
Chapter 13: Please update~~~~~~~ Please~~~~ Your storyline is daebak~~~
fren123 #5
Chapter 13: aigoooo...im goin crazy !!
this is getting interedting as it goes !
Next update please <3
sueyachangjo
#6
Chapter 13: Andy-why are you being so evasive? Aigoo. But yeah; I get it. He's leaving the jacket to her so that he has a reason to see her next time. Hehehe.
aznfangirl_ #7
Chapter 12: Plot twist: Eric is actually alive.

Tell me that's not just that....
sueyachangjo
#8
Chapter 12: Because the chapters are very short, the transition from one scene to another, it felt very rushed and awkward.

I think you should ease down a bit, write out the scenes longer for example, Sara's interaction with Minwoo. Let the readers indulge with their emotions for a bit, describe them and maybe add a few more dialogues before moving on to the next scene.

I hope I didn't sound too critical though ><; Because your plot is very engaging so far and I want to help make your story better. This is my take on it, I hope you don't take it personally. I look forward to how the song will come out :)
aznfangirl_ #9
Chapter 11: awwwwwwww shiiiiiiiit.... the feels. crying hard, authornim. why eric. why???? /creys
fren123 #10
Chapter 11: hope to see Andy again :)