Meeting

Three
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(Four Years Ago)

"Ahjumoni," I whispered to the owner of the dog shelter, "why are they here?"

My aunt smiled. "They came here to volunteer as part of Shinhwa Broadcast."

"So it's just for publicity?" I mumbled. Noticing my frustration, she quickly pulled me away from everyone.

"That's not true, Sara-ah. Just look at them. Look at how sincere they are," she whispered urgently.

I stole a glance at the scene before me. Minwoo and Junjin were bathing the dogs. They do look sincere..

 

 

After helping to clean out the cages, trying to avoid any of the staff members, I decided to pay a visit to the dog that had captured my heart since it showed up at the shelter.

I wonder if Ari remembers me.

Just as I was nearing the familiar cage, I had to stop. In the cage with my beloved dog, a Shinhwa member was there. I glanced around the area, trying to see if there's any cameras lingering around, only to find out that he was alone.

"What are you doing here?" I said aloud from outside the cage.

Eric looked up from Ari who had quickly retreated to a far corner. Eric glanced back at the frightened dog, sighing, before standing up to exit the cage. He brushed his hands against his clothes, trying to get rid of any dirt, before putting his right hand out.

"Hello, my name is Eric Mun," he said in a deep voice.

Not wanting to seem rude, I reached out to shake his hand

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baekdokai #1
Chapter 16: Wippeee another update. Xie xie ni~~
baekdokai #2
Chapter 15: Yay!!! You've updated authornim~~
fren123 #3
Chapter 15: I miss Andy ~ T____T
baekdokai #4
Chapter 13: Please update~~~~~~~ Please~~~~ Your storyline is daebak~~~
fren123 #5
Chapter 13: aigoooo...im goin crazy !!
this is getting interedting as it goes !
Next update please <3
sueyachangjo
#6
Chapter 13: Andy-why are you being so evasive? Aigoo. But yeah; I get it. He's leaving the jacket to her so that he has a reason to see her next time. Hehehe.
aznfangirl_ #7
Chapter 12: Plot twist: Eric is actually alive.

Tell me that's not just that....
sueyachangjo
#8
Chapter 12: Because the chapters are very short, the transition from one scene to another, it felt very rushed and awkward.

I think you should ease down a bit, write out the scenes longer for example, Sara's interaction with Minwoo. Let the readers indulge with their emotions for a bit, describe them and maybe add a few more dialogues before moving on to the next scene.

I hope I didn't sound too critical though ><; Because your plot is very engaging so far and I want to help make your story better. This is my take on it, I hope you don't take it personally. I look forward to how the song will come out :)
aznfangirl_ #9
Chapter 11: awwwwwwww shiiiiiiiit.... the feels. crying hard, authornim. why eric. why???? /creys
fren123 #10
Chapter 11: hope to see Andy again :)