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(A week later)

"Omo, Sara-ah. You're back!" 

I let out a smile as I placed my bag in my locker. After tying my hair up in a bun, I walked up to the group of dancers, my colleagues.

"How's practice?" I asked casually.

A few looked defeated. "It's alright. But there's rumors circulating that the comeback will be cancelled."

"Sara-ah, do you know anything?" 

I shook my head. Letting out a sigh, I said, "Rumors or not, as professionals, we have to continue practicing unless Shinhwa themselves says not to."

 

 

 

"Sure you don't want to join us, Sara-ah?" 

Most of the group had already left the room, except for the woman who asked me the question. I shook my head. "I need to catch up on the practice I've missed."

She sighed. "I understand. But please don't work too hard." She gave me a brief hug before joining the rest of the group.

I pressed the 'play' button. Minwoo's voice spilled from the speaker and echoed throughout the empty room, signalling the start of the song. Automatically, my body moved along to the beat.

 

 

 

"You're here."

I looked up to see Minwoo's reflection on the mirror. I paused the music. Sitting on the floor, I wiped my perspiration with a towel.

"What are you doing here so late in the night?" he asked as he came to sit beside me.

I shrugged my shoulders. "Work," I replied si

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baekdokai #1
Chapter 16: Wippeee another update. Xie xie ni~~
baekdokai #2
Chapter 15: Yay!!! You've updated authornim~~
fren123 #3
Chapter 15: I miss Andy ~ T____T
baekdokai #4
Chapter 13: Please update~~~~~~~ Please~~~~ Your storyline is daebak~~~
fren123 #5
Chapter 13: aigoooo...im goin crazy !!
this is getting interedting as it goes !
Next update please <3
sueyachangjo
#6
Chapter 13: Andy-why are you being so evasive? Aigoo. But yeah; I get it. He's leaving the jacket to her so that he has a reason to see her next time. Hehehe.
aznfangirl_ #7
Chapter 12: Plot twist: Eric is actually alive.

Tell me that's not just that....
sueyachangjo
#8
Chapter 12: Because the chapters are very short, the transition from one scene to another, it felt very rushed and awkward.

I think you should ease down a bit, write out the scenes longer for example, Sara's interaction with Minwoo. Let the readers indulge with their emotions for a bit, describe them and maybe add a few more dialogues before moving on to the next scene.

I hope I didn't sound too critical though ><; Because your plot is very engaging so far and I want to help make your story better. This is my take on it, I hope you don't take it personally. I look forward to how the song will come out :)
aznfangirl_ #9
Chapter 11: awwwwwwww shiiiiiiiit.... the feels. crying hard, authornim. why eric. why???? /creys
fren123 #10
Chapter 11: hope to see Andy again :)