Celebration

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Sara POV

"Yah, let's go drinking tonight!" yelled Junjin the moment they returned to their waiting room, their fifth trophy in his left hand.

"Awesome! I was just about to ask you guys!" cheered Minwoo, "Is everyone in?"

Everyone nodded their heads, a satisfied look plastered on each of their faces. I was about to pack my bag, getting ready to collapse on my bed at home, when suddenly everyone turned to face me.

"Sara-ah, how about you? You're coming, right?" asked Hyesung.

I was about to reject but I saw the satisfied looks changed dramatically into looks of desperation on their faces.

"Sara-ah, please say yes ~ Say yes ~" Junjin whined, his lips pouting in an attempt to do some aegyo. I resisted the urge to curl my fingers and toes. 

After ten minutes of non-stop whining from him, I grabbed a pillow from the couch and threw it straight in his face, gaining laughters from s.

"Fine! I'll go! Aish, so annoying.." I said out of frustration.

 

 

I didn't know whether it was because I was so frustrated at the earlier incident or the fact that I needed to release some stress from working so hard. 

"Yah, slow down! You're gonna get drunk soon," nagged Dongwan.

We were here for only fifteen minutes but I was already on my way to my seventh glass of beer. 

I slowed down a little as I knew that I was already nearing my alcohol limit.

 

 

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baekdokai #1
Chapter 16: Wippeee another update. Xie xie ni~~
baekdokai #2
Chapter 15: Yay!!! You've updated authornim~~
fren123 #3
Chapter 15: I miss Andy ~ T____T
baekdokai #4
Chapter 13: Please update~~~~~~~ Please~~~~ Your storyline is daebak~~~
fren123 #5
Chapter 13: aigoooo...im goin crazy !!
this is getting interedting as it goes !
Next update please <3
sueyachangjo
#6
Chapter 13: Andy-why are you being so evasive? Aigoo. But yeah; I get it. He's leaving the jacket to her so that he has a reason to see her next time. Hehehe.
aznfangirl_ #7
Chapter 12: Plot twist: Eric is actually alive.

Tell me that's not just that....
sueyachangjo
#8
Chapter 12: Because the chapters are very short, the transition from one scene to another, it felt very rushed and awkward.

I think you should ease down a bit, write out the scenes longer for example, Sara's interaction with Minwoo. Let the readers indulge with their emotions for a bit, describe them and maybe add a few more dialogues before moving on to the next scene.

I hope I didn't sound too critical though ><; Because your plot is very engaging so far and I want to help make your story better. This is my take on it, I hope you don't take it personally. I look forward to how the song will come out :)
aznfangirl_ #9
Chapter 11: awwwwwwww shiiiiiiiit.... the feels. crying hard, authornim. why eric. why???? /creys
fren123 #10
Chapter 11: hope to see Andy again :)