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Sara POV

"You sure you're going to work? You don't look so well, though," asked the worried Andy.

I nodded my head after swallowing the pills. "I have to. My attendance is not good these days," I answered.

His shoulders dropped slightly as a sign of defeat. "Fine, then let me send you." Just as I was about to protest, he shook his head. "No buts."

I nodded my head slowly and followed him out of my apartment.

Twelve minutes later, I find myself still in Andy's car. I felt it weird as it normally took me a ten-minute drive from my house to work, and today's traffic was not that bad. 

"Where are we going, oppa?" I asked once I realised that we were actually further away from the road to Shinhwa Company building.

"Ah, that.. I'm sorry, Sara-ah, but I just realised that I haven't showered or change my clothes-"

"Oh, right. I forgot."

"Sorry, Sara-ah," he apologised sincerely.

I shook my head and flashed him a smile. "It's okay, oppa. I'm still thirty minutes early. Besides," I paused to giggle, "we don't want your fans to think that their idol does not practice good hygiene."

 

 

"Do you want to come up or stay here?" he asked the moment he got the car into a parking lot.

"Come up. I don't like being alone in a car," I replied. 

We took the lift up with an elderly couple whom Andy acknowledged their presence.

"Aigoo, is this your girlfriend? She's pretty," said the grandmother.

I glanced at Andy's direc

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baekdokai #1
Chapter 16: Wippeee another update. Xie xie ni~~
baekdokai #2
Chapter 15: Yay!!! You've updated authornim~~
fren123 #3
Chapter 15: I miss Andy ~ T____T
baekdokai #4
Chapter 13: Please update~~~~~~~ Please~~~~ Your storyline is daebak~~~
fren123 #5
Chapter 13: aigoooo...im goin crazy !!
this is getting interedting as it goes !
Next update please <3
sueyachangjo
#6
Chapter 13: Andy-why are you being so evasive? Aigoo. But yeah; I get it. He's leaving the jacket to her so that he has a reason to see her next time. Hehehe.
aznfangirl_ #7
Chapter 12: Plot twist: Eric is actually alive.

Tell me that's not just that....
sueyachangjo
#8
Chapter 12: Because the chapters are very short, the transition from one scene to another, it felt very rushed and awkward.

I think you should ease down a bit, write out the scenes longer for example, Sara's interaction with Minwoo. Let the readers indulge with their emotions for a bit, describe them and maybe add a few more dialogues before moving on to the next scene.

I hope I didn't sound too critical though ><; Because your plot is very engaging so far and I want to help make your story better. This is my take on it, I hope you don't take it personally. I look forward to how the song will come out :)
aznfangirl_ #9
Chapter 11: awwwwwwww shiiiiiiiit.... the feels. crying hard, authornim. why eric. why???? /creys
fren123 #10
Chapter 11: hope to see Andy again :)