Apartment

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Sara POV

I unlocked the door and entered the all-too-familiar apartment. Settling myself down at the couch, I looked around the interior in silence.

Everything looks the same..

On the table in front of the television set, there were two photo frames. One had Eric with s. Upon seeing Andy's face, I blushed, recalling the embarrassing incident at the car.

Next to that said photo frame, another photo frame showing Eric and me. We were making funny faces in the photograph. I walked over and picked it up, my eyes getting teary.

I miss you, oppa..

All of a sudden, I felt two paws on my right leg, then heard a bark. I looked down to see Gomdori.

"Omo, Gomdori! You were here all this time?" I asked, shocked. I blinked back my tears as I picked the dog up.

"Aigoo, you poor thing.. You must've been very hungry since no one is around.." I walked into the kitchen to find out that Gomdori's food bowl was full, as if it was just recently filled up.

Maybe Andy oppa popped by just now.

Gomdori began to wriggle in my arms so I placed it back on the floor, watching it run to drink some water. Leaving the dog behind, i walked towards Eric's favourite room in the apartment. Without any hesitation, I sat at the desk and started up the computer. After typing in the password, the picture of us flashed on the screen. 

Unable to look at the wallpaper any longer, I stood up and made my way

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baekdokai #1
Chapter 16: Wippeee another update. Xie xie ni~~
baekdokai #2
Chapter 15: Yay!!! You've updated authornim~~
fren123 #3
Chapter 15: I miss Andy ~ T____T
baekdokai #4
Chapter 13: Please update~~~~~~~ Please~~~~ Your storyline is daebak~~~
fren123 #5
Chapter 13: aigoooo...im goin crazy !!
this is getting interedting as it goes !
Next update please <3
sueyachangjo
#6
Chapter 13: Andy-why are you being so evasive? Aigoo. But yeah; I get it. He's leaving the jacket to her so that he has a reason to see her next time. Hehehe.
aznfangirl_ #7
Chapter 12: Plot twist: Eric is actually alive.

Tell me that's not just that....
sueyachangjo
#8
Chapter 12: Because the chapters are very short, the transition from one scene to another, it felt very rushed and awkward.

I think you should ease down a bit, write out the scenes longer for example, Sara's interaction with Minwoo. Let the readers indulge with their emotions for a bit, describe them and maybe add a few more dialogues before moving on to the next scene.

I hope I didn't sound too critical though ><; Because your plot is very engaging so far and I want to help make your story better. This is my take on it, I hope you don't take it personally. I look forward to how the song will come out :)
aznfangirl_ #9
Chapter 11: awwwwwwww shiiiiiiiit.... the feels. crying hard, authornim. why eric. why???? /creys
fren123 #10
Chapter 11: hope to see Andy again :)