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(Present Day)

It's been three days since the unfortunate day. Never once had I moved away from the entrance of the morgue, unless I needed the toilet. My parents were worried sick about me as I haven't been eating and resting well. They tried ways to make me go home but I would refuse, not wanting to be apart from the morgue if that's the only way I could be close to Eric.

Even though there's seats available, I chose to sit on the floor, bringing my knees close to my body. 

"Sara-ah?"

I glanced up to see Minwoo looking at me with sadness. Behind him stood the rest of the members. All, except Eric.

I cracked a smile, but at the same time, a stray tear rolled down my cheek.

Minwoo knelt beside me and wrapped his arms around me, resting my head against his shoulder.

"Shh.. It's okay.. Just cry it out.."

Ten minutes later, I wiped my tears away.

"Minwoo oppa, w-what are you guys doing here?" I glanced at the other members who were sitting on the seats. Junjin and Hyesung leaning their heads on Dongwan's shoulders while Andy was sitting beside Hyesung, staring into space.

"We heard that you've been staying here for the past three days," Minwoo explained, "We're worried about you, Sara-ah."

I avoided his eye contact, feeling pathetic.

 

 

"My son!" A familiar voice called out, hints of sadness and a sense of lost in it.

I slowly raised my gaze

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baekdokai #1
Chapter 16: Wippeee another update. Xie xie ni~~
baekdokai #2
Chapter 15: Yay!!! You've updated authornim~~
fren123 #3
Chapter 15: I miss Andy ~ T____T
baekdokai #4
Chapter 13: Please update~~~~~~~ Please~~~~ Your storyline is daebak~~~
fren123 #5
Chapter 13: aigoooo...im goin crazy !!
this is getting interedting as it goes !
Next update please <3
sueyachangjo
#6
Chapter 13: Andy-why are you being so evasive? Aigoo. But yeah; I get it. He's leaving the jacket to her so that he has a reason to see her next time. Hehehe.
aznfangirl_ #7
Chapter 12: Plot twist: Eric is actually alive.

Tell me that's not just that....
sueyachangjo
#8
Chapter 12: Because the chapters are very short, the transition from one scene to another, it felt very rushed and awkward.

I think you should ease down a bit, write out the scenes longer for example, Sara's interaction with Minwoo. Let the readers indulge with their emotions for a bit, describe them and maybe add a few more dialogues before moving on to the next scene.

I hope I didn't sound too critical though ><; Because your plot is very engaging so far and I want to help make your story better. This is my take on it, I hope you don't take it personally. I look forward to how the song will come out :)
aznfangirl_ #9
Chapter 11: awwwwwwww shiiiiiiiit.... the feels. crying hard, authornim. why eric. why???? /creys
fren123 #10
Chapter 11: hope to see Andy again :)