Pretend

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We continued driving around aimlessly with me staring out the window. Neither one of us knew how to start a conversation.

"Erm, do you mind, Sara-ah?" he said as he switched on the radio.

I was just about to say no, when I realised the radio channel that he had tuned in.

"Oppa," I started whining, out of habit, "you know I hate this channel, right?" I turned to see Eric smirking.

Eric chuckled. "But I love it. And I'm the driver. So you have no choice!"

I forced back a smile and pretended to sulk, crossing my arms.

"Aigoo, chagiya. Are you sulking? Please don't," he cooed as he grabbed hold of my left hand. I watched as he kissed my engagement ring.

I let out the smile and carrassed the side of his face. Getting into the moment, I started to lean in for a kiss.

 

 

"Sara-ah."

I blinked my eyes. That doesn't sound like Eric's voice.

I stared at the upclose view of Andy's blushing face. I quickly withdrew, hiding my own red face, and stared out the window, realising that we had stopped at a park.

"How long have we been here?" I whispered.

"Some time now. You were looking out the window when suddenly you, erm, did that.."

My face grew redder, understanding what he meant. How could I mistook Andy for Eric?

"I-I'm sorry," I choked out the words.

Andy nodded before silently starting the engine again. 

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baekdokai #1
Chapter 16: Wippeee another update. Xie xie ni~~
baekdokai #2
Chapter 15: Yay!!! You've updated authornim~~
fren123 #3
Chapter 15: I miss Andy ~ T____T
baekdokai #4
Chapter 13: Please update~~~~~~~ Please~~~~ Your storyline is daebak~~~
fren123 #5
Chapter 13: aigoooo...im goin crazy !!
this is getting interedting as it goes !
Next update please <3
sueyachangjo
#6
Chapter 13: Andy-why are you being so evasive? Aigoo. But yeah; I get it. He's leaving the jacket to her so that he has a reason to see her next time. Hehehe.
aznfangirl_ #7
Chapter 12: Plot twist: Eric is actually alive.

Tell me that's not just that....
sueyachangjo
#8
Chapter 12: Because the chapters are very short, the transition from one scene to another, it felt very rushed and awkward.

I think you should ease down a bit, write out the scenes longer for example, Sara's interaction with Minwoo. Let the readers indulge with their emotions for a bit, describe them and maybe add a few more dialogues before moving on to the next scene.

I hope I didn't sound too critical though ><; Because your plot is very engaging so far and I want to help make your story better. This is my take on it, I hope you don't take it personally. I look forward to how the song will come out :)
aznfangirl_ #9
Chapter 11: awwwwwwww shiiiiiiiit.... the feels. crying hard, authornim. why eric. why???? /creys
fren123 #10
Chapter 11: hope to see Andy again :)