Tragic

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A soft groan escaped from my lips. What happened? I thought. 

Flashes of memories from the past five minutes played in my mind. It suddenly paused at the part when Eric caught my hand. 

Eric.

I opened my eyes, finding myself at the pavement. I quickly got up on my feet, cringing at the pain from the scratches on my arms and knees. I blinked my eyes, trying to adjust my sight to the shocking scene before me.

"Eric..?"

Slowly, I made my way towards a small group of people that had gathered on the road, in front of the stationary car. I squeezed through the crowd with ease as people were making way for me, some giving me pitying looks.

No.. it can't be..

A familiar body lied down on the road, in the middle of the crowd. I quickly rushed towards him, dropping on my knees, my mind not registering the pain.

"Oppa," I whispered in between sobs, enveloping his outstretched hand in both my hands.

"Sa-Sara," his deep voice cracked. His other hand slowly reached out to wipe away my strayed tear.

I turned my head towards the crowd behind me. Two men were holding onto a drunk man, probably the driver to be blamed. A lady was on the phone, hopefully calling for an ambulance.

Eric's grip on my hands tightened, gaining my attention back to him.

"I'm s-sorry, ch-chagiya." 

I shook my head. "No, oppa. You're going to be okay," I said with such force.

He grinned, o

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baekdokai #1
Chapter 16: Wippeee another update. Xie xie ni~~
baekdokai #2
Chapter 15: Yay!!! You've updated authornim~~
fren123 #3
Chapter 15: I miss Andy ~ T____T
baekdokai #4
Chapter 13: Please update~~~~~~~ Please~~~~ Your storyline is daebak~~~
fren123 #5
Chapter 13: aigoooo...im goin crazy !!
this is getting interedting as it goes !
Next update please <3
sueyachangjo
#6
Chapter 13: Andy-why are you being so evasive? Aigoo. But yeah; I get it. He's leaving the jacket to her so that he has a reason to see her next time. Hehehe.
aznfangirl_ #7
Chapter 12: Plot twist: Eric is actually alive.

Tell me that's not just that....
sueyachangjo
#8
Chapter 12: Because the chapters are very short, the transition from one scene to another, it felt very rushed and awkward.

I think you should ease down a bit, write out the scenes longer for example, Sara's interaction with Minwoo. Let the readers indulge with their emotions for a bit, describe them and maybe add a few more dialogues before moving on to the next scene.

I hope I didn't sound too critical though ><; Because your plot is very engaging so far and I want to help make your story better. This is my take on it, I hope you don't take it personally. I look forward to how the song will come out :)
aznfangirl_ #9
Chapter 11: awwwwwwww shiiiiiiiit.... the feels. crying hard, authornim. why eric. why???? /creys
fren123 #10
Chapter 11: hope to see Andy again :)