Proposal

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(Two Years Ago)

"Omo, aren't you Sara-ssi?" A fan clad in an orange shirt spoke to me.

I glanced up from under my Wolf M snapback and smiled.

"Omo! Eric's girlfriend is sitting with us!" The same fan said aloud, gaining the attention of fans around me.

I pulled my snapback lower, trying to hide my red cheeks.

Nine months ago, we decided to admit our relationship to the public. Honestly, I was nervous on how the fans and media would react, but I knew that we could not hide our relationship for too long. Luckily, majority of the fans accepted our relationship. They even wrote on the forums that they've been waiting for Shinhwa members to start dating, and possibly get married.

 

 

"Everyone! Did you like the concert?" Minwoo said into the microphone.

"Nehhhhhhhh!~" 

"Ah! Before we end, we have a special surprise," Dongwan said as he passed his microphone to Eric.

 

"Yes, ah, hello everyone," Eric said awkwardly, "I hope you enjoyed our concert. We really put our mind and soul into it.

As most of you know, I am currently in a relationship with a beautiful lady. She is sitting somewhere in this stadium. 

Sara-ah, it's been quite some time since we started dating. It was slightly difficult because of our and my celebrity status. However, we managed to go through the difficulties with our precious love. Today is our second year anniversary. I'm

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baekdokai #1
Chapter 16: Wippeee another update. Xie xie ni~~
baekdokai #2
Chapter 15: Yay!!! You've updated authornim~~
fren123 #3
Chapter 15: I miss Andy ~ T____T
baekdokai #4
Chapter 13: Please update~~~~~~~ Please~~~~ Your storyline is daebak~~~
fren123 #5
Chapter 13: aigoooo...im goin crazy !!
this is getting interedting as it goes !
Next update please <3
sueyachangjo
#6
Chapter 13: Andy-why are you being so evasive? Aigoo. But yeah; I get it. He's leaving the jacket to her so that he has a reason to see her next time. Hehehe.
aznfangirl_ #7
Chapter 12: Plot twist: Eric is actually alive.

Tell me that's not just that....
sueyachangjo
#8
Chapter 12: Because the chapters are very short, the transition from one scene to another, it felt very rushed and awkward.

I think you should ease down a bit, write out the scenes longer for example, Sara's interaction with Minwoo. Let the readers indulge with their emotions for a bit, describe them and maybe add a few more dialogues before moving on to the next scene.

I hope I didn't sound too critical though ><; Because your plot is very engaging so far and I want to help make your story better. This is my take on it, I hope you don't take it personally. I look forward to how the song will come out :)
aznfangirl_ #9
Chapter 11: awwwwwwww shiiiiiiiit.... the feels. crying hard, authornim. why eric. why???? /creys
fren123 #10
Chapter 11: hope to see Andy again :)